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(共19張PPT)
Unit 1
Reading for Writing
1. To appreciate a letter of advice
2. To learn the structure and language features of the letter of advice
3. To learn to write a letter of advice
1. What is Worried Friend's problem
2. What are Susan's suggestions
1. Reading for content
My parents won’t listen when
I tell them things. I guess it’s
because they’re adults and
can’t understand me. Do
you have any suggestions
I always feel lonely after
school because my parents
work in another city. What
can I do
There is a girl I like in my
class, but I’m too shy to talk to her. Please help me!
My friend, Chen Lei, plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. I’m very worried about him. What should I do
Eric, 15, Chicago
Min Ho, 15, Seoul
Xu Ting, 14, Hangzhou
a Worried Friend
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
But spending too much time online is
unhealthy and makes it very difficult
to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on
school and family life. I think you
should encourage your friend to try
new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will
listen to you, since you are his good friends.
I recommend that you talk to your
friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your
generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
All the best,
Susan Luo
Date
Greeting
Body
Close
Signature
A Letter of Advice
The most important part
1.Mark the body parts of the letter that match the following points.
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason.
D. I think my advice will help.
Step2 Reading
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
D. I think my advice will help.
C. This is my advice and reason.
Task 3
Try to tell your partner what does the passage(letter) mainly talks about.
Task 4
文章是什么體裁？
第幾人稱？
格式是怎么樣的？
用的是什么時態？
主題是什么？
文章是如何組織的（結構）？
書信
第一人稱
日期，稱呼，正文，落款
一般現在時
Worried Friend非常擔心他的朋友Chen Lei癡迷于電腦游戲，對他提一些建議，
Learning to write after the model
10 September，2018
Dear Worried Friend，
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend，Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.
I know what the problem is
I know how you feel
This is my advice and reason(s)
reason（s）
Date & greeting
Suggestion Reason
Join a volunteer group.
Connect with your parents online.
This will give you a chance to be around other people, and help you realise that other people have problems, too.
Just because they are far away, it doesn’t mean that you can’t talk to them.
Suggestion Reason
Ask a mutual friend to introduce you to her.
Find chances to get together in groups where she is a group member.
Your friend will be able to help you break the ice (打破沉默) with her and provide encouragement to you.
If you are in a group, it takes all the pressure off, and you can interact with her in a relaxing setting.
A. I know what the problem is.
Pre-writing: More sentence expressions
- I am (very) glad to hear that...
You wrote that ...
接收信息
- I am sorry to hear /know that...
- Learning that you can't/have trouble in（doing sth） ...
很抱歉你
遇到...問題
很高興聽
到...消息
賓語從句
Q1: What would you NOT say when you want to show your understanding
1. You have every right to feel upset about that.
2. I am sorry to hear that you feel lonely and upset when...
3. It’s totally normal to feel this way.
4. How can you have such a feeling...
Not considerate
Quiz
Q2: What expressions will you NOT use when you give advice
1. If I were you, I would...
2. Why not... If you do this, you are likely to...
3. I feel that it would be helpful if...
4. You must do...
5. You might as well...
Not courteous
Quiz
Q3: What would you NOT say when you end the letter of advice
1. I hope these suggestions will be of help to you.
2. Whatever you decide to do, it’s your choice !
3. I will be glad if you find my suggestions practical and useful.
4. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
Not courteous
Quiz
(2)提出建議時的常用表達
I think it would be more beneficial if you could....
我認為如果你能……會更有益。
I would like to suggest/recommend that.. 我想建議/推薦……
If I were you,I would...如果我是你，我會······
Why not... /How (What) about... /You'd better.../It's better to...
為什么不...... /......怎么樣？/你最好……/做……更好。
What do you think of... /How do you like... 你認為……怎么樣？
---is a good/great idea.……是個好主意。
You may consider doing...你可以考慮做……
As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.在我看來，采取以下行動是明智的。
When it comes to such a situation, I suggest that you should.....
當談到這種情況時，我建議你應該……
(3)尾段常用表達
I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration.
我希望你會考慮我的建議。
I believe you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
我相信你將會發現這些建議是實用的/有用的/
有幫助的。
In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
最后，如果你覺得我的建議有用的話，
我會很高興的。
Practice
Draft your letter to Eric，Xu Ting or Min Ho.
Greeting
Body
Signature
三段論
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason(s).
D. I think my advice will help.
問候 頂格
主體三段都先空兩格
落款右對齊

表明寫作目的，自己感同身受
提出建議并闡述理由
表示祝愿、期望

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