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Unit 4 Reading for Writing
BEAUTIFUL IRELAND AND ITS TRADITIONS
Describe a place that you like
Watch the video and think about the questions:
1. What do you see in the video
2. What’s your impression on the country
Lead-in Watch a video
Watch the video and think about the questions:
1. What do you see in the video
2. What’s your impression on the country
Lead-in Watch a video
birds, ocean, grassland, castles, sheep, cuision etc.
beautiful
fascinating
charming
amazing
breathtaking
Reading for content
Beautiful Ireland and its traditions
What’s the main idea
The beautiful scenery of Ireland and its traditions.
What’s the genre of the passage
A. Narration
B. Argumentation
C. Exposition
C. Exposition
Read for structure
Beautiful IRELAND AND ITS TRADITIONS
Identify and underline the paragraph’s
introductory sentence and the ending sentence.
Introductory
sentence
Ending
sentence
Body
1: Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions.
Introductory
sentence:
Ending
sentence:
Body:
11: And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
2-6: Ireland’s influence on people
7-10: Ireland’s influence on traditions
Tip 1: Tell readers your topic in the introduction.
Give readers a suggestion/summary in the ending.
Read for structure
… With all this beauty, it’s not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining…
Ireland’s traditions
Ireland’s landscape
Tip 2: Use transitional sentences to make
your writing cohesive(緊密連貫).
Read for details
1. What makes the Irish countryside exciting and inspiring
A.Its beauty and the way it offers something for each of the senses.
B.The long history of the Irish countryside.
C. The traditions of the Irish countryside.
D.Many green counties in the Ireland.
滿足各種感官上的享受
“The author uses ‘ ’ to describe the sense of hearing/smell/taste/touch/sight”
hearing smell taste touch sight
senses
2. What is the way used to describe each of the senses
sensory description
Read for sensory description
Discuss to find out the sensory details
Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets. Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses. The peaceful lanscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew. If you’re lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and dancing, too. And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
Sight
Hearing
Touch
Smell
Taste
sensory description (感官描寫)
Why does the author describe Irish countryside from different senses
Because it makes the description more vivid and detailed.
The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
“綠寶石（愛爾蘭）島”風景寧靜秀美，郡縣草木蔥郁，青山連綿起伏，牛羊點綴其中，堪稱異常視覺盛宴。
Read for sensory description
On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
山里寧靜的早晨，感受陽光灑落在你身上，呼吸這鮮花的芬芳，而鳥兒則用清晨的歌聲迎接新的一天的到來。
Read for sensory description
And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.
海邊波浪咆哮，海鳥鳴叫，奏響了海岸交響樂。
Read for sensory description
Read for sensory description
1. The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
What rhetorical devices are used in these sentences
metaphor (暗喻)
personification (擬人)
Read for sensory description
2. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
3. And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.
sensory description (感官描寫)
Why does the author describe Irish countryside from different senses
Because it makes the description more vivid and detailed.
Tip 3: Use sensory description and the rhetorical
devices to make your description vivid and detailed.
Present to readers your topic in the ____________ and a summary/suggestion in the ________.
Use ______________________ to make your writing cohesive
Use ________________________________________ to make the description more vivid
sensory details and rhetorical devices
Summary: How to describe a place
transitional sentences
introduction
ending
The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald IsIe” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
The peaceful Shifeng Lake is a true feast for the eyes, with its calm surface dotted with little boats.
寧靜的始豐湖堪稱一場名副其實的視覺盛宴，伴有只只小船點綴著平靜的湖面。
Imitation
And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.
By the lake, the rustle of the cherry blossoms and the tweets of the birds make up the music of spring.
在湖邊，櫻花的沙沙聲與鳥雀的啾啾聲構成了春天的音樂。
Imitation
rustle 沙沙聲
tweet 啾啾聲
cherry blossoms 櫻花
Imitation
_______________________ the West Lake is _____________________,
with its ___________dotted with ___________________. And down by ________, ________________________, and ____________________
make up ___________________________. On a quiet morning, ______ _______________, ______________________, and ________________
________________________ while birds ______ the new day with their morning song. Stop by _______________ and _______________ the delicious fish and Dongpo meat. Better yet, _____________a cup of Longjing tea.
西湖的寧靜景色是一場真正的視覺盛宴，兩岸點綴著五顏六色的小花。湖邊，泉水的叮當聲(tinkling)，鳥兒的叫聲，構成了大自然美妙的音樂。在一個寧靜的早晨，漫步在公園里，感受陽光灑落在你皮膚上，呼吸鮮花的芬芳，而鳥兒則用晨歌迎接新的一天的到來。去一家老餐館，用美味的魚和東坡肉犒賞自己。更好的是，喝一杯龍井茶。
The peaceful landscape of
a true feast for the eyes
both banks
little colorful flowers
the lake
the tinkling of spring water
the song of the birds
the wonderful music of nature
wander
around the park
feel the sun on your skin
breathe in the
sweet scent of fresh flower
greet
an old restaurant
treat yourself to
enjoy / go with
Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets. Its beautiful countryside excties and inspires all, offering something for each of the sneses. The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. And down by the sea(在海邊), the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. With all this beauty,
it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by(順便拜訪) a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet(更好的是), enjoy a delicious traditonal Irish Beef Stew. If you’re lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditonal music and dancing, too. And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
1.have an influence on 對……有影響
2.have a history of/with a history of
3.on a quiet morning
4.down by the sea 在海邊
5.the roar of the ocean waves 海浪的咆哮聲
6.cries of the seabirds 海鳥的叫聲
7.breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers 呼吸鮮花的芬芳
8.birds greet the new day with their morning song
9.It is (not) surprising that ... ……不足為奇。
10.have a chance of doing sth./have a chance to do sth.
11.stop by a village pub 順便去一家鄉村酒吧
12.better yet 更好的是，更為美妙的是
13.introduce sb./oneself to sb. 向某人介紹某人/某人自己
14.be likely to do sth. 有可能做某事
15.experience local culture and customs first-hand
親身體驗當地文化和風土人情
Describe Shifeng Lake Park
Write a short passage:
Write an introduction and an ending
The body should contain at least 3 sentences.
Use at least two senses
Assignment
Thank you!

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