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(共23張PPT)
Unit 1
Reading for Writing
1. To appreciate a letter of advice
2. To learn the structure and language features of the letter of advice
3. To learn to write a letter of advice
1. What is Worried Friend's problem
2. What are Susan's suggestions
1. Reading for content
1 糊涂的；迷惑的 confused
2 流利的；熟練的 fluent
3 畢業；畢業生 graduate
4 建議；推薦 recommend
5 高級的；先進的 advanced
6 文學; 文學作品 literature
7 顯然地； 明顯地 obviously
8 負責的；有責任的 responsible
Revise to check your memory (B)
Part Two
Talking about the problems and solutions of teenagers
Cyber Addiction網癮
Bullying欺凌
Smoking or drinking
Lack of support from family
Depression抑郁
Peer-Pressure 同伴壓力
Teenagers may meet amounts of
problems inside and outside school.
tips
____________
Show the reader you know a problem is.
Dear______ You wrote that ___________________
I understand that______________
I think____________________
Because_____________.
I am sure_______________
Best Wishes, (close and sign the letter).
______
Tell the reader you understand he/she feels. Tell the reader what you think he/she should do. Explain your reasons. Tell the reader what you think will happen.
write the date and greet the reader
Possible version
8 October 2019
Dear Xu Ting
You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because my parents work in another city. I understand how you feel quite well.
I think it is a good idea to make some good friends in you class and have fun with them after school. In this way, you will feel less lonely because you can talk to each other about the unhappy things to reduce your bad feelings and have fun together. It is a good idea not to be alone, trying to be with your best friends.
I am sure finally you will be cheerful and get used to your present life.
Best Wishes,
Yours sincerely
Susan
建議信寫作總結
Suggestion Reason
Join a volunteer group.
Connect with your parents online.
This will give you a chance to be around other people, and help you realise that other people have problems, too.
Just because they are far away, it doesn’t mean that you can’t talk to them.
Suggestion Reason
Ask a mutual friend to introduce you to her.
Find chances to get together in groups where she is a group member.
Your friend will be able to help you break the ice (打破沉默) with her and provide encouragement to you.
If you are in a group, it takes all the pressure off, and you can interact with her in a relaxing setting.
A. I know what the problem is.
Pre-writing: More sentence expressions
- I am (very) glad to hear that...
You wrote that ...
接收信息
- I am sorry to hear /know that...
- Learning that you can't/have trouble in（doing sth） ...
很抱歉你
遇到...問題
很高興聽
到...消息
賓語從句
What is Worried Friend's problem
What are Susan Luo's advice
Worried Friend thinks that his friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
Worried Friend can talk to his friend about his behaviour and encourage his friend to try new hobbies.
Questions:
③ Do you think Ms Luo's advice is useful Why or why not
④ What other kinds of advice would you give
Perhaps the advice is (not) useful, because it is....
(1) Spend his time more productively with an eye on his future. Spending too much time playing computer games will ruin his health and his future as well.
(2) Learn computer programming instead of playing computer games. Learn to make the computer a tool to earn money but not just for entertainment. ...
Careful reading
Learn how to write a letter to give advice
Part Three
3．段尾常用語：
①In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
②I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.
③I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
④I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
典 題 欣 賞
假定你是李華。某中學生英語報社準備增設一個Environmental Protection欄目，為此報社就報道內容與方式向讀者征求建議。請你根據以下提示給編輯寫封信，提出你的建議。
1．報道內容廣泛；
2．報道應包括原因、危害并重點突出應對方法；
3．語言簡單易懂，適合更多的讀者。
注意：1.詞數100左右；
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
【審題導引】
1．本題要求寫一封建議信，文體上是應用文。人稱是第一人稱，時態以一般現在時為主，一般將來時為輔。
2．環保問題一直以來都是一個熱點話題，學生對此并不陌生，同時提示較為詳細。
3．本書信的難點是提出這些建議的理由要具體、得當，具有較強的說服力。
Greeting
Body
Signature
三段論
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason(s).
D. I think my advice will help.
問候 頂格
主體三段都先空兩格
落款右對齊

表明寫作目的，自己感同身受
提出建議并闡述理由
表示祝愿、期望
10 September 2018
Dear Xu Ting,
You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city. I understand how you feel. It is common for teenagers to feel lonely when they live away from their parents.
I think you can try joining a volunteer group that helps other people. This will give you a chance to meet and be around others.
It will also help you realise that you are not alone in having problems and that many other people have problems, too. Helping other people also makes us feel better. You can also connect with your parents online. Just because your parents are far away, it doesn’t mean you can’t talk to them. I’m sure that you’ll make new friends and get a chance to speak to your parents more often. This will help drive away your loneliness.
Best wishes,
Susan Luo
Find out the sentences that are used to give advice.
I recommend that.....
I think you should.....
Why not.....
Do you know other ways to give advice Discuss with your deskmate and make a list of it.
Thank you!

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