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Unit 1 Teenage Life
—Reading for Writing
As a teenager, what problems do you have
in your daily life
...
...
Step1 Lead-in
cyber addiction
bullying
feel lonely and
isolated
generation gaps
with parents
high expectations
from parents
and teachers
What advice will you give if you have friends with such problems
pressure from
heavey school work
depression
Facing these problems, how will you seek for help
1
communicating face to face with the person concerned
2
turning to friends for help
3
asking for advice on social media
4
writing a letter to a professional adviser
5
ringing help hotlines
...
Step1 Lead-in
1 糊涂的；迷惑的 confused
2 流利的；熟練的 fluent
3 畢業；畢業生 graduate
4 建議；推薦 recommend
5 高級的；先進的 advanced
6 文學; 文學作品 literature
7 顯然地； 明顯地 obviously
8 負責的；有責任的 responsible
Revise to check your memory (B)
Part Two
Talking about the problems and solutions of teenagers
Cyber Addiction網癮
Bullying欺凌
Smoking or drinking
Lack of support from family
Depression抑郁
Peer-Pressure 同伴壓力
Teenagers may meet amounts of
problems inside and outside school.
tips
____________
Show the reader you know a problem is.
Dear______ You wrote that ___________________
I understand that______________
I think____________________
Because_____________.
I am sure_______________
Best Wishes, (close and sign the letter).
______
Tell the reader you understand he/she feels. Tell the reader what you think he/she should do. Explain your reasons. Tell the reader what you think will happen.
write the date and greet the reader
Possible version
8 October 2019
Dear Xu Ting
You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because my parents work in another city. I understand how you feel quite well.
I think it is a good idea to make some good friends in you class and have fun with them after school. In this way, you will feel less lonely because you can talk to each other about the unhappy things to reduce your bad feelings and have fun together. It is a good idea not to be alone, trying to be with your best friends.
I am sure finally you will be cheerful and get used to your present life.
Best Wishes,
Yours sincerely
Susan
建議信寫作總結
2.What is Worried Friend's problem
3.What suggestions does Susan Luo give to Worried Friend
4.Besides suggestions, what else does Susan Luo say in her letter
She talks about the negative effects of computer addiction.
reasons
②
③
①
Step2 Reading
Considerate & Courteous
Concrete & Convincing
Language Features
5.What expressions does Susan Luo use to make suggestions Circle them in the letter.
Think deeper
1
2
3
What would you say when you want to show empathy（共情）
What expressions will you use when you give advice
What would you say when you end the letter of advice
What is Worried Friend's problem
What are Susan Luo's advice
Worried Friend thinks that his friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
Worried Friend can talk to his friend about his behaviour and encourage his friend to try new hobbies.
Questions:
③ Do you think Ms Luo's advice is useful Why or why not
④ What other kinds of advice would you give
Perhaps the advice is (not) useful, because it is....
(1) Spend his time more productively with an eye on his future. Spending too much time playing computer games will ruin his health and his future as well.
(2) Learn computer programming instead of playing computer games. Learn to make the computer a tool to earn money but not just for entertainment. ...
Careful reading
Learn how to write a letter to give advice
Part Three
3．段尾常用語：
①In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
②I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.
③I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
④I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
典 題 欣 賞
假定你是李華。某中學生英語報社準備增設一個Environmental Protection欄目，為此報社就報道內容與方式向讀者征求建議。請你根據以下提示給編輯寫封信，提出你的建議。
1．報道內容廣泛；
2．報道應包括原因、危害并重點突出應對方法；
3．語言簡單易懂，適合更多的讀者。
注意：1.詞數100左右；
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
【審題導引】
1．本題要求寫一封建議信，文體上是應用文。人稱是第一人稱，時態以一般現在時為主，一般將來時為輔。
2．環保問題一直以來都是一個熱點話題，學生對此并不陌生，同時提示較為詳細。
3．本書信的難點是提出這些建議的理由要具體、得當，具有較強的說服力。
Step3 Conclusion
首段Beginning—your point of view
中段Body
—your advice
尾段Ending
—your wishes

提出有針對性的建議，給出理由。
Body

希望自己的建議能對對方有所幫助，同時闡明你所提供的建議僅供對方參考。
Ending
一般指明建議的前提和事情的原委，對自己的立場作一些解釋。
Beginning
建議信的正文通常采取“三段式結構”：
01
02
03
I'm sorry to know/hear that you are now having trouble ( in) doing sth… .
知道/聽到你現在在……方面有些麻煩, 我很抱歉。
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
很高興收到你就……征求建議的來信。
My advice /suggestions are as follows./ The following is my advice.
/ Here are some tips to help you.
我的建議如下/這里有幫助你的一些建議。
Beginning：交代背景+寫信目的（1+3 或2+3）
Sentence patterns
1
2
3
First/First of all ，why not...？If you do this，you can….
Secondly/What's more, you should / had better do...
It is also helpful/useful to do..., which will …
I think it could be more beneficial if you could ...
Thirdly/ In addition/Besides, it would be a good idea if....
By doing this,....
As far as I'm concerned/Last but not least, doing ... is a better choice.
When it comes to this problem, I suggest that you should....
If I were you (in your situation) / in your shoes, I would...
Body：介紹詳情、提出建議和理由根據問題給出建議
（3個左右為宜）
4
Find out the sentences that are used to give advice.
I recommend that.....
I think you should.....
Why not.....
Do you know other ways to give advice Discuss with your deskmate and make a list of it.
Thank you!

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