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人教版必修第一冊
Period 4
Reading For Writing
Unit1 Teenage life
What is the purpose of a letter of advice
What kind of aspects should be included in such kind of letter
建議信的目的是針對有關問題進行分析，并針對這些問題提出自己的看法和合理的建議。
建議信的基本框架：
1.開頭( beginning)—開門見山,向對方陳述自己的觀點(state your idea)。
2.主體( body)—對所提出的問題進行分析并說明理由,接著提出自己的建議(reasons and evidence)。
3.結尾(ending)—呼應開頭，重申觀點(restate your opinion)。
Read to discover writing details
Read a letter offering some advice on page 18 and then solve the questions below.
1.What is Worried Friend’s problem
2.Do you think Ms Luo’s advice is useful Why or why not
3.What other kinds of advice would you give
Her/His best friend spends too much time playing computer games online.
Yes. Susan advises Worried Friend to encourage Chen Lei to try new hobbies and discuss the problem together; I think Chen Lei will follow the 3.advice, because they are best friends.
I advise Chen Lei to take some outdoor activities such as playing balls or reading interesting books or even listening to good music. We can go walking together. If he is bored, he can turn to me for help, thus we can have fun together.
My parents won’t listen when
I tell them things. I guess it’s
because they’re adults and
can’t understand me. Do
you have any suggestions
I always feel lonely after
school because my parents
work in another city. What
can I do
There is a girl I like in my
class, but I’m too shy to talk to her. Please help me!
My friend, Chen Lei, plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. I’m very worried about him. What should I do
Eric, 15, Chicago
Min Ho, 15, Seoul
Xu Ting, 14, Hangzhou
a Worried Friend
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
But spending too much time online is
unhealthy and makes it very difficult
to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on
school and family life. I think you
should encourage your friend to try
new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will
listen to you, since you are his good friends.
I recommend that you talk to your
friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your
generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
All the best,
Susan Luo
Date
Greeting
Body
Close
Signature
A Letter of Advice
The most important part
1.Mark the body parts of the letter that match the following points.
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason.
D. I think my advice will help.
Step2 Reading
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
D. I think my advice will help.
C. This is my advice and reason.
self-segregate自我隔離
turn to parents
ask teachers for help
write to Agony Aunt
self-regulate自我調節
talk to friends
What should you do
Writing a letter to Agony Aunts (Brit) or Advice Columnist (Amr) is a good way to solve your problem.
Someone may write to you for help, too.
And you have to know how to write back.
Listen twice and answer the questions
P18
Learn to write a letter of advice.
tips
____________
Show the reader you know a problem is.
Dear______ You wrote that ___________________
I understand that______________
I think____________________
Because_____________.
I am sure_______________
Best Wishes, (close and sign the letter).
______
Tell the reader you understand he/she feels. Tell the reader what you think he/she should do. Explain your reasons. Tell the reader what you think will happen.
write the date and greet the reader
Possible version
8 October 2019
Dear Xu Ting
You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because my parents work in another city. I understand how you feel quite well.
I think it is a good idea to make some good friends in you class and have fun with them after school. In this way, you will feel less lonely because you can talk to each other about the unhappy things to reduce your bad feelings and have fun together. It is a good idea not to be alone, trying to be with your best friends.
I am sure finally you will be cheerful and get used to your present life.
Best Wishes,
Yours sincerely
Susan
建議信寫作總結
Q1: What would you NOT say when you want to show your understanding
1. You have every right to feel upset about that.
2. I am sorry to hear that you feel lonely and upset when...
3. It’s totally normal to feel this way.
4. How can you have such a feeling...
Not considerate
Quiz
Q2: What expressions will you NOT use when you give advice
1. If I were you, I would...
2. Why not... If you do this, you are likely to...
3. I feel that it would be helpful if...
4. You must do...
5. You might as well...
Not courteous
Quiz
Q3: What would you NOT say when you end the letter of advice
1. I hope these suggestions will be of help to you.
2. Whatever you decide to do, it’s your choice !
3. I will be glad if you find my suggestions practical and useful.
4. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
Not courteous
Quiz
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
Write a Letter of Advice
cyber addiction
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.
I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together
I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
All the best,
Susan Luo
3．段尾常用語：
①In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.
②I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.
③I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
④I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
典 題 欣 賞
假定你是李華。某中學生英語報社準備增設一個Environmental Protection欄目，為此報社就報道內容與方式向讀者征求建議。請你根據以下提示給編輯寫封信，提出你的建議。
1．報道內容廣泛；
2．報道應包括原因、危害并重點突出應對方法；
3．語言簡單易懂，適合更多的讀者。
注意：1.詞數100左右；
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
【審題導引】
1．本題要求寫一封建議信，文體上是應用文。人稱是第一人稱，時態以一般現在時為主，一般將來時為輔。
2．環保問題一直以來都是一個熱點話題，學生對此并不陌生，同時提示較為詳細。
3．本書信的難點是提出這些建議的理由要具體、得當，具有較強的說服力。
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Ending：提出希望采納建議+感謝+盼望回復（1+2或1+3）
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
我希望你會發現這些辦法有用。
I believe/am sure that if you follow my advice，you’ll… .
我相信，如果你聽從我的建議，你會……。
I would be grateful if you could consider my advice.
I would appreciate it if you could take my adice into consideration.
如果你能考慮我的建議我將不勝感激。
Looking forward to your early reply.
盼望你的早日回復。
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