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讀后續(xù)寫系列微技能--對(duì)話描寫
（Dialogue in Continuation Writing）
對(duì)話(dialogue)是故事角色在整個(gè)故事中對(duì)彼此或?qū)ψ约赫f(shuō)的
話。它可以用來(lái)揭示人物的性格和個(gè)性，它也可以用來(lái)推動(dòng)情節(jié)向
前發(fā)展，并展示情節(jié)發(fā)展的過(guò)程。
What is the function of dialogue in a story？
對(duì)話描寫的原則：
① 對(duì)話要為推動(dòng)故事情節(jié)服務(wù)，每段出現(xiàn)一兩句即可；
② 對(duì)話描寫必須反映人物的心理與情感，刻畫人物的性格；
③ 不宜過(guò)長(zhǎng)，側(cè)重口語(yǔ)化詞匯，避開生僻詞匯；
④ 盡可能結(jié)合動(dòng)作描寫，明確對(duì)誰(shuí)說(shuō)。
對(duì)話描寫存在的問(wèn)題 ？？？
標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)使用 不夠規(guī)范
xxx said
對(duì)話標(biāo)簽 用詞單一
復(fù)雜冗長(zhǎng) 堆砌成段
標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)使用
不夠規(guī)范
對(duì)話標(biāo)簽
用詞單一
復(fù)雜冗長(zhǎng)
堆砌成段
Learning Objectives
一、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的規(guī)范性
She said, “Our bus will arrive in five minutes.”
① 說(shuō)話人在前
當(dāng)Sb said位于句首時(shí)，后面一般用逗號(hào);引號(hào)內(nèi)第一個(gè)字母大寫,句尾標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)放在引號(hào)內(nèi)。
Sb said, “Xxxxx.”
規(guī)規(guī)矩矩
【觀察思考】
【探究總結(jié)】
一、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的規(guī)范性
“I hope you will be here, ” he said.
“I don't care!” he said.
“Why ” he asked.
② 說(shuō)話人在后
當(dāng)sb said位于句末時(shí)，引號(hào)內(nèi)第一個(gè)字母大寫,陳述句句末用逗號(hào)，疑問(wèn)句用問(wèn)號(hào)，感嘆句用感嘆號(hào)。引號(hào)外第一個(gè)字母小寫。
“Xxxxx, ！？”sb said.
規(guī)規(guī)矩矩
【觀察思考】
【探究總結(jié)】
一、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的規(guī)范性
③ 說(shuō)話人在中間
當(dāng)sb said位于句中時(shí), 前面引號(hào)內(nèi)句末用逗號(hào)，引號(hào)外第一個(gè)字母小寫；sb said后面一般用逗號(hào)，后面引號(hào)內(nèi)第一個(gè)字母小寫。
“Xxxxxx,” sb said, “xxxxxx.”
規(guī)規(guī)矩矩
“That’s cool,” he said, “can I have a try ”
【觀察思考】
【探究總結(jié)】
一、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的規(guī)范性
“Xxxxxx, ！？” sb said.
Sb said, “Xxxxxx.”
“Xxxxxx,” sb said, “xxxxxx.”
① 說(shuō)話人在前
② 說(shuō)話人在后
③ 說(shuō)話人在中間
規(guī)規(guī)矩矩
一、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的規(guī)范性
1. “come on！ You can do it. I whispered to him in a soft voice.
2. “I will never do that again,” He answered firmly.
3. I ran to him and said: “get up and run!”
4. “Thank you so much,” He said with a choking voice, “ But I don't know how to pay for your kindness.”
Come
”
he
,
Get
改錯(cuò)
he
but
注意 標(biāo)點(diǎn)&大小寫
標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)使用
不夠規(guī)范
對(duì)話標(biāo)簽
用詞單一
復(fù)雜冗長(zhǎng)
堆砌成段
規(guī)范表達(dá)
Learning Objectives
二、對(duì)話用詞的豐富性
用詞---如果續(xù)寫中語(yǔ)言描寫較多，那么一定要避免通篇都是“said”，而要靈活多變地使用表示“說(shuō)”的動(dòng)詞
換個(gè)詞唄
用詞 --- 不能只是said---換個(gè)詞
說(shuō)道 ________ 回答道 ________ 問(wèn)道 _______
補(bǔ)充說(shuō) ______ 解釋道 _______ 嘆氣地說(shuō) ______
同意地說(shuō) ______ 大笑地說(shuō) ______ 請(qǐng)求 _______
尖叫道 ___________ 大聲地吼道 ___________
承諾 ________ 抱怨道 ________ 說(shuō)服 ________
安慰 ________ 道歉 ________ 建議 _______
耳/低語(yǔ) ____________
shout/ yell / roar
laugh
say
reply
ask
add
explain
sigh
agree
scream
complain
comfort
beg
promise
whisper/murmur
suggest
apologize
persuade
各種各樣的“說(shuō)”
1. “Why don’t you want to accept this wonderful opportunity ” ___________ the boss on the phone.
2. “Shall we leave now ” he ___________ to us and we left the room very quietly.
3. “Help! Help! I can’t swim,” ___________ the frightened boy.
4. “I will never do that again,” I ___________.
5. “ I didn’t like that meal at all,” ________the customer.
asked
whispered
screamed
scream whisper promise ask complain
Fill in the blank with the right verb form.用所給動(dòng)詞的正確形式填空。
promised
complained
對(duì)話標(biāo)簽
用詞單一
復(fù)雜冗長(zhǎng)
堆砌成段
規(guī)范表達(dá)
豐富表達(dá)
Learning Objectives
How to express "say" more vividly
Think
(三) 給各種“說(shuō)”加點(diǎn)料
加點(diǎn)料唄
在直播節(jié)目中，李發(fā)出一聲驚人的喊叫，“我的媽呀，答應(yīng)我，買它！”
In a live streaming, Li shouted in a surprising tone, “Oh, my God! Promise me to buy it”!
skill1 加語(yǔ)氣 基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:
in a/an adj tone( 語(yǔ)氣，語(yǔ)調(diào) )
加點(diǎn)料---修飾動(dòng)詞said
加點(diǎn)料---修飾動(dòng)詞said
skill1 加語(yǔ)氣 基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:
in a tone 以一種溫柔的語(yǔ)氣
in a tone 以一種愉悅的語(yǔ)氣
in a tone 以一種堅(jiān)定的語(yǔ)氣
in a tone 以一種粗魯?shù)恼Z(yǔ)氣
in a tone 以一種悲傷的語(yǔ)氣
in a tone 以一種好奇的的語(yǔ)氣
in an tone 以一種不耐煩的語(yǔ)氣
加點(diǎn)料唄
in a/an adj tone( 語(yǔ)氣，語(yǔ)調(diào) )
soft/gentle/mild
pleasant
firm
sad
rude
impatient
curious
“I didn't mean to,” she murmured in a low voice.
“我不是故意的，”她低聲說(shuō)。
skill2 加嗓音 基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:
加點(diǎn)料---修飾動(dòng)詞said
in a/an adj voice( 聲音)
skill2 加嗓音 基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:
in a voice 用一個(gè)高的聲音
in a voice 用一個(gè)低的聲音
in a voice 用一個(gè)響亮的聲音
in an voice 用一個(gè)惱火的的聲音
in a voice 用一個(gè)堅(jiān)定的聲音
in a voice用一個(gè)顫抖的聲音
in an voice用一個(gè)局促不安的聲音
加點(diǎn)料---修飾動(dòng)詞said
加點(diǎn)料唄
in a/an adj voice( 聲音)
awkward
trembling
high
low
loud
firm
annoyed
特朗普是如此生氣，以致于他在辦公室大聲吼道，“這下完蛋了！”
So annoyed was Donald John Trump that he roared loudly in the office, “It's over”!
加點(diǎn)料---修飾動(dòng)詞said
skill3 加副詞 基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:
adv.
大聲地 難過(guò)地
溫柔地 不情愿地
不耐煩地 生氣地
禮貌地 絕望地
真誠(chéng)地 堅(jiān)定地
loudly
politely
sincerely
gently
firmly
impatiently
sadly
unwillingly
angrily
desperately
加點(diǎn)料---修飾動(dòng)詞said
skill3 加副詞 基本結(jié)構(gòu)為:
加點(diǎn)料唄
adv.
鞏固提升
完成句子
1. She looked at him with an angry glance and____________________“Leave me alone!”
她生氣地看了他一眼，不耐煩地說(shuō)：“別煩我！”
2. He stopped me and___________________, “I do miss you!”
他攔住我，輕輕地說(shuō)：“我真想你！”
3. “Who broke the glass ” the boy _________________________.
男孩聲音顫抖地問(wèn)道，“誰(shuí)打碎的玻璃？”
said impatiently
added in a soft tone
asked in a trembling voice
“說(shuō)” 動(dòng)詞+副詞
“說(shuō)” 動(dòng)詞+語(yǔ)氣
“說(shuō)” 動(dòng)詞+嗓音
注意 標(biāo)點(diǎn)&動(dòng)詞
鞏固提升
4. . “I would love to,” _______________________________.
“我很樂(lè)意這樣做，”艾米麗用一種愉快的語(yǔ)氣說(shuō)。
5. In a _______________________ he _____________________, “Okay, I guess.”他用顫抖的、局促不安的聲音不情愿地回答說(shuō):“好吧，我想。”
Emily said in a pleasant tone
trembling , awkward voice
answered unwillingly
“說(shuō)” 動(dòng)詞+語(yǔ)氣
“說(shuō)” 動(dòng)詞+嗓音
注意 標(biāo)點(diǎn)&動(dòng)詞
6.The children _____________________,"Happy Mother's Day!"
孩子們大聲說(shuō)：“母親節(jié)快樂(lè)！”
shouted loudly
“說(shuō)” 動(dòng)詞+副詞
“說(shuō)” 動(dòng)詞+副詞
復(fù)雜冗長(zhǎng)
堆砌成段
規(guī)范表達(dá)
豐富表達(dá)
豐富表達(dá)
Learning Objectives
續(xù)寫微作文
Last week at a dinner party, the hostess asked me to sit next to Mrs. Rumbold. Mrs. Rumbold was a large, unsmiling lady in a tight black dress.①_________________________________________________
(當(dāng)我在她身邊坐下時(shí)，她甚至連頭都沒(méi)抬一下).②__________________
（她的眼睛盯著自己的盤子，）and in a short time, she was busy eating.
I tried to make a conversation. “Will you be spending your holidays abroad this year ” ③___________________________________(我微笑著禮貌地問(wèn)道).
She didn’t even look up when I took my seat beside her
Her eyes were fixed/focused on her plate
鞏固提升
____________________________________________________________________________________________
I asked politely with a smile
“No,” ④________________________________（她頭也不抬地回答，“說(shuō)” ）. “Will you be staying in England ”
⑤_________________________________(我繼續(xù)用溫和的語(yǔ)氣說(shuō)）.“No,”she shook her head.
⑥_____________________________________________________（我絕望地問(wèn)她晚餐是否吃得好）.
“Young man, ”⑦_(dá)____________________________________（她用一種惱火的聲音回答）, “if you ate more and talked less, we would both enjoy our dinner!”
she answered without looking up
I continued in a gentle tone
Desperately,I asked her whether she was enjoying her dinner
鞏固提升
she answered in an annoyed voice
Summary
① 規(guī)范標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)
② 豐富對(duì)話用詞（詞）
③ 豐富語(yǔ)段內(nèi)容（句）
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