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2025年1月浙江卷:Kevin勇尋真相
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試題再現
2
試題分析
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寫作思路
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范文賞析
目錄
CONTENTS
2025
試題再現
歷年高考英語讀后續寫真題分析
01
Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs. Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (嘆息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window. “Stop right there You must leave right now” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed (回響) in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself. The man’s words sounded pretty convincing.
注意：
（1）續寫詞數應為150左右；（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Paragraph 1: When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
Paragraph 2: Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.
閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節進行續寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。
2025
試題分析
歷年高考英語讀后續寫真題分析
02
文 體：記敘文
題 材：道德抉擇，個人成長
主題語篇：人與自我、人與社會
Kevin在家無聊時，看到一個男人偷偷闖入鄰居家的房子。他趕緊報警，但擔心警察來不及，男人會逃跑，于是決定自己行動，拿著樹枝沖了進去。男人告訴Kevin自己曾住在這個房子里，他回來取父親的手表。Kevin雖然感到懷疑，但仍告訴警察發生的一切，最終警察逮捕了那人。雖然事情解決了，Kevin卻開始懷疑那個男人的話是否是真的。
Kevin was pretty bored. His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business. Therefore, he was left in the care of Mrs. Hill, an old lady who lived next door. His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things. Mrs, Hill was asleep, Kevin sighed（嘆息）and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye.
1. 分析結構，讀懂大意：
結構：
交代背景，引出故事
段落大意：
凱文因為父母不在家而感到無聊，正在由鄰居Mrs. Hill照顧。他雖然是個乖孩子，但也渴望發生一些刺激的事情。突然，他注意到窗外的異常動靜，故事的轉折由此開始。
Mrs. Hill’s front window faced Mr. and Mrs. Green’s house across the street. The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there. Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house. With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
結構：
引入故事的沖突，增加故事的緊張感，并且為后文做鋪墊。
段落大意：
凱文看到有個男人進入了鄰居家空無一人的房子，這讓他感到十分奇怪。當看到男人跳進窗戶后，凱文緊張地撥打了電話報警。
Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived, Kevin decided to do something. He rushed out of Mrs. Hill’s house and crossed the street quickly. Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree, he jumped in through the window, “Stop right there You must leave right now” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.
結構：
推動故事情節發展。
段落大意：
凱文擔心在警察到來之前，那個男人會逃掉，于是他決定自己行動。他迅速跑出Mrs. Hill的家，拿起一根樹枝沖進鄰居的窗戶，大喊讓男人停止這一動作并離開。
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
結構：
提出情節的懸念，增加情節的復雜性，為故事增添了不確定性和緊張感。
段落大意：
男人看到凱文后突然停住，試圖解釋自己是房子的前主人，告訴凱文這里曾是他父母的家，并且他在尋找父親的手表。
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed（回響）in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out. Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
結構：
作為故事的第一個高潮部分，提到了緊張的局面得到解決。
段落大意：
就在男人試圖解釋時，警車的聲音傳來，男人驚慌逃跑。凱文緊隨其后，向警察說明了事情經過，警察追捕并逮捕了男人。
Kevin went back to Mrs. Hill’s house. Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing. “What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself. The man's words sounded pretty convincing.
結構：
展現內心沖突，為續寫的后文做鋪墊。
段落大意：
凱文回到Mrs. Hill家后，心里開始懷疑自己是否做了正確的選擇。他思考著那名男子的話，覺得對方的解釋似乎也很有道理。
梳理文章關鍵信息：（Who、Where、When、What）
人物(who)
時間(when)
地點(where)
做了何事(what)
文章發生在一個白天，凱文的父母不在家，他由Mrs. Hill照看。
主要發生在Mrs. Hill的家和鄰居Mr. 和Mrs. Green的家。
·凱文在無聊的情況下注意到鄰居家有可疑的男子。
·他打電話報警，但擔心警察來不及，于是決定自己采取行動，沖進鄰居家阻止那名男子。
·那名男子解釋自己是前主人，凱文有所懷疑，但警察已經到達并逮捕了男子。
·凱文回到Mrs. Hill家后，開始懷疑自己是否做的是對的事情，思考那名男子的話是否真實。
Kevin，Mrs. Hill, The man
2025
寫作思路
歷年高考英語讀后續寫真題分析
03
分析故事重要信息：（What、Why）：
一篇讀后續寫文章中，會出現重要的關鍵信息，幫助你寫作。
伏筆：文章中出現過、但是未解釋清楚、暗含玄機的內容。
沖突：文章中出現的矛盾，比如內容矛盾，前后矛盾。
這兩個關鍵信息可以讓我們對后續的內容進行一個預測，比如：
后續可能需要提到的內容：1、解釋伏筆內容。2、解決文章中出現的矛盾。
文章主題的最終推測：根據題目文章和以上內容，我們可以基本定下文章主題，這也是一定程度上確定了文章的后續關鍵走向，避免偏題。
分析故事主要伏筆：（What、Why）：
伏筆：有關于主人公Kevin
文章內容：
His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy. He never got into trouble……
Kevin grabbed Mrs. Hill’s home phone and called the police.
“Stop right there You must leave right now” he called out, holding the branch with both hands.
Somehow he wasn’t sure he had done the right thing.
分析故事主要伏筆：（What、Why）：
伏筆：有關于主人公Kevin
分析：
Kevin是個懂事、乖巧的孩子。在遇到突發情況時，能夠表現出勇氣和責任感。在遇到陌生人破窗而入時，他迅速選擇報警，說明他有自己的判斷力和行動力。在事情過后，他也會對事情進行反思，說明他是一個思考細致的孩子。
后續可能需要提到的內容：
在情節闡述過程中，需要盡量體現與原文相符的Kevin的人物特點。
4. 分析故事主要伏筆：（What、Why）：
伏筆：有關于The man所說的話
文章內容：
The man froze for a second, but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief. “Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
“What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself. The man's words sounded pretty convincing.
分析故事主要伏筆：（What、Why）：
伏筆：有關于The man所說的話
分析：
1、男人在被Kevin發現后，他嘆了一口氣開始對孩子認真的解釋。但是原文內沒有證實男人所說的話是否是真的。
2、Kevin也對男人的解釋，抱著懷疑的態度。
后續可能需要提到的內容：
1、需要講到真正的情況是否如他所說，是真實存在的，從而與原文呼應。
2、需要講到Kevin消除了疑慮，即Kevin的懷疑是如何被證實和解決的。
分析故事主要伏筆：（What、Why）：
伏筆：有關于所提到的表
文章內容：
Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
At that moment, the sounds of a police car echoed（回響）in the air. The man stood up in a panic, then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out.
分析故事主要伏筆：（What、Why）：
伏筆：有關于所提到的表
分析：
男人一邊說著父親的表，一邊嘗試撬動地板。說明父親的表在地板下面藏著。
“trying out”這個關鍵詞，結合后面男人聽到警察聲音逃跑的動作，可得知：男人并未成功拿走父親的手表。
后續可能需要提到的內容：
這可以作為驗證真相的線索。由第二段首句可知，Kevin和Mr. Green拿著手表前往警局，可以推測，他們成功根據男人的指引，在地板下面找到了手表。
結合這兩個題目信息，我們已經可以推測，這是一個誤會，即男人說的話是真的。
分析故事主要伏筆：（What、Why）：
伏筆：有關于警察
文章內容：
Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened. They pursued and arrested the man.
分析：
警察根據Kevin描述的經過，逮捕了這個男人。
后續可能需要提到的內容：
如果Kevin所做的，單純是對男人的誤會，Kevin需要和警察重新溝通。
分析故事主要伏筆：（What、Why）：
What can be predicted？
1、誤解與真相
既然是一場誤會，那么就需要解釋清楚真正的情況，解釋清楚男人的行為。
2、責任與勇氣
Kevin的責任與勇氣，以及果斷的報警是正確的。即使Kevin當時不確定男子是否無辜，他的勇敢和責任感幫助避免了更多的麻煩。
3、成長與決斷
Kevin雖然感到抱歉，但也從中獲得了成長，知道了有時做決定需要更多的了解和思考。
分析故事主要伏筆：（What、Why）：
What is the theme of the story
人與社會——道德與社會責任感
在面對社會中不確定和危險情況時，個人如何做出決策和判斷。意識到無論結果如何，自己做出的決定是出于社會責任感和對他人安全的關注。
人與自我——成長與自我反思
Kevin從最初的疑慮和困惑，到最終通過實際行動解決問題，體現了他在面對復雜情況時逐漸成熟的過程。
1. 續寫第一段：
確定本段關鍵人物：_______________________________________________________
在已確定框架基礎上，使用“六字真經”增加細節：
（看到了什么？聽到了什么？想到了什么？說了什么？做了什么？感受到了什么？）
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說：Kevin繪聲繪色的描述當時的情況，和自己的行為
感：Green一家對Kevin所說的反應——震驚、不可置信
想：Green與Kevin抱有同樣的疑慮
做：根據男人所說的話，他們在男人嘗試撬開的地板下面，找到了一塊手表
感：Kevin的反應是什么？意識到男人說的是真的，自己真的誤會了男人
說：Kevin提議和Mr Green一起帶著手表去警局解釋（與第二段銜接）
Kevin，Mr Green，Mrs Green
2. 續寫第二段：
確定本段關鍵人物：_______________________________________________________
在已確定框架基礎上，使用“六字真經”增加細節：
（看到了什么？聽到了什么？想到了什么？說了什么？做了什么？感受到了什么？）
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做：看到兩人進來，警察們的反應
做與說：Kevin將手表給警察，并與警察說明真實情況
說：男人也開始解釋真實的情況（作為情節的補充，解釋原文行為）
感：Kevin因誤會，感覺到愧疚；男人對給大家造成的麻煩，感到抱歉。
說：三人互相道歉，最終迎來圓滿結局。
Kevin，The man，police，Mr Green
2025
范文賞析
歷年高考英語讀后續寫真題分析
04
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. On arriving, he poured out the whole story without stopping – How a stranger had broken into their house. Hearing Kevin’s words, Mr. and Mrs. Green looked at each other with a mixture of shock and disbelief. But they had the same uncertainty “What if he has told the truth”. After a moment of silence, they decide to dig out the truth. Kevin led to the exact floorboard the man had tried to lift while Mr. Green , grabbing a stick in his hand, carefully lifted the floorboard. To everyone’s surprise, they discovered a watch lying quietly beneath it. Frozen for a second, Kevin let out a sign of regret and said anxiously, “Hurry Let’s go to the police station right now.”
閱讀以下參考范文，學習范文的精彩表達和亮點表述。
Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. The police officers looked up as they entered. Mr. Green immediately handed the watch to a policeman. Kevin blushed with embarrassment, admitting that he had mistaken the man for a thief. When the police officer returned the watch to the man, in tears of gratitude, he quickly explained that the watch was actually a cherished keepsake（珍貴的紀念品） for his father who urged him to get it back as soon as possible. Fully convinced this time, Kevin said guiltily, “ Sorry for the trouble I’ve made.” The man shook his head gently. “ No. You did the right thing.” Then he turned to Mr. Green, “ Sorry I made the trouble too.” He apologized. With the truth unveiled, the two men and the 12-year-old boy all felt relieved and beamed in delight.
閱讀以下參考范文，學習范文的精彩表達和亮點表述。
精句評析1：
續寫第一段首句：
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.
連貫的內容銜接：
On arriving, he poured out the whole story without stopping – How a stranger had broken into their house.
點評：
首句中的關鍵信息：過去告訴格林夫婦；銜接句：告訴了什么內容。銜接句做到了對首句的解釋和延伸拓展，讓銜接句與首句銜接自然流暢。
精句評析2：
續寫原文：
“What if he has told the truth ” he thought to himself.
恰到好處的承上啟下句：
But they had the same uncertainty, “What if he has told the truth”.
點評：
承上：與原文使用同樣的疑問句，與原文呼應，使續寫更加連貫。
啟下：為后面格林一家和Kevin一起去找地板下的手表做鋪墊，因為有疑問，才會去找手表。這讓續寫內部的情節發展流暢且自然。
精句評析3：
續寫原文：
“Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
合理的情節設計：
Kevin led to the exact floorboard the man had tried to lift while Mr. Green , grabbing a stick in his hand, carefully lifted the floorboard. To everyone’s surprise, they discovered a watch lying quietly beneath it.
精句評析3：
點評：
前面我們提到，續寫第一段需要包含找到手表的這一個情節。
在情節設計方面，
首先這句話使用同樣的單詞，與原文呼應。
其次使用一個完整流暢的形容，將原文分開的兩個關鍵信息“watch”“lift a floorboard”結合在一起，即大家成功的在撬開的地板下面找到了一個手表，完成了原文男人未完成的動作。這個情節設計完整的印證了男人在原文的所作所為。
精句評析4：
續寫原文：
Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house.
“Hey, kid, put that down. It was my home. My parents used to live here and my father’s watch was here,” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard.
合理的情節設計：
When the police officer returned the watch to the man, in tears of gratitude, he quickly explained that the watch was actually a cherished keepsake for his father who urged him to get it back as soon as possible.
精句評析4：
點評：
原文中，男人的所做、所說，一舉一動都讓人產生懷疑，同時也讓Kevin感到疑惑。
因此我們需要一個情節，解釋男人的所作所為，揭曉事情的真相。
該續寫內容中的情節設計，恰到好處。
男人的所作所為：是父親急著讓他盡快取回手表，因此男人選擇跨窗而入，盡快取回手表。
事情的真相：男人的確之前住在這里，他父母也確實是這里曾經的主人，手表也的確屬于他的父親，他的行為的確是為了幫父親取回手表。這是一場誤會。
結尾評析：
本文由于故事發展節奏較快，需要與原文呼應的情節內容過多，
因此有兩個方向的結尾方式：
1、不需要主題升華句，以一個圓滿的故事結局收尾。
比如：
1、With the truth unveiled, the two men and the 12-year-old boy all felt relieved and beamed in delight.（名師范文）
2、Eventually, the police identified the man and returned the watch, and Kevin returned to Mrs. Hill's house, relieved to know that he'd done the right thing, even though it had been a not-so-good misunderstanding.
結尾評析：
2、對主題進行升華，以Kevin的個人成長與感悟結尾。
比如：
1、The incident made Kevin reflect deeply on his choices, and he understood that growing up isn’t just about making decisions, but about learning and improving from them.
2、In the end, Kevin's courage and wisdom lead to a happy ending for everyone, both successfully uncovering the truth and allowing him to grow.
版本二
When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. He explained everything that had happened while they were away. Mrs. Green listened with wide eyes, clearly shocked by the ordeal（磨難）. “Thank you so much, Kevin. You were very brave,” she said, her voice trembling. Mr. Green nodded in agreement. “We’re just glad you were there to call the police. It could have been much worse.” Kevin felt a bit relieved hearing their gratitude but still couldn’t shake off the doubt in his mind. He decided to ask Mr. Green about the man’s claim. “Do you know if the man’s parents used to live here ” Mr. Green shook his head. “No, we bought this house years ago. There’s no way that’s true.”
閱讀以下參考范文，學習范文的精彩表達和亮點表述。
Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. The watch was old and dusty, but it seemed important to the man who had broken in. At the station, they handed it over to the officer who had arrested the intruder（入侵者）. The officer examined the watch carefully and then turned to Kevin and Mr. Green. “This watch is actually stolen property. We’ve been looking for it for months. It’s worth a lot of money.” Kevin’s eyes widened in surprise. “So he was lying about it being his father’s watch ” The officer nodded. “Yes, he was trying to steal it and sell it. Thanks to you, Kevin, we’ve solved a big case.” Kevin felt a wave of relief and pride wash over him. He realized that he had done the right thing after all.
閱讀以下參考范文，學習范文的精彩表達和亮點表述。
范文點評
1.情節合理且緊湊
續寫內容緊密圍繞原文情節展開，邏輯連貫。第一段中，Kevin與Mr. and Mrs. Green的對話自然流暢，Green夫婦的反應符合常理，既表達了對Kevin的感激，又為后續情節發展埋下伏筆。
第二段中，Kevin和Mr. Green將手表交給警察并得知真相，情節合理推進，揭示了小偷的謊言，圓滿解決了Kevin的內心疑惑。
2.人物形象鮮明
Kevin的性格特點得到了進一步展現。他在第一段中表現出的猶豫和責任感，以及在第二段中得知真相后的釋然和自豪，使他的人物形象更加立體。
其他人物如Mr. and Mrs. Green、警察等的言行也符合各自的身份和情境，增強了故事的真實感。
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3.語言表達自然流暢
使用了合適的詞匯和語法結構，如“wide eyes”“voice trembling”“nodded in agreement”等，生動地描繪了人物的情緒和動作。
對話部分自然，符合英語表達習慣，如“Thank you so much, Kevin. You were very brave”“No, we bought this house years ago. There’s no way that’s true”等，使故事更具感染力。
4.情感線索清晰
Kevin從最初的猶豫（“What if he has told the truth ”）到與Green夫婦交流后的釋然（“Kevin felt a bit relieved”），再到得知真相后的自豪（“Kevin felt a wave of relief and pride wash over him”），情感變化合理且有層次，使故事更具深度。
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