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Period 6　 寫作(Writing)
寫影評
本單元的寫作任務是寫一篇影評，即根據所給電影或所給相關信息提煉重點，對電影做必要的介紹，并抒發自己的感想。介紹電影情節時要抓住重點，電影評論部分要客觀公正，可從故事主題、人物塑造等方面作出評價。介紹劇情時以一般現在時或一般過去時為主，人稱多用第三人稱。
一、基本框架
1．開頭：電影簡介(上映日期、類型、導演等)；
2．主體：劇情簡介；
3．結尾：發表評論。
二、常用表達
1．The film is set in a remote mountainous village．
這部電影以一個偏遠的山村為背景。
2．The film tells us the friendship between a boy and a tiger．
這部影片講述了一個男孩和一只老虎之間的友誼。
3．The most memorable scene is how the hero overcame difficulties and returned to his homeland．
最令人難忘的一幕是主人公是如何克服困難回到他的祖國的。
4．I was deeply moved by the characters' bravery and kindness．
我被人物的勇敢和善良深深打動了。
5．This is a very touching film and a must-see．
這是一部非常感人的電影，一部必看的電影。
6．As far as I'm concerned，the film can be called the best film．
在我看來，這部影片堪稱最佳影片。
7．It is a good movie that people of all ages can enjoy．
這是一部老少咸宜的好影片。
8．Even with these small problems，the film is still a great film，and I really enjoy it!
即使有這些小問題，這部電影仍然是一部很棒的電影，我非常喜歡它！
假定你是李華，你校英語報開設了一個介紹影視作品的專欄，請根據下面表格中的提示為該欄目寫一篇關于電影《流浪地球》的影評。
片名 The Wandering Earth《流浪地球》
劇情 影片講述了在不久的未來，太陽即將毀滅，太陽系已經不適合人類生存。面臨滅絕的危險境地，人類將開啟“流浪地球”計劃，試圖帶著地球一起逃離太陽系，尋找人類的新家園。
評論 ……
注意：1．詞數80左右；
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
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[審題構思]　
1．確定體裁：本文是一篇影評，屬于議論文；
2．確定人稱：本文的主要人稱應為第三人稱；
3．確定時態：本文的主體時態為一般現在時。
4．確定內容：
①引入話題；
②情節概述；
③作出評論。
[遣詞造句]
1．《流浪地球》是一部科幻影片，改編自一部同名小說。
The Wandering Earth is a sci-fi film，and it _______________ a novel of the same name．
2．影片講述了在不久的未來，太陽即將毀滅，太陽系已經不再適合人類生存。
The film tells the story that in the near future the sun ____________ and the solar system is no longer suitable for human survival．
3．面臨滅絕的危險境地，人類將開啟“流浪地球”計劃。
When they _________________________ of human extinction，people will start the “Wandering Earth” project．
4．他們試圖帶著地球一起逃離太陽系，尋找人類的新家園。
They _____________ the solar system with the Earth and look for a new home for human beings．
5．該影片自上映以來深受觀眾歡迎。
The film _____________________ audiences since its release．
6．它必定是一部你不容錯過的令人驚奇的影片。
It is definitely _______________ you shouldn't miss．
[句式升級]
1．用which引導的非限制性定語從句改寫句1
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2．用動詞-ed形式作狀語改寫句3，并用動詞-ing形式作狀語與句4合并
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[連句成篇](注意使用適當的銜接過渡詞語)
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動作描寫　頭部動作
[詞塊積累]
1．nod one's head 點頭
2．shake one's head 搖頭
3．lower one's head 低下頭
4．clear one's head 清醒一下頭腦
5．meet sb．'s eyes 接觸某人的目光
6．catch one's eye 吸引某人的注意
7．whisper in one's ear 在某人耳邊低語
8．put one's head in one's hands 雙手抱頭
9．one's mouth half opened 某人的嘴半張著
10．put one's hands to one's cheeks 用雙手捂住臉
[佳句積累]
1．The smile froze on her lips．
她嘴角的笑容僵住了。
2．He ducked his head and stepped back to his seat．
他低下頭，回到座位上。
3．The eyes turned slowly and looked at her sharply and steadily．
那雙眼睛慢慢地轉過來，目光銳利而堅定地注視著她。
4．I felt all the people present were looking at me with strange eyes．
我感到所有在場的人都用奇怪的眼光看著我。
5．He turned his eyes to the door when he heard the handle turning．
當他聽到門把手轉動的聲音時，他向門那邊看去。
6．His mother stopped her housework，raising her head with surprise in her eyes．
他的母親停下了家務活，滿眼詫異地抬起頭。
7．When he got home，he buried his head under the quilt，pretending to be asleep．
回到家中，他把頭埋到被子底下，假裝睡著了。
8．When recognizing who the visitor was，John opened his mouth with his eyes widening．
當認出來訪客是誰時，約翰張大了嘴巴，眼睛睜得大大的。
9．Steven rose，sat close to his mother and rested his head against his mother's shoulder，weeping．
史蒂文起來坐在母親身邊，將頭靠在她的肩膀上，哭泣了起來。
10．At first the bird stuck his head out of his cage just to take a sip of water and fill his mouth with food．
起初，這只鳥把頭探出籠子，只是為了喝一口水，把嘴里塞滿食物。
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫一個80詞左右的段落，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
My story is about my mother's beautiful ball gown(舞裙)．She had carefully wrapped it in paper and placed it in a cardboard box and it was hidden away in a top cupboard．From time to time it would be lifted out of its box and shown to us，and as small girls we would imagine the day when we might be allowed to try it on．That never happened．
The top cupboard where the dress was stored happened to be in my bedroom．One day when I was around the age of nine or ten，I was very anxious to try it on．I quickly pulled the gown over my head．My mother's waist(腰) must have been extremely tiny as it fitted my waist with little room to spare．
Suddenly，I realized that my mother would be home soon，so I hurriedly undressed but I accidentally spilt(灑) a bottle of ink over the bottom of the dress．I was shocked and scared．Carefully，I put it into the box and replaced the box onto the shelf．I lived with the fear throughout my teenage years that it would eventually be discovered．
The years passed and my mother grew old and became ill．I made the decision that she would come to live in a nursing home near me．Before she went there，I decided to arrange an afternoon tea with a group of her closest friends．Mom and her friends talked about their past days．
About half an hour later，the conversation turned to the dress．_______________________________________________________________
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Period 6
應用文寫作
遣詞造句
1．is adapted from　2．is dying out　3．are faced with the danger　4．try to escape　5．has been popular with　6．an amazing film
句式升級
1．The Wandering Earth is a scifi film，which is adapted from a novel of the same name．
2．Faced with the danger of human extinction，people will start the “Wandering Earth” project，trying to escape the solar system with the Earth and look for a new home for human beings．
連句成篇
[參考范文]
The Wandering Earth is a scifi film，which is adapted from a novel of the same name．
The film tells the story that in the near future the sun is dying out and the solar system is no longer suitable for human survival．Faced with the danger of human extinction，people will start the “Wandering Earth” project，trying to escape the solar system with the Earth and look for a new home for human beings．
The film has been popular with audiences since its release．Therefore，it is definitely an amazing film you shouldn't miss．
讀后續寫
續寫初練筆
[參考范文]
About half an hour later，the conversation turned to the dress． My mother said she could never understand how it got a terrible ink mark on the beautiful dress which was stored so carefully．When she looked at me，I found myself in front of my mother redfaced，shame washing over me．I was not sure whether my mother would forgive me．But I gathered all my courage to tell her the truth and apologized to her．My mother was touched and forgave me．At last，I was released from that awful secret carried deep inside me from my childhood．
1 / 1(共49張PPT)
Period 6　
Unit 4　Stage and screen
主題語境
人與社會——戲劇與影視
本單元的寫作任務是寫一篇影評，即根據所給電影或所給相關信息提煉重點，對電影做必要的介紹，并抒發自己的感想。介紹電影情節時要抓住重點，電影評論部分要客觀公正，可從故事主題、人物塑造等方面作出評價。介紹劇情時以一般現在時或一般過去時為主，人稱多用第三人稱。
寫影評
課時學案　寫作(Writing)
一、基本框架
1．開頭：電影簡介(上映日期、類型、導演等)；
2．主體：劇情簡介；
3．結尾：發表評論。
二、常用表達
1．The film is set in a remote mountainous village．
這部電影以一個偏遠的山村為背景。
2．The film tells us the friendship between a boy and a tiger．
這部影片講述了一個男孩和一只老虎之間的友誼。
3．The most memorable scene is how the hero overcame difficulties and returned to his homeland．
最令人難忘的一幕是主人公是如何克服困難回到他的祖國的。
4．I was deeply moved by the characters' bravery and kindness．
我被人物的勇敢和善良深深打動了。
5．This is a very touching film and a must-see．
這是一部非常感人的電影，一部必看的電影。
6．As far as I'm concerned，the film can be called the best film．
在我看來，這部影片堪稱最佳影片。
7．It is a good movie that people of all ages can enjoy．
這是一部老少咸宜的好影片。
8．Even with these small problems，the film is still a great film，and I really enjoy it!
即使有這些小問題，這部電影仍然是一部很棒的電影，我非常喜歡它！
假定你是李華，你校英語報開設了一個介紹影視作品的專欄，請根據下面表格中的提示為該欄目寫一篇關于電影《流浪地球》的影評。
片名 The Wandering Earth《流浪地球》
劇情 影片講述了在不久的未來，太陽即將毀滅，太陽系已經不適合人類生存。面臨滅絕的危險境地，人類將開啟“流浪地球”計劃，試圖帶著地球一起逃離太陽系，尋找人類的新家園。
評論 ……
注意：1．詞數80左右；
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
[審題構思]　
1．確定體裁：本文是一篇影評，屬于議論文；
2．確定人稱：本文的主要人稱應為第三人稱；
3．確定時態：本文的主體時態為一般現在時。
4．確定內容：
①引入話題；
②情節概述；
③作出評論。
[遣詞造句]
1．《流浪地球》是一部科幻影片，改編自一部同名小說。
The Wandering Earth is a sci-fi film，and it _______________ a novel of the same name．
2．影片講述了在不久的未來，太陽即將毀滅，太陽系已經不再適合人類生存。
The film tells the story that in the near future the sun ____________ and the solar system is no longer suitable for human survival．
is adapted from
is dying out
3．面臨滅絕的危險境地，人類將開啟“流浪地球”計劃。
When they ______________________ of human extinction，people will start the “Wandering Earth” project．
4．他們試圖帶著地球一起逃離太陽系，尋找人類的新家園。
They _____________ the solar system with the Earth and look for a new home for human beings．
5．該影片自上映以來深受觀眾歡迎。
The film _____________________ audiences since its release．
6．它必定是一部你不容錯過的令人驚奇的影片。
It is definitely _______________ you shouldn't miss．
are faced with the danger
try to escape
has been popular with
an amazing film
[句式升級]
1．用which引導的非限制性定語從句改寫句1
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．用動詞-ed形式作狀語改寫句3，并用動詞-ing形式作狀語與句4合并
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Wandering Earth is a sci-fi film，which is adapted from a novel of the same name．
Faced with the danger of human extinction，people will start the “Wandering Earth” project，trying to escape the solar system with the Earth and look for a new home for human beings．
[連句成篇](注意使用適當的銜接過渡詞語)
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
[參考范文]
The Wandering Earth is a sci-fi film，which is adapted from a novel of the same name．
The film tells the story that in the near future the sun is dying out and the solar system is no longer suitable for human survival．Faced with the danger of human extinction，people will start the “Wandering Earth” project，trying to escape the solar system with the Earth and look for a new home for human beings．
The film has been popular with audiences since its release．Therefore，it is definitely an amazing film you shouldn't miss．
[詞塊積累]
1．nod one's head 點頭
2．shake one's head 搖頭
3．lower one's head 低下頭
4．clear one's head 清醒一下頭腦
動作描寫　頭部動作
5．meet sb．'s eyes 接觸某人的目光
6．catch one's eye 吸引某人的注意
7．whisper in one's ear 在某人耳邊低語
8．put one's head in one's hands 雙手抱頭
9．one's mouth half opened 某人的嘴半張著
10．put one's hands to one's cheeks 用雙手捂住臉
[佳句積累]
1．The smile froze on her lips．
她嘴角的笑容僵住了。
2．He ducked his head and stepped back to his seat．
他低下頭，回到座位上。
3．The eyes turned slowly and looked at her sharply and steadily．
那雙眼睛慢慢地轉過來，目光銳利而堅定地注視著她。
4．I felt all the people present were looking at me with strange eyes．
我感到所有在場的人都用奇怪的眼光看著我。
5．He turned his eyes to the door when he heard the handle turning．
當他聽到門把手轉動的聲音時，他向門那邊看去。
6．His mother stopped her housework，raising her head with surprise in her eyes．
他的母親停下了家務活，滿眼詫異地抬起頭。
7．When he got home，he buried his head under the quilt，pretending to be asleep．
回到家中，他把頭埋到被子底下，假裝睡著了。
8．When recognizing who the visitor was，John opened his mouth with his eyes widening．
當認出來訪客是誰時，約翰張大了嘴巴，眼睛睜得大大的。
9．Steven rose，sat close to his mother and rested his head against his mother's shoulder，weeping．
史蒂文起來坐在母親身邊，將頭靠在她的肩膀上，哭泣了起來。
10．At first the bird stuck his head out of his cage just to take a sip of water and fill his mouth with food．
起初，這只鳥把頭探出籠子，只是為了喝一口水，把嘴里塞滿食物。
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫一個80詞左右的段落，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
My story is about my mother's beautiful ball gown(舞裙)．She had carefully wrapped it in paper and placed it in a cardboard box and it was hidden away in a top cupboard．From time to time it would be lifted out of its box and shown to us，and as small girls we would imagine the day when we might be allowed to try it on．That never happened．
The top cupboard where the dress was stored happened to be in my bedroom．One day when I was around the age of nine or ten，I was very anxious to try it on．I quickly pulled the gown over my head．My mother's waist(腰) must have been extremely tiny as it fitted my waist with little room to spare．
Suddenly，I realized that my mother would be home soon，so I hurriedly undressed but I accidentally spilt(灑) a bottle of ink over the bottom of the dress．I was shocked and scared．Carefully，I put it into the box and replaced the box onto the shelf．I lived with the fear throughout my teenage years that it would eventually be discovered．
The years passed and my mother grew old and became ill．I made the decision that she would come to live in a nursing home near me．Before she went there，I decided to arrange an afternoon tea with a group of her closest friends．Mom and her friends talked about their past days．
About half an hour later，the conversation turned to the dress．______________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
[參考范文]
About half an hour later，the conversation turned to the dress．My mother said she could never understand how it got a terrible ink mark on the beautiful dress which was stored so carefully．When she looked at me，I found myself in front of my mother red-faced，shame washing over me．I was not sure whether my mother would forgive me．But I gathered all my courage to tell her the truth and apologized to her．My mother was touched and forgave me．At last，I was released from that awful secret carried deep inside me from my childhood．
Ⅰ．閱讀理解
A
I have a special place in my heart for libraries．I have for as long as I can remember．I was always an enthusiastic reader，sometimes reading up to three books a day as a child．Stories were like air to me and while other kids played ball or went to parties，I lived out adventures through the books I checked out from the library．
課時分層作業(十二)
My first job was working at the Ukiah Library when I was 16 years old．It was a dream job and I did everything from shelving books to reading to the children for story time．
As I grew older and became a mother，the library took on a new place and an added meaning in my life．I had several children and books were our main source(來源) of entertainment．It was a big deal for us to load up and go to the local library，where my kids could pick out books to read or books they wanted me to read to them．
I always read，using different voices，as though I were acting out the stories with my voice and they loved it！It was a special time to bond with my children and it filled them with the wonderment of books．
Now，I see my children taking their children to the library and I love it that the excitement of going to the library lives on from generation to generation．
As a novelist，I've found a new relationship with libraries．I encourage readers to go to their local library when they can't afford to purchase a book．I see libraries as a safe haven(避風港) for readers and writers，a bridge that helps put together a reader with a book．Libraries，in their own way，help fight book piracy(盜版行為) and I think all writers should support libraries in a significant way when they can．Encourage readers to use the library．Share library announcements on your social media．Frequent them and talk about them when you can．
【語篇解讀】　本文是一篇記敘文。文章主要講述了作者對圖書館的熱愛。
1．Which word best describes the author's relationship with books as a child
A．Cooperative． B．Uneasy．
C．Inseparable． D．Casual．
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C　[推理判斷題。根據第一段中的“I was always an enthusiastic reader，sometimes reading up to three books a day as a child...through the books”可推知，小時候，作者與書形影不離。inseparable“不可分割的，不可分離的”。故選C。]
2．What does the underlined phrase“an added meaning” in paragraph 3 refer to
A．Pleasure from working in the library．
B．Joy of reading passed on in the family．
C．Wonderment from acting out the stories．
D．A closer bond developed with the readers．
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B　[詞義猜測題。根據畫線詞組前的“As I grew older...the library took on a new place”及下文的“I had several children...to read to them．”可知，隨著作者年齡的增長，她成為母親，圖書館在她心里有了新的“地位”，書成了她和孩子們娛樂的主要來源。對他們來說，去圖書館讀書是件令人激動的事情。故“an added meaning”應是指在作者家中傳遞的讀書的樂趣。故選B。]
3．What does the author call on other writers to do
A．Sponsor book fairs．
B．Write for social media．
C．Support libraries．
D．Purchase her novels．
C　[細節理解題。根據最后一段中的“I think all writers should support libraries in a significant way when they can．”可知，作者呼吁其他作者支持圖書館。故選C。]
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4．Which can be a suitable title for the text
A．Reading：A Source of Knowledge
B．My Idea About Writing
C．Library：A Haven for the Young
D．My Love of the Library
D　[標題歸納題。閱讀全文可知，library是本文的線索，作者描述了她從孩童到為人母，以及作為小說家對圖書館的熱愛。故D項符合題意。]
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B
Several years ago，I went to see an advanced cartoon 3D movie Frankenweenie at the Walt Disney Studios，in California．A few days later，our chief editor gave me a new task and then I sat down for interviews with the film's director，Tim Burton，and some of the actors．
As for the movie，I had a lot to talk about as an audience．It was one of the most alluring movies I'd ever seen．Even though it was made in black and white，it was so lively that my mind seemed to fill in color in every scene(場景)．Burton talked to me about why he chose to use black and white and 3D technology for Frankenweenie．“I like the depth and shadows(陰影)that you can get with black and white，” he said．“And I just thought the 3D technology would be really fun to see．”
He's right．The whole movie is a lot of fun．A school student Victor Frankenstein lives in a small town，whose dog Sparky is hit by a car one day．Victor is very sad and lonely until he brings the dog back to life inspired by an experiment of his science teacher about the power of electricity．Victor's classmates learn what happens and also try to bring their pets back from the dead．These creatures end up with causing widespread damage throughout the town．Finally，the dog gives up its own life to save Victor．
My favorite part is the moment when Victor brings Sparky back to life，because I have a very strong love for animals．This scene isn't the funniest，but it is really heart-warming to me．
I'd like to recommend this movie to kids because of the unusual and lively characters．And it does attract those who are interested in cartoon techniques to see this film．The effects will blow your mind out of the water．Be sure to check out this exciting movie in theaters．
【語篇解讀】　本文是一篇說明文。文章介紹了《科學怪狗》這部非常吸引人的科幻動畫片，并極力推薦孩子們去觀看。
5．What does the author probably do
A．An actor． B．A director．
C．A theater worker． D．A reporter．
D　[推理判斷題。根據第一段中的“A few days later，our chief editor gave me a new task and then I sat down for interviews with the film's director，Tim Burton，and some of the actors．”可知，作者可能是一名記者。]
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6．What does the underlined word “alluring” in paragraph 2 probably mean
A．Attractive． B．Boring．
C．Cruel． D．Serious．
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A　[詞義猜測題。根據第二段中的“As for the movie，I had a lot to talk about as an audience．It was one of the most alluring movies I'd ever seen．Even though it was made in black and white，it was so lively that my mind seemed to fill in color in every scene．”可知，盡管電影是黑白的，但它仍舊是如此生動，給作者留下了深刻印象，因此推斷此處說的是它是作者看過的最有吸引力的電影之一，畫線詞的意思是“吸引人的”。與A項“吸引人的”意思相同。]
7．What do we know about the movie Frankenweenie
A．It is especially attractive for the old．
B．It is probably a science fiction movie．
C．It partly uses the color of black and white．
D．It is the funniest one the author has ever seen．
B　[推理判斷題。根據第三段中的“Victor is very sad and lonely until he brings the dog back to life inspired by an experiment of his science teacher about the power of electricity．”可推斷，該電影可能是一部科幻電影。]
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8．What's the main purpose of the text
A．To recommend a movie to people．
B．To introduce how a movie is made．
C．To tell a story about Victor and his dog．
D．To introduce how to bring a dog to life．
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A　[寫作意圖題。根據最后一段“I'd like to recommend this movie to kids because of the unusual and lively characters．And it does attract those who are interested in cartoon techniques to see this film．The effects will blow your mind out of the water．Be sure to check out this exciting movie in theaters．”可知，作者寫這篇文章的目的是向人們推薦一部電影。]
Ⅱ．應用文寫作
假設你是李華，非常喜歡看英文電影，認為這是一個學英語的好辦法。但是你的父母并不贊成和支持，于是你給外教喬伊斯(Joyce)寫信，征求她的意見，內容包括：
1．說明你的想法；
2．父母反對的理由(至少兩點)；
3．征求老師的意見。
注意：1．詞數80左右；
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Joyce，
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Sincerely，
Li Hua
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Dear Joyce，
I'm writing to seek your help because my parents and I are unable to agree on how to learn English．
I'm keen on watching English movies，which I consider a good idea to use different media for study．However，my parents are strongly opposed．They think the language is informal，which might affect my English study．Worse still，they think that it is a waste of my study time since it requires a large amount of energy to have a thorough understanding of a movie．
Should I follow my parents' advice or stick to my own idea I'd really appreciate your advice．
Sincerely，
Li Hua
THANKS

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