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Unit 3 Family matters
An Integrated Reading & Writing
外研版高中英語（2019）必修一
Lesson Based on Family Bonds
《基于親情紐帶的讀寫融合課》
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To get the main idea and specific information of the journal entry and find out the elements and structure of a family memory.
To appreciate family-themed expressions and have a deeper understanding of family relationship.
To apply writing skills of family relationship in continuation writing .
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Learning Objectives
An Integrated Reading & Writing Lesson Based on Family Bonds
基于親情紐帶的讀寫融合課
Do you have an unforgettable memory with your family
Read the journal entry and answer the questions.
P35 4
1. What brought back the author's lovely memory
2. What happened in the author's memory
3. Why is it a lovely memory
An old photo.
The author wanted to surprise her mother with home-made scrambled eggs on her mother's birthday. Unluckily, the eggs were burnt, but they ended up laughing about it and eating them all anyway.
Because it shows the love between the author and her mother.
2021年6月全國新高考1卷
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：1.續寫詞數應為150左右：2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Paragraph1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
Paragraph 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
真題鏈接1
Conflict/
Problem
1. the bread turned black;
2. the porridge boiled over and put out the fire;
3. touched the hot burner.
Theme
express gratitude and love to their mom
Para 1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Looking at the mess in the kitchen, Dad was surprised and asked what had happened. Knowing the situation, Dad comforted the two children and offered to help them. Under the dad’s guidance, they successfully prepared French toast and chicken porridge. After the breakfast was ready, the twins were eager to let mother enjoy the delicious food at once.
Para 2:
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When she slowly
opened her eyes, she was very surprised to find breakfast ready in front of her. They hugged her and yelled “Happy Mother’s Day, darling Mummy!”“Thank you. It’s really a big
surprise!” said mom, with tears of gratitude welling up in her eyes. Dad was pretending to be astonished to see such delicious food. Mother tasted and praised that it was the
best breakfast she had ever had. The whole room was filled with laughter and
happiness. What a sweet surprise on Mother's Day!
Appreciation and accumulation
My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order.
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn't counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece's small boys and my six-month- old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
Why did I ask my brother to keep his dog outside
an energetic and friendly big dog
2025年全國新高考1卷
真題鏈接2
My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
為了避免尷尬，哥哥帶狗離開，為下文哥哥生氣以及作者努力修補關系埋下伏筆！
What was the weather like after supper
What was it an awkward moment
What was the solution
A few days passed, and I hadn't heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise—a shock, actually: "Not a chance." Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he'll get over it, I reasoned.
Why did I text my brother and wish him to come out again What response did I get
Because I realized that my brother was unhappy and I was wrong.(為下文當面找弟弟道歉埋下伏筆)
What did I do after being rejected by my brother
被哥哥拒絕，得知哥哥生氣，我還自己安慰自己說哥哥會自己克服的。可推出作者是一個固執、以自我為中心且不太考慮哥哥感受的人。（為作者態度轉變，兄弟倆彼此理解和溝通買下伏筆）
Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience( 良 心 ) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother's shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
What did my wife advise me to do What did I respond
Why did my conscience keep bothering me
作者開始受到良心的譴責，學會換位思考了，為下文當面找弟弟道歉兄弟倆破冰和解埋下伏筆。
What did Toby mean to my brother
I realized it was me who was at fault.
①What was my fault
②How did I feel
③What did I decide to do and what did we prepare
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door.
①Who answered the door What was were their reactions
②What did I say and do What was my brother’s response
③What did we do together
feelings
Actions
feelings
Actions
Actions
The hurt look on my brother’s face when he left that day lingered in my heart constantly.
A feeling of guilt and shame washed over me, making it hard for me to breathe.
My conscience was tortured deeply, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
An inner voice kept echoing in my mind that I couldn’t delay this apology any longer.
The look of indifference and annoyance spread across my brother’s face.
The surprise on his face was quickly replaced by the wamth.
The tension melted away as we chatted over the aroma of biscuits.
prioritize Sth. over
overlook one’s significance
acknowledge one’s mistake
with tears of shame welling up in my eyes,...
Toby, immediately, dashed to sniff the biscuits,wagging his tail energetically.
With a mix of uneasiness and hope, I knocked.
blurt out/murmur
force myself to meet his eyes
His shoulders relaxed slightly.
step aside
one’s expressions softened, the initial anger in his eyes gradually melting away.
Seeing me, my brother’s eyes widened.
Nervousness tied my tongue until Toby’s joyful bark broke the silence.
Actions
Feelings
Theme-related expressions
I realized it was me who was at fault. The dog wasn’t just a pet for him; it was his family. My inconsideration forced him and Toby to leave in the rain without being understood. How lonely he must have felt and how selfish I was! The hurt look on my brother’s face when he left that day lingered in my heart constantly. At the thought of this, a feeling of guilt and shame washed over me, making it hard for me to breathe. The next few days witnessed my conscience being tortured deeply, feeling like sitting on pins and needles. An inner voice kept echoing in my mind that I couldn’t delay this apology any longer. The moment I told my wife my plan, she was supportive and suggested baking some of my brother's favorite biscuits. Driven by a desperate need to make things right, I grabbed my keys , jumped into the car and headed to my brother’s home without a second thought.
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. Before I could even knock, Toby’s barking erupted from inside, scratching at the door. The door creaked open and out rushed Toby, with its tail wagging wildly. The look of indifference and annoyance spread across my brother’s face. I took a deep breath and said, “Brother, I come here with a heavy heart, fully aware of my thoughtlessness. Toby is as much a part of your family as any human member, and I should have shown greater empathy.” Almost instantly, his eyes wet with tears, he took the biscuits and signaled me to enter. As we sat in the cosy living room, the awkwardness slowly faded, replaced by stories, laughter and tears. Only then did I realize that empathy, forgiveness and communication are the true bridges to mend broken bonds.
Homework
Exchange and improve your own writings with the following checklist.
評分時，應主要從以下四個方面進行考慮：①與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度；②內容的豐富性；③應用語法結構和詞匯的豐富性和準確性；④上下文的連貫性。
5. 拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個重要方面，評分時，應視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。
6. 如書寫較差以致影響交際，可將分數降低一個檔次。
第五檔：（21—25 分）
1.與所給短文融洽度高，與所提供各段落開頭語銜接合理。
2.所使用語法結構和詞匯豐富、準確，可能有些許錯誤，但完全不影響意義表達。
3.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使所續寫短文結構緊湊。
第四檔：（16—20分）
1.與所給短文融洽度較高，與所提供各段落開頭語銜接較為合理。
2.所使用語法結構和詞匯較為豐富、準確，可能有些許錯誤，但不影響意義表達。
3.比較有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使所續寫短文結構緊湊。
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