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--結尾句
續(xù)寫作文六大主題
遇難脫困
個人成長
校園生活
助人為樂
親情關愛
人與動物
結尾的方法
主題升華式結尾
留白式結尾
首尾呼應結尾
畫面定格式結尾
01.首尾呼應
首尾呼應式結尾：是指續(xù)寫文章與材料原文開頭相呼應采用與原文前后邏輯一致、主題一致的結尾方式，起到深化主題，畫龍點睛的效果。
【示例】敘述作者的母親很健忘，一家自駕旅游去祖父母所居住的地方，途中發(fā)生了一些有趣的事情。
故事開頭: I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother--loving，sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful.
續(xù)寫結尾:Despite mom's being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still the most wonderful mom in the world.
【仿寫1】(2021·新課標I&I卷) 梗概: 講述雙胞胎為了獻給母親一份美味早餐，自己動手做起飯餐，但是不幸的是他們連連失敗的故事。
故事開頭:The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day.
結尾句:__________________________________________________________________
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Mother kissed them and smiled dazzlingly（adv.耀眼地）“Oh dear, thank you my sweeties. What a big surprise!”
【仿寫2】
(2020·新課標卷) 梗概: 善良的Meredith想幫助一個貧困家庭。孩子們想出一個主意--制作爆米花，讓Bernard去賣爆米花。
故事開頭:The Meredith family lived in a small community...Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.
續(xù)寫結尾:_________________________________________________________________
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Holding the money, so moved was Bernard that he could hardly utter a word. Even a small act of kindness can make the world better.
積累：make ends meet收支平衡，維持生計
【仿寫3】(2018·浙江6月卷)
梗概: 講述的爸爸帶兒子去朋友家農(nóng)場游玩迷路的故事。
故事開頭:It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
續(xù)寫結尾:_________________________________________________________
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Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved（銘記；雕刻） in my mind.
【仿寫4】(2020·浙江7月卷)
梗概: 講述作者和妻子前往被稱為“北極熊之都”的加拿大丘吉爾鎮(zhèn)拍攝北極熊遇到攻擊最后得救的故事。
故事開頭: One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world”--the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.
續(xù)與結尾:___________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
On the way home, I checked my camera, amazed to find that the photos were so clear and vivid that they were better than any other photos we'd taken.
02.畫面定格
畫面定格法: 指的是通過描寫具體的環(huán)境和人物的動作，構建出一個情感豐富且富有畫面感的故事結尾，從而增強故事的視覺效果，加深情感共鳴，提高故事的吸引力。
第一步:確定動作和情感基調。
根據(jù)情節(jié)發(fā)展，確定此刻的人物動作和情感基調，如喜悅、感動、釋然等。
第二步:選擇合適的環(huán)境描寫。
選擇一個能夠增強當前情感基調的環(huán)境背景，例如自然元素、天氣狀況或具體場景。
第三步:整合環(huán)境與人物動作。
將環(huán)境描寫與人物動作有機結合，形成一個完整的畫面。通過細致的描寫，使讀者能夠感受到人物的內心世界和情感波動，增強故事的吸引力和共鳴。
【示例】普通結尾句: She was happy to receive the trophy(獎杯；獎品).
畫面定格法:
1.確定動作與情感基調: 輕撫獎杯，喜悅;
2.選擇合適的環(huán)境描寫: 溫暖的陽光;
3.整合環(huán)境與人物動作: 陽光照在獎杯上，她輕輕撫摸獎杯。
畫面定格結尾句:
She touched the trophy lightly as it caught the glow of the sun outside the window.（它捕捉到了窗外陽光的光芒）
【仿寫1】
Kissed by the rain and glistening（v.閃閃反光）, the wet ground is cold underfoot(adv.在腳下). A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.
潮濕的地面走起來很冷，被雨水親吻后閃閃發(fā)光。一股濃郁的泥土般的香味從地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔軟的懷抱里。(雨后清新的畫面)
【仿寫2】
1.陽光溫暖又溫柔地籠罩著她，她抬起頭，臉上掛著燦爛的微笑。
2.清晨的陽光照進來，全家人沉浸在幸福和愛中。
With the sunlight greeting her gently and warmly, she raised up her head, wearing a shining smile on her face.
With the early sunlight streaming in, the whole family was bathed in happiness and love.
【仿寫3】
1.溫暖的陽光照進來,他們擁抱在一起,感到被原諒,被愛和被信任。
2.兩人互相攙扶著,站起身來,朝家走去,夕陽在地上投下兩個長長的、肩并肩的影子。
With the warm sunlight shining in, they hugged together
feeling forgiven, loved, and trusted.
Supporting each other, they both got up and headed home.With the setting sun casting two long shadows on theground, side by side.
【仿寫4】
1. 時間似乎停下來見證這動人的一刻。
2.他們的笑聲使房間充滿了愉快的氣氛。
3. 沐浴在燦爛的陽光下，一家人幸福地擁抱在一起。
4. 在回家的路上，琥珀般的陽光灑在他們燦爛的笑容上，展現(xiàn)出非凡的體育精神魅力。
Time seemed to pause/stop/cease to witness the touching moment.
Their laughters filled the room with a happay atmoshpere.
Bathing in the brilliant sunlight, the family hugged in happiness.
On their way back home, amber-like sunshine stretched over their radiant(adj.喜悅的，燦爛的) smiles, which show the extraordinary charm of sportsmanship（n.體育精神）.
03.主題升華
升華主題：要求寫作者不僅在故事結束時總結經(jīng)歷，而且能將經(jīng)歷或情節(jié)中的深層次意義提煉出來，由淺入深從故事引出道理，賦予故事更廣泛的影響力和啟示。
第一步: 總結故事結局。
總結故事情節(jié)和結局，并思考故事中的關鍵事件和結局帶來的直接影響。
第二步: 提煉深層次意義。
從故事結局中提煉出深層次的意義和主旨，這部分通常與主題相關。
第三步: 銜接結局與意義。
將故事結局與提煉出的深層次意義巧妙銜接，形成一個完整的結尾。
普通結尾句: He received a big round of applause（熱烈掌聲） from the audience.
主題升華法:
1.總結故事結局: 在舞臺上贏得掌聲;
2.提煉深層意義: 戰(zhàn)勝恐懼就能獲得勝利;
3.升華銜接結局: 贏得掌聲→提升自信→相信自己能戰(zhàn)勝所有恐懼。
主題升華后的結尾句:
His courageous speech not only earned him applause but also developed a new found confidence within him, showing him that he could overcome all fears.
續(xù)寫結尾: (歷險脫困類)
普通結尾: She managed to survive the desert and find her way back to safety.
續(xù)寫思路:
主題升華后:
生存下來→展現(xiàn)堅韌和智慧→相信堅韌和智慧能帶來希望
Surviving the desert and finding her way back to safety showed her that resilience and intelligence can bring hope even in desperate situations.
在沙漠中幸存下來并找到回到安全地帶的路，這向她表明，即使在絕望的情況下，韌性和智慧也能帶來希望語
續(xù)寫結尾:(人與動物類）
普通結尾:The wounded bird he cared for finally flew back to the forest.
續(xù)寫思路:
主題升華后:
烏飛回森林→建立聯(lián)系一相信人與動物的關愛可以跨越物種界限
As the bird he cared for flew back to the forest, he understood that compassion(同情) for animals could create bonds that transcend（超越） species boundaries.
當他培育的鳥飛回森林時，他明白了對動物的同情可以建立超越物種界限的紐帶。
續(xù)寫結尾:(家庭親情類）
普通結尾: Our family trip to the mountains was full of laughter and bonding（n.人與人之間的關系）.
續(xù)寫思路:
主題升華后:
愉快的時光→感受到親情的力量→相信親情的溫暖和力量是無盡的
The laughter and bonding during our family trip to the mountains reminded me that no matter where we are, the unbreakable（adj.牢不可破的） bonds of family provide us with endless warmth and strength.
續(xù)寫結尾:(個人成長類)
當通結尾:He felt a sense of accomplishment after finishing the marathon.
續(xù)寫思路:
主題升華后:
完成馬拉松→獲得成就感→相信堅持和努力可以帶來巨大的成就感和潛力
Crossing the marathon finish line filled him with a profound(adj.深刻的，強烈的) sense of accomplishment, showing him that perseverance（n.毅力） and determination could unlock（v.解開，開啟） his true potential.
跨過馬拉松終點線讓他充滿了深刻的成就感，向他展示了毅力和決心可以釋放他真正的潛力。
續(xù)寫結尾:(助人為樂類)
普通結尾:After a long day of volunteering, I felt tired but happy to have made a difference.
續(xù)寫思路:
主題升華后:
志愿服務→感到快樂→相信助人為樂帶來內心的滿足和幸福感
After a long day of volunteering, I felt tired but deeply fulfilled（adj.滿足的）, knowing that acts of kindness bring profound joy and satisfaction to both the giver and receiver.
經(jīng)過漫長的一天的志愿者工作，我感到很累，但也深感滿足，因為我知道善意的行為會給給予者和接受者帶來巨大的快樂和滿足。
主題升華常用句式
【舉例子】
1.This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that there's always a way out as long as we never give up our hope.
這段難忘的經(jīng)歷使我學到了一個道理: 只要我們不放棄希望，任何困境都有出路。
2.This unforgettable experience taught her a valuable lesson that a small act of kindness can make a big difference.這段難忘的經(jīng)歷使她學到了一個道理:一個小小的善舉也有重大的影響。
句型1: This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that...
【仿寫】
1.這段難忘的經(jīng)歷使我學到了一個道理: 我們遇到困難時一定要有積極的態(tài)度。從那天起，我變得更勇敢，更樂觀
2.這段難忘的經(jīng)歷給我上了寶貴的一課:每個人都應該學點急救知識，因為在緊急情況下每一秒都很重要。
This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that we should have a positive attitude when facing difficulties. From that day on, I grew braver and more optimistic.
This unforgettable experience taught me a valuable lesson that everyone should learn first aid because every second counts.
【舉例子】
（1)From then on, I made up my mind to pass on“l(fā)ove” to others. Just as a saying goes:“Rose given and fragrance in hands.”
從那以后,我下定決心向別人傳遞“愛”
（2)From that day on,every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness that Mexican family offered me.(2021年1月八省聯(lián)考)
從那天起，每當我遇到需要幫助的人，我總是伸出手去幫助他們，希望把墨西哥家庭給予我的善良傳遞于去。
句型2: From then on,+ 表行動、決心的句子
【仿寫1】(2023·浙江1月卷)從那以后，我總是遠離野生動物。只有這樣，我們才能與自然和諧相處。
【仿寫2】從那時起，我不僅能很好地寫作，而且我知道了真相--恐懼永遠不會造就未來，但希會。(2022I卷)
From then on,Ialways keep away from wild animals,Only in this way can we live in harmony with nature.
From then on, not only did I have a good command of writing, but I also knew the truth--fear never builds the future, but hope does.
【舉例子】
（1) It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.(2020.7高考山東卷）
正是愛讓世界轉動，Bernard在心里深深地感受到了。
仿寫1: 是Johnson老師的鼓勵給予了我勇氣和自信。
仿寫2: 正是這次特別的經(jīng)歷使我明白了家人才是世界上最重要的。
句式3: 強調句:It is+被強調部分+that+其他部分
It was Mr Johnson's encouragement that gave me courage and confidence.
It was the unique experience that made me realizefamily matters the most.
【仿寫3】(2024浙江1月卷)正是由于這次經(jīng)歷，伊娃才真正理解了老子的話:干里之行始于足下。
【仿寫4】(2025八省聯(lián)考卷)正是通過這次冒險，我結識了這些熱情的動物救援人員，他們外表堅強，內心溫柔。
It was thanks to the experience that Eva really comprehended（v.理解） what Laozi said: A thousand-mile journey begins with the first step.
It was through this adventure that I got acquainted with（熟悉，了解） these enthusiastic animal rescuers, who were tough outside but tender inside.
【仿寫5】(2025八省聯(lián)考卷)是我的老師體貼地鼓勵我，敦促我發(fā)揮自己講故事的潛力。
【仿寫6】(2024·新課標I&I卷)正是這段難忘的經(jīng)歷教會了我，朋友就像一把傘，無論晴天還是雨天，他們都會一直在你身邊。
It was my teacher who was considerate enough to encourage me, urging me to take advantage of my potential in telling stories.
It was this unforgettable experience that taught me that friends are like an umbrella and whether it's sunny or rainy, they will always be there for you.
【舉例子】
（1)Only when we open our heart can we bathe in the brilliant（adj.聰穎的，明亮的） sunshine and enioy the warmth of love.
只有當我們打開心扉，我們才能沐浴在陽光中享受愛的溫暖
（2)Only when everyone gives a little love can our world become better and better.
只有每個人都奉獻一點愛，我們的世界才會變得更美好。
（3)Only then did I realize that it was kindness and love that made our world so warm and beautiful.
直到那時候，我才意識到，正是愛和善意讓我們的世界如此溫暖美麗。
句型4: only...(倒裝句)
【仿寫】
1.直到通過這次經(jīng)歷我才意識到，只有勇敢和決心才能克服一切閑難。
2.直到那時他才意識到一次小小的善舉對另一個人來說意義重大，甚至能照亮別人的生活。
Only through this experience did I realize that it was bravery and determination that can conquer all the difficulties.
Only then did he realize a small act of kindness could mean so much to another person and could even brighten someone's life.
【仿寫】
1.直到那時，他才意識到原諒和愛/善意/友誼的重要性。
4.直到那時我才意識到真誠和誠實在友誼中的價值。
Only then did he realize the importance of forgiveness and love/kindness/friendship.
Only then did l realize the value of sincerity and honesty in friendship.
Finally, we did sth. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any plight/dilemma（n.困境，窘境） as long as we stay calm/never give up hope/ unite together.
最后，我們做某事。
多么難忘的經(jīng)歷啊!
事實證明，只要我們保持冷靜/不放棄希/團結一致就總有辦法擺脫閑境。
句型5: 綜合型組合公式（結果+難忘的經(jīng)歷+體悟）
Had it not been for this event, they wouldn't have realized that they should cooperate and cultivate(培育，開墾) team spirit to achieve their goals.
如果不是因為這次活動，他們就不會意識到他們應該通過合作和培養(yǎng)團隊精神來實現(xiàn)自己的目標。
句型6: Had it not been for...,+主句
【仿寫】
如果沒有奶奶的鼓勵和杰克遜先生的寬容，我就不會成長為一個自信、謙虛、知錯就改的人。
Had it not been for Grandma's encouragement and Mr Jackson's forgiveness, I wouldn't have grown into a confident and humble（adj.謙虛的） person who learns from mistakes.
【舉例子】我突然想到，我父親教我的寶貴的一課肯定會指引我未來的道路。
It occurred to me that the precious lesson taught by my Dad would definitely guide the way of my future.
句式7: It dawned on sb/lt occurred to sb/lt turned out that...
【仿寫】
1. (2023·新課標I&II卷)我突然意識到，雖然這很艱難，但沒有什么比成就感更有價值的了。
2. 這證明是一次有益的經(jīng)歷，從中不僅收獲快樂，而且認識到努力的價值。
It suddenly dawned on me that tough as it was, there was nothing more valuable than the sense of accomplishment（n.成就，成績）.
It turned out to be a rewarding experience, from which he not only harvested（v.收割，收獲） joy, but also learned the value of efforts.
添加諺語/俗語結尾
【舉例子】
1. As the saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Through this unforgettable experience, （主人公名字） learned that as long as one holds firm to their determination, no difficulty is insurmountable（adj.不能克服的）.
正如諺語所說：“有志者事竟成。” 通過這次難忘的經(jīng)歷，（主人公名字）學到了只要堅定決心，沒有困難是無法克服的。
2. “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” This incident deepened the friendship between （主人公名字 1） and （主人公名字 2）, proving that true friends support each other through thick and thin（困難和障礙）.
“患難見真情。” 這次事件加深了（主人公名字 1）和（主人公名字 2）之間的友誼，證明了真正的朋友會在艱難時刻相互扶持。
3. “Two heads are better than one.” Their joint efforts in this task not only led to a successful outcome（n.結果） but also made them realize the power of cooperation（n.合作）.
“三個臭皮匠，頂個諸葛亮。” 他們在這項任務中的共同努力不僅帶來了成功的結果，還讓他們認識到了合作的力量。
4. “The rose’s in her hand,the flavor in mine.” By helping others selflessly, （主人公名字） received the joy of giving and understood the true meaning of this saying.
“贈人玫瑰，手有余香。” 通過無私地幫助他人，（主人公名字）收獲了給予的快樂，也理解了這句話的真正含義。
諺語：
1. It is never too old to learn. 活到老，學到老。
2. No cross, no crown. 不經(jīng)歷風雨，怎么見彩虹。
3. Doing is better than saying. 行勝于言。
4. An idle youth, a needy age. 少壯不努力,老大徒傷悲。
5. A good beginning makes a good ending. 良好的開端就是成功的一半。
6. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患難之交才是真朋友
7. Nothing is impossible to the man who will try.
世上無難事,只怕有心人。
諺語：
8.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作，不玩耍，聰明孩子要變傻。
9. There is no secret of success but hard work. 成功無秘訣,只是努力干。
10. Don't leave today's work for tomorrow. 當日事，當日畢。
11. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
12. Time means life, time means speed, time means strength.
時間就是生命，時間就是速度，時間就是力量。
13. A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一塹，長一智。
14. A good book is a good friend. 好書如摯友。
15. Time and tide wait for no man. 時不我待。
16. Virtue is fairer far than beauty. 美德遠遠勝過美貌。
17. No pains, no gains. 沒有付出就沒有收獲。
18. All that glitters is not gold. 閃光的不一定都是金子。
19. Do not impose on others what you yourself do not desire . 己所不欲，勿施于人。
20. A man cannot spin and reel at the same time. 一心不能二用。
04.留白式結尾
留白式結尾： 是高考英語讀后續(xù)寫中極具文學性的手法，它不直白交代結局，而是通過場景、動作或暗示性語言留下想象空間，讓讀者自行回味。這種結尾能避免故事落入俗套，同時體現(xiàn)對情節(jié)的把控力。以下是具體舉例和句型結構梳理：
核心特點
1. 不直接點明結果：如不寫 “他們從此幸福地生活在一起”，而是用 “夕陽下兩人并肩走遠的背影” 暗示關系的和解。
2. 依賴意象或動作：通過自然景象（風、星光、落葉）、細微動作（微笑、揮手、轉身）傳遞未盡之意。
3. 保持 “未完成感”：結局是 “故事的暫停” 而非 “終點”，讓讀者能延伸想象后續(xù)發(fā)展。
【舉例子】以動作留白體現(xiàn)關系變化
場景：主角曾因誤會與父親疏遠，經(jīng)歷某件事后理解了父親的苦心。
結尾：He handed me the old photo album, his fingers brushing mine. I opened it, and there we were—me at seven, grinning on his shoulders. When I looked up, his eyes were misty, but he didn’t look away. I patted the empty spot next to me on the sofa.
他把舊相冊遞給我，手指不經(jīng)意碰到我的手。我翻開相冊，里面是七歲的我，趴在他肩頭傻笑。抬頭時，他眼眶濕潤，卻沒有移開目光。我拍了拍沙發(fā)上我旁邊的空位。
【舉例子】以象征物暗示主題延續(xù)
場景：主角通過幫助他人領悟 “善意的傳遞”。
結尾：She pressed the small key into my palm, her fingers warm. “Pass it on,” she said. I nodded, watching her walk down the street. The key felt light, but somehow, I knew its weight would grow—with every hand it touched.
她把那把小鑰匙按在我掌心，手指暖暖的。“把它傳下去，” 她說。我點頭，看著她走遠。鑰匙很輕，但我知道，它的重量會隨著每一次傳遞而增加。
【舉例子】對話留白（半截話或默契無言）
“[未說完的話],” [人物] said. [對方的反應，無明確回應].
例子：“I’m sorry I—” he started. I shook my head, handing him the coffee. Steam curled between us.
“對不起我 ——” 他剛開口。我搖頭，把咖啡遞給他。熱氣在兩人之間繚繞。
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