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Unit 2
Home Sweet Home
人教版2024版八年級上冊
Section B (3a—3c) 寫作課
Learning Objectives
能夠基于寫作需求，在閱讀 3a 范文、完成 3b 排序后，在教師引導下開展寫作準備，梳理 “請求朋友幫忙裝飾房間” 類郵件的結構，結合 3c 提示的待辦事項，列出自己郵件中對應 “意圖 — 現狀 — 請求” 的內容要點。
01
能夠將本單元所學與請求、裝飾相關的詞匯（如 decorate, help, bring, choose 等）、表達請求的句型（如 Can you... Could you... 等）遷移應用到自己請求朋友幫忙裝飾房間的郵件寫作中。。
02
通過自評和互評，改進寫作初稿，優化語篇結構、明確請求內容、打磨語言表達，提升請求類郵件的寫作質量。
03
按要求寫出正確的單詞、詞組或句子。
聞起來 (動詞) __________ 2. 快樂 (名詞) ___________
3.公寓(名詞) __________ 4. 街區(名詞) __________
5. 尋找(短語) __________ 6. 可能 (副詞) __________
7. 打包（短語）__________ 8. 掛起（短語）________
9. 我們很激動你來我們的社區。
___________________________
10. 隨意去詢問。___________________
11. 你能倒垃圾嗎？
________________________________________
smell
joy
apartment
block
look for
perhaps
pack up
hang up
We’re excited to have you in our community.
feel free to ask
Could you please take out the rubbish
回顧復習（Section B 2a—2c）
Free talk
What decorative items are there in your room
Posters
Photo frames
Plants
/ dek re t v/ adj.裝飾性的；作裝飾用的
String lights
decorate / dek re t/ v. 裝飾；裝潢
poster/ p st (r)/ n. 海報
Let’s guess.
Help Decorate the Room!
Zhang Peng’s room
Before
After
How does Zhang Peng want to do to decorate the room
Read the email and find out what Zhang Peng asks his friend to do.
3a
ask about the color of the wall
choose the paint
paint the room with his brother
bring brushes they used
choose photos
1
2
3
4
5
Put the things in order to see how Zhang Peng organizes his ideas in writing.
3b
________ ask John to bring the brushes
________ ask John to help decorate the room
________ ask John to help choose some photos to hang
on the walls
________ describe how the room looks now
________ tell John about the plan for the walls
________ ask John to meet on Sunday at the paint shop
1
2
3
4
5
6
Write an email to ask a friend to help decorate your room. Below is a list of things you may need help with.
3c
buy some flowers make a poster go shopping
bring a pair of scissors buy glue bring a brush
make paper cuttings bring a painting ...
Write an email to ask a friend to help decorate your room. Below is a list of things you may need help with.
3c
寫作指導
文本體裁
話題分析
要求寫一個篇求助郵件，內容主要為求助朋友幫助裝飾自己的房間。
本文要仿寫閱讀的郵件文章，因此是一封郵件，內容涉及不同日期及行為，側重記敘文。
人稱時態
以第一人稱為主；以一般現在時和將來時為主。
(1) What can we write in the beginning part
I had so much fun decorating your room with you last month!
Decorating your room last month was a great time!
It was really nice to help you decorate your room last month!
...
Show feeling
Beginning-1
(1) What can we write in the beginning part
I really want to decorate my room too. Can you please help us come up with some ideas or tell us what to buy We’d be so grateful!
My brother and I share a room and want to make it nicer. Do you think you could help us decorate it We need someone with good ideas!
Purpose
Beginning-2
(2) What can we write in the body part
ask John to help decorate the room
tell John about the plan for the walls
describe how the room looks now
ask John to meet on Sunday at the paint shop
ask John to bring the brushes
ask John to help choose some photos to hang on the walls
Action
Body
(3) What can we write in the ending part
Thank you so much for your help! I hope to hear from you soon.
We’d really appreciate your help! Please let us know if you have any ideas.
Thanks a lot! I can’t wait to hear what you think.
Could you please tell us your suggestions Thank you very much!
Expectation
Ending
the structure of the email
Dear_______,
I want to decorate _____________________. Right now, it’s _______________________.We want ______________. We can _____________.Could you please_________________________.
Best Wishes,
_______
稱呼
表明目的
房間現狀
裝飾計劃
結尾敬語
署名
The structure of the passage
Let’s think.
How can we ask for help and make some requests
Let’s think.
How can we express logically
time order
Summary
禮貌問候
主體段落
落款
Para. 1
Para. 2
Para. 3
Para. 4
Request help
Describe problem
Plan actions
Add details
寒暄 + 引出目的 + 禮貌請求
現狀+問題+意見征求
提議時間地點+分工
細節補充+期待回應
Remember when we + 過去做的事？ I want/need to do sth. Can/Could you …
The ______ in my room looks ______. I want to _________ and _________. What do you think about it
Let’s meet at + 地點 on + 星期 to do sth. First, we need to ______, then ______.
After painting, could you help ______ I’m not sure how to ______. Let me know if you can come.
Let’s think.
Use the sentences to help decorate your room.
buy some flowers make a poster go shopping
bring a pair of scissors buy glue bring a brush
make paper cuttings bring a painting ...
I want to _________________________.
We can _________________________.
Can you _________________________.
Could you help _________________________
bring a brush
buy some flowers
go shopping
make paper cuttings
Let’s check.
評分標準 分數 得分 總分
能從至少4個方面寫E-mail（求助、裝修設想、計劃、特別需求） 2
能很好使用E-mail的格式。 1 能正確使用can或could疑問句。 2 能使用時間順序使文章更有邏輯。 1 能正確拼寫單詞。 1 能正確使用標點。 1 書寫規范且工整。 1 Let’s edit.
Dear Eric,
My room looks very simple now. I want to make it more colorful and fun. Can you help me
Right now, the walls are white. I want to paint the walls light blue and put up something on the wall. What do you think of the color
Let's go shopping this Saturday morning and choose the paint together. Then, we can paint the walls together. Can you bring a brush
After painting, could you help choose two posters to put on the walls I'm excited to make my room beautiful with your help!
Best,
Tom
作文遷移
時間 周六 周日
活動 掃地； 打掃起居室； 倒垃圾 搬家具（furniture）；
去購物；
晚上一起吃飯
假如你是李明，本周末你要搬進新家，你想請你的朋友Peter來幫忙。請你根據表格中的提示內容給他寫一封電子郵件。
要求：
1. 語句通順、流暢；
2. 不少于80詞（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）。
Dear Peter,
I am going to move to my new house this weekend.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Dear Peter,
I am going to move to my new house this weekend. If you are free, could you please come over to my new house and help me out with a few things
On Saturday, we will clean the new house. I’d like you to help me sweep the floor, clean the living room and take out the rubbish. On Sunday, we will carry the furniture to the new house. I would be thankful if you could help me with it. After that, we can go shopping. In the evening, we can have dinner together.
Could you come to help me I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
按要求寫出正確的單詞、詞組或句子。
裝飾 (動詞) __________ 2. 覆蓋 (動詞) ___________
3.剪刀(名詞) __________ 4. 海報(名詞) __________
5. 膠水(名詞) __________ 6. 剪紙 (名詞) __________
7. 油彩店（短語）__________ 8. 帶刷子（短語）________
9. 你覺得顏色怎么樣？
___________________________
10. 我喜歡我們在你房間使用的刷子。___________________
11. 你能幫助選擇一些照片掛在墻上嗎？
________________________________________
decorate
cover
scissors
poster
glue
paper-cuts
paint shop
bring a brush
What about the colour
I love the brushes we used for your room.
Could you help choose some photos to hang on the walls
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