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Section Ⅴ　Writing Workshop——人物傳記
[語料積累]
首段:介紹背景并點明人物
1.There are many respectable people around us.And the person I respect most is my physics teacher,who is so patient with each student that we all like her.
我們周圍有許多可敬的人。我最尊敬的人是我的物理老師,她對每個學生都很有耐心,我們都喜歡她。
2.Madam Curie,a great scientist,was born in Poland on Nov.7,1867.
居里夫人,一位偉大的科學家,于1867年11月7日出生于波蘭。
3.Old as Zhong Nanshan is,he still makes great contributions in the field of medicine.(全國Ⅰ卷)
盡管鐘南山年事已高,但他仍在醫學領域作出了巨大貢獻。
主體:人物的基本情況、性格及事跡等
1.She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.
她不僅教我們如何獲得知識,也教我們如何成為一個好人。
2.She has been highly respected for her wisdom as well as courage by the Chinese people.
她憑借她的智慧和勇氣受到中國人民的高度尊敬。
3.She works long hours every day for the sake of our family,and she still finds time to help with household chores and spend time with me.
為了我們的家庭,她每天工作很長時間,但她仍然抽出時間幫助做家務以及陪伴我。
4.Yuan Longping was a Chinese agricultural scientist and educator,known for developing the first hybrid rice varieties in the 1970s.
袁隆平是中國農業科學家和教育家,因在20世紀70年代開發出第一批雜交水稻品種而聞名。
尾段:整體評價及其影響等
1.Having set a great example to us students,she fully deserves my respect.
她為我們學生樹立了一個好榜樣,完全值得我尊敬。
2.It goes without saying that he has a great effect on the values of later generations.
不用說,他對后人的價值觀有很大的影響。
3.Her spirit inspires me and millions of other girls to live an independent life and be responsible for our own decisions.
她的精神激勵著我和千百萬女孩過獨立的生活,并為我們自己的決定負責。
[典題示例]
你校英文報Youth新增“名人長廊”欄目。請你根據以下信息寫一篇短文投稿。
1.郎平,1960年生于天津。13歲時開始練習打排球;
2.1978年,因在全國排球比賽中表現突出,進入國家隊;
3.退役后,成為排球教練。在2016年奧運會上,帶領中國女子排球隊獲得金牌;
4.郎平是中國第一位作為球員和教練均奪取奧運會冠軍的人。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
1.審題謀篇
第一段:總體介紹郎平的情況;
第二段:按時間順序列舉郎平的主要經歷;
第三段:簡短總結全文。
2.要點翻譯
①郎平1960年出生于天津,是著名的排球教練。(be born in,coach)
Lang Ping was born in 1960 in Tianjin,and she is a famous volleyball coach.
②她在13歲時開始練習打排球。
She began to play volleyball at the age of 13.
③由于在全國排球比賽中出色的表現,她于1978年加入了國家隊。(because of)
She joined the national team in 1978 because of her outstanding performance in the national volleyball competition.
④她刻苦努力,獲得了很多國際獎項。(award)
She was hard working,so she won lots of international awards.
⑤從排球隊退役之后,她成為排球教練。(retire)
After she retired from the volleyball team,she became a volleyball coach.
⑥在2016年奧運會上,在她的帶領下,中國女排獲得了金牌。(leadership)
In the 2016 Olympics,under her leadership,the Chinese women’s volleyball team won the gold medal.
⑦她是第一個作為運動員和教練均獲得奧運會冠軍的中國人。(the first...to do...)
She is the first Chinese to win the Olympic championship as both a player and coach.
⑧她受到我們所有人的愛戴和尊敬,我們將永遠銘記她是一位偉大的女性。(respect)
She is loved and respected by us all and will always be remembered as a great woman.
3.詞句升級
(1)用定語從句升級句①
Lang Ping,who was born in 1960 in Tianjin,is a famous volleyball coach.
(2)用when引導的狀語從句升級句②
She began to play volleyball when she was 13.
(3)用so...that...升級句④
She was so hard working that she won lots of international awards.
4.連句成篇
注意使用恰當的過渡銜接詞匯。
【參考范文】
Lang Ping,who was born in 1960 in Tianjin,is a famous volleyball coach.She began to play volleyball when she was 13.Then,she joined the national team in 1978 because of her outstanding performance in the national volleyball competition.She was so hard working that she won lots of international awards.After she retired from the volleyball team,she became a volleyball coach.In the 2016 Olympics,under her leadership,the Chinese women’s volleyball team won the gold medal.She is the first Chinese to win the Olympic championship as both a player and coach.Therefore,she is loved and respected by us all and will always be remembered as a great woman.
[隨堂演練]
你校的英語角正在征集“年度最佳人物”稿件,請以“Person of the Year”為題,寫一篇短文投稿,內容包括:
1.該人物的簡介;
2.該人物對你的影響。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.短文題目已寫好,不計入總詞數。
Person of the Year
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
【參考范文】
Person of the Year
As to the “Person of the Year”,I would like to nominate my English teacher for this glorious title.
Ms.Zhang is a teacher who boasts a good reputation.With her warm smile and kind nature,she has become a beloved figure among students.Moreover,it is her belief in my abilities that has encouraged me to make progress toward excellence.Motivating me to participate in public speaking,she has helped me build up self confidence and better skills.
There is no doubt that Ms.Zhang deserves this title.Truly,not only is she a qualified teacher,but also she is a valuable guide in my life.(共21張PPT)
Section Ⅴ　Writing Workshop——人物傳記
[語料積累]
首段:介紹背景并點明人物
1.There are many respectable people around us.And the person I respect most is my physics teacher,who is so patient with each student that we all like her.
我們周圍有許多可敬的人。我最尊敬的人是我的物理老師,她對每個學生都很有耐心,我們都喜歡她。
2.Madam Curie,a great scientist,was born in Poland on Nov.7,1867.
居里夫人,一位偉大的科學家,于1867年11月7日出生于波蘭。
3.Old as Zhong Nanshan is,he still makes great contributions in the field of medicine.(全國Ⅰ卷)
盡管鐘南山年事已高,但他仍在醫學領域作出了巨大貢獻。
主體:人物的基本情況、性格及事跡等
1.She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.
她不僅教我們如何獲得知識,也教我們如何成為一個好人。
2.She has been highly respected for her wisdom as well as courage by the Chinese people.
她憑借她的智慧和勇氣受到中國人民的高度尊敬。
3.She works long hours every day for the sake of our family,and she still finds time to help with household chores and spend time with me.
為了我們的家庭,她每天工作很長時間,但她仍然抽出時間幫助做家務以及陪伴我。
4.Yuan Longping was a Chinese agricultural scientist and educator, known for developing the first hybrid rice varieties in the 1970s.
袁隆平是中國農業科學家和教育家,因在20世紀70年代開發出第一批雜交水稻品種而聞名。
尾段:整體評價及其影響等
1.Having set a great example to us students,she fully deserves my respect.
她為我們學生樹立了一個好榜樣,完全值得我尊敬。
2.It goes without saying that he has a great effect on the values of later generations.
不用說,他對后人的價值觀有很大的影響。
3.Her spirit inspires me and millions of other girls to live an independent life and be responsible for our own decisions.
她的精神激勵著我和千百萬女孩過獨立的生活,并為我們自己的決定負責。
[典題示例]
你校英文報Youth新增“名人長廊”欄目。請你根據以下信息寫一篇短文投稿。
1.郎平,1960年生于天津。13歲時開始練習打排球;
2.1978年,因在全國排球比賽中表現突出,進入國家隊;
3.退役后,成為排球教練。在2016年奧運會上,帶領中國女子排球隊獲得金牌;
4.郎平是中國第一位作為球員和教練均奪取奧運會冠軍的人。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
1.審題謀篇
第一段:總體介紹郎平的情況;
第二段:按時間順序列舉郎平的主要經歷;
第三段:簡短總結全文。
2.要點翻譯
①郎平1960年出生于天津,是著名的排球教練。(be born in,coach)
Lang Ping 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　in Tianjin,
and she 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
②她在13歲時開始練習打排球。
She 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 at the age of 13.
was born in 1960
is a famous volleyball coach
began to play volleyball
③由于在全國排球比賽中出色的表現,她于1978年加入了國家隊。
(because of)
She joined the national team in 1978 　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
④她刻苦努力,獲得了很多國際獎項。(award)
She was hard-working,so 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 .
because of her outstanding
performance in the national volleyball competition
she won lots of international awards
⑤從排球隊退役之后,她成為排球教練。(retire)
After 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　,
she became a volleyball coach.
⑥在2016年奧運會上,在她的帶領下,中國女排獲得了金牌。
(leadership)
In the 2016 Olympics,　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 ,
the Chinese women’s volleyball team won the gold medal.
she retired from the volleyball team
under her leadership
⑦她是第一個作為運動員和教練均獲得奧運會冠軍的中國人。
(the first...to do...)
She is 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　 as both a player and coach.
⑧她受到我們所有人的愛戴和尊敬,我們將永遠銘記她是一位偉大的女性。(respect)
She 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 and will always be remembered as a great woman.
the first Chinese to win the Olympic championship
is loved and respected by us all
3.詞句升級
(1)用定語從句升級句①
Lang Ping,　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 in Tianjin,is a famous volleyball coach.
(2)用when引導的狀語從句升級句②
She began to play volleyball 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
(3)用so...that...升級句④
She was 　　　　　　　　　　　　 she won lots of international awards.
who was born in 1960
when she was 13
so hard-working that
4.連句成篇
注意使用恰當的過渡銜接詞匯。
【參考范文】
Lang Ping,who was born in 1960 in Tianjin,is a famous volleyball coach.She began to play volleyball when she was 13.Then,she joined the national team in 1978 because of her outstanding performance in the national volleyball competition.She was so hard-working that she
won lots of international awards.After she retired from the volleyball team,she became a volleyball coach.In the 2016 Olympics,under her leadership,the Chinese women’s volleyball team won the gold medal. She is the first Chinese to win the Olympic championship as both a player and coach.Therefore,she is loved and respected by us all and will always be remembered as a great woman.
[隨堂演練]
你校的英語角正在征集“年度最佳人物”稿件,請以“Person of the Year”為題,寫一篇短文投稿,內容包括:
1.該人物的簡介;
2.該人物對你的影響。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.短文題目已寫好,不計入總詞數。
Person of the Year
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
【參考范文】
Person of the Year
As to the “Person of the Year”,I would like to nominate my English teacher for this glorious title.
Ms.Zhang is a teacher who boasts a good reputation.With her warm smile and kind nature,she has become a beloved figure among students.Moreover,it is her belief in my abilities that has encouraged me to make progress toward excellence.Motivating me to participate in public speaking,she has helped me build up self-confidence and better skills.
There is no doubt that Ms.Zhang deserves this title.Truly,not only is she a qualified teacher,but also she is a valuable guide in my life.
Thanks！
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