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Section Ⅴ　Writing
寫作一　應用文寫作——如何介紹一個主題公園
NO.1　研教材·積語料
[研教材]
一、學語言
1.描述“選擇”情景的行文模式
Which theme park would you like to visit ...Some parks are famous for having the biggest or longest roller coasters, others for showing famous sights and sounds.Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible theme park that will appeal to you!
賞析:首句使用了特殊疑問句,引起讀者興趣;中間部分使用了Some...,others...舉例,最后一句使用了感嘆句,以引發讀者的關注。
情景遷移:當你餓了的時候你喜歡去哪家餐館 這條街上有各種各樣(飲食風格)的餐館,不同的餐館滿足幾乎所有的口味。有些餐館以美味中餐而聞名,有些以西餐而聞名,也有些以其當地特色而聞名。不管你喜歡哪一個,不管你喜歡什么,總會有一家很棒的能夠吸引你的餐館。
Which restaurant would you like to go when you feel hungry There are various kinds of restaurants on this street, with different ones for almost every appetite. Some restaurants are famous for their tasty Chinese food, some for Western-style food, and others for their local specialities. Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible one that will appeal to you!
2.廣告收尾方式
(1)If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to Disneyland!
(2)If it is ocean entertainment that you are looking for, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom!
賞析:以上兩句是典型的旅游廣告收尾方式,這種模式也適用于活動類廣告或通知的結尾。
仿寫:你如果想通過探索迷人的自然以獲得樂趣,現在就報名參加夏令營吧!
If you want to have fun exploring the fascinating nature, come to sign up for the summer camp now!
3.連貫銜接
本文連貫銜接主要見于段內對公園的介紹過程,如:通過most familiar、all possible、As、Of course、also等詞的運用,使迪士尼樂園的介紹重點突出且層次分明;在介紹長隆海洋公園時使用了Here you can、in addition to、Of course、you can also、Then at night、you can even等表達,既遵循參觀時間順序又兼顧空間層次。
仿寫:此外,我的英語很好,尤其是口語。最后,作為一名外向的學生,我不僅能與受訪者相處得很好,而且我有責任感和合作意識。
In addition, I have a good command of English, especially spoken English. Finally, as an outgoing student, not only can I get along well with interviewees but also I have a sense of duty and cooperation.
二、學結構
本文采用“總——分”結構。
(1)開篇:第一段通過設問引出本文話題,即主題公園介紹。
(2)主體:分段敘述三個有代表性的主題公園,即迪士尼樂園、多莉山公園和長隆海洋王國。
[積語料]
一、介紹功能或特點
1.In my view,it is a good place for relaxation and amusement.
在我看來,這是一個放松和娛樂的好地方。
2.In addition,you can enjoy wonderful performances at the theme park.
此外,你可以在主題公園里欣賞精彩的表演。
二、介紹地理位置
1.The theme park is located/situated in the west of our city near the high-speed railway station.
該主題公園坐落在我們城市西郊的高鐵站附近。
2.The theme park lies in the northern part of Sichuan Province,which is well known for its beautiful lakes.
該主題公園位于四川省北部,以其美麗的湖泊而聞名。
3.Located in the southeast of Jilin Province,Changbaishan is one of the 10 Most Famous Mountains in China.
長白山位于吉林省東南部,是中國十大名山之一。
三、介紹面積
It will be a world-famous theme park,covering an area of 670,000 square metres.
=It will be a world-famous theme park with an area of 670,000 square metres.
它將成為世界著名的主題公園,占地67萬平方米。
四、介紹歷史
1.It is a world-famous theme park which has a history of 50 years.
它是一個有著50年歷史的世界著名的主題公園。
2.Serving as the capital of 13 dynasties in Chinese history,Xi’an is considered to be one of the birth places of the Chinese civilization.
西安是中國歷史上13個朝代的都城,被認為是中華文明的誕生地之一。
五、介紹交通方式
1.You can reach the theme park by subway.
你可以乘地鐵到主題公園。
2.You can get there a little more quickly by taxi.
乘出租車去那里你可能會更快一點兒。
六、介紹收費情況
The admission fee to the park is 100 yuan,and all the activities in the park are free.
公園門票是100元,園內的所有活動都是免費的。
NO.2　仿寫作·會運用
[典題示例]
假設你是李華,是北京歡樂谷Happy Valley of Beijing的一名導游。請你根據以下要點,向一個英國中學生旅游團進行簡單的景點介紹:
1.北京歡樂谷主題公園占地56萬平方米,于2006年7月對外開放;
2.游客可以參與多項活動;
3.可以參觀多種精彩表演。
注意: 1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
[仿寫程序步驟]
1.一仿結構布局合理
首段:導入(引入寫作目的,說明景點的名稱);
主體:對景點進行詳細介紹(成立和開放時間、游玩項目、注意事項等);
尾段:表明希望或愿望。
2.二仿語言規范美觀
①歡迎來到北京歡樂谷——一個吸引不同年齡段游客的主題公園!(appeal)
Welcome to Happy Valley of Beijing—a theme park that appeals to tourists of different ages!
②我很高興有機會成為你們的導游。(more than)
I am more than happy that I have the opportunity to act as your tour guide.
③北京歡樂谷于2006年7月對外開放。(open)
Happy Valley of Beijing was opened to the public in July, 2006.
④北京歡樂谷占地面積56萬平方米。(cover)
Happy Valley of Beijing covers an area of 560 thousand square meters.
⑤有多種設施可以滿足不同年齡段人群的需要。(meet)
Many kinds of facilities can meet the needs of people of all ages.
⑥你可以觀看許多精彩表演,這一定會給你留下深刻的印象。(impress)
You can watch many wonderful performances and they will surely impress you deeply.
⑦請記住,無論你打算參加什么活動,你都必須遵守規則。(讓步狀語從句)
Just bear in mind that,whatever activity you intend to participate in, you must obey the rules.
3.三仿句式高級表達
(1)用過去分詞短語作定語連接句③和句④
Happy Valley of Beijing, opened to the public in July, 2006, covers an area of 560 thousand square meters.
(2)用定語從句改寫句⑥
You can watch many wonderful performances, which will surely impress you deeply.
4.四仿教材連句成篇
注意使用恰當的過渡銜接詞匯。
【參考范文】
Dear friends,
Welcome to Happy Valley of Beijing—a theme park that appeals to tourists of different ages! I am more than happy that I have the opportunity to act as your tour guide.
Happy Valley of Beijing, opened to the public in July, 2006, covers an area of 560 thousand square meters. In this park, visitors can take part in various activities. Many kinds of facilities can also meet the needs of people of all ages. Besides, you can watch many wonderful performances, which will surely impress you deeply. Lastly,just bear in mind that,whatever activity you intend to participate in,you must obey the rules.
I’m convinced that you’ll certainly enjoy yourselves here. Thank you.
寫作二　續寫進階訓練之自然環境——旅游
No.1　構建語義場
靚詞 [環境描寫]　valley;vast;boundary;bush;fountain;theme park;superb;enormous;splendid
[動作描寫]　buffet;edge;accompany;adopt;stretch;cycle;pedal;wander;amuse
詞塊 be wild with joy;dance for/ with joy;in a good mood;set out;appeal to
美句 1.I wake up to the sound of the wind buffeting the cloth of my tent.(動作描寫) 2.Spreading out before me, branches of the Rapa River flow through the valley below.(環境描寫) 3.At the far side of the valley, an ancient Sami cottage is visible. Close by, there are a few reindeer feeding on grass.(環境描寫) 4.They used the reindeer’s meat for food, their bones for tools, and their skin for making clothes and tents.(排比修辭) 5.Here I am, alone under this broad sky, breathing the fresh air, and enjoying this great adventure.(動作描寫)
靚詞 [公園與建筑]castle n.城堡　museum n.博物館　palace n.宮;宮殿　parking lots停車場　gallery n.美術館　temple n.廟宇　statue n.塑像
[公園活動]exhibition n.展覽　admit vt.允許……進入　charge n.費用　 hold vt.召開;舉辦 book v.預訂;預購　accessible adj.可進入的　carnival n.狂歡節　arrangement n.安排;布置
[旅游感受]attractive adj.迷人的,有吸引力的　comfortable adj.舒服的;安逸的;舒服自在的　crowded adj.擁擠的　cultural adj.文化的　fantastic adj.(口語)極好的,美妙的,很棒的　historical adj.歷史的
詞塊 in size在面積上　a variety of各種各樣的　can’t wait to do...迫不及待做……　cover an area of...占地面積為……　be located/situated in/on...位于/坐落于……　appreciate wonderful performances欣賞精彩的表演　a famous leisure paradise一個著名的休閑樂園　be open to the public對公眾開放　combine entertainment with education娛樂與教育相結合　with a height of...高度為……　entertainment facilities娛樂設施　be crazy about adventure熱衷于冒險　have fun玩得開心　the blue sky藍天　the green grass青草　the blooming flowers盛開的花　the fragrant roses芬芳的玫瑰　a rainy/foggy day多雨/霧的一天　a stormy night暴風雨之夜　the setting/ rising sun落日/冉冉升起的太陽
美句 1.Whichever and whatever you like, there is a theme park for you! 無論你喜歡哪一個,不管你喜歡什么,都會有一個適合你的主題公園! 2.Parks are to the city as lungs are to the body. 公園之于城市猶如肺之于人的身體。 3.Some theme parks are not only entertaining but also educational, which preserve the local skills and culture for the future. 一些主題公園不僅具有娛樂性而且還有教育意義,它們為未來保存了當地的技藝和文化。 4.The park is full of folk tales and legends,which make those who visit it more excited. 這個公園有許多民間故事和傳說,這令那些參觀它的游客更加興奮。 5.Today, the park attracts millions of visitors annually, from winter visitors exploring winter snow scenes to summer visitors observing wildlife. 如今,這個公園每年吸引數百萬游客,包括探索冬季雪景的冬季游客和觀察野生生物的夏季游客。
No.2　情景續寫(旅游歷險)
　　場景導語:“我”家每年都去檳城度假,今年,我們驅車6個小時到達目的地,按老樣子入住同一家旅館,在咖啡店喝茶時,我們無意間聽到人們在談論附近島嶼發生的地震。之后我們回到酒店,又去海灘散步,撿貝殼。突然我們發現太陽光異常刺眼、遠方的樹在搖晃、一條灰色的線正在向海岸逼近……
注意:續寫詞數應為150個左右。
場景續寫1:父親沖我們大喊,讓我們跑回旅館→父親是如何帶領我們跑回旅館的→為什么要上樓
My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　場景續寫2:描寫下樓之所見→幫助他人脫險→以所感升華文章主題并結束文章
We waited a long time before going downstairs.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
【參考范文】
My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel.He grabbed my hand and pulled me with him. As we reached the hotel gate, we heard a roaring sound behind us. Quickly, my father pushed us towards the stairs. Fear gripped us and we reached the first floor when we heard the roar of rushing water and glass breaking. My father yelled at us to keep climbing. We stopped on the fourth floor and looked down at the water below us. It had stopped rising. After some minutes, it began to drop.
We waited a long time before going downstairs.Hardly had the rushing water dropped when we saw the unrecognizable hotel gate. There was dirt and broken furniture everywhere. Some people who were caught in the water were either unconscious or burst into tears with pain. We decided to help the victims after a narrow escape. Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to Penang was deeply impressed in my mind.
Ⅰ.應用文寫作(滿分15分)
假定你是李華, 你市最近新建了一個大型海洋公園——Ocean Kingdom,請你給留學生朋友David寫一封電子郵件, 邀請他周末一起去游玩。
內容包括:
1.寫信目的;
2.海洋主題公園活動介紹;
3.約定見面時間及地點
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
Dear David,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear David,
I have a piece of good news that a new theme park, Ocean Kingdom has been open to the public, and I am writing to invite you to visit it this Sunday.
In this park, not only can we see a wide variety of marine creatures, especially some rare marine animals, but also we can enjoy their wonderful performances. Through this visit, we can learn more about oceanic culture and enrich our knowledge about it. Last but not least, please remember we will meet at the school gate at 10:00 am and set off by bus. I am sure we’ll have a good time there. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.情景續寫(旅游)(滿分25分)
場景導語:作者和母親去哥斯達黎加旅行,導游告訴作者和其他旅行者有兩條不需要導游就可以探索的路線,一條較短的大約需要四十分鐘,另一條較長的需要一小時二十分鐘,路非常陡峭,作者和母親決定沿著較長的路線探索……
注意:續寫詞數應為150個左右。
場景續寫1:我們沿著小路出發→拍攝美麗的風景,進入了一個大型的開放空間,里面擠滿了游客,可以俯瞰火山口→我們設法走到欄桿邊,以便欣賞美景→風景很美,路也基本平坦,感覺很好→希望后面的路程也是如此……
We set out on the trail that led further into the dark cloud forest.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
場景續寫2:路變得陡峭→作者和母親決定休息一下→在不斷的休息和繼續出發之后,終于到達了停車場→與導游碰面……
Gradually both of us realized the road got steeper and steeper.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
【參考范文】
We set out on the trail that led further into the dark cloud forest.It was extremely beautiful. After about thirty minutes of walking and taking pictures of the beautiful mountainside, we were in a large open space full of tourists that looked out over the volcano’s crater. We managed to move our way to the railing for a good view. So far, the scenery had been wonderful and the road had been mostly flat. My mom and I were both feeling pretty good. I was truly hoping that Mom could feel good enough to go on the longer loop.
Gradually both of us realized the road got steeper and steeper.Soon, the path was so uphill that tourists had to hold onto the railing for balance. “Maybe we need to take a break,” I said, breathing heavily. My mom agreed, pulling over to the side of the steep trail. After a lot of stops and starts, we finally reached the parking lot. “The long trail wasn’t so bad, eh ” the guide asked with a cheerful smile, “You just have to keep going when it gets a little tough.” (共50張PPT)
Section Ⅴ　Writing
寫作一　應用文寫作——如何介紹一個主題公園
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索
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寫作二　續寫進階訓練之自然環境——旅游
課時測評作業
寫作一　應用文寫作——如何介紹一個主題公園
NO.1　研教材 積語料
NO.2　仿寫作 會運用
NO.1　研教材·積語料
[研教材]
一、學語言
1.描述“選擇”情景的行文模式
Which theme park would you like to visit ...Some parks are famous for having the biggest or longest roller coasters, others for showing famous sights and sounds.Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible theme park that will appeal to you!
賞析:首句使用了特殊疑問句,引起讀者興趣;中間部分使用了Some...,others...舉例,最后一句使用了感嘆句,以引發讀者的關注。
情景遷移:當你餓了的時候你喜歡去哪家餐館 這條街上有各種各樣(飲食風格)的餐館,不同的餐館滿足幾乎所有的口味。有些餐館以美味中餐而聞名,有些以西餐而聞名,也有些以其當地特色而聞名。不管你喜歡哪一個,不管你喜歡什么,總會有一家很棒的能夠吸引你的餐館。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　
Which restaurant would you like to go when you feel hungry There are various kinds of restaurants on this street, with different ones for almost every appetite. Some restaurants are famous for their tasty Chinese food, some for Western－style food, and others for their local specialities. Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible one that will appeal to you!
2.廣告收尾方式
(1)If you want to have fun and more than fun, come to Disneyland!
(2)If it is ocean entertainment that you are looking for, come to Chimelong Ocean Kingdom!
賞析:以上兩句是典型的旅游廣告收尾方式,這種模式也適用于活動類廣告或通知的結尾。
仿寫:你如果想通過探索迷人的自然以獲得樂趣,現在就報名參加夏令營吧!
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
If you want to have fun exploring the fascinating nature, come to sign up for the summer camp now!
3.連貫銜接
本文連貫銜接主要見于段內對公園的介紹過程,如:通過most familiar、all possible、As、Of course、also等詞的運用,使迪士尼樂園的介紹重點突出且層次分明;在介紹長隆海洋公園時使用了Here you can、in addition to、Of course、you can also、Then at night、you can even等表達,既遵循參觀時間順序又兼顧空間層次。
仿寫:此外,我的英語很好,尤其是口語。最后,作為一名外向的學生,我不僅能與受訪者相處得很好,而且我有責任感和合作意識。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
In addition, I have a good command of English, especially spoken English. Finally, as an outgoing student, not only can I get along well with interviewees but also I have a sense of duty and cooperation.
二、學結構
本文采用“總——分”結構。
(1)開篇:第一段通過設問引出本文話題,即主題公園介紹。
(2)主體:分段敘述三個有代表性的主題公園,即迪士尼樂園、多莉山公園和長隆海洋王國。
[積語料]
一、介紹功能或特點
1.In my view,it is a good place for relaxation and amusement.
在我看來,這是一個放松和娛樂的好地方。
2.In addition,you can enjoy wonderful performances at the theme park.
此外,你可以在主題公園里欣賞精彩的表演。
二、介紹地理位置
1.The theme park is located/situated in the west of our city near the high－speed railway station.
該主題公園坐落在我們城市西郊的高鐵站附近。
2.The theme park lies in the northern part of Sichuan Province,which is well known for its beautiful lakes.
該主題公園位于四川省北部,以其美麗的湖泊而聞名。
3.Located in the southeast of Jilin Province,Changbaishan is one of the 10 Most Famous Mountains in China.
長白山位于吉林省東南部,是中國十大名山之一。
三、介紹面積
It will be a world－famous theme park,covering an area of 670,000 square metres.
＝It will be a world－famous theme park with an area of 670,000 square metres.
它將成為世界著名的主題公園,占地67萬平方米。
四、介紹歷史
1.It is a world－famous theme park which has a history of 50 years.
它是一個有著50年歷史的世界著名的主題公園。
2.Serving as the capital of 13 dynasties in Chinese history,Xi’an is considered to be one of the birth places of the Chinese civilization.
西安是中國歷史上13個朝代的都城,被認為是中華文明的誕生地之一。
五、介紹交通方式
1.You can reach the theme park by subway.
你可以乘地鐵到主題公園。
2.You can get there a little more quickly by taxi.
乘出租車去那里你可能會更快一點兒。
六、介紹收費情況
The admission fee to the park is 100 yuan,and all the activities in the park are free.
公園門票是100元,園內的所有活動都是免費的。
NO.2　仿寫作·會運用
[典題示例]
假設你是李華,是北京歡樂谷Happy Valley of Beijing的一名導游。請你根據以下要點,向一個英國中學生旅游團進行簡單的景點介紹:
1.北京歡樂谷主題公園占地56萬平方米,于2006年7月對外開放;
2.游客可以參與多項活動;
3.可以參觀多種精彩表演。
注意: 1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
[仿寫程序步驟]
1.一仿結構布局合理
首段:　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　;
主體:　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　 ;
尾段:　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　。
導入(引入寫作目的,說明景點的名稱)
對景點進行詳細介紹(成立和開放時間、游玩項目、注意事項等)
表明希望或愿望
2.二仿語言規范美觀
①歡迎來到北京歡樂谷——一個吸引不同年齡段游客的主題公園!(appeal)
Welcome to Happy Valley of Beijing—a theme park that____________________ of different ages!
②我很高興有機會成為你們的導游。(more than)
I 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　I have
the opportunity to act as your tour guide.
appeals to tourists
am more than happy that
③北京歡樂谷于2006年7月對外開放。(open)
Happy Valley of Beijing___________________________ in July, 2006.
④北京歡樂谷占地面積56萬平方米。(cover)
Happy Valley of Beijing 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　560 thousand square meters.
⑤有多種設施可以滿足不同年齡段人群的需要。(meet)
Many kinds of facilities can 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
was opened to the public
covers an area of
meet the needs of people of all ages
⑥你可以觀看許多精彩表演,這一定會給你留下深刻的印象。(impress)
You can watch many wonderful performances and they 　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
⑦請記住,無論你打算參加什么活動,你都必須遵守規則。(讓步狀語從句)
Just bear in mind that,　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　, you must obey the rules.
will surely
impress you deeply
whatever activity you intend to participate in
3.三仿句式高級表達
(1)用過去分詞短語作定語連接句③和句④
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(2)用定語從句改寫句⑥
　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Happy Valley of Beijing, opened to the public in July, 2006, covers an area of 560 thousand square meters.
You can watch many wonderful performances, which will surely impress you deeply.
4.四仿教材連句成篇
注意使用恰當的過渡銜接詞匯。
【參考范文】
Dear friends,
Welcome to Happy Valley of Beijing—a theme park that appeals to tourists of different ages! I am more than happy that I have the opportunity to act as your tour guide.
Happy Valley of Beijing, opened to the public in July, 2006, covers an area of 560 thousand square meters. In this park, visitors can take part in various activities. Many kinds of facilities can also meet the needs of people of all ages. Besides, you can watch many wonderful performances, which will surely impress you deeply. Lastly,just bear in mind that,whatever activity you intend to participate in,you must obey the rules.
I’m convinced that you’ll certainly enjoy yourselves here. Thank you.
寫作二　續寫進階訓練之自然環境
——旅游
No.1　構建語義場
No.2　情景續寫(旅游歷險)
No.1　構建語義場
教材語料整合 靚詞 [環境描寫]　valley;vast;boundary;bush;fountain;theme park;superb;enormous;splendid
[動作描寫]　buffet;edge;accompany;adopt;stretch;cycle;pedal;wander;amuse
詞塊 be wild with joy;dance for/ with joy;in a good mood;set out;appeal to
教材語料整合 美句 1.I wake up to the sound of the wind buffeting the cloth of my tent.(動作描寫)
2.Spreading out before me, branches of the Rapa River flow through the valley below.(環境描寫)
3.At the far side of the valley, an ancient Sami cottage is visible. Close by, there are a few reindeer feeding on grass.(環境描寫)
教材語料整合 美句 4.They used the reindeer’s meat for food, their bones for tools, and their skin for making clothes and tents.(排比修辭)
5.Here I am, alone under this broad sky, breathing the fresh air, and enjoying this great adventure.(動作描寫)
拓展語粒整合 靚詞 [公園與建筑]castle n.城堡　museum n.博物館　palace n.宮;宮殿　parking lots停車場　gallery n.美術館　temple n.廟宇　statue n.塑像
[公園活動]exhibition n.展覽　admit vt.允許……進入　charge n.費用　hold vt.召開;舉辦
book v.預訂;預購　accessible adj.可進入的　carnival n.狂歡節　arrangement n.安排;布置
[旅游感受]attractive adj.迷人的,有吸引力的　comfortable adj.舒服的;安逸的;舒服自在的　crowded adj.擁擠的　cultural adj.文化的　fantastic adj.(口語)極好的,美妙的,很棒的　historical adj.歷史的
拓展語粒整合 詞塊 in size在面積上　a variety of各種各樣的　can’t wait to do...迫不及待做……　cover an area of...占地面積為……　be located/situated in/on...位于/坐落于……　appreciate wonderful performances欣賞精彩的表演　a famous leisure paradise一個著名的休閑樂園　be open to the public對公眾開放　combine entertainment with education娛樂與教育相結合　with a height of...高度為……　entertainment facilities娛樂設施　be crazy about adventure熱衷于冒險　have fun玩得開心　the blue sky藍天　the green grass青草　the blooming flowers盛開的花　the fragrant roses芬芳的玫瑰　a rainy/foggy day多雨/霧的一天　a stormy night暴風雨之夜　the setting/ rising sun落日/冉冉升起的太陽
拓展語粒整合 美句 1.Whichever and whatever you like, there is a theme park for you! 無論你喜歡哪一個,不管你喜歡什么,都會有一個適合你的主題公園!
2.Parks are to the city as lungs are to the body.
公園之于城市猶如肺之于人的身體。
3.Some theme parks are not only entertaining but also educational, which preserve the local skills and culture for the future. 一些主題公園不僅具有娛樂性而且還有教育意義,它們為未來保存了當地的技藝和文化。
拓展語粒整合 美句 4.The park is full of folk tales and legends,which make those who visit it more excited. 這個公園有許多民間故事和傳說,這令那些參觀它的游客更加興奮。
5.Today, the park attracts millions of visitors annually, from winter visitors exploring winter snow scenes to summer visitors observing wildlife.
如今,這個公園每年吸引數百萬游客,包括探索冬季雪景的冬季游客和觀察野生生物的夏季游客。
No.2　情景續寫(旅游歷險)
　　場景導語:“我”家每年都去檳城度假,今年,我們驅車6個小時到達目的地,按老樣子入住同一家旅館,在咖啡店喝茶時,我們無意間聽到人們在談論附近島嶼發生的地震。之后我們回到酒店,又去海灘散步,撿貝殼。突然我們發現太陽光異常刺眼、遠方的樹在搖晃、一條灰色的線正在向海岸逼近……
注意:續寫詞數應為150個左右。
場景續寫1:父親沖我們大喊,讓我們跑回旅館→父親是如何帶領我們跑回旅館的→為什么要上樓
My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel.　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　場景續寫2:描寫下樓之所見→幫助他人脫險→以所感升華文章主題并結束文章
We waited a long time before going downstairs.　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
【參考范文】
My father shouted at us to run back to the hotel.He grabbed my hand and pulled me with him. As we reached the hotel gate, we heard a roaring sound behind us. Quickly, my father pushed us towards the stairs. Fear gripped us and we reached the first floor when we heard the roar of rushing water and glass breaking. My father yelled at us to keep climbing. We stopped on the fourth floor and looked down at the water below us. It had stopped rising. After some minutes, it began to drop.
We waited a long time before going downstairs.Hardly had the rushing water dropped when we saw the unrecognizable hotel gate. There was dirt and broken furniture everywhere. Some people who were caught in the water were either unconscious or burst into tears with pain. We decided to help the victims after a narrow escape. Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to Penang was deeply impressed in my mind.
課 時 測 評 作 業
Ⅰ.應用文寫作(滿分15分)
假定你是李華, 你市最近新建了一個大型海洋公園——Ocean Kingdom,請你給留學生朋友David寫一封電子郵件, 邀請他周末一起去游玩。內容包括:
1.寫信目的;2.海洋主題公園活動介紹;3.約定見面時間及地點
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
Dear David,
　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear David,
I have a piece of good news that a new theme park, Ocean Kingdom has been open to the public, and I am writing to invite you to visit it this Sunday.
In this park, not only can we see a wide variety of marine creatures, especially some rare marine animals, but also we can enjoy their wonderful performances. Through this visit, we can learn more
about oceanic culture and enrich our knowledge about it. Last but not least, please remember we will meet at the school gate at 10:00 am and set off by bus. I am sure we’ll have a good time there. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.情景續寫(旅游)(滿分25分)
場景導語:作者和母親去哥斯達黎加旅行,導游告訴作者和其他旅行者有兩條不需要導游就可以探索的路線,一條較短的大約需要四十分鐘,另一條較長的需要一小時二十分鐘,路非常陡峭,作者和母親決定沿著較長的路線探索……
注意:續寫詞數應為150個左右。
場景續寫1:我們沿著小路出發→拍攝美麗的風景,進入了一個大型的開放空間,里面擠滿了游客,可以俯瞰火山口→我們設法走到欄桿邊,以便欣賞美景→風景很美,路也基本平坦,感覺很好→希望后面的路程也是如此……
We set out on the trail that led further into the dark cloud forest.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
場景續寫2:路變得陡峭→作者和母親決定休息一下→在不斷的休息和繼續出發之后,終于到達了停車場→與導游碰面……
Gradually both of us realized the road got steeper and steeper.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
【參考范文】
We set out on the trail that led further into the dark cloud forest.It was extremely beautiful. After about thirty minutes of walking and taking pictures of the beautiful mountainside, we were in a large open space full of tourists that looked out over the volcano’s crater. We managed to move our way to the railing for a good view. So far, the scenery had been wonderful and the road had been mostly flat. My mom and I were both feeling pretty good. I was truly hoping that Mom could feel good enough to go on the longer loop.
Gradually both of us realized the road got steeper and steeper.Soon, the path was so uphill that tourists had to hold onto the railing for balance. “Maybe we need to take a break,” I said, breathing heavily. My mom agreed, pulling over to the side of the steep trail. After a lot of stops and starts, we finally reached the parking lot. “The long trail wasn’t so bad, eh ” the guide asked with a cheerful smile, “You just have to keep going when it gets a little tough.”
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