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Section Ⅵ　Writing——記敘文
[語料積累]
1.首段:介紹故事背景
①Last week,I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.
上周,我幫助外祖父母為北戴河的旅行做準備。
②Last Sunday,an old lady aged about seventy was badly hurt in a traffic accident at the second crossing of Xinhua Road.
上周日,一位大約七十歲的老奶奶在新華路的第二個路口的一次交通事故中嚴重受傷。
2.主體:故事的發展與結局
①Last night I was busy preparing for my test when I heard a loud noise.
昨天晚上,我正忙著為考試做準備突然聽到很大的噪音。
②On my way home,I came across an old friend of mine.
在回家的路上,我遇到了一位老朋友。
③The sun was shining and the birds were singing.　陽光明媚,鳥兒在歌唱。
3.尾段:故事的啟示與評論
①Tired as we were,we still felt quite happy.
盡管很累,但是我們仍然感到很高興。
②I learned from the experience that honesty always comes first.
從這次經歷中我學會了誠實是最重要的。
[典題示例]
5月1日,你和你們班的志愿者去陽光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)開展志愿者活動。請按下列要點用英語寫一篇短文。
時間 5月1日
地點 陽光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)
活動過程 1.到達時受到歡迎 2.贈送鮮花和水果 3.幫助老人打掃衛生 4.坐在院子里與老人聊天
老人們 的反應 激動并感謝,并說這一天將是他們永遠會記住的美好一天
感受 很高興,因為……
　　注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
　　2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
1.審題謀篇
第一段:事件背景;
第二段:事件過程;
第三段:個人感受。
2.要點翻譯
①5月1日,我和我的同學去陽光敬老院做志愿者工作。
On May 1,my classmates and I went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.
②一到達,我們就受到了熱烈歡迎,我們贈送給老人們鮮花和水果。
On arrival,we were warmly welcomed,and we presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.
③打掃完房子后,我們坐在院子里和老人開心地聊天。
After we cleaned the house,we sat in the yard and chatted with the elderly people happily.
④老人們對我們的善意很感激,他們說這是如此美好的一天,他們將永遠記住它。
The elderly were grateful and thankful for our kindness,saying it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.
⑤我們很高興因為我們所做的事情給別人帶來了快樂,也豐富了我們的生活。
We are very happy because what we did has brought joy to others and enriched our own lives.
3.詞句升級
(1)用時間狀語從句升級句②
As soon as we arrived,we were warmly welcomed,and we presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.
(2)用動詞-ing 形式升級句③
After cleaning the house, we sat in the yard,chatting with the elderly people happily.
(3)用not only...but also...升級句⑤
We are very happy because what we did has not only brought joy to others but also enriched our own lives.
4.連句成篇
【參考范文】
On May 1, my classmates and I went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.
As soon as we arrived,we were warmly welcomed, and we presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.After cleaning the house,we sat in the yard, chatting with the elderly people happily.The elderly were grateful and thankful for our kindness, saying it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.
In a word,we are very happy because what we did has not only brought joy to others but also enriched our own lives.
[隨堂演練]
假定你是李華,請根據下面的提示寫一篇短文。內容包括:
1.上周日你和同學李強去看羽毛球比賽,在去球場的路上看到一位老人躺在地上。
2.你坐在老人身邊照看著他,李強打電話叫了救護車。
3.你們決定和老人一起去醫院,等老人的女兒來了你們才離開。
4.你們錯過了羽毛球比賽,但是一點也不后悔,你們為自己所做的事情感到自豪。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯:球場court　救護車ambulance
【參考范文】
Last Sunday my classmate Li Qiang and I went to watch a badminton match.We were walking on the way to the court when we saw an old man lying on the ground.
Walking closer,we found that he was badly injured.Thus I sat there to take care of the old man and in the meanwhile Li Qiang called the ambulance.After a while the ambulance arrived and we decided to go to the hospital with the old man.Not until the old man's daughter arrived did we leave.
Though we missed the match, we felt more than delighted.We were not only proud of what we had done but also understood helping others was the source of happiness.
　　　　　　 　　　　　 　　　　　
Ⅰ.應用文寫作(滿分15分)
假設你是李華,你的朋友 David 升入高一后,由于學習任務重,忽視了體育鍛煉,導致體質下降,寫信向你尋求幫助,請你給他回信。內容包括:
1.表示理解;
2.提出建議;
3.予以鼓勵。
要求:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】
Dear David,
I'm terribly sorry to hear that your physical condition has declined due to heavy school work and neglect of exercise.Here are some suggestions that might help you strike a balance between study and physical activities.
Firstly, it's recommended that you make a realistic schedule which includes study time and physical activities.It can help you develop a habit of exercising regularly, thus improving your health.Additionally, why not invite your friends to exercise together Not only will it make workout more enjoyable, but also it will help reduce your stress.Lastly, if I were you, I would stay positive and persistent.Every step we take towards improving our health is a victory.
I'm here to support you every step of the way and wish you both health and happiness.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.情景微續寫(滿分25分)
閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫一段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。
When Mark was five years old, his father died and his life fell apart.His mom Jane and he lived a hard life.They had to move from California to Arizona and live with Mark's grandmother, Moria.That meant Mark lost all his friends and his carefree life.
It could have been the end of Mark's childhood, but then he met 76-year-old Mr.Kelsey, Moira's next-door neighbor.One day, he was kicking a soccer ball around the yard when one kick sent the ball over the fence into Kelsey's yard.Mark came to Kelsey's home, feeling a little nervous.
“Grandpa, can I get my ball back ” Mark said cautiously.“Of course,” Kelsey said gently with a smile.“Come over and have a talk with me, will you ” Then they had a pleasant chat.
Kelsey lived alone but had a loving and patient heart to children.Over time, the two of them gradually established a deep friendship, enjoying each other's company.
Half a year later, something unexpected happened.Mark learned Kelsey had a serious eye disease but he couldn't afford the $3,000 surgery (外科手術).Without timely treatment, he would go blind completely.However, Jane and Moria were also on a tight budget, unable to spare any money for Kelsey.
Mark made up his mind to wash cars at the parking lot of the shopping center on the weekends to raise money for poor Kelsey.He offered to wash each car for one dollar.Mark knew he had to wash a lot of cars to make up the money, but he was determined.
A few days later, one of his customers, named Jason, asked curiously, “What do you do this for, kid ” “My neighbor, Mr.Kelsey.He needs an eye surgery.I'm raising money for him.I badly need $3, 000,” Mark replied.“You're a kind boy,” Jason said softly.“Where do you live ” Mark told Jason his address.Deeply moved by what Mark was doing, Jason decided to help him in another way.
注意:續寫詞數應為100個左右。
Jason shared Mark's story online, appealing for donations. 　


【前文批注】
When Mark was five years old, his father died and his life fell apart. His mom Jane and he lived a hard life.They had to move from California to Arizona and live with Mark's grandmother, Moria.That meant Mark lost all his friends and his carefree life.(本段主要介紹了全文的主要角色Mark的基本情況:搬到祖母那里,沒了朋友,為下文與Mr.Kelsey成為朋友埋下伏筆)
It could have been the end of Mark's childhood, but then he met 76-year-old Mr.Kelsey, Moira's next-door neighbor.One day, he was kicking a soccer ball around the yard when one kick sent the ball over the fence into Kelsey's yard. Mark came to Kelsey's home, feeling a little nervous.
“Grandpa, can I get my ball back ” Mark said cautiously.“Of course,” Kelsey said gently with a smile.“Come over and have a talk with me, will you ” Then they had a pleasant chat.
Kelsey lived alone but had a loving and patient heart to children.Over time, the two of them gradually established a deep friendship, enjoying each other's company. (第2-4段講述了兩人成為好朋友的過程)
Half a year later, something unexpected happened.Mark learned Kelsey had a serious eye disease but he couldn't afford the $3,000 surgery (外科手術).Without timely treatment, he would go blind completely.(Kelsey急需手術,但負擔不起手術費) However, Jane and Moria were also on a tight budget, unable to spare any money for Kelsey.(Mark家經濟緊張,無法幫助Kelsey)
Mark made up his mind to wash cars at the parking lot of the shopping center on the weekends to raise money for poor Kelsey. He offered to wash each car for one dollar.Mark knew he had to wash a lot of cars to make up the money, but he was determined.(本段主要介紹Mark決定洗車幫Mark籌錢)
A few days later, one of his customers, named Jason, asked curiously, “What do you do this for, kid ” “My neighbor, Mr.Kelsey.He needs an eye surgery.I'm raising money for him.I badly need $3, 000,” Mark replied.“You're a kind boy,” Jason said softly.“Where do you live ”Mark told Jason his address.(為到Mark家送錢埋下伏筆)Deeply moved by what Mark was doing, Jason decided to help him another way.(被Mark的舉動感動,Jason決定用另外的方式幫助Mark籌錢)
【原文解讀】
Mark and his mom Jane moved to live with his grandmother.→Mark lost his friends and his carefree life.→Mark and 76-year-old Mr.Kelsey become good friends.→Mr.Kelsey need a surgery but couldn't afford it.→Mark was determined to raise money by washing cars.→Mark met Jason who decided to help Mark raise money in another way...→(根據原文及續寫首句,續寫文章主要講述Jason如何幫助Mark籌錢,最終Mr.Kelsey手術成功。)
【思路形成】
Jason在網上呼吁籌錢→錢很快籌夠,送到Mark家里→Mark的反應(驚訝,感動)→Kelsey做手術→手術成功
【單句續寫】
1.Mark的善意很快傳開了,很快就籌集了3 000美元。
Word of Mark's kindness spread quickly and soon$3,000 was collected.
2.當Jason帶著錢來到Mark家時,Mark非常驚訝。
When Jason reached Mark's home with the money, Mark was deeply surprised.
3.得知發生了什么事后,Mark忍不住流下了感激的淚水。
Having learned what had happened, Mark couldn't hold back his tears of gratitude.
4.他被這些善良的人們的慷慨所感動,不斷地說:“Kelsey的眼睛得救了!”
He was greatly touched by those kind people's generosity, saying repeatedly, “Kelsey's eyes will be saved!”
5.Mark立刻趕到Kelsey家,把錢給了他。
Without delay, Mark rushed to Kelsey's home and handed him the money.
6.第二天,Kelsey成功地接受了手術,視力逐漸恢復。
The next day, Kelsey successfully received a surgery, and gradually recovered his eyesight.
7.盡管生活可能艱難,但將善意傳遞下去的行為會讓每個人的心靈都充滿光明。
Hard as life might be, the act of paying it forward will brighten everyone's heart.
【連句成篇】
Jason shared Mark's story online, appealing for donations. Word of Mark's kindness spread quickly and soon$3,000 was collected.When Jason reached Mark's home with the money, Mark was deeply surprised.Having learned what had happened, Mark couldn't hold back his tears of gratitude.He was greatly touched by those kind people's generosity, saying repeatedly, “Kelsey's eyes will be saved!” Without delay, Mark rushed to Kelsey's home and handed him the money.The next day, Kelsey successfully received a surgery, and gradually recovered his eyesight.Hard as life might be, the act of paying it forward will brighten everyone's heart. (共44張PPT)
Section Ⅵ　Writing——記敘文
[語料積累]
1.首段:介紹故事背景
①Last week,I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.
上周,我幫助外祖父母為北戴河的旅行做準備。
②Last Sunday,an old lady aged about seventy was badly hurt in a traffic accident at the second crossing of Xinhua Road.
上周日,一位大約七十歲的老奶奶在新華路的第二個路口的一次交通事故中嚴重受傷。
2.主體:故事的發展與結局
①Last night I was busy preparing for my test when I heard a loud noise.
昨天晚上,我正忙著為考試做準備突然聽到很大的噪音。
②On my way home,I came across an old friend of mine.
在回家的路上,我遇到了一位老朋友。
③The sun was shining and the birds were singing.
陽光明媚,鳥兒在歌唱。
3.尾段:故事的啟示與評論
①Tired as we were,we still felt quite happy.
盡管很累,但是我們仍然感到很高興。
②I learned from the experience that honesty always comes first.
從這次經歷中我學會了誠實是最重要的。
[典題示例]
5月1日,你和你們班的志愿者去陽光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)開展志愿者活動。請按下列要點用英語寫一篇短文。
時間 5月1日
地點 陽光敬老院(Sunshine Nursing Home)
活動過程 1.到達時受到歡迎 2.贈送鮮花和水果
3.幫助老人打掃衛生 4.坐在院子里與老人聊天
老人們的反應 激動并感謝,并說這一天將是他們永遠會記住的美好一天
感受 很高興,因為……
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
1.審題謀篇
第一段:事件背景;第二段:事件過程;第三段:個人感受。
2.要點翻譯
①5月1日,我和我的同學去陽光敬老院做志愿者工作。
On May 1,my classmates and I went to Sunshine Nursing Home and
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
②一到達,我們就受到了熱烈歡迎,我們贈送給老人們鮮花和水果。
On arrival,we were warmly welcomed,and we 　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
did some voluntary work
presented the elderly with flowers and fruits
③打掃完房子后,我們坐在院子里和老人開心地聊天。
After we cleaned the house,we 　 　　　and
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
④老人們對我們的善意很感激,他們說這是如此美好的一天,他們將永遠記住它。
The elderly 　　　　　 　　　　　　　　,saying it was such a beautiful day that they 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
sat in the yard
chatted with the elderly people happily
were grateful and thankful for our kindness
would remember it forever
⑤我們很高興因為我們所做的事情給別人帶來了快樂,也豐富了我們的生活。
We are very happy because 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
and 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
what we did has brought joy to others
enriched our own lives
3.詞句升級
(1)用時間狀語從句升級句②
　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(2)用動詞-ing 形式升級句③
　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
As soon as we arrived,we were warmly welcomed,and we presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.
After cleaning the house, we sat in the yard,chatting with the elderly people happily.
(3)用not only...but also...升級句⑤
　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
We are very happy because what we did has not only brought joy to others but also enriched our own lives.
4.連句成篇
【參考范文】
On May 1, my classmates and I went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.
As soon as we arrived,we were warmly welcomed, and we presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.After cleaning the house, we sat in the yard, chatting with the elderly people happily.The elderly were grateful and thankful for our kindness, saying it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.
In a word,we are very happy because what we did has not only brought joy to others but also enriched our own lives.
[隨堂演練]
假定你是李華,請根據下面的提示寫一篇短文。內容包括:
1.上周日你和同學李強去看羽毛球比賽,在去球場的路上看到一位老人躺在地上。
2.你坐在老人身邊照看著他,李強打電話叫了救護車。
3.你們決定和老人一起去醫院,等老人的女兒來了你們才離開。
4.你們錯過了羽毛球比賽,但是一點也不后悔,你們為自己所做的事情感到自豪。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯:球場court　救護車ambulance
【參考范文】
Last Sunday my classmate Li Qiang and I went to watch a badminton match.We were walking on the way to the court when we saw an old man lying on the ground.
Walking closer,we found that he was badly injured.Thus I sat there to take care of the old man and in the meanwhile Li Qiang called the ambulance.After a while the ambulance arrived and we decided to go to the hospital with the old man.Not until the old man's daughter arrived did we leave.
Though we missed the match, we felt more than delighted.We were not only proud of what we had done but also understood helping others was the source of happiness.
課 時 精 練
Ⅰ.應用文寫作(滿分15分)
假設你是李華,你的朋友 David 升入高一后,由于學習任務重,忽視了體育鍛煉,導致體質下降,寫信向你尋求幫助,請你給他回信。內容包括:
1.表示理解;
2.提出建議;
3.予以鼓勵。
要求:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】
Dear David,
I'm terribly sorry to hear that your physical condition has declined due to heavy school work and neglect of exercise.Here are some suggestions that might help you strike a balance between study and physical activities.
Firstly, it's recommended that you make a realistic schedule which includes study time and physical activities.It can help you develop a habit of exercising regularly, thus improving your health. Additionally, why not invite your friends to exercise together Not only will it make workout more enjoyable, but also it will help reduce your stress.Lastly, if I were you, I would stay positive and persistent. Every step we take towards improving our health is a victory.
I'm here to support you every step of the way and wish you both health and happiness.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.情景微續寫(滿分25分)
閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫一段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。
When Mark was five years old, his father died and his life fell apart.His mom Jane and he lived a hard life.They had to move from California to Arizona and live with Mark's grandmother, Moria.That meant Mark lost all his friends and his carefree life.
It could have been the end of Mark's childhood, but then he met 76-year-old Mr.Kelsey, Moira's next-door neighbor.One day, he was kicking a soccer ball around the yard when one kick sent the ball over the fence into Kelsey's yard.Mark came to Kelsey's home, feeling a little nervous.
“Grandpa, can I get my ball back ” Mark said cautiously.“Of course,” Kelsey said gently with a smile.“Come over and have a talk with me, will you ” Then they had a pleasant chat.
Kelsey lived alone but had a loving and patient heart to children.Over time, the two of them gradually established a deep friendship, enjoying each other's company.
Half a year later, something unexpected happened.Mark learned Kelsey had a serious eye disease but he couldn't afford the $3,000 surgery (外科手術).Without timely treatment, he would go blind completely.However, Jane and Moria were also on a tight budget, unable to spare any money for Kelsey.
Mark made up his mind to wash cars at the parking lot of the shopping center on the weekends to raise money for poor Kelsey.He offered to wash each car for one dollar.Mark knew he had to wash a lot of cars to make up the money, but he was determined.
A few days later, one of his customers, named Jason, asked curiously, “What do you do this for, kid ” “My neighbor, Mr.Kelsey. He needs an eye surgery.I'm raising money for him.I badly need
$3, 000,” Mark replied.“You're a kind boy,” Jason said softly.“Where do you live ” Mark told Jason his address.Deeply moved by what Mark was doing, Jason decided to help him in another way.
注意:續寫詞數應為100個左右。
Jason shared Mark's story online, appealing for donations.　

【原文解讀】
Mark and his mom Jane moved to live with his grandmother.→Mark lost his friends and his carefree life.→Mark and 76-year-old Mr.Kelsey become good friends.→Mr.Kelsey need a surgery but couldn't afford it.→Mark was determined to raise money by washing cars.→Mark met Jason who decided to help Mark raise money in another way...→(根據原文及續寫首句,續寫文章主要講述Jason如何幫助Mark籌錢,最終Mr.Kelsey手術成功。)
【思路形成】
Jason在網上呼吁籌錢→錢很快籌夠,送到Mark家里→Mark的反應(驚訝,感動)→Kelsey做手術→手術成功
【單句續寫】
1.Mark的善意很快傳開了,很快就籌集了3 000美元。
　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
2.當Jason帶著錢來到Mark家時,Mark非常驚訝。
　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Word of Mark’s kindness spread quickly and soon$3,000 was collected.
When Jason reached Mark’s home with the money, Mark was deeply surprised.
3.得知發生了什么事后,Mark忍不住流下了感激的淚水。
　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
4.他被這些善良的人們的慷慨所感動,不斷地說:“Kelsey的眼睛得救了!”
　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Having learned what had happened, Mark couldn’t hold back his tears of gratitude.
He was greatly touched by those kind people’s generosity, saying repeatedly, “Kelsey’s eyes will be saved!”
5.Mark立刻趕到Kelsey家,把錢給了他。
　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
6.第二天,Kelsey成功地接受了手術,視力逐漸恢復。
　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Without delay, Mark rushed to Kelsey’s home and handed him the money.
The next day, Kelsey successfully received a surgery, and gradually recovered his eyesight.
7.盡管生活可能艱難,但將善意傳遞下去的行為會讓每個人的心靈都
充滿光明。
　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Hard as life might be, the act of paying it forward will brighten everyone’s heart.
【連句成篇】
Jason shared Mark’s story online, appealing for donations. Word of Mark’s kindness spread quickly and soon$3,000 was collected.When Jason reached Mark’s home with the money, Mark was deeply surprised.Having learned what had happened, Mark couldn’t hold back his tears of gratitude.He was greatly touched by those kind people’s generosity, saying repeatedly, “Kelsey’s eyes will
be saved!” Without delay, Mark rushed to Kelsey’s home and handed him the money.The next day, Kelsey successfully received a surgery, and gradually recovered his eyesight.Hard as life might be, the act of paying it forward will brighten everyone’s heart.
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