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Section Ⅵ　Writing——電子郵件
[語料積累]
1.首段:開門見山,說明寫信的目的
①I'm pleased to hear that you're coming to China for a visit.
很高興得知你將來中國游覽。
②I'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
我寫這封信是為了感謝我在美國時你對我的幫助。
③I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
很高興收到你就……征求我的建議的來信。
2.主體:詳細介紹郵件內容
①To be honest, the campus of my new school is the most beautiful one that I have ever stayed.
說實話,我的新學校的校園是我待過的最漂亮的一個。
② I recommend this club to you for the following reasons.
我向您推薦這家俱樂部的原因如下。
③First, Peking Opera is like a pearl in Chinese traditional art.
首先,京劇是中國傳統藝術中的一顆明珠。
④Besides, the club will regularly organize various activities, such as inviting famous actors to perform, and drawing Peking Opera make-ups.
此外,俱樂部還將定期組織各種活動,比如邀請著名演員表演,以及繪制京劇妝容等。
3.尾段:結尾并祝福
①I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
期待您的回信。
②I'd appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
如果您能盡早回復,我將不勝感激。
③I hope you will find these ideas useful.
我希望你會發現這些辦法有用。
[典題示例]
假設你是李華,剛上高中兩周多,請你按照以下內容給你的英國筆友Tom發一封電子郵件,簡單介紹你的學校、老師和自己的情況:
1.我的新學校是一所歷史悠久的名校,有50個班,2 500多名學生;
2.老師對我們很友好,教學方法與初中截然不同,上課方式很有趣;
3.課程比初中更有挑戰性,但有信心學好;
4.與同學相處非常融洽,積極參加各種課外活動。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
1.審題謀篇
第一段:點出寫信目的:介紹自己學校的情況;
第二段:具體介紹新學校、老師和自己的情況;
第三段:表達希望。
2.要點翻譯
①我的新學校是一所歷史悠久的名校。
My new school is famous and has a long history.
②它是我們的初中學校的三倍大。
It is three times bigger than our junior secondary school.
③我的學校有50個班和2 500多名學生。
There are 50 classes and over 2,500 students in my school.
④我們老師的教學方法很有趣,與我們以前老師的教學方法截然不同。
Our teachers' teaching methods are interesting and different from those of our previous teachers.
⑤雖然我們學的課程更有挑戰性,但我有信心學好它們。
Although the subjects we are learning are more challenging,I'm sure that I can learn them well.
⑥我與同學相處非常融洽,積極參加各種課外活動。
I'm getting along very well with my classmates and I take an active part in all kinds of after-school activities.
3.詞句升級
(1)用非限制性定語從句升級句①和句②
My new school,which is three times bigger than our junior secondary school,is famous and has a long history.
(2)用confident升級句⑤
Although the subjects we are learning are more challenging,I'm confident that I can learn them well.
(3)用various升級句⑥
I'm getting along very well with my classmates and I take an active part in various after-school activities.
4.連句成篇
【參考范文】
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you something about my new school.
My new school, which is three times bigger than our junior secondary school,is famous and has a long history.Besides,there are 50 classes and over 2,500 students in my school.Our teachers' teaching methods are interesting and different from those of our previous teachers.Although the subjects we are learning are more challenging, I'm confident that I can learn them well.In addition,I'm getting along very well with my classmates and I take an active part in various after-school activities.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
[隨堂演練]
假設你是李華,你的外國朋友Peter十分關心你,寫信詢問你是否適應了高中生活。請你根據以下提示,用英語回一封電子郵件,內容如下:
1.簡述高中校園生活;
2.與同學相處情況;
3.英語學習情況。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going Glad to hear from you and I'm writing to tell you something about my life in senior high school. 　


　　Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Peter,
How is everything going Glad to hear from you and I'm writing to tell you something about my life in senior high school.
I am quite used to the life here, for it is so colorful.There are various after-class activities and clubs, which can help me learn and relax.Besides, my classmates are so friendly that I can get along well with them.Personally,English in senior high school is more challenging, but I've been making progress with my English teacher's help.I believe I can learn it well if I keep working hard.
In a word, I enjoy my life in my new school.How about you I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
　　　　　　 　　　　　 　　　　　
Ⅰ.應用文寫作(滿分15分)
(2025·菏澤市高一上月考)
假如你是李華,你的英國筆友Bill發來郵件關心你的學校生活。請給他回一封郵件,內容包括:
1.你對新高中學校的印象;
2.你在高中的學習情況;
3.詢問他的建議。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可適當增加細節,不能出現個人信息;
3.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
Dear Bill,
I feel exceptionally delighted to hear from you.I really appreciate your concern. 　


　　Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Bill,
I feel exceptionally delighted to hear from you.I really appreciate your concern.
My new high school is vast and beautiful with amazing teaching buildings and modern facilities.It's a place that creates a good learning environment.
As for my study, I had trouble catching up with others at first.But I soon overcame my problem with the help of my teachers, who are knowledgeable and patient.And I even join a study group, in which all of us support and learn from each other.
I'm determined to enjoy my academic years here, so I'd love to hear your advice on how to manage time and how to study efficiently.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.情景微續寫(滿分25分)
(2025·淄博市高一上期中)
閱讀下面材料, 根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫一段, 使之構成一篇完整的短文。
It was our first winter in Chicago.Just as the animals were hibernating (冬眠), it seemed that so were our new neighbors.As newcomers, we felt alone.
Then something happened.It all began with a simple request from our eight-year-old daughter.“Mommy, let's put up a Christmas tree at home.”
At first, we didn't pay too much attention to this request, for we had never put up a Christmas tree.But my daughter's repeated request made us go ahead with this first step: loaded with layers of clothing to fight the unfamiliar cold, we tasked ourselves with finding a tree for our daughter.
When we finally selected our tree, we realized we didn't have a car big enough to get it home.Of course, we had not considered that.It was our first time.We had no choice but to carry it home.We had walked only a few steps when a gentleman in our neighborhood stopped his truck and offered us a ride home.Our first friend.
The Christmas tree was propped up (支起) in our living area but it was too dark.We needed Christmas lights! So, the next evening, we went to a store and asked for lights.The storekeeper, who, after getting over the surprise of our seemingly silly questions, explained to us that we needed multi-colored lights.Thanking the kind soul, we left with our lights and his warmth.Our second friend.
That night, we carefully wound the lights around the tree and excitedly held our breaths for the beauty of the first glow.Still, it looked like something was missing: small ornaments (裝飾).Where would we get them One lady across the street had a breathtaking tree carefully placed in a window for all to see.Every night, I stood behind the curtain, spending unnatural amounts of time studying the bells and whistles in her tree.
注意:續寫詞數應為100個左右。
One evening, seeing the lady clearing snow off her sidewalk, I made a decision. 　


【前文批注】
It was our first winter in Chicago.Just as the animals were hibernating (冬眠), it seemed that so were our new neighbors.As newcomers, we felt alone.(全文的主要矛盾,也是暗線,為后面的圣誕樹做鋪墊)
Then something happened.It all began with a simple request from our eight-year-old daughter.“Mommy, let's put up a Christmas tree at home.”(文章要解決的主要問題,也是明線——放一棵圣誕樹)
At first, we didn't pay too much attention to this request, for we had never put up a Christmas tree.But my daughter's repeated request made us go ahead with this first step: loaded with layers of clothing to fight the unfamiliar cold, we tasked ourselves with finding a tree for our daughter.(找圣誕樹)
When we finally selected our tree, we realized we didn't have a car big enough to get it home.(無法將其運回家) Of course, we had not considered that.It was our first time.We had no choice but to carry it home.(步行將圣誕樹扛回家) We had walked only a few steps when a gentleman in our neighborhood stopped his truck and offered us a ride home.Our first friend.[一位好心的鄰居(我們的第一位朋友)主動幫忙把圣誕樹送回家]
The Christmas tree was propped up (支起) in our living area but it was too dark.We needed Christmas lights!(需要解決的另一個問題——圣誕燈) So, the next evening, we went to a store and asked for lights.The storekeeper, who, after getting over the surprise of our seemingly silly questions, explained to us that we needed multi-colored lights.Thanking the kind soul, we left with our lights and his warmth.Our second friend.[店主(我們的第二個朋友)好心地告訴我們圣誕樹需要彩色的燈]
That night, we carefully wound the lights around the tree and excitedly held our breaths for the beauty of the first glow.Still, it looked like something was missing: small ornaments (裝飾).(圣誕樹還缺少裝飾物——又一個需要解決的問題) Where would we get them One lady across the street had a breathtaking tree carefully placed in a window for all to see.Every night, I stood behind the curtain, spending unnatural amounts of time studying the bells and whistles in her tree.(為下文尋找裝飾物以及第三個朋友埋下伏筆)
【原文解讀】
New in Chicago,we felt alone.→Our eight-year-old daughter advised me to put up a Christmas tree.→We finally selected our tree but can't deliver it home.→A gentleman offered to help us.(We met out first friend)→We needed Christmas lights!→The kind storekeeper gave us advice.(We met our second friend)→We needed ornaments.→One lady across the street had a breathtaking tree...→(根據原文續寫首句,續寫中要解決的問題是如何找到裝飾物以及第三個朋友。)
【思路形成】
看到女士正在清除人行道上的積雪→前去幫忙→給予裝飾物→表達感謝→圣誕樹圓滿完成→感悟
【單句續寫】
1.我走過去,主動提出要幫忙。
I walked over and offered to help.
2.當我們工作時,我提到了我們的圣誕樹,以及我多么欣賞她的裝飾品。
As we worked, I mentioned our Christmas tree and how much I admired her ornaments.
3.她熱情地微笑著邀請我到她家。
She smiled warmly and invited me into her home.
4.令我驚訝的是,她有一個盒子,里面裝滿了她不再使用的裝飾品。
To my surprise, she had a box filled with extra ornaments that she no longer used.
5.她微笑著遞給我,說:“拿著。我希望它們能讓你的樹和我的一樣漂亮。”
She handed it to me with a kind smile, saying, “Here, take these. I hope they'll make your tree just as beautiful as mine.”
6.我眼里含著淚水,非常感謝她。
With tears in my eyes, I thanked her profusely.
7.那天晚上,我們的樹終于完成了,那真是一幅值得一看的景象。
That evening, our tree was finally complete, and it was truly a sight to behold.
8.我們的第三個朋友幫助我們創造了一個我們永遠不會忘記的圣誕節。
Our third friend had helped us create a Christmas we would never forget.
【連句成篇】
One evening, seeing the lady clearing snow off her sidewalk, I made a decision. I walked over and offered to help.As we worked, I mentioned our Christmas tree and how much I admired her ornaments.She smiled warmly and invited me into her home.To my surprise, she had a box filled with extra ornaments that she no longer used.She handed it to me with a kind smile, saying, “Here, take these.I hope they'll make your tree just as beautiful as mine.” With tears in my eyes, I thanked her profusely.That evening, our tree was finally complete, and it was truly a sight to behold.Our third friend had helped us create a Christmas we would never forget. (共44張PPT)
Section Ⅵ　Writing——電子郵件
[語料積累]
1.首段:開門見山,說明寫信的目的
①I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
很高興得知你將來中國游覽。
②I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
我寫這封信是為了感謝我在美國時你對我的幫助。
③I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
很高興收到你就……征求我的建議的來信。
2.主體:詳細介紹郵件內容
①To be honest, the campus of my new school is the most beautiful one that I have ever stayed.
說實話,我的新學校的校園是我待過的最漂亮的一個。
② I recommend this club to you for the following reasons.
我向您推薦這家俱樂部的原因如下。
③First, Peking Opera is like a pearl in Chinese traditional art.
首先,京劇是中國傳統藝術中的一顆明珠。
④Besides, the club will regularly organize various activities, such as inviting famous actors to perform, and drawing Peking Opera make-ups.
此外,俱樂部還將定期組織各種活動,比如邀請著名演員表演,以及繪制京劇妝容等。
3.尾段:結尾并祝福
①I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
期待您的回信。
②I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
如果您能盡早回復,我將不勝感激。
③I hope you will find these ideas useful.
我希望你會發現這些辦法有用。
[典題示例]
假設你是李華,剛上高中兩周多,請你按照以下內容給你的英國筆友Tom發一封電子郵件,簡單介紹你的學校、老師和自己的情況:
1.我的新學校是一所歷史悠久的名校,有50個班,2 500多名學生;
2.老師對我們很友好,教學方法與初中截然不同,上課方式很有趣;
3.課程比初中更有挑戰性,但有信心學好;
4.與同學相處非常融洽,積極參加各種課外活動。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
1.審題謀篇
第一段:點出寫信目的:介紹自己學校的情況;第二段:具體介紹新學校、老師和自己的情況;第三段:表達希望。
2.要點翻譯
①我的新學校是一所歷史悠久的名校。
My new school 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　.
②它是我們的初中學校的三倍大。
It is 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 our junior secondary school.
③我的學校有50個班和2 500多名學生。
There are 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　in my school.
is famous and has a long history
three times bigger than
50 classes and over 2,500 students
④我們老師的教學方法很有趣,與我們以前老師的教學方法截然不同。
Our teachers’ teaching methods 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
those of our previous teachers.
⑤雖然我們學的課程更有挑戰性,但我有信心學好它們。
Although the subjects we are learning 　　　　　　　　　　　　　,
I’m sure that 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.
⑥我與同學相處非常融洽,積極參加各種課外活動。
I’m 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 my classmates and I 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 all kinds of after-school activities.
are interesting and different from
are more challengin
I can learn them well
getting along very well with
take an active part in
3.詞句升級
(1)用非限制性定語從句升級句①和句②
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
(2)用confident升級句⑤
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
My new school,which is three times bigger than our junior secondary school,is famous and has a long history.
Although the subjects we are learning are more challenging,I'm confident that I can learn them well.
(3)用various升級句⑥
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
I'm getting along very well with my classmates and I take an active part in various after-school activities.
4.連句成篇
【參考范文】
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you something about my new school.
My new school, which is three times bigger than our junior secondary school,is famous and has a long history.Besides,there are 50 classes and over 2,500 students in my school.Our teachers' teaching methods are interesting and different from those of our previous
teachers.Although the subjects we are learning are more challenging, I'm confident that I can learn them well.In addition,I'm getting along very well with my classmates and I take an active part in various after-school activities.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
[隨堂演練]
假設你是李華,你的外國朋友Peter十分關心你,寫信詢問你是否適應了高中生活。請你根據以下提示,用英語回一封電子郵件,內容如下:
1.簡述高中校園生活;
2.與同學相處情況;
3.英語學習情況。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going Glad to hear from you and I’m writing to tell you something about my life in senior high school.

　　Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Peter,
How is everything going Glad to hear from you and I'm writing to tell you something about my life in senior high school.
I am quite used to the life here, for it is so colorful.There are various after-class activities and clubs, which can help me learn and relax.Besides, my classmates are so friendly that I can get along well with them.Personally,English in senior high school is more
challenging, but I've been making progress with my English teacher's help.I believe I can learn it well if I keep working hard.
In a word, I enjoy my life in my new school.How about you I am looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
課 時 精 練
Ⅰ.應用文寫作(滿分15分)
(2025·菏澤市高一上月考)
假如你是李華,你的英國筆友Bill發來郵件關心你的學校生活。請給他回一封郵件,內容包括:
1.你對新高中學校的印象;
2.你在高中的學習情況;
3.詢問他的建議。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可適當增加細節,不能出現個人信息;
3.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
Dear Bill,
I feel exceptionally delighted to hear from you.I really appreciate your concern.　


　　Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Bill,
I feel exceptionally delighted to hear from you.I really appreciate your concern.
My new high school is vast and beautiful with amazing teaching buildings and modern facilities.It's a place that creates a good learning environment.
As for my study, I had trouble catching up with others at first. But I soon overcame my problem with the help of my teachers, who are knowledgeable and patient.And I even join a study group, in which all of us support and learn from each other.
I'm determined to enjoy my academic years here, so I'd love to hear your advice on how to manage time and how to study efficiently.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.情景微續寫(滿分25分)
(2025·淄博市高一上期中)
閱讀下面材料, 根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫一段, 使之構成一篇完整的短文。
It was our first winter in Chicago.Just as the animals were hibernating (冬眠), it seemed that so were our new neighbors.As newcomers, we felt alone.
Then something happened.It all began with a simple request from our eight-year-old daughter.“Mommy, let's put up a Christmas tree at home.”
At first, we didn't pay too much attention to this request, for we had never put up a Christmas tree.But my daughter's repeated request made us go ahead with this first step: loaded with layers of clothing to fight the unfamiliar cold, we tasked ourselves with finding a tree for our daughter.
When we finally selected our tree, we realized we didn't have a car big enough to get it home.Of course, we had not considered that.It was our first time.We had no choice but to carry it home.We had walked only a few steps when a gentleman in our neighborhood stopped his truck and offered us a ride home.Our first friend.
The Christmas tree was propped up (支起) in our living area but it was too dark.We needed Christmas lights! So, the next evening, we went to a store and asked for lights.The storekeeper, who, after getting over the surprise of our seemingly silly questions, explained to us that we needed multi-colored lights.Thanking the kind soul, we left with our lights and his warmth.Our second friend.
That night, we carefully wound the lights around the tree and excitedly held our breaths for the beauty of the first glow.Still, it looked like something was missing: small ornaments (裝飾).Where would we get them One lady across the street had a breathtaking tree carefully placed in a window for all to see.Every night, I stood behind the curtain, spending unnatural amounts of time studying the bells and whistles in her tree.
注意:續寫詞數應為100個左右。
One evening, seeing the lady clearing snow off her sidewalk, I made a decision.　



【原文解讀】
New in Chicago,we felt alone.→Our eight-year-old daughter advised me to put up a Christmas tree.→We finally selected our tree but can't deliver it home.→A gentleman offered to help us.(We met out first friend)→We needed Christmas lights!→The kind storekeeper gave us advice.(We met our second friend)→We needed ornaments.→One lady across the street had a breathtaking tree...→(根據原文續寫首句,續寫中要解決的問題是如何找到裝飾物以及第三個朋友。)
【思路形成】
看到女士正在清除人行道上的積雪→前去幫忙→給予裝飾物→表達感謝→圣誕樹圓滿完成→感悟
【單句續寫】
1.我走過去,主動提出要幫忙。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　
2.當我們工作時,我提到了我們的圣誕樹,以及我多么欣賞她的裝飾品。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　
I walked over and offered to help.
As we worked, I mentioned our Christmas tree and how much I admired her ornaments.
3.她熱情地微笑著邀請我到她家。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　
4.令我驚訝的是,她有一個盒子,里面裝滿了她不再使用的裝飾品。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　
She smiled warmly and invited me into her home.
To my surprise, she had a box filled with extra ornaments that she no longer used.
5.她微笑著遞給我,說:“拿著。我希望它們能讓你的樹和我的一樣
漂亮。”
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　
6.我眼里含著淚水,非常感謝她。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　
She handed it to me with a kind smile, saying, “Here, take these. I hope they’ll make your tree just as beautiful as mine.”
With tears in my eyes, I thanked her profusely.
7.那天晚上,我們的樹終于完成了,那真是一幅值得一看的景象。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　
8.我們的第三個朋友幫助我們創造了一個我們永遠不會忘記的圣誕節。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　
That evening, our tree was finally complete, and it was truly a sight to behold.
Our third friend had helped us create a Christmas we would never forget.
【連句成篇】
One evening, seeing the lady clearing snow off her sidewalk, I made a decision. I walked over and offered to help.As we worked, I mentioned our Christmas tree and how much I admired her ornaments.She smiled warmly and invited me into her home.To my surprise, she had a box filled with extra ornaments that she no longer used.She handed it to me with a kind smile, saying, “Here, take these.
I hope they’ll make your tree just as beautiful as mine.” With tears in my eyes, I thanked her profusely.That evening, our tree was finally complete, and it was truly a sight to behold.Our third friend had helped us create a Christmas we would never forget.
Thanks！
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