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Period 5　Writing
寫作一　應用文寫作——演講稿
本單元的寫作任務是寫一篇演講稿。演講稿屬于應用文的一種，是為演講準備的書面材料，通常用于對人們普遍關注的事物或問題發表意見、提出建議、發起倡議等。
1．開頭語常用表達
Ladies and gentlemen/Dear teachers and schoolmates，I’m Li Ming.I’m greatly honored/privileged to speak here on behalf of...
女士們，先生們/親愛的老師們，同學們，我是李明。非常榮幸在此代表……發表演講。
Good morning/afternoon/evening，everybody！Thank you for being on time/making the time to come today.大家早上/下午/晚上好！感謝你們今天準時/抽時間前來。
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to make a speech about...
感謝你們給我這次機會發表關于……的演講。
2．主體部分常用表達
Today’s topic is...今天的主題是……
Today we are here to talk about...
今天我們在此探討……
I’m going to talk about something that is quite important to all of us.
我要談論一些對我們大家都很重要的事情。
We all ought to be aware of the following points.我們都應該意識到以下幾點。
3．結尾部分常用表達
I hope I have made myself understood.
我希望我已經清楚地表達了我的意思。
I hope you have found this useful.
我希望你們發現這有幫助。
Actions speak louder than words.Let’s take action immediately.
事實勝于雄辯。讓我們立即采取行動。
I believe the future of...is promising through the efforts of us all.我相信，經過我們的共同努力，……的未來是光明的。
Just as the saying goes，“Individuals together can make quite a difference.” I’m greatly convinced that the world will be a more harmonious one/...will be a great success through the joint efforts of us all.常言道：“團結就是力量。”我相信，經過我們所有人的共同努力，世界將會變得更加和諧/……必將成功。
That’s all.Thank you for your listening/attention.
我的演講結束。感謝你們的傾聽/關注。
音樂在我們的日常生活中扮演著很重要的角色，請根據以下提示，以“The Role of Music in Our Life”為主題寫一篇演講稿。
1．音樂可以使我們放松身心，緩解壓力；
2．音樂可以振奮并鼓舞人心；
3．音樂能夠撫慰我們的心靈，幫助我們走出困境；
4．音樂可以幫我們更好地了解其他文化。
注意：不可逐句翻譯，可根據你自己對音樂的理解適當發揮、拓展。
第一步　審題謀篇
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯　(單元寫作詞匯運用)
1．有機會做某事 have an/the opportunity to do sth
2．眾所周知 as we all know/as is known to us all
3．在……中起重要的作用 perform an important role in
4．使某人能夠做某事 enable sb to do sth
5．愛上fall in love with
6．證明prove
7．各種各樣的various
8．治愈cure
9．假定，假設，以為 assume
10．另外 in addition
11．處理；完成；度過 get through
連詞成句　(教材句式仿寫)
1．事實證明，音樂在我們的生活中扮演著重要的角色。
It has been proved that music performs an important role in our life.
2．它能夠使我們感到身心放松，因此給我們能量。
It enables us to feel relaxed both mentally and physically and thus gives us energy.
3．音樂可以激勵我們度過我們所處的困難時期。
Music can inspire us to get through tough times we are caught in.
4．音樂不僅能觸動我們的靈魂，減輕我們的痛苦和壓力，還能治愈我們的孤獨。
Not only can music touch our souls and relieve us of pain and pressure but it can also cure us of our loneliness.
5．音樂被認為是世界通用的語言。
Music is assumed to be a universal language.
6．音樂對了解另一種文化有很大的好處。
Music can be of great benefit to learning about another culture.
7．愛上音樂吧，我們將過上更幸福的生活。
Fall in love with music and we will live a happier life.
第三步　句式升級
1．用現在分詞短語作狀語升級句2。
It enables us to feel relaxed both mentally and physically，thus giving us energy.
2．用過去分詞短語作狀語合并句5和句6。
Assumed to be a universal language，music can be of great benefit to learning about another culture.
第四步　組句成篇
用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語短文。
參考范文
Ladies and gentlemen，
Good morning! I am honored to have the opportunity to give a speech about “The Role of Music in Our Life” here.
It has been proved that music performs an important role in our life.First，it enables us to feel relaxed both mentally and physically，thus giving us energy.Second，music can inspire us to get through tough times we are caught in.Moreover，not only can music touch our souls and relieve us of pain and pressure but it can also cure us of our loneliness.In addition，assumed to be a universal language，music can be of great benefit to learning about another culture.
As far as I’m concerned，music is part of our life.Fall in love with music and we will live a happier life.
Thank you very much for your attention.
假設你是李華，學校邀請你本周三下午在高一年級大會上為同學們發表演講。演講的內容是音樂是如何改變你的生活的。請你根據自身的經歷寫一篇演講稿。
注意：1.寫作詞數應為80個左右；
2．請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。
參考范文
Good afternoon，everyone，
I am Li Hua.It’s a great honour to be invited here to deliver a speech about how music changed my life.
Whenever I was asked to answer questions in class，so nervous did I feel that I couldn’t speak fluently.Thus，discouraged and helpless，I had no idea how to deal with the embarrassing situation.It was music that inspired me with confidence.I thought to myself，“Now that I have a talent for music，why not sing it in public bravely？” Therefore I encouraged myself to express myself with music and I often sang songs in my classroom.Last term I took part in a school concert and was awarded a prize for my fantastic performance.Music gave me confidence and a sense of achievement.In addition，music gave me strength，helping me to get through tough times.Gradually，I conquered my shyness.
I hope all of us will make music our friend who can cure us of our weaknesses.
Thank you！
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
Ⅰ.增分語料積累
讀后續寫高級句式升級：倒裝句
倒裝用于表示一定的句子結構或強調句子成分。倒裝句的使用豐富了語言表達，讓句式更加多樣。因此，讀后續寫中適當使用倒裝句式會使文章的表達更生動有力，讓閱卷老師眼前一亮。
Not until then did Megan pour out what had been disturbing her the whole day.
直到那時Megan才說出了困擾她一整天的事。
Only after I experienced all of this did I realize that with the love of my family，I can overcome any difficulty in life.
只有經歷了這一切之后我才意識到，有家人的愛，我可以克服生活中的任何困難。
Not only did Jack donate a large sum of money to the charity，but he also organized several fundraising activities to help those in need.杰克不僅向慈善機構捐贈了一大筆錢，還組織了幾次籌款活動來幫助那些有需要的人。
[即時訓練] 根據漢語提示補全句子
1．只有當簡處于如此無助的境地時，她才意識到她心愛的湯姆對她來說是如此重要。
Only when Jane was in such a helpless situation was she aware that her beloved Tom meant so much to her.
2．直到我成功地搞清楚了令人費解的心理學問題他才對我采取了友好的態度。
Not until I managed to figure out the puzzling phychological questions did he adopt a friendly attitude to me.
Ⅱ.教材語料積累
詞匯 情感描寫 satisfaction n．滿足；滿意；欣慰→satisfy vt.使滿意；滿足→satisfied adj.滿意的→satisfying/satisfactory adj.令人滿意的　relief n．(焦慮、痛苦的)減輕或消除；(不快過后的)寬慰、輕松或解脫→relieve vt.減輕；解除→relieved adj.放心的；寬慰的　absorbed in sth/sb被……吸引住；專心致志
動作描寫 enable vt.使能夠；使可能　prove vt.證明；展現　cure vt.治愈；治好(疾病)；解決(問題)　reaction n．反應；回應→react vi.(對……)作出反應　fall in love with愛上　get through (設法)處理；完成；熬過(困難時期)
句型 1.I was very afraid and I felt so alone and discouraged.(情感描寫) 2.John A．Logan said，“Music is the medicine of the mind.”(引用) 3.It became my best friend.It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.(擬人) 4.When I listened to music，it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.(情感描寫＋明喻) 5.Music gave me strength and brought me relief...Moreover，music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.(擬人) 6.It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.(隱喻)
續寫語料運用
請從以上語料中選擇合適的詞匯，完成以下語段。然后核對答案并背誦該語段。
伯納德和約翰專心于爆玉米花。聽著玉米的噼啪聲，他們心里樂開了花，想象著許多顧客會愛上他們的爆米花。令他們滿意的是，第一次嘗試時他們就成功了，他們松了一口氣。然后，他們把爆米花放進紙袋里，騎著三輪車，像快樂的小鳥一樣前往附近的市場。他們的促銷計劃證明有效。伯納德可以用掙來的錢請醫生治愈父親的疾病，他堅信他家可以渡過這個難關。
Bernard and John 1.were absorbed in popping the corn.Hearing the crackling of the corn，they were over the moon，imagining many customers 2. falling in love with their popcorn.3.To their satisfaction，they made it at the first attempt and they 4.sighed with relief.Then they put the popcorn into paper bags，rode a tricycle and headed for a nearby market like happy birds.Their promotion plans 5.proved effective.With the money earned，Bernard could send for a doctor 6.to cure his father of his disease，firmly believing that his family 7.could get through the tough time.(共30張PPT)
Period 5
Writing
Music
Unit 5
內容索引
寫作一　應用文寫作——演講稿
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
寫作一　應用文寫作——演講稿
本單元的寫作任務是寫一篇演講稿。演講稿屬于應用文的一種，是為演講準備的書面材料，通常用于對人們普遍關注的事物或問題發表意見、提出建議、發起倡議等。
常用表達
1.開頭語常用表達
Ladies and gentlemen/Dear teachers and schoolmates，I’m Li Ming.I’m greatly honored/privileged to speak here on behalf of...
女士們，先生們/親愛的老師們，同學們，我是李明。非常榮幸在此代表……發表演講。
Good morning/afternoon/evening，everybody！Thank you for being on time/making the time to come today.大家早上/下午/晚上好！感謝你們今天準時/抽時間前來。
Thank you for giving me the opportunity to make a speech about...
感謝你們給我這次機會發表關于……的演講。
2.主體部分常用表達
Today’s topic is...今天的主題是……
Today we are here to talk about...
今天我們在此探討……
I’m going to talk about something that is quite important to all of us.
我要談論一些對我們大家都很重要的事情。
We all ought to be aware of the following points.
我們都應該意識到以下幾點。
3.結尾部分常用表達
I hope I have made myself understood.
我希望我已經清楚地表達了我的意思。
I hope you have found this useful.
我希望你們發現這有幫助。
Actions speak louder than words.Let’s take action immediately.
事實勝于雄辯。讓我們立即采取行動。
I believe the future of...is promising through the efforts of us all.我相信，經過我們的共同努力，……的未來是光明的。
Just as the saying goes，“Individuals together can make quite a difference.” I’m greatly convinced that the world will be a more harmonious one/...will be a great success through the joint efforts of us all.常言道：“團結就是力量。”我相信，經過我們所有人的共同努力，世界將會變得更加和諧/……必將成功。
That’s all.Thank you for your listening/attention.
我的演講結束。感謝你們的傾聽/關注。
音樂在我們的日常生活中扮演著很重要的角色，請根據以下提示，以“The Role of Music in Our Life”為主題寫一篇演講稿。
1.音樂可以使我們放松身心，緩解壓力；
2.音樂可以振奮并鼓舞人心；
3.音樂能夠撫慰我們的心靈，幫助我們走出困境；
4.音樂可以幫我們更好地了解其他文化。
注意：不可逐句翻譯，可根據你自己對音樂的理解適當發揮、拓展。
典例演練
第一步　審題謀篇
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯　(單元寫作詞匯運用)
1.有機會做某事
2.眾所周知
3.在……中起重要的作用
4.使某人能夠做某事
5.愛上
6.證明
7.各種各樣的
______________________________
_______________________________
__________________________
_________________
______________
______
_______
have an/the opportunity to do sth
as we all know/as is known to us all
perform an important role in
enable sb to do sth
fall in love with
prove
various
8.治愈
9.假定，假設，以為
10.另外
11.處理；完成；度過
_____
________
___________
____________
assume
cure
in addition
get through
1.事實證明，音樂在我們的生活中扮演著重要的角色。
music performs an important role in our life.
2.它能夠使我們感到身心放松，因此給我們能量。
It and thus gives us energy.
3.音樂可以激勵我們度過我們所處的困難時期。
Music can inspire us to we are caught in.
It has been proved that
enables us to feel relaxed both mentally and physically
連詞成句　(教材句式仿寫)
get through tough times
4.音樂不僅能觸動我們的靈魂，減輕我們的痛苦和壓力，還能治愈我們的孤獨。
Not only _______________________________________________________
.
5.音樂被認為是世界通用的語言。
Music .
6.音樂對了解另一種文化有很大的好處。
Music can be of great benefit to .
7.愛上音樂吧，我們將過上更幸福的生活。
and we will live a happier life.
can music touch our souls and relieve us of pain and pressure
but it can also cure us of our loneliness
is assumed to be a universal language
learning about another culture
Fall in love with music
1.用現在分詞短語作狀語升級句2。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.用過去分詞短語作狀語合并句5和句6。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It enables us to feel relaxed both mentally and physically，thus giving us energy.
第三步　句式升級
Assumed to be a universal language，music can be of great benefit to learning about another culture.
第四步　組句成篇
用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語短文。
參考范文
Ladies and gentlemen，
Good morning! I am honored to have the opportunity to give a speech about “The Role of Music in Our Life” here.
It has been proved that music performs an important role in our life.First，it enables us to feel relaxed both mentally and physically，thus giving us energy.Second，music can inspire us to get through tough times we are caught in.Moreover，not only can music touch our souls and relieve us of pain and pressure but it can also cure us of our loneliness.In addition，assumed to be a universal language，music can be of great benefit to learning about another culture.
As far as I’m concerned，music is part of our life.Fall in love with music and we will live a happier life.
Thank you very much for your attention.
假設你是李華，學校邀請你本周三下午在高一年級大會上為同學們發表演講。演講的內容是音樂是如何改變你的生活的。請你根據自身的經歷寫一篇演講稿。
注意：1.寫作詞數應為80個左右；
2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。
達標檢測
參考范文
Good afternoon，everyone，
I am Li Hua.It’s a great honour to be invited here to deliver a speech about how music changed my life.
Whenever I was asked to answer questions in class，so nervous did I feel that I couldn’t speak fluently.Thus，discouraged and helpless，I had no idea how to deal with the embarrassing situation.It was music that inspired me with confidence.I thought to myself，“Now that I have a talent for music，why not sing it in public bravely？”
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Therefore I encouraged myself to express myself with music and I often sang songs in my classroom.Last term I took part in a school concert and was awarded a prize for my fantastic performance.Music gave me confidence and a sense of achievement.In addition，music gave me strength，helping me to get through tough times.Gradually，I conquered my shyness.
I hope all of us will make music our friend who can cure us of our weaknesses.
Thank you！
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
Ⅰ.增分語料積累
讀后續寫高級句式升級：倒裝句
倒裝用于表示一定的句子結構或強調句子成分。倒裝句的使用豐富了語言表達，讓句式更加多樣。因此，讀后續寫中適當使用倒裝句式會使文章的表達更生動有力，讓閱卷老師眼前一亮。
Not until then did Megan pour out what had been disturbing her the whole day.
直到那時Megan才說出了困擾她一整天的事。
Only after I experienced all of this did I realize that with the love of my family，I can overcome any difficulty in life.
只有經歷了這一切之后我才意識到，有家人的愛，我可以克服生活中的任何困難。
Not only did Jack donate a large sum of money to the charity，but he also organized several fundraising activities to help those in need.杰克不僅向慈善機構捐贈了一大筆錢，還組織了幾次籌款活動來幫助那些有需要的人。
[即時訓練] 根據漢語提示補全句子
1.只有當簡處于如此無助的境地時，她才意識到她心愛的湯姆對她來說是如此重要。
she aware that her beloved Tom meant so much to her.
2.直到我成功地搞清楚了令人費解的心理學問題他才對我采取了友好的態度。
the puzzling phychological questions
a friendly attitude to me.
Only when Jane was in such a helpless situation was
Not until I managed to figure out
did he adopt
Ⅱ.教材語料積累
詞匯 情感描寫 satisfaction n.滿足；滿意；欣慰→satisfy vt.使滿意；滿足→satisfied adj.滿意的→satisfying/satisfactory adj.令人滿意的　relief n.(焦慮、痛苦的)減輕或消除；(不快過后的)寬慰、輕松或解脫→relieve vt.減輕；解除→relieved adj.放心的；寬慰的　absorbed in sth/sb被……吸引住；專心致志
動作描寫 enable vt.使能夠；使可能　prove vt.證明；展現　cure vt.治愈；治好(疾病)；解決(問題)　reaction n.反應；回應→react vi.(對……)作出反應　fall in love with愛上　get through (設法)處理；完成；熬過(困難時期)
句型 1.I was very afraid and I felt so alone and discouraged.(情感描寫)
2.John A.Logan said，“Music is the medicine of the mind.”(引用)
3.It became my best friend.It spoke words of encouragement to the deepest part of my being.(擬人)
4.When I listened to music，it made my spirits fly like a kite in the wind.(情感描寫＋明喻)
5.Music gave me strength and brought me relief...Moreover，music gave me hope and a sense of satisfaction.(擬人)
6.It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times.(隱喻)
續寫語料運用
請從以上語料中選擇合適的詞匯，完成以下語段。然后核對答案并背誦該語段。
伯納德和約翰專心于爆玉米花。聽著玉米的噼啪聲，他們心里樂開了花，想象著許多顧客會愛上他們的爆米花。令他們滿意的是，第一次嘗試時他們就成功了，他們松了一口氣。
Bernard and John 1. .Hearing the crackling of the corn，they were over the moon，imagining many customers 2. .3. ，they made it at the first attempt and they 4. .
were absorbed in popping the corn
falling in love with their popcorn
To their satisfaction
sighed with relief
然后，他們把爆米花放進紙袋里，騎著三輪車，像快樂的小鳥一樣前往附近的市場。他們的促銷計劃證明有效。伯納德可以用掙來的錢請醫生治愈父親的疾病，他堅信他家可以渡過這個難關。
Then they put the popcorn into paper bags，rode a tricycle and headed for a nearby market like happy birds.Their promotion plans 5._________
.With the money earned，Bernard could send for a doctor 6. ，firmly believing that his family 7.____________________ the tough time.
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proved
effective
to cure his father of his disease
could get through
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