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Period 5　Writing
寫作一　應用文寫作——介紹類說明文
本單元的寫作項目是描述一個喜歡的地點，屬于介紹類說明文，要求學生比較生動、細致地描寫所熟悉地點的景物，并恰當地表達自己的感受。
1．開頭部分常用表達
It is located/lies in...with an area of...
它位于……，面積為……
It covers an area of...with a history of...
它的面積為……，有著……的歷史。
Located in...and covering an area of...，...is one of China’s most famous scenic spots.
……位于……，面積……，是中國最著名的景區之一。
The history of...dates back to...
……的歷史可追溯到……
It has become the most popular tourist attraction since...
它自……起就是最受歡迎的旅游景點。
2．主體部分常用表達
There are many places of interest，such as...
這里有很多旅游勝地，如……
You can enjoy...which has a high reputation both at home and abroad.
你可以欣賞在海內外都享有盛譽的……
...is/are attracting more and more tourists.
……正吸引著越來越多的游客。
An interesting feature of...is...
……的一個有趣的特點是……
With its pleasant climate，rich natural resources and beautiful scenery，...is one of China’s major tourist cities.
有著宜人的氣候、豐富的自然資源和美麗的景觀，……是中國主要的旅游城市之一。
A trip along...will enable you to get to know...沿著……游覽將使你得以領略……
3．結尾部分常用表達
...is well worth visiting.
……非常值得一游。
...is a place you have to visit and the extraordinary view will make you unwilling to leave.
……是一個必去的地方，其非凡的景觀會令你流連忘返。
假如你是李華，請你給某英文報社的“城市風采”欄目寫一篇短文，介紹我們偉大祖國的首都——北京，要點如下：
1．基本概況：人口約2 000萬，面積16 000多平方千米，位于華北平原北部；
2．歷史與文化：有3 000多年的歷史，是我國的政治、文化中心，有很多大學，其中清華大學和北京大學是最著名的；
3．交通與旅游：交通便利；有天安門廣場、故宮博物院、長城、國家體育場等很多旅游景點。
第一步　審題謀篇
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯　(單元寫作詞匯運用)
1．位于 (be) located in
2．有著……的歷史 have a history of
3．吸引……的注意 draw the attention of
4．極有吸引力的 fascinating
5．還，和，又 as well as
連詞成句　(教材句式仿寫)
1．北京人口約2 000萬，面積16 000多平方千米。
Beijing has a population of about 20 million and covers an area of more than 16,000 square kilometers.
2．北京位于華北平原北部。
Beijing is located in the north of the North China Plain.
3．北京是中國的政治、文化中心。
Beijing is the political and cultural center of China.
4．北京主辦了2008年奧運會和2022年冬奧會，都是巨大的成功。
Beijing hosted the 2008 Olympic Games and the 2022 Winter Olympic Games，which turned out to be great successes.
5．北京有許多重點大學，其中北京大學和清華大學是最著名的。
Beijing has many key universities，among which Peking University and Tsinghua University are the most famous.
6．北京也是一個度假的好去處，且交通便利。
Beijing is also a fascinating place to enjoy your holiday and it’s convenient to travel there.
7．有許多名勝古跡可供選擇，如天安門廣場、故宮博物院、長城和國家體育場，北京將給游客們留下深刻的印象。
With many places of interest to choose from，such as Tian’anmen Square，the Palace Museum，the Great Wall as well as the National Stadium，visitors will be deeply impressed by Beijing.
第三步　句式升級
1．把句1和句2合并為含有定語從句的句子。
Beijing that/which is located in the north of the North China Plain has a population of about 20 million and covers an area of more than 16,000 square kilometers.
2．把句3和句4合并為含有現在分詞短語作狀語的句子。
Being the political and cultural center of China，Beijing hosted the 2008 Olympic Games and the 2022 Winter Olympic Games，which turned out to be great successes.
第四步　組句成篇
用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語短文。
參考范文
Beijing，the capital of China，is a beautiful city.
Beijing which is located in the north of the North China Plain has a population of about 20 million and covers an area of more than 16,000 square kilometers.
Beijing has a long history of over 3,000 years.Being the political and cultural center of China，Beijing hosted the 2008 Olympic Games and the 2022 Winter Olympic Games，which turned out to be great successes.Beijing has many key universities，among which Peking University and Tsinghua University are the most famous.
Beijing is also a fascinating place to enjoy your holiday and it’s convenient to travel there.With many places of interest to choose from，such as Tian’anmen Square，the Palace Museum，the Great Wall as well as the National Stadium，visitors will be deeply impressed by Beijing.
Now，Beijing is playing an increasingly important role in the world.
假定你是李華，你的愛爾蘭朋友Scarlett暑假將與父母來你所在的城市游玩，發郵件請你推薦游玩的地方。請你回復郵件，內容包括：
1．你建議的景點；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.寫作詞數應為80個左右；
2．請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。
參考范文
Dear Scarlett，
Learning that you’re eager to visit my city with your parents during this summer vacation，I’m more than pleased to offer you some suggestions.
Above all，I’d like to recommend the fascinating Ocean Park to you，which belongs to M & L Company.Besides，with different kinds of sea animals，you can enjoy a lovely dolphin show，where the dolphins will jump out of the water and give you an amazing performance.I hold the strong belief that you will all like it.What’s more，Ocean Park is not far from our snack street，and you can enjoy delicious Chinese snacks there.
Please send my regards to your parents.Wish you an enjoyable trip!
Yours，
Li Hua
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
Ⅰ.增分語料積累
讀后續寫高級句式升級：狀語從句
狀語從句是英語讀后續寫中經常使用的從句之一，因此必須學會并熟練運用狀語從句，使寫作的句型更加豐富，邏輯感更強。
A wave of happiness and excitement swept over him when he learned that his son was admitted.
當他得知他的兒子被錄取時，一陣幸福和興奮涌上他的心頭。
Only when I received the award did I fully understand the value of my teacher’s encouragement with my writing.只有當我獲獎時，我才完全理解了老師在我的寫作方面給予我的鼓勵的意義。
Hardly had he stepped onto the stage when the audience burst into thunderous applause.
他一踏上舞臺，觀眾就爆發出了雷鳴般的掌聲。
Exhausted as he was from the long journey，he forced himself to stay awake and calm.盡管長途跋涉讓他疲憊不堪，他還是強迫自己保持清醒和冷靜。
Such great challenges did he face that his determination was truly put to the test.他面臨著如此巨大的挑戰，以至于他的決心受到了真正的考驗。
[即時訓練]　根據漢語提示補全句子
1．他一看到機會，就抓住繩子，爬上了懸崖。
Hardly had he seen the opportunity when he grabbed the rope and climbed up the cliff.
2．這個故事如此感人，以至于房間里的每個人都感動得流下了眼淚。
So touching was the story that everyone in the room was moved to tears.
3．我認為你會很快適應它們的，盡管天氣與食物都與你以往的不同。
Different as the weather and the food are from yours，I think that you will quickly adjust to them.
Ⅱ.教材語料積累
詞匯 情感描寫 eager adj.熱切的；渴望的→eagerly adv.熱切地；渴望地　puzzle n．謎；智力游戲；疑問 vt.迷惑；使困惑→puzzling adj.令人困惑的→puzzled adj.困惑的　fascinating adj.極有吸引力的；迷人的→fascinate v．深深吸引；迷住→fascinated adj.著迷的
環境描寫 landscape n．(陸上，尤指鄉村的)風景　scent n．氣味；氣息　dot n．點；小(圓)點 vt.加點；遍布　ocean n．大海；海洋　belong vi.應在(某處)；適應　surround vt.圍繞；包圍→surrounding adj.周圍的；附近的→surroundings n．環境　location n．地方；地點；位置→located adj.坐落在；位于
動作描寫 conquer vt.占領；征服；控制　battle vi.& vt.搏斗；奮斗　charge vt.收費；控告；充電 vi.猛沖　approach vt.接近；接洽；著手處理 vi.(在時間上)靠近　roll vi.& vt.(使)翻滾；(使)滾動 n．翻滾　roar vi.& n．吼叫；咆哮　greet vt.問候；迎接　defence n．防御；保衛→defend vt.防御；保衛　crowd vt.擠滿；使……擁擠　break away (from sb/sth)脫離；背叛；逃脫
句型 1.Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all，offering something for each of the senses.(環境描寫) 2.The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes，with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.(環境描寫) 3.And down by the sea，the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.(環境描寫) 4.On a quiet morning in the mountains，feel the sun on your skin，and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.(動作描寫＋擬人修辭) 5.With all this beauty，it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music，dancing and dining.(情感描寫)
續寫語料運用
請從以上語料中選擇合適的詞匯，完成以下語段。然后核對答案并背誦該語段。
隨著我們靠近被群山圍繞的宿營地，我們難以抑制心中的興奮。一到達宿營地，媽媽就立即打開車門，沖了出去，熱切地催促我們搭帳篷。綠樹連綿起伏，各色野花點綴其中，周圍迷人的風景堪稱一場名副其實的視覺盛宴。我們沐浴著陽光，呼吸著鮮花甜美的芬芳。鳥兒在歡快地歌唱，好像在熱情地迎接我們。我的家人愜意地聊著天，過去美好的記憶涌上我們心頭。
As we 1.approached the camping site surrounded by mountains，we had difficulty containing our excitement.On reaching it，my mom opened the door of the car immediately,2.charged outside and eagerly urged us to put up the tent.3.The surrounding fascinating landscape was a true feast for our eyes,4.with rolling green trees dotted with various wild flowers.We were bathed in the sun and 5.breathed in the sweet scent of fresh flowers.Birds were singing happily as if 6.(they were) greeting us warmly.My family chatted comfortably,7.with sweet memories of the past crowding in on us.(共32張PPT)
Period 5
Writing
History and
traditions
Unit 4
內容索引
寫作一　應用文寫作——介紹類說明文
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
寫作一　應用文寫作——介紹類說明文
本單元的寫作項目是描述一個喜歡的地點，屬于介紹類說明文，要求學生比較生動、細致地描寫所熟悉地點的景物，并恰當地表達自己的感受。
常用表達
1.開頭部分常用表達
It is located/lies in...with an area of...
它位于……，面積為……
It covers an area of...with a history of...
它的面積為……，有著……的歷史。
Located in...and covering an area of...，...is one of China’s most famous scenic spots.
……位于……，面積……，是中國最著名的景區之一。
The history of...dates back to...
……的歷史可追溯到……
It has become the most popular tourist attraction since...
它自……起就是最受歡迎的旅游景點。
2.主體部分常用表達
There are many places of interest，such as...
這里有很多旅游勝地，如……
You can enjoy...which has a high reputation both at home and abroad.
你可以欣賞在海內外都享有盛譽的……
...is/are attracting more and more tourists.
……正吸引著越來越多的游客。
An interesting feature of...is...
……的一個有趣的特點是……
With its pleasant climate，rich natural resources and beautiful scenery，...is one of China’s major tourist cities.
有著宜人的氣候、豐富的自然資源和美麗的景觀，……是中國主要的旅游城市之一。
A trip along...will enable you to get to know...沿著……游覽將使你得以領略……
3.結尾部分常用表達
...is well worth visiting.
……非常值得一游。
...is a place you have to visit and the extraordinary view will make you unwilling to leave.
……是一個必去的地方，其非凡的景觀會令你流連忘返。
假如你是李華，請你給某英文報社的“城市風采”欄目寫一篇短文，介紹我們偉大祖國的首都——北京，要點如下：
1.基本概況：人口約2 000萬，面積16 000多平方千米，位于華北平原北部；
2.歷史與文化：有3 000多年的歷史，是我國的政治、文化中心，有很多大學，其中清華大學和北京大學是最著名的；
3.交通與旅游：交通便利；有天安門廣場、故宮博物院、長城、國家體育場等很多旅游景點。
典例演練
第一步　審題謀篇
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯　(單元寫作詞匯運用)
1.位于
2.有著……的歷史
3.吸引……的注意
4.極有吸引力的
5.還，和，又
______________
_________________
_____________________
__________
_________
(be) located in
have a history of
draw the attention of
fascinating
as well as
1.北京人口約2 000萬，面積16 000多平方千米。
Beijing about 20 million and more than 16,000 square kilometers.
2.北京位于華北平原北部。
Beijing the north of the North China Plain.
3.北京是中國的政治、文化中心。
Beijing is of China.
has a population of
covers an area of
連詞成句　(教材句式仿寫)
is located in
the political and cultural center
4.北京主辦了2008年奧運會和2022年冬奧會，都是巨大的成功。
Beijing ________________________________________________________
___________，which turned out to be great successes.
5.北京有許多重點大學，其中北京大學和清華大學是最著名的。
Beijing has many key universities， Peking University and Tsinghua University are the most famous.
6.北京也是一個度假的好去處，且交通便利。
Beijing is also and it’s convenient to travel there.
hosted the 2008 Olympic Games and the 2022 Winter Olympic
Games
among which
a fascinating place to enjoy your holiday
7.有許多名勝古跡可供選擇，如天安門廣場、故宮博物院、長城和國家體育場，北京將給游客們留下深刻的印象。
，such as Tian’anmen Square，the Palace Museum，the Great Wall as well as the National Stadium，visitors will be deeply impressed by Beijing.
With many places of interest to choose from
1.把句1和句2合并為含有定語從句的句子。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.把句3和句4合并為含有現在分詞短語作狀語的句子。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Beijing that/which is located in the north of the North China Plain has a population of about 20 million and covers an area of more than 16,000 square kilometers.
第三步　句式升級
Being the political and cultural center of China，Beijing hosted the 2008 Olympic Games and the 2022 Winter Olympic Games，which turned out to be great successes.
第四步　組句成篇
用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語短文。
參考范文
Beijing，the capital of China，is a beautiful city.
Beijing which is located in the north of the North China Plain has a population of about 20 million and covers an area of more than 16,000 square kilometers.
Beijing has a long history of over 3,000 years.Being the political and cultural center of China，Beijing hosted the 2008 Olympic Games and the 2022 Winter Olympic Games，which turned out to be great successes.Beijing has many key universities，among which Peking University and Tsinghua University are the most famous.
Beijing is also a fascinating place to enjoy your holiday and it’s convenient to travel there.With many places of interest to choose from，such as Tian’anmen Square，the Palace Museum，the Great Wall as well as the National Stadium，visitors will be deeply impressed by Beijing.
Now，Beijing is playing an increasingly important role in the world.
假定你是李華，你的愛爾蘭朋友Scarlett暑假將與父母來你所在的城市游玩，發郵件請你推薦游玩的地方。請你回復郵件，內容包括：
1.你建議的景點；2.你的理由；3.你的祝愿。
注意：1.寫作詞數應為80個左右；
2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。
達標檢測
參考范文
Dear Scarlett，
Learning that you’re eager to visit my city with your parents during this summer vacation，I’m more than pleased to offer you some suggestions.
Above all，I’d like to recommend the fascinating Ocean Park to you，which belongs to M & L Company.Besides，with different kinds of sea animals，you can enjoy a lovely dolphin show，where the dolphins will jump out of the water and give you an amazing performance.I hold the strong belief that you will all like it.What’s more，Ocean Park is not far from our snack street，and you can enjoy delicious Chinese snacks there.
返 回
Please send my regards to your parents.Wish you an enjoyable trip!
Yours，
Li Hua
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
Ⅰ.增分語料積累
Ⅰ.增分語料積累
讀后續寫高級句式升級：狀語從句
狀語從句是英語讀后續寫中經常使用的從句之一，因此必須學會并熟練運用狀語從句，使寫作的句型更加豐富，邏輯感更強。
A wave of happiness and excitement swept over him when he learned that his son was admitted.
當他得知他的兒子被錄取時，一陣幸福和興奮涌上他的心頭。
Only when I received the award did I fully understand the value of my teacher’s encouragement with my writing.
只有當我獲獎時，我才完全理解了老師在我的寫作方面給予我的鼓勵的意義。
Hardly had he stepped onto the stage when the audience burst into thunderous applause.
他一踏上舞臺，觀眾就爆發出了雷鳴般的掌聲。
Exhausted as he was from the long journey，he forced himself to stay awake and calm.
盡管長途跋涉讓他疲憊不堪，他還是強迫自己保持清醒和冷靜。
Such great challenges did he face that his determination was truly put to the test.
他面臨著如此巨大的挑戰，以至于他的決心受到了真正的考驗。
[即時訓練]　根據漢語提示補全句子
1.他一看到機會，就抓住繩子，爬上了懸崖。
when he grabbed the rope and climbed up the cliff.
2.這個故事如此感人，以至于房間里的每個人都感動得流下了眼淚。
that everyone in the room was moved to tears.
3.我認為你會很快適應它們的，盡管天氣與食物都與你以往的不同。
，I think that you will quickly adjust to them.
Hardly had he seen the opportunity
So touching was the story
Different as the weather and the food are from yours
Ⅱ.教材語料積累
詞匯 情感 描寫 eager adj.熱切的；渴望的→eagerly adv.熱切地；渴望地　puzzle n.謎；智力游戲；疑問 vt.迷惑；使困惑→puzzling adj.令人困惑的→puzzled adj.困惑的　fascinating adj.極有吸引力的；迷人的→fascinate v.深深吸引；迷住→fascinated adj.著迷的
環境 描寫 landscape n.(陸上，尤指鄉村的)風景　scent n.氣味；氣息　dot n.點；小(圓)點 vt.加點；遍布　ocean n.大海；海洋　belong vi.應在(某處)；適應　surround vt.圍繞；包圍→surrounding adj.周圍的；附近的→surroundings n.環境　location n.地方；地點；位置→located adj.坐落在；位于
詞匯 動作 描寫 conquer vt.占領；征服；控制　battle vi.& vt.搏斗；奮斗　charge vt.收費；控告；充電 vi.猛沖　approach vt.接近；接洽；著手處理 vi.(在時間上)靠近　roll vi.& vt.(使)翻滾；(使)滾動 n.翻滾　roar vi.& n.吼叫；咆哮　greet vt.問候；迎接　defence n.防御；保衛→defend vt.防御；保衛　crowd vt.擠滿；使……擁擠　break away (from sb/sth)脫離；背叛；
逃脫
句型 1.Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all，offering something for each of the senses.(環境描寫)
2.The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes，with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.(環境描寫)
3.And down by the sea，the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.(環境描寫)
4.On a quiet morning in the mountains，feel the sun on your skin，and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.(動作描寫＋擬人修辭)
5.With all this beauty，it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music，dancing and dining.(情感描寫)
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隨著我們靠近被群山圍繞的宿營地，我們難以抑制心中的興奮。一到達宿營地，媽媽就立即打開車門，沖了出去，熱切地催促我們搭帳篷。
As we 1. ，we had difficulty containing our excitement.On reaching it，my mom opened the door of the car immediately,2.__________________________________
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approached the camping site surrounded by mountains
charged outside and eagerly urged us to
put up the tent
綠樹連綿起伏，各色野花點綴其中，周圍迷人的風景堪稱一場名副其實的視覺盛宴。我們沐浴著陽光，呼吸著鮮花甜美的芬芳。鳥兒在歡快地歌唱，好像在熱情地迎接我們。我的家人愜意地聊著天，過去美好的記憶涌上我們心頭。
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3. was a true feast for our eyes,4. .We were bathed in the sun and 5. .Birds were singing happily as if 6. warmly.My family chatted comfortably,7. .
The surrounding fascinating landscape
with rolling green trees dotted with various wild flowers
breathed in the sweet scent of fresh flowers
(they were) greeting us
with sweet memories of the past crowding in on us
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