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Period 5　Writing
寫作一　應用文寫作——博客
本單元的寫作任務要求寫一篇“博客”。博客是以網絡作為載體，簡易、迅速、便捷地發布自己的心得，及時、有效、輕松地與他人進行交流，集豐富多彩的個性化展示于一體的綜合性寫作形式，通常稱為“網絡日志”。
1．常用的開頭語
Recently，the problem of...has aroused people’s concern.最近，……問題引起了人們的關注。
It is commonly believed that.../It is a common belief that...人們普遍認為……
Many people insist that...許多人堅持認為……
With the development of science and technology，more and more people believe that...隨著科技的發展，越來越多的人認為……
2．主體部分常用表達
The problem has been mentioned and stressed in our society more frequently than ever before.這個問題比以往任何時候更頻繁地在社會上被提及和強調。
Some people，maybe，hold the view that...while I still think...
一些人或許堅持……的觀點，而我仍然認為……
However，some argue that...
然而一些人認為……
Just as an old saying goes，every coin has two sides.正如一句諺語所說，每個硬幣都有兩面(凡事有利弊)。
3．常用的結束語
As for me/From my point of view/Personally (speaking)，...就我而言，……
Frankly speaking，I am and will be for the opinion that...
坦白說，我現在支持將來也支持……的觀點
As I see it，I still support the opinion that...
在我看來，我仍然支持……觀點。
Post your comments below!
在下面留下你的評論！
隨著網絡的發展，人們消費觀念的轉變，購物方式也在悄然發生變化。“網購”已成為一種時尚，越來越多的學生也正加入網購群體。請你根據以下提示，在你的博客上寫一篇關于網上購物的文章。
優點：
1．足不出戶，節約時間；
2．價格通常比較便宜；
3．可供選擇的范圍廣，種類多。
缺點：
1．只能看到圖片，看不到商品本身；
2．容易買到質量不好的商品。
注意：可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
第一步　審題謀篇
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯　(單元寫作詞匯運用)
1．擁有……的機會have access to
2．從……中受益benefit from
3．做某事對某人來說是便利的it is convenient for sb to do sth
4．點擊click
5．商品goods
6．由于 on account of
連詞成句　(教材句式仿寫)
1．互聯網越流行，越多的人將有機會在網上購物。
The more popular the Internet becomes，the more people will have access to online shopping.
2．我們從網上購物中獲益頗多。
We can benefit a lot from online shopping.
3．對我們來說，僅僅通過點擊鼠標而不用出門買到我們所感興趣的東西很方便。
It is very convenient for us to buy what we’re interested in just by a click of the mouse without going outdoors.
4．有如此多樣的商品，我們可以自由選擇價格比較低的。
There are such various goods that we can freely choose the ones whose prices are lower.
5．我們收到的東西常常讓我們因為只在網上看到圖片而感到沮喪和失望。
What we receive often makes us upset and disappointed on account of only seeing pictures on the Internet.
6．有時我們發現我們買的商品質量不好。
Sometimes we find that the goods we have bought are of poor quality.
7．你對于如何有效網上購物的見解是什么呢？
What’s your opinion about how to shop online effectively
第三步　句式升級
將句6用“find＋賓語＋賓語補足語”升級。
Sometimes we find the goods we have bought of poor quality.
第四步　組句成篇
用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語短文。
參考范文
The more popular the Internet becomes，the more people will have access to online shopping.
We can benefit a lot from online shopping.First，it is very convenient for us to buy what we’re interested in just by a click of the mouse without going outdoors.Second，there are such various goods that we can freely choose the ones whose prices are lower.However，just as an old saying goes，every coin has two sides.First，what we receive often makes us upset and disappointed on account of only seeing pictures on the Internet.Second，sometimes we find the goods we have bought of poor quality.
What’s your opinion about how to shop online effectively？Post your comments below!
隨著科技的發展和互聯網的普及，網絡教學得到了越來越多的推廣。現請你以“The Advantages and Disadvantages of Online Education”為題，結合以下要點寫一篇博客：
1．網絡教學的利弊以及你的理由；
2．你的看法及建議。
注意：1.寫作詞數應為80個左右；
2．請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。
參考范文
The Advantages and Disadvantages of Online Education
As the Internet becomes increasingly popular，more and more schools and students concentrate on online education.There is no doubt that it has some advantages.Firstly，online education isn’t limited by time and place，so students have access to their study materials whenever and wherever they like.Secondly，online education frees teachers from repeating the same teaching contents since the video can be played over and over again.However，online education also has some disadvantages.With online courses，students have to spend more time using computers，which contributes to the loss of their eyesight.And online education will reduce the communication between students and teachers，which will lead to the lack of learning atmosphere.
Personally，if traditional teaching and online education can be combined，more fruitful education can certainly be realized.
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
Ⅰ.增分語料積累
讀后續寫高級句式升級：定語從句
詞、句是構成篇章的基本語言單位。各類復合句和特殊句式的恰當使用能體現學生對語言的駕馭能力。其中，定語從句的正確使用能夠豐富續寫文章的細節描寫，增強上下文的邏輯連貫性，提升語言豐富度。
Opening the door，an old man stood there，who was dressed in dirty clothing and wearing dirty rubber boots.打開門，一位老人站在那里，他穿著臟衣服和臟橡膠靴。
His friend，whose patience had worn thin，phoned to complain.他朋友的耐心已經被消磨殆盡，打電話來抱怨。
He sprang to his feet and exclaimed，“I have a great idea！I have a solution that/which we can all help accomplish.” 他站起來，喊道：“我有一個好主意！我有一個我們都可以幫助完成的解決方案。”
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp，which was surrounded by a high wire fence.
饑餓的熊聞著味道來到我們的營地，營地被高高的鐵絲網包圍著。
(2024·新課標Ⅰ)Gunter，with whom I had a rather pleasant journey to the bus station，showed great kindness and trust.
甘特，我和他一起經歷了一段相當愉快的前往汽車站的旅程，他表現出了極大的善意和信任。
[即時訓練]　根據漢語提示補全句子
1．安迪收到了 17 歲的羅斯發來的一條短信，羅斯承認拿了那個錢包，并解釋了他這么做的原因。
Andy got a text from 17-year-old Ross, who admitted having taken the wallet and explained the reason why he had done that.
2．我永遠不會忘記那個讓我心動的女孩，她的笑容如同陽光般溫暖。
I will never forget the girl who made my heart beat faster，whose smile was as warm as the sunshine.
3．然而，在餐桌上迎接我的是一包微波爐加熱食品，它讓我想起了母親做的飯菜。
However，what greeted me at the table was a microwave package，which reminded me of my mother’s cooking.
Ⅱ.教材語料積累
詞匯 情感描寫 stuck adj.卡住；陷(入)；困(于)　tough adj.艱難的；嚴厲的　upset adj.心煩的；苦惱的；沮喪的 vt.使煩惱；使生氣；攪亂　rude adj.粗魯的；無禮的　embarrassing adj.讓人難堪(尷尬；害羞)的→embarrassed adj.感到難堪(尷尬)的→embarrassment n．尷尬
人物描寫 chat vi.聊天；閑聊　stream vi.流動　make fun of取笑；戲弄　go through經歷；度過；通讀
句型 1.At age 50，she found herself out of work and stuck at home with only her computer to keep her company.(擬人) 2.She no longer feels lonely，and her company has become quite successful.(情感描寫) 3.She was so inspired by the people she met online that she decided to start an IT club to teach older people how to use computers and the Internet.(情感描寫) 4.When you go through tough times，you meet others who are facing similar challenges.Thinking about other people’s situations inspired me to offer help.(主旨升華) 5.However，the more polite you are，the less likely it is you will be attacked.(對比)
續寫語料運用
請從以上語料中選擇合適的詞匯，完成以下語段。然后核對答案并背誦該語段。
早晨在校車上，我在和朋友們興高采烈地聊天。在一個站點，Fat Ryan匆忙上了車，意外地被一個人的腳絆倒了，趴在了地上。害怕被取笑，Ryan掙扎著站起來，他的臉尷尬得通紅。他陷于如此尷尬的境地，他僵在那里。他如此沮喪和尷尬，淚水止不住地順著臉往下流。他在經歷一個多么艱難的時刻啊！
On the school bus in the morning，I 1.was chatting with my friends cheerfully.At one stop，Fat Ryan got on hurriedly，tripped over someone’s foot accidentally and fell flat onto the floor.2.Afraid of being made fun of，Ryan struggled to his feet，his face burning 3.with embarrassment.He 4.was stuck in such an embarrassing situation，and he froze there.So 5.upset and embarrassed was he that tears streamed down his face uncontrollably.6.What a tough moment he was going through!(共28張PPT)
Period 5
Writing
The Internet
Unit 3
內容索引
寫作一　應用文寫作——博客
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
寫作一　應用文寫作——博客
本單元的寫作任務要求寫一篇“博客”。博客是以網絡作為載體，簡易、迅速、便捷地發布自己的心得，及時、有效、輕松地與他人進行交流，集豐富多彩的個性化展示于一體的綜合性寫作形式，通常稱為“網絡日志”。
常用表達
1.常用的開頭語
Recently，the problem of...has aroused people’s concern.最近，……問題引起了人們的關注。
It is commonly believed that.../It is a common belief that...人們普遍認為……
Many people insist that...許多人堅持認為……
With the development of science and technology，more and more people believe that...隨著科技的發展，越來越多的人認為……
2.主體部分常用表達
The problem has been mentioned and stressed in our society more frequently than ever before.這個問題比以往任何時候更頻繁地在社會上被提及和強調。
Some people，maybe，hold the view that...while I still think...
一些人或許堅持……的觀點，而我仍然認為……
However，some argue that...
然而一些人認為……
Just as an old saying goes，every coin has two sides.正如一句諺語所說，每個硬幣都有兩面(凡事有利弊)。
3.常用的結束語
As for me/From my point of view/Personally (speaking)，...就我而言，……
Frankly speaking，I am and will be for the opinion that...
坦白說，我現在支持將來也支持……的觀點
As I see it，I still support the opinion that...
在我看來，我仍然支持……觀點。
Post your comments below!
在下面留下你的評論！
隨著網絡的發展，人們消費觀念的轉變，購物方式也在悄然發生變化。“網購”已成為一種時尚，越來越多的學生也正加入網購群體。請你根據以下提示，在你的博客上寫一篇關于網上購物的文章。
優點：
1.足不出戶，節約時間；
2.價格通常比較便宜；
3.可供選擇的范圍廣，種類多。
缺點：
1.只能看到圖片，看不到商品本身；
2.容易買到質量不好的商品。
注意：可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
典例演練
第一步　審題謀篇
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯　(單元寫作詞匯運用)
1.擁有……的機會
2.從……中受益
3.做某事對某人來說是便利的
4.點擊
5.商品
6.由于
______________
_____________
____________________________
______
_______
_______________
have access to
benefit from
it is convenient for sb to do sth
click
goods
on account of
1.互聯網越流行，越多的人將有機會在網上購物。
，the more people will have access to online shopping.
2.我們從網上購物中獲益頗多。
____________________________________________________________
3.對我們來說，僅僅通過點擊鼠標而不用出門買到我們所感興趣的東西很方便。
just by a click of the mouse without going outdoors.
The more popular the Internet becomes
We can benefit a lot from online shopping.
連詞成句　(教材句式仿寫)
It is very convenient for us to buy what we’re interested in
4.有如此多樣的商品，我們可以自由選擇價格比較低的。
we can freely choose the ones whose prices are lower.
5.我們收到的東西常常讓我們因為只在網上看到圖片而感到沮喪和失望。
What we receive often makes us upset and disappointed_______________
_________________________________.
6.有時我們發現我們買的商品質量不好。
_______________________________________________________________
7.你對于如何有效網上購物的見解是什么呢？
___________________________________________________
There are such various goods that
on account of
only seeing pictures on the Internet
Sometimes we find that the goods we have bought are of poor quality.
What’s your opinion about how to shop online effectively
將句6用“find＋賓語＋賓語補足語”升級。
_______________________________________________________________
Sometimes we find the goods we have bought of poor quality.
第三步　句式升級
第四步　組句成篇
用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語短文。
參考范文
The more popular the Internet becomes，the more people will have access to online shopping.
We can benefit a lot from online shopping.First，it is very convenient for us to buy what we’re interested in just by a click of the mouse without going outdoors.Second，there are such various goods that we can freely choose the ones whose prices are lower.However，just as an old saying goes，every coin has two sides.First，what we receive often makes us upset and disappointed on account of only seeing pictures on the Internet.Second，sometimes we find the goods we have bought of poor quality.
What’s your opinion about how to shop online effectively？Post your comments below!
隨著科技的發展和互聯網的普及，網絡教學得到了越來越多的推廣。現請你以“The Advantages and Disadvantages of Online Education”為題，結合以下要點寫一篇博客：
1.網絡教學的利弊以及你的理由；
2.你的看法及建議。
注意：1.寫作詞數應為80個左右；
2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。
達標檢測
參考范文
The Advantages and Disadvantages of Online Education
As the Internet becomes increasingly popular，more and more schools and students concentrate on online education.There is no doubt that it has some advantages.Firstly，online education isn’t limited by time and place，so students have access to their study materials whenever and wherever they like.Secondly，online education frees teachers from repeating the same teaching contents since the video can be played over and over again.
返 回
However，online education also has some disadvantages.With online courses，students have to spend more time using computers，which contributes to the loss of their eyesight.And online education will reduce the communication between students and teachers，which will lead to the lack of learning atmosphere.
Personally，if traditional teaching and online education can be combined，more fruitful education can certainly be realized.
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
Ⅰ.增分語料積累
讀后續寫高級句式升級：定語從句
詞、句是構成篇章的基本語言單位。各類復合句和特殊句式的恰當使用能體現學生對語言的駕馭能力。其中，定語從句的正確使用能夠豐富續寫文章的細節描寫，增強上下文的邏輯連貫性，提升語言豐富度。
Opening the door，an old man stood there，who was dressed in dirty clothing and wearing dirty rubber boots.打開門，一位老人站在那里，他穿著臟衣服和臟橡膠靴。
His friend，whose patience had worn thin，phoned to complain.他朋友的耐心已經被消磨殆盡，打電話來抱怨。
He sprang to his feet and exclaimed，“I have a great idea！I have a solution that/which we can all help accomplish.” 他站起來，喊道：“我有一個好主意！我有一個我們都可以幫助完成的解決方案。”
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp，which was surrounded by a high wire fence.
饑餓的熊聞著味道來到我們的營地，營地被高高的鐵絲網包圍著。
(2024·新課標Ⅰ)Gunter，with whom I had a rather pleasant journey to the bus station，showed great kindness and trust.
甘特，我和他一起經歷了一段相當愉快的前往汽車站的旅程，他表現出了極大的善意和信任。
[即時訓練]　根據漢語提示補全句子
1.安迪收到了 17 歲的羅斯發來的一條短信，羅斯承認拿了那個錢包，并解釋了他這么做的原因。
Andy got a text from 17-year-old Ross, ___________________________
_____________and explained the reason _____________________.
2.我永遠不會忘記那個讓我心動的女孩，她的笑容如同陽光般溫暖。
I will never forget the girl who made my heart beat faster，____________
__________________________.
who admitted having taken
the wallet
whose smile
was as warm as the sunshine
why he had done that
3.然而，在餐桌上迎接我的是一包微波爐加熱食品，它讓我想起了母親做的飯菜。
However，what greeted me at the table was a microwave package，_______________________________________.
which reminded me of my mother’s cooking
Ⅱ.教材語料積累
詞匯 情感描寫 stuck adj.卡住；陷(入)；困(于)　tough adj.艱難的；嚴厲的　upset adj.心煩的；苦惱的；沮喪的 vt.使煩惱；使生氣；攪亂　rude adj.粗魯的；無禮的　embarrassing adj.讓人難堪(尷尬；害羞)的→embarrassed adj.感到難堪(尷尬)的→embarrassment n.尷尬
人物描寫 chat vi.聊天；閑聊　stream vi.流動　make fun of取笑；戲弄　go through經歷；度過；通讀
句型 1.At age 50，she found herself out of work and stuck at home with only her computer to keep her company.(擬人)
2.She no longer feels lonely，and her company has become quite successful.(情感描寫)
3.She was so inspired by the people she met online that she decided to start an IT club to teach older people how to use computers and the Internet.(情感描寫)
4.When you go through tough times，you meet others who are facing similar challenges.Thinking about other people’s situations inspired me to offer help.
(主旨升華)
5.However，the more polite you are，the less likely it is you will be attacked.
(對比)
續寫語料運用
請從以上語料中選擇合適的詞匯，完成以下語段。然后核對答案并背誦該語段。
早晨在校車上，我在和朋友們興高采烈地聊天。在一個站點，Fat Ryan匆忙上了車，意外地被一個人的腳絆倒了，趴在了地上。
On the school bus in the morning，I 1._________________________ cheerfully.At one stop，Fat Ryan got on hurriedly，tripped over someone’s foot accidentally and fell flat onto the floor.
was chatting with my friends
害怕被取笑，Ryan掙扎著站起來，他的臉尷尬得通紅。他陷于如此尷尬的境地，他僵在那里。他如此沮喪和尷尬，淚水止不住地順著臉往下流。他在經歷一個多么艱難的時刻啊！
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2. ，Ryan struggled to his feet，his face burning 3. .He 4._______________________________
__________，and he froze there.So 5.____________________________ that tears streamed down his face uncontrollably.6.___________________
____________________!
Afraid of being made fun of
with embarrassment
was stuck in such an embarrassing
situation
upset and embarrassed was he
What a tough moment
he was going through
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