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Section Ⅴ　Writing Workshop
Activity 1　Read for details [細節把握]
1．Why was Lang Ping named “Iron Hammer”？
A．Because she played on China’s national volleyball team during the 1980s.
B．Because she played volleyball in a strong and powerful style.
C．Because she led her team to win a series of success.
D．Because she played volleyball with an iron hammer in hand.
答案　B
2．What can we know from the second paragraph
A．China’s national volleyball team won several medals in the 1980s.
B．Lang Ping was recognised only because of the great success she achieved.
C．Lang Ping was the coach of China’s national volleyball team in the 1980s.
D．Lang Ping played on China’s national volleyball team for more than ten years.
答案　A
3．Which is the right order of what Lang Ping did according to the passage
a．Lang Ping became the coach of the women’s national team.
b．Lang Ping worked as a volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.
c．Lang Ping played on China’s national volleyball team.
d．Lang Ping was given the Best Coach and the Sports Special Contribution awards at the CCTV Sports Personality Awards.
A．a，b，d，c B．b，c，a，d
C．c，b，a，d D．a，b，c，d
答案　C
4．What can we know about Lang Ping according to the passage
A．She is the best volleyball coach both at home and abroad.
B．She is the most popular figure in China’s volleyball history.
C．She is successful as a volleyball coach now in the United States and India.
D．She has been a volleyball star for over forty-five years and has contributed greatly to the sport.
答案　B
Activity 2　Read for structures [文章架構]
Fill in the blanks according to the article you read on P40.
Activity 3　Read for language features [增分靚句]
寫某一個人的傳記要以時間為線索介紹這個人的主要事跡，因此要學會用不同的方式來表示時間。本文中表示時間的句子有：
答案　1.Lang Ping played on China’s national volleyball team during the 1980s.
2．Lang Ping was a member of the team when they achieved a series of success including gold medals at the 1984 Olympics...
3．After retiring as an athlete in 1986，she became a successful volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.
4．In 1995，she returned to become the coach of the women’s national team...
5．That year，Lang Ping was given the Best Coach and the Sports Special Contribution awards...
6．She was also named “Touching China Personality” of 2016.
本單元的寫作任務是寫一篇人物介紹。
在描寫人物時，我們可以通過以下三個部分來寫作：
1．首段常用句式
Born in...，sb is a/an...in...出生于……，某人是在……領域的一位……
He is a/an...(外貌特征) person with...他長得……
2．中段常用句式
When he was in...，he was enthusiastic about...and determined to do...
當他在……的時候，他對……充滿熱情，并決心要做……
He has a talent for...他擅長……
In...(時間)，he graduated with honor/won a gold medal for the first time.
在……時，他光榮畢業/第一次獲得了金牌。
He applied himself to/was committed to...他投身于……
3．尾段常用句式
He made a great contribution to...and was honored as one of the most important...
他對……做出了重要貢獻，被認為是最重要的……之一。
He sets a good example to...and he is respected and admired by many people.
他為……樹立了好榜樣并被很多人尊重和仰慕。
請以Madame Curie為題，寫一篇英語短文，要點如下：
1．Madame Curie是一位世界著名的女科學家，1867年出生于波蘭的一個教師家庭，卒于1934年。
2．從小愛學習并希望成為科學家，24歲赴巴黎就讀于巴黎大學，學習刻苦。
3．一生致力于科學研究，于1903年和1911年分別榮獲諾貝爾物理學獎和諾貝爾化學獎。
4．居里夫人將作為一位偉大的女性永遠為人們所懷念。
注意：
1．寫作詞數應為80個左右；
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
第一步　審題謀篇
審題
寫作要求是寫一篇人物介紹。寫作時應注意下列幾點：
1．確定文體：這是一篇記敘文，寫作中應注意常規格式；
2．主體時態：介紹人物經歷以一般過去時為主；寫評價以一般現在時為主；
3．主體人稱：第三人稱為主。
謀篇
第一段：介紹居里夫人的身份和生卒時間。
第二段：簡單介紹居里夫人的學習經歷，重點介紹她的成就。
第三段：人們對于居里夫人的評價。
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯　(含本單元詞匯)
1．世界著名的world-famous
2．出生于(……家庭)be born into
3．被……錄取/就讀于……be admitted to
4．致力于apply/devote/commit oneself to
5．被授予……be awarded...
6．被譽為/認可為 be honored/recognis(z)ed as
7．做出巨大貢獻make great contributions to
8．奉獻devotion
連詞成句　(含本單元句型)
1．居里夫人是一位世界著名的科學家，她于1867年出生在波蘭的一個教師家庭，1934年去世。
Madame Curie is a world-famous scientist，and she was born into a teacher’s family in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.
2．在她還是一名學生時，她很勤奮，并決心成為一名科學家。
When she was a school girl，she was diligent and determined to become a scientist.
3．她一生致力于科學研究，并于1903年獲得諾貝爾物理學獎，1911年獲得諾貝爾化學獎。
She applied/devoted/committed herself to scientific research and was awarded Nobel Physics Prize in 1903 and Nobel Chemistry Prize in 1911.
4．眾所周知，因為她為科學做出了巨大的貢獻，她被譽為最偉大的科學家和女性之一。(what 引導名詞性從句)
What was known to the world was that she has made great contributions to science，for which she was honored/recognised as one of the greatest scientists and women.
第三步　句式升級
1．用同位語把句1轉化成一個簡單句。
Madame Curie，a world-famous scientist，was born into a teacher’s family in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.
2．用形容詞短語作狀語改寫句2。
Determined to become a scientist，she was diligent when she was a school girl.
3．用現在分詞短語作狀語改寫句3。
Having applied/devoted/committed herself to scientific research，she was awarded Nobel Physics Prize in 1903 and Nobel Chemistry Prize in 1911.
第四步　組句成篇
用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇英語短文。
參考范文
Madame Curie，a world-famous scientist，was born into a teacher’s family in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.
Determined to become a scientist，she was diligent when she was a school girl.At the age of 24，she was admitted to Paris University and studied hard there.Her hard work paid off.Having applied/devoted/committed herself to scientific research，she was awarded Nobel Physics Prize in 1903 and Nobel Chemistry Prize in 1911.
What was known to the world was that she has made great contributions to science，for which she was honored/recognised as one of the greatest scientists and women.
你校準備在新建的“名人長廊”中為每一位名人畫像配上英語介紹，以便讓同學們有更多的機會學習英語。請你根據以下信息寫一篇80詞左右的短文介紹郎平。
1．郎平，1960年12月10日出生于天津市。1973年，13歲的郎平開始練習打排球；
2．1978年，因在全國排球比賽中表現突出，進入國家隊；
3．從1980年起，郎平獲得了很多榮譽及獎勵；
4．退役后，郎平成為排球教練。2016年，郎平帶領中國女排，時隔12年，在里約奧運會(the Rio Olympic Games)上獲得金牌；
5．郎平是中國第一位作為球員和教練員均奪取奧運會冠軍的排球運動員。
參考范文
Lang Ping，who was born on Dec.10th,1960，is generally acknowledged to be a remarkable volleyball coach.
She insisted on practising playing volleyball at the age of 13 and joined the national team several years later as a consequence of her extraordinary performance.She was committed to volleyball，consequently，obtaining numerous awards.After retiring from the volleyball team，she took up a position as a volleyball coach.Her powerful team defeated many other teams.In 2016，she led the Chinese Women Volleyball Team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games with the objective of winning the gold medal and they made it.
Apparently，Lang Ping is the first volleyball player to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach in China.(共29張PPT)
Section Ⅴ
Writing Workshop
SUCCESS
UNIT 2
內容索引
Part 1　品讀文本學寫法
Part 2　熟悉技法練寫作
品讀文本學寫法
1.Why was Lang Ping named “Iron Hammer”？
A.Because she played on China’s national volleyball team during the
　1980s.
B.Because she played volleyball in a strong and powerful style.
C.Because she led her team to win a series of success.
D.Because she played volleyball with an iron hammer in hand.
Activity 1　Read for details [細節把握]
√
2.What can we know from the second paragraph
A.China’s national volleyball team won several medals in the 1980s.
B.Lang Ping was recognised only because of the great success she
achieved.
C.Lang Ping was the coach of China’s national volleyball team in the
1980s.
D.Lang Ping played on China’s national volleyball team for more than
ten years.
√
3.Which is the right order of what Lang Ping did according to the passage
a.Lang Ping became the coach of the women’s national team.
b.Lang Ping worked as a volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.
c.Lang Ping played on China’s national volleyball team.
d.Lang Ping was given the Best Coach and the Sports Special Contribution awards at the CCTV Sports Personality Awards.
A.a，b，d，c B.b，c，a，d
C.c，b，a，d D.a，b，c，d
√
4.What can we know about Lang Ping according to the passage
A.She is the best volleyball coach both at home and abroad.
B.She is the most popular figure in China’s volleyball history.
C.She is successful as a volleyball coach now in the United States and
India.
D.She has been a volleyball star for over forty-five years and has
contributed greatly to the sport.
√
Fill in the blanks according to the article you read on P40.
Activity 2　Read for structures [文章架構]
introduction
Important life
experience
Major awards/achievements
comments
寫某一個人的傳記要以時間為線索介紹這個人的主要事跡，因此要學會用不同的方式來表示時間。本文中表示時間的句子有：
Activity 3　Read for language features [增分靚句]
答案　1.Lang Ping played on China’s national volleyball team during the 1980s.
2.Lang Ping was a member of the team when they achieved a series of success including gold medals at the 1984 Olympics...
3.After retiring as an athlete in 1986，she became a successful volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.
4.In 1995，she returned to become the coach of the women’s national team...
5.That year，Lang Ping was given the Best Coach and the Sports Special Contribution awards...
6.She was also named “Touching China Personality” of 2016.
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熟悉技法練寫作
本單元的寫作任務是寫一篇人物介紹。
在描寫人物時，我們可以通過以下三個部分來寫作：
常用表達
1.首段常用句式
Born in...，sb is a/an...in...出生于……，某人是在……領域的一位……
He is a/an...(外貌特征) person with...他長得……
2.中段常用句式
When he was in...，he was enthusiastic about...and determined to do...
當他在……的時候，他對……充滿熱情，并決心要做……
He has a talent for...他擅長……
In...(時間)，he graduated with honor/won a gold medal for the first time.
在……時，他光榮畢業/第一次獲得了金牌。
He applied himself to/was committed to...他投身于……
3.尾段常用句式
He made a great contribution to...and was honored as one of the most important...
他對……做出了重要貢獻，被認為是最重要的……之一。
He sets a good example to...and he is respected and admired by many people.
他為……樹立了好榜樣并被很多人尊重和仰慕。
分步演練
請以Madame Curie為題，寫一篇英語短文，要點如下：
1.Madame Curie是一位世界著名的女科學家，1867年出生于波蘭的一個教師家庭，卒于1934年。
2.從小愛學習并希望成為科學家，24歲赴巴黎就讀于巴黎大學，學習刻苦。
3.一生致力于科學研究，于1903年和1911年分別榮獲諾貝爾物理學獎和諾貝爾化學獎。
4.居里夫人將作為一位偉大的女性永遠為人們所懷念。
注意：
1.寫作詞數應為80個左右；
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
第一步　審題謀篇
審題
寫作要求是寫一篇人物介紹。寫作時應注意下列幾點：
1.確定文體：這是一篇記敘文，寫作中應注意常規格式；
2.主體時態：介紹人物經歷以一般過去時為主；寫評價以一般現在時為主；
3.主體人稱：第三人稱為主。
謀篇
第一段：介紹居里夫人的身份和生卒時間。
第二段：簡單介紹居里夫人的學習經歷，重點介紹她的成就。
第三段：人們對于居里夫人的評價。
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯　(含本單元詞匯)
1.世界著名的
2.出生于(……家庭)
3.被……錄取/就讀于……
4.致力于
5.被授予……
6.被譽為/認可為
7.做出巨大貢獻
8.奉獻
_____________
____________
______________
____________________________
_____________
_________________________
_________________________
_________
world-famous
be born into
be admitted to
apply/devote/commit oneself to
be awarded...
be honored/recognis(z)ed as
make great contributions to
devotion
連詞成句　(含本單元句型)
1.居里夫人是一位世界著名的科學家，她于1867年出生在波蘭的一個教師家庭，1934年去世。
Madame Curie is ，and she _______________
in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.
2.在她還是一名學生時，她很勤奮，并決心成為一名科學家。
When she was a school girl，she was diligent and ____________________
.
a world-famous scientist
was born into a
teacher’s family
a scientist
determined to become
3.她一生致力于科學研究，并于1903年獲得諾貝爾物理學獎，1911年獲得諾貝爾化學獎。
_______________________________________________________________________ Nobel Physics Prize in 1903 and Nobel Chemistry Prize in 1911.
4.眾所周知，因為她為科學做出了巨大的貢獻，她被譽為最偉大的科學家和女性之一。(what 引導名詞性從句)
________________________________________________________________________，for which she was honored/recognised as one of the greatest scientists and women.
She applied/devoted/committed herself to scientific research and was awarded
What was known to the world was that she has made great contributions to science
第三步　句式升級
1.用同位語把句1轉化成一個簡單句。
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________ 2.用形容詞短語作狀語改寫句2。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Madame Curie，a world-famous scientist，was born into a teacher’s family in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.
Determined to become a scientist，she was diligent when she was a school girl.
3.用現在分詞短語作狀語改寫句3。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
Having applied/devoted/committed herself to scientific research，she was awarded Nobel Physics Prize in 1903 and Nobel Chemistry Prize in 1911.
第四步　組句成篇
用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇英語短文。
參考范文
Madame Curie，a world-famous scientist，was born into a teacher’s family in Poland in 1867 and died in 1934.
Determined to become a scientist，she was diligent when she was a school girl.At the age of 24，she was admitted to Paris University and studied hard there.Her hard work paid off.Having applied/devoted/
committed herself to scientific research，she was awarded Nobel Physics Prize in 1903 and Nobel Chemistry Prize in 1911.
What was known to the world was that she has made great contributions to science，for which she was honored/recognised as one of the greatest scientists and women.
你校準備在新建的“名人長廊”中為每一位名人畫像配上英語介紹，以便讓同學們有更多的機會學習英語。請你根據以下信息寫一篇80詞左右的短文介紹郎平。
1.郎平，1960年12月10日出生于天津市。1973年，13歲的郎平開始練習打排球；
2.1978年，因在全國排球比賽中表現突出，進入國家隊；
3.從1980年起，郎平獲得了很多榮譽及獎勵；
達標檢測
4.退役后，郎平成為排球教練。2016年，郎平帶領中國女排，時隔12年，在里約奧運會(the Rio Olympic Games)上獲得金牌；
5.郎平是中國第一位作為球員和教練員均奪取奧運會冠軍的排球運動員。
參考范文
Lang Ping，who was born on Dec.10th,1960，is generally acknowledged
to be a remarkable volleyball coach.
She insisted on practising playing volleyball at the age of 13 and joined the national team several years later as a consequence of her extraordinary performance.She was committed to volleyball，consequently，
obtaining numerous awards.After retiring from the volleyball team，she took up a position as a volleyball coach.Her powerful team defeated many other teams.In 2016，she led the Chinese Women Volleyball Team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games with the objective of winning the gold medal and they made it.
Apparently，Lang Ping is the first volleyball player to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach in China.
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