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Period 5　Writing
寫(xiě)作一　應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作——人物介紹
本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是描述一個(gè)人物，即通過(guò)文字對(duì)人物的外貌、個(gè)性、愛(ài)好以及主要事跡和貢獻(xiàn)進(jìn)行描述和說(shuō)明。常與書(shū)信、電子郵件等結(jié)合起來(lái)，作為書(shū)信或者電子郵件中的一部分內(nèi)容。
1．精彩首段
Born in...，...attended schools in...
出生于……，……在……上學(xué)。
He had...hair and...eyes.
他有……頭發(fā)，……眼睛。
She is...with...eyes and...hair.
她……，有……眼睛和……頭發(fā)。
He/She is an outstanding man/woman with the name of...他/她是名字叫……的杰出男性/女性。
2．正文描述
He/She studied at...and graduated from...他/她在……學(xué)習(xí)，畢業(yè)于……
Such a learned/strong-willed person is he/she that we all admire/respect him/her.他/她是如此博學(xué)/意志堅(jiān)定的人，我們都?xì)J佩/尊敬他/她。
He/She devoted all his/her life to the work.
他/她終生致力于工作。
He/She made great contributions to our country.他/她為我們的國(guó)家做出了巨大貢獻(xiàn)。
He/She was highly thought of by...
……對(duì)他/她作出了高度評(píng)價(jià)。
During her career life，she...在她的職業(yè)生涯中，她……
...made a great contribution to the development of...，which paved the way for further research.
……對(duì)……的發(fā)展做出了巨大的貢獻(xiàn)，這為進(jìn)一步的研究鋪平了道路。
Known as the leading figure of...，...had a far-reaching influence.
作為……的領(lǐng)軍人物，……發(fā)揮了深遠(yuǎn)的影響。
Not only is he gifted in...but he also has a good command of...
他不僅在……方面有天賦，而且他精通……
3．出彩結(jié)尾
His story tells us that we should value what we have，and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.他的故事告訴我們，我們應(yīng)該珍惜我們所擁有的，盡力克服生活中的任何困難。
...will live in the hearts of us forever.……將永遠(yuǎn)活在我們心中。
We regard...as our role model.我們把……看作我們的榜樣。
你校準(zhǔn)備在新建的“名人長(zhǎng)廊”中為每一位名人畫(huà)像配上英語(yǔ)介紹，以便讓同學(xué)們有更多的機(jī)會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹郎平。
1．郎平，出生于1960年12月10日，13歲時(shí)開(kāi)始練習(xí)打排球；
2．幾年后，因表現(xiàn)突出，進(jìn)入國(guó)家隊(duì)；
3．從1980年起，郎平獲得很多榮譽(yù)及獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)；
4．退役后，郎平成為排球教練，并于2016年帶領(lǐng)中國(guó)女排在里約奧運(yùn)會(huì)(the Rio Olympic Games)上獲得金牌；
5．郎平是中國(guó)第一位作為球員和教練員均奪取奧運(yùn)會(huì)冠軍的排球運(yùn)動(dòng)員。
第一步　審題謀篇
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯　(單元寫(xiě)作詞匯運(yùn)用)
1．在……歲時(shí)at the age of...
2．承認(rèn)某人為acknowledge sb as/to be
3．盡心盡力的，堅(jiān)定的committed
4．中國(guó)女排the Chinese Women Volleyball Team
5．非凡的；顯著的remarkable
6．不一般的；非凡的；意想不到的extraordinary
7．堅(jiān)持 insist on/upon
8．由于；因?yàn)?as a consequence of
9．因此；所以 consequently
10．眾多的；許多的 numerous
11．擔(dān)任；任職 take up a position
12．強(qiáng)大的 powerful
13．擊敗；戰(zhàn)勝 defeat
14．以……為目標(biāo) with the objective of
15．顯而易見(jiàn)；顯然 apparently
連詞成句　(教材句式仿寫(xiě))
1．郎平出生于1960年12月10日，是公認(rèn)的非凡的排球教練。(并列句)
Lang Ping was born on Dec.10th,1960 and she is generally acknowledged to be a remarkable volleyball coach.
2．她在十三歲時(shí)就堅(jiān)持練習(xí)打排球，由于她非凡的表現(xiàn)，幾年后就進(jìn)入了國(guó)家隊(duì)。(at the age of; as a consequence of)
She insisted on practising playing volleyball at the age of 13 and joined the national team several years later as a consequence of her extraordinary performance.
3．在她打排球的時(shí)候，她很投入，很有決心，因此，她獲得許多獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)。(while；obtain)
While she was playing volleyball，she was committed and determined，and consequently，she obtained numerous awards.
4．郎平從排球隊(duì)退役后，擔(dān)任排球教練。
After Lang Ping had retired from the volleyball team，she took up a position as a volleyball coach.
5．盡管在她的教練生涯中充滿(mǎn)了無(wú)數(shù)的挑戰(zhàn)，郎平仍然設(shè)法使她強(qiáng)大的團(tuán)隊(duì)擊敗了許多其他球隊(duì)。(defeat)
With countless challenges filling her coaching career，Lang Ping still managed to make her powerful team defeat many other teams.
6．2016年，她帶領(lǐng)中國(guó)女排以獲得金牌為目標(biāo)參加了里約奧運(yùn)會(huì)，并且她們成功了。
In 2016，she led the Chinese Women Volleyball Team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games with the objective of winning the gold medal and they made it.
7．顯而易見(jiàn)，郎平是中國(guó)第一位作為球員和教練員均奪取奧運(yùn)會(huì)冠軍的排球運(yùn)動(dòng)員。
Apparently，Lang Ping is the first volleyball player to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach in China.
第三步　句式升級(jí)
1．將句1改成非限制性定語(yǔ)從句
Lang Ping，who was born on Dec.10th,1960，is generally acknowledged to be a remarkable volleyball coach.
2．將句3改成狀語(yǔ)從句的省略和動(dòng)詞-ing形式作狀語(yǔ)
While playing volleyball，she was committed and determined，consequently obtaining numerous awards.
3．將句4改成“介詞＋-ing形式”作狀語(yǔ)
After retiring from the volleyball team，Lang Ping took up a position as a volleyball coach.
4．將句5改成獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)
Countless challenges filling her coaching career，Lang Ping still managed to make her powerful team defeat many other teams.
第四步　組句成篇
用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容，組成一篇80個(gè)詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
參考范文
Lang Ping，who was born on Dec.10th,1960，is generally acknowledged to be a remarkable volleyball coach.
She insisted on practising playing volleyball at the age of 13 and joined the national team several years later as a consequence of her extraordinary performance.While playing volleyball，she was committed and determined，consequently obtaining numerous awards.After retiring from the volleyball team，Lang Ping took up a position as a volleyball coach.Countless challenges filling her coaching career，Lang Ping still managed to make her powerful team defeat many other teams.In 2016，she led the Chinese Women Volleyball Team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games with the objective of winning the gold medal and they made it.
Apparently，Lang Ping is the first volleyball player to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach in China.
請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹你所敬佩的一個(gè)人物。主要包括以下內(nèi)容：
姓名 黃大年
生卒年月 1958年8月至2017年1月
職業(yè) 地球物理學(xué)家
個(gè)人經(jīng)歷 畢業(yè)于長(zhǎng)春地質(zhì)學(xué)院；1992年被選送英國(guó)攻讀博士學(xué)位；2009年毅然回國(guó)，致力于教育與科研事業(yè)
評(píng)價(jià) 不計(jì)個(gè)人名利，把自己的科技成果和經(jīng)驗(yàn)全部奉獻(xiàn)給祖國(guó)，在國(guó)內(nèi)外學(xué)術(shù)界享有很高的聲譽(yù)
注意：寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右。
參考范文
Huang Danian is the person I admire most，who made extraordinary achievements and is acknowledged to be a famous geophysicist.
He was born in August 1958 and he graduated from Changchun College of Geology.In 1992，he was sent to Britain to study for a doctor’s degree with the objective of grasping the high-end technology in physical field.In 2009，he gave up a well-paid job abroad and returned to his mother college without hesitation，committed to teaching and research.He passed away in January 2017，and our country mourned the great loss of an excellent scientist.
Under no circumstances did he care about fame and money and he always devoted all his scientific and technical payoffs to the motherland.As a consequence，he enjoyed a high reputation both at home and abroad.
寫(xiě)作二　讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)微技能
Ⅰ.增分語(yǔ)料積累
修　辭
讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)基本以記敘文為主，而記敘文以記人敘事為主要內(nèi)容，要求我們不僅要善于捕捉細(xì)節(jié)、刻畫(huà)細(xì)節(jié)，而且要善于運(yùn)用擬人、夸張等修辭手法。恰到好處地運(yùn)用修辭手法，不僅可使語(yǔ)言更鮮活、具體、逼真，也能極大增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)言的藝術(shù)表現(xiàn)力和感染力。以下是高中讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)中常用的幾種修辭手法。
修辭種類(lèi) 定義 例句
明喻 常用like，as，as...as，as if/though The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她臉上的笑容像寶石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。 My legs felt like pieces of wood—heavy and stiff.我的腿感覺(jué)像木頭一樣沉重而僵硬。 His heart is as hard as a stone.他鐵石心腸。
暗喻 用一個(gè)詞來(lái)指代與該詞所指人或事物有相似特點(diǎn)的另一個(gè)人或事物，不用比喻詞like，as Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face.笑是驅(qū)走人們臉上寒意的太陽(yáng)。 I was drowning in a sea of grief.我沉浸在悲傷的海洋中。 Life is a ship on the ocean meeting both sunny days and stormy days.生活是一艘在海上航行的船，既會(huì)遇到晴天，也會(huì)遇到暴風(fēng)雨。
擬人 把無(wú)生命的事物當(dāng)作有生命的事物來(lái)描寫(xiě)，賦予無(wú)生命之物以感情和動(dòng)作；或是把動(dòng)物人格化 The city began to breathe again.這座城市又恢復(fù)了生機(jī)。 The wind howled in the night.夜里狂風(fēng)怒吼。 The flowers danced in the gentle breeze.花兒在微風(fēng)中翩翩起舞。 On seeing this，the butterfly couldn’t help shedding tears sadly.看到此景，蝴蝶不禁潸然淚下。
夸張 以言過(guò)其實(shí)的說(shuō)法表達(dá)強(qiáng)調(diào)的目的，它可以加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)勢(shì)，增強(qiáng)表達(dá)效果 My heart almost stopped beating.我的心幾乎停止了跳動(dòng)。 He felt his blood frozen.他覺(jué)得自己的血液凝固了。 I was so hungry that I could eat a horse.我餓得可以吃掉一匹馬。 After seemingly a century，his mind began to race again.很久之后，他的大腦又開(kāi)始轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng)起來(lái)。
Ⅱ.教材語(yǔ)料積累
詞匯 人物描寫(xiě) gentle adj.溫柔的；文靜的　passion n．酷愛(ài)；激情　extraordinary adj.不一般的；非凡的；意想不到的　committed adj.盡心盡力的；堅(jiān)定的；堅(jiān)信的　genius n．天才；天資；天賦
動(dòng)作描寫(xiě) commit vt.承諾；保證；做出(錯(cuò)或非法的事) vi.忠于；全心全意投入(工作、活動(dòng)等) boil vt.& vi.(使)沸騰；煮開(kāi)；燒開(kāi) vi.發(fā)怒，發(fā)火 acknowledge vt.承認(rèn)(屬實(shí)、權(quán)威等)；(公開(kāi))感謝；向……打招呼 defeat vt.擊敗；戰(zhàn)勝　insist vi.& vt.堅(jiān)持；堅(jiān)決要求　flow vi.流；流動(dòng)　encounter vt.偶然碰到；遇到　mourn vt.& vi.哀悼；憂(yōu)傷
句型 1.Tu Youyou，a committed and patient scientist，was born in Ningbo，China，on 30 December 1930，and graduated from Peking University Medical School in 1955.(人物描寫(xiě)) 2.It is indeed an honour for China’s scientific research and Chinese medicine to be spread around the world.(主旨升華) 3.Einstein was not only a genius; he was a courageous and kind figure loved by many people.(人物描寫(xiě)) 4.Einstein，who was Jewish，found the doors of academic institutions closed to him.(比喻) 5.To the public，he was seen as a slightly odd-looking but kind and funny man.(人物描寫(xiě)) 6.He had a thick moustache and long white hair，which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock.(夸張)
Ⅲ.續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)料運(yùn)用
請(qǐng)從以上語(yǔ)料中選擇合適的詞匯，完成以下語(yǔ)段。然后核對(duì)答案并背誦該語(yǔ)段。
袁隆平被認(rèn)為是最偉大的農(nóng)業(yè)科學(xué)家之一，他于2021年5月22日在長(zhǎng)沙與世長(zhǎng)辭。天空下著毛毛細(xì)雨，好像在哀悼這位溫和非凡的科學(xué)家的隕落。悲痛欲絕，許多中國(guó)人為之痛哭，淚水不受控制地順著臉頰流淌。他終生滿(mǎn)懷熱情地致力于研究水稻。他始終堅(jiān)持自己的夢(mèng)想，無(wú)論遇到什么樣的困難，他都不承認(rèn)失敗。袁隆平不僅是個(gè)天才，而且是一個(gè)勇敢善良的人，受到國(guó)內(nèi)外人們的愛(ài)戴。
1．Acknowledged as one of the greatest scientists(過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)) in agriculture，Yuan Longping passed away in Changsha on May 22,2021.It was drizzling as if 2.it were mourning the great loss of the gentle extraordinary scientist.Overcome with sorrow，many Chinese people cried their hearts out,3.tears flowing down cheeks uncontrollably(獨(dú)立主格)．He 4.committed all his life to studying rice with passion.He always insisted on his dream and he wouldn’t 5.acknowledge defeat whatever difficulties he encountered.Not only 6.was Yuan Longping a genius but he was also a courageous and kind figure loved by people at home and abroad.(共36張PPT)
Period 5
Writing
People of achievement
Unit 1
內(nèi)容索引
寫(xiě)作一　應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作——人物介紹
寫(xiě)作二　讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)微技能
寫(xiě)作一　應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作——人物介紹
本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是描述一個(gè)人物，即通過(guò)文字對(duì)人物的外貌、個(gè)性、愛(ài)好以及主要事跡和貢獻(xiàn)進(jìn)行描述和說(shuō)明。常與書(shū)信、電子郵件等結(jié)合起來(lái)，作為書(shū)信或者電子郵件中的一部分內(nèi)容。
1.精彩首段
Born in...，...attended schools in...
出生于……，……在……上學(xué)。
He had...hair and...eyes.
他有……頭發(fā)，……眼睛。
She is...with...eyes and...hair.
她……，有……眼睛和……頭發(fā)。
He/She is an outstanding man/woman with the name of...他/她是名字叫……的杰出男性/女性。
常用表達(dá)
2.正文描述
He/She studied at...and graduated from...他/她在……學(xué)習(xí)，畢業(yè)于……
Such a learned/strong-willed person is he/she that we all admire/respect him/her.他/她是如此博學(xué)/意志堅(jiān)定的人，我們都?xì)J佩/尊敬他/她。
He/She devoted all his/her life to the work.
他/她終生致力于工作。
He/She made great contributions to our country.他/她為我們的國(guó)家做出了巨大貢獻(xiàn)。
He/She was highly thought of by...
……對(duì)他/她作出了高度評(píng)價(jià)。
During her career life，she...在她的職業(yè)生涯中，她……
...made a great contribution to the development of...，which paved the way for further research.
……對(duì)……的發(fā)展做出了巨大的貢獻(xiàn)，這為進(jìn)一步的研究鋪平了道路。
Known as the leading figure of...，...had a far-reaching influence.
作為……的領(lǐng)軍人物，……發(fā)揮了深遠(yuǎn)的影響。
Not only is he gifted in...but he also has a good command of...
他不僅在……方面有天賦，而且他精通……
3.出彩結(jié)尾
His story tells us that we should value what we have，and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.他的故事告訴我們，我們應(yīng)該珍惜我們所擁有的，盡力克服生活中的任何困難。
...will live in the hearts of us forever.……將永遠(yuǎn)活在我們心中。
We regard...as our role model.我們把……看作我們的榜樣。
你校準(zhǔn)備在新建的“名人長(zhǎng)廊”中為每一位名人畫(huà)像配上英語(yǔ)介紹，以便讓同學(xué)們有更多的機(jī)會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹郎平。
1.郎平，出生于1960年12月10日，13歲時(shí)開(kāi)始練習(xí)打排球；
2.幾年后，因表現(xiàn)突出，進(jìn)入國(guó)家隊(duì)；
3.從1980年起，郎平獲得很多榮譽(yù)及獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)；
4.退役后，郎平成為排球教練，并于2016年帶領(lǐng)中國(guó)女排在里約奧運(yùn)會(huì)(the Rio Olympic Games)上獲得金牌；
5.郎平是中國(guó)第一位作為球員和教練員均奪取奧運(yùn)會(huì)冠軍的排球運(yùn)動(dòng)員。
典例演練
第一步　審題謀篇
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯　(單元寫(xiě)作詞匯運(yùn)用)
1.在……歲時(shí)
2.承認(rèn)某人為
3.盡心盡力的，堅(jiān)定的
4.中國(guó)女排
5.非凡的；顯著的
6.不一般的；非凡的；意想不到的
7.堅(jiān)持
8.由于；因?yàn)?br/>_____________
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at the age of...
acknowledge sb as/to be
committed
the Chinese Women Volleyball Team
remarkable
extraordinary
insist on/upon
as a consequence of
9.因此；所以
10.眾多的；許多的
11.擔(dān)任；任職
12.強(qiáng)大的
13.擊敗；戰(zhàn)勝
14.以……為目標(biāo)
15.顯而易見(jiàn)；顯然
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consequently
numerous
take up a position
powerful
defeat
with the objective of
apparently
連詞成句　(教材句式仿寫(xiě))
1.郎平出生于1960年12月10日，是公認(rèn)的非凡的排球教練。(并列句)
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2.她在十三歲時(shí)就堅(jiān)持練習(xí)打排球，由于她非凡的表現(xiàn)，幾年后就進(jìn)入了國(guó)家隊(duì)。(at the age of; as a consequence of)
_____________________________________________________ and joined the national team several years later _____________________________________
____________.
She insisted on practising playing volleyball at the age of 13
as a consequence of her extraordinary
Lang Ping was born on Dec.10th,1960 and she is generally acknowledged to be a remarkable volleyball coach.
performance
3.在她打排球的時(shí)候，她很投入，很有決心，因此，她獲得許多獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)。(while；obtain)
______________________________，she was committed and determined，and consequently，____________________________.
4.郎平從排球隊(duì)退役后，擔(dān)任排球教練。
After Lang Ping had retired from the volleyball team，_______________
__________________________.
While she was playing volleyball
she obtained numerous awards
she took up a
position as a volleyball coach
5.盡管在她的教練生涯中充滿(mǎn)了無(wú)數(shù)的挑戰(zhàn)，郎平仍然設(shè)法使她強(qiáng)大的團(tuán)隊(duì)擊敗了許多其他球隊(duì)。(defeat)
With countless challenges ________________________，Lang Ping still managed to _____________________________________________.
6.2016年，她帶領(lǐng)中國(guó)女排以獲得金牌為目標(biāo)參加了里約奧運(yùn)會(huì)，并且她們成功了。
In 2016，she led the Chinese Women Volleyball Team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games _____________________________________________
_____________.
filling her coaching career
make her powerful team defeat many other teams
with the objective of winning the gold medal and
they made it
7.顯而易見(jiàn)，郎平是中國(guó)第一位作為球員和教練員均奪取奧運(yùn)會(huì)冠軍的排球運(yùn)動(dòng)員。
Apparently，Lang Ping _______________________________ the Olympic championship as a player and coach in China.
is the first volleyball player to win
第三步　句式升級(jí)
1.將句1改成非限制性定語(yǔ)從句
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2.將句3改成狀語(yǔ)從句的省略和動(dòng)詞-ing形式作狀語(yǔ)
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3.將句4改成“介詞＋-ing形式”作狀語(yǔ)
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Lang Ping，who was born on Dec.10th,1960，is generally acknowledged to be a remarkable volleyball coach.
While playing volleyball，she was committed and determined，consequently obtaining numerous awards.
After retiring from the volleyball team，Lang Ping took up a position as a volleyball coach.
4.將句5改成獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Countless challenges filling her coaching career，Lang Ping still managed to make her powerful team defeat many other teams.
第四步　組句成篇
用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容，組成一篇80個(gè)詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
參考范文
Lang Ping，who was born on Dec.10th,1960，is generally acknowledged to be a remarkable volleyball coach.
She insisted on practising playing volleyball at the age of 13 and joined the national team several years later as a consequence of her extraordinary performance.While playing volleyball，she was committed and determined，consequently obtaining numerous awards.After retiring from the volleyball team，Lang Ping took up a position as a volleyball coach.Countless challenges filling her coaching career，Lang Ping still managed to make her powerful team defeat many other teams.In 2016，
she led the Chinese Women Volleyball Team to take part in the Rio Olympic Games with the objective of winning the gold medal and they made it.
Apparently，Lang Ping is the first volleyball player to win the Olympic championship as a player and coach in China.
請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹你所敬佩的一個(gè)人物。主要包括以下內(nèi)容：
達(dá)標(biāo)檢測(cè)
姓名 黃大年
生卒年月 1958年8月至2017年1月
職業(yè) 地球物理學(xué)家
個(gè)人經(jīng)歷 畢業(yè)于長(zhǎng)春地質(zhì)學(xué)院；1992年被選送英國(guó)攻讀博士學(xué)位；2009年毅然回國(guó)，致力于教育與科研事業(yè)
評(píng)價(jià) 不計(jì)個(gè)人名利，把自己的科技成果和經(jīng)驗(yàn)全部奉獻(xiàn)給祖國(guó)，在國(guó)內(nèi)外學(xué)術(shù)界享有很高的聲譽(yù)
注意：寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右。
參考范文
Huang Danian is the person I admire most，who made extraordinary achievements and is acknowledged to be a famous geophysicist.
He was born in August 1958 and he graduated from Changchun College of Geology.In 1992，he was sent to Britain to study for a doctor’s degree with the objective of grasping the high-end technology in physical field.In 2009，he gave up a well-paid job abroad and returned to his mother college without hesitation，committed to teaching and research.He passed away in January 2017，and our country mourned the great loss of an excellent scientist.
Under no circumstances did he care about fame and money and he always devoted all his scientific and technical payoffs to the motherland.As a consequence，he enjoyed a high reputation both at home and abroad.
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寫(xiě)作二　讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)微技能
修　辭
讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)基本以記敘文為主，而記敘文以記人敘事為主要內(nèi)容，要求我們不僅要善于捕捉細(xì)節(jié)、刻畫(huà)細(xì)節(jié)，而且要善于運(yùn)用擬人、夸張等修辭手法。恰到好處地運(yùn)用修辭手法，不僅可使語(yǔ)言更鮮活、具體、逼真，也能極大增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)言的藝術(shù)表現(xiàn)力和感染力。以下是高中讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)中常用的幾種修辭手法。
Ⅰ.增分語(yǔ)料積累
修辭種類(lèi) 定義 例句
明喻 常用like，as，as...as，as if/though The smile on her face shone like a diamond.
她臉上的笑容像寶石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。
My legs felt like pieces of wood—heavy and stiff.我的腿感覺(jué)像木頭一樣沉重而僵硬。
His heart is as hard as a stone.他鐵石心腸。
修辭種類(lèi) 定義 例句
暗喻 用一個(gè)詞來(lái)指代與該詞所指人或事物有相似特點(diǎn)的另一個(gè)人或事物，不用比喻詞like，as Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face.笑是驅(qū)走人們臉上寒意的太陽(yáng)。
I was drowning in a sea of grief.我沉浸在悲傷的海洋中。
Life is a ship on the ocean meeting both sunny days and stormy days.生活是一艘在海上航行的船，既會(huì)遇到晴天，也會(huì)遇到暴風(fēng)雨。
修辭種類(lèi) 定義 例句
擬人 把無(wú)生命的事物當(dāng)作有生命的事物來(lái)描寫(xiě)，賦予無(wú)生命之物以感情和動(dòng)作；或是把動(dòng)物人格化 The city began to breathe again.這座城市又恢復(fù)了生機(jī)。
The wind howled in the night.夜里狂風(fēng)怒吼。
The flowers danced in the gentle breeze.花兒在微風(fēng)中翩翩起舞。
On seeing this，the butterfly couldn’t help shedding tears sadly.看到此景，蝴蝶不禁潸然淚下。
修辭種類(lèi) 定義 例句
夸張 以言過(guò)其實(shí)的說(shuō)法表達(dá)強(qiáng)調(diào)的目的，它可以加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)勢(shì)，增強(qiáng)表達(dá)效果 My heart almost stopped beating.我的心幾乎停止了跳動(dòng)。
He felt his blood frozen.他覺(jué)得自己的血液凝固了。
I was so hungry that I could eat a horse.我餓得可以吃掉一匹馬。
After seemingly a century，his mind began to race again.很久之后，他的大腦又開(kāi)始轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng)起來(lái)。
Ⅱ.教材語(yǔ)料積累
詞匯 人物描寫(xiě) gentle adj.溫柔的；文靜的　passion n.酷愛(ài)；激情　extraordinary adj.不一般的；非凡的；意想不到的　committed adj.盡心盡力的；堅(jiān)定的；堅(jiān)信的　genius n.天才；天資；天賦
動(dòng)作描寫(xiě) commit vt.承諾；保證；做出(錯(cuò)或非法的事) vi.忠于；全心全意投入(工作、活動(dòng)等)
boil vt.& vi.(使)沸騰；煮開(kāi)；燒開(kāi) vi.發(fā)怒，發(fā)火
acknowledge vt.承認(rèn)(屬實(shí)、權(quán)威等)；(公開(kāi))感謝；向……打招呼
defeat vt.擊敗；戰(zhàn)勝　insist vi.& vt.堅(jiān)持；堅(jiān)決要求　flow vi.流；流動(dòng)　encounter vt.偶然碰到；遇到　mourn vt.& vi.哀悼；憂(yōu)傷
句型 1.Tu Youyou，a committed and patient scientist，was born in Ningbo，China，on 30 December 1930，and graduated from Peking University Medical School in 1955.(人物描寫(xiě))
2.It is indeed an honour for China’s scientific research and Chinese medicine to be spread around the world.(主旨升華)
3.Einstein was not only a genius; he was a courageous and kind figure loved by many people.(人物描寫(xiě))
4.Einstein，who was Jewish，found the doors of academic institutions closed to him.(比喻)
句型 5.To the public，he was seen as a slightly odd-looking but kind and funny man.(人物描寫(xiě))
6.He had a thick moustache and long white hair，which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock.(夸張)
Ⅲ.續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)料運(yùn)用
請(qǐng)從以上語(yǔ)料中選擇合適的詞匯，完成以下語(yǔ)段。然后核對(duì)答案并背誦該語(yǔ)段。
袁隆平被認(rèn)為是最偉大的農(nóng)業(yè)科學(xué)家之一，他于2021年5月22日在長(zhǎng)沙與世長(zhǎng)辭。天空下著毛毛細(xì)雨，好像在哀悼這位溫和非凡的科學(xué)家的隕落。
1.__________________________________________(過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)) in agriculture，Yuan Longping passed away in Changsha on May 22,2021.It was drizzling as if 2.____________________________________
__________________________.
Acknowledged as one of the greatest scientists
it were mourning the great loss of the
gentle extraordinary scientist
悲痛欲絕，許多中國(guó)人為之痛哭，淚水不受控制地順著臉頰流淌。他終生滿(mǎn)懷熱情地致力于研究水稻。他始終堅(jiān)持自己的夢(mèng)想，無(wú)論遇到什么樣的困難，他都不承認(rèn)失敗。袁隆平不僅是個(gè)天才，而且是一個(gè)勇敢善良的人，受到國(guó)內(nèi)外人們的愛(ài)戴。
Overcome with sorrow，many Chinese people cried their hearts out,
3._____________________________________(獨(dú)立主格).He 4.__________
___________________________________.He always insisted on his dream and he wouldn’t 5._______________________________________________.
Not only 6._________________________ but he was also a courageous and kind figure loved by people at home and abroad.
tears flowing down cheeks uncontrollably
committed
all his life to studying rice with passion
acknowledge defeat whatever difficulties he encountered
was Yuan Longping a genius
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