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新高考英語應用文寫作與讀后續寫微技能 3
Ⅰ.應用文專練(倡議書——保護野生動物)
請給你校學生寫一份保護野生動物的倡議書,內容包括:
(1)目前野生動物所面臨的危險處境;
(2)分析野生動物瀕臨滅絕的原因,如森林遭到破壞,人類捕殺等;
(3)提出采取措施保護野生動物并發出倡議。
　
第一步　字斟句酌　優化表達
①越來越多的野生動物的棲息地正在被人類破壞。(destroy)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
②為了獲取肉、皮和毛,各種各樣的野生動物被殺害。(variety)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
More and more habitats of wild animals are being destroyed by humans.
A variety of wild animals have been killed for their meat,skins and fur.
③如此多種類的動物無法生存。 (survive)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
④我們應該尋求保護野生動物的解決辦法。(seek,solution)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
⑤畢竟,保護野生動物在某種意義上就是保護我們自己。(after all)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
So many kinds of animals cannot survive.
We should seek solutions to protecting wild animals.
After all,protecting wildlife is,in a sense,protecting ourselves.
⑥我們的政府應該采取有效的措施來保護野生和瀕危動物。 (measure)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
⑦只有當我們人類尊重野生動物,我們才能最終與大自然和諧相處。(倒裝,show respect to)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Our government should take effective measures to protect wild and endangered animals.
Only when we human beings show respect to wild animals can we eventually live in harmony with nature.
第二步　恰當過渡　完美成文(使用恰當的過渡銜接詞連句成篇)
Dear fellow students,
More and more habitats of wild animals are being destroyed by humans and a variety of wild animals have been killed for their meat,skins and fur.As a result,so many kinds of animals cannot survive.
Therefore,we should seek solutions to protecting wild animals.After all,protecting wildlife is,in a sense,protecting ourselves.Meanwhile,our government should take effective measures to protect wild and endangered animals.
Only when we human beings show respect to wild animals can we eventually live in harmony with nature.
Ⅱ.續寫微技能
1.續寫語料積累
單 詞 seek v.　　　　 尋找,尋求
determine v. 測定,確定
amazing adj. 驚人的,了不起的
survive v. 活下來,幸存
effect n. 影響,結果
variety n. 多樣化,變化
encounter n. 意外的相遇,邂逅
path n. 小徑,小道
單 詞 breathtaking adj. 令人驚嘆的
freeze v. (因害怕等)停住不動;驚呆;嚇呆
stare v. 凝視,盯著看
capture v. (用文字或圖片)記錄,捕捉
reaction n. (對某一情形或事件的)反應
hover v. 盤旋,徘徊
squeak v. 吱吱叫
dive v. 俯沖
詞 塊 recover from　　　 從……中恢復
after all 畢竟,終究
show respect to 尊重
concentrate on 把注意力集中于,全神貫注于
brave the elements 不顧天氣惡劣,冒著風雨
a variety of 各種各樣的
turn her head from side to side 左右搖頭
well up 涌起;迸發;涌出
roll down 滾下
靚 句 1.As Sarah was about to leave the park, she felt a nudge on her leg.Looking down, she saw the puppy she had rescued, now looking up at her with big, grateful eyes. 當莎拉正要離開公園時,她感到腿上有什么東西在推她。低頭一看,她看到了她救下的那只小狗,正抬頭用一雙充滿感激的大眼睛看著她。
2.To her amazement, the puppy began to wag its tail and jump around her, as if trying to express its gratitude.
令她驚訝的是,小狗開始搖尾巴,繞著她跳來跳去,好像在表達它的感激之情。
靚 句 3.Tears welled up in Sarah’s eyes as she realized the impact of her actions.She had made a difference in the life of this little creature, and it was thanking her in the only way it knew.　
當薩拉意識到自己行為的影響時,淚水奪眶而出。她改變了這個小家伙的生活,它正在用它所知道的唯一方式感謝她。
2.場景片段訓練(人與動物:蜂鳥回來致謝→作者幸福、感動)
(2023·浙江1月卷)
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.With a squeaking call,she ①__________________________________________
(動作描寫), looking at me with her bright eyes.Then she stopped on my left shoulder.I patted her on the back which was covered by colorful feathers.And I took out my water bottle,trying to give her some water.②______________________________ (形容詞作狀語), she flew about
dived towards me and hovered before my face
Content and joyful
2 meters above the ground,③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (動詞-ing形式作狀語). At that moment,happiness and the feeling of being moved mingled,welling up into my heart,④　　　　　　　　　　　　　(獨立主格結構).
turning her head from side to side as if
expressing her gratitude to me for saving her life again
tears rolling down my cheeks
我正要離開,這時蜂鳥出現了。隨著一聲尖聲,她撲向我,在我面前盤旋,用明亮的眼睛看著我。然后她停在我的左肩上。我拍了拍她滿是彩色羽毛的后背。我拿出水瓶,想給她喝點水。她在離地2米左右的空中滿足而快樂地飛著,把頭左右轉動著,好像又一次向我表達了對我救她一命的感激之情。那一刻,幸福和感動的感覺交織在一起,涌上心頭,淚水順著我的臉頰滑落。

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