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新高考英語應用文寫作與讀后續寫微技能 2
Ⅰ.應用文專練(人物介紹——介紹你的父親)
假定你是李華,受校英文報約稿,請你寫一篇介紹你的某一位家人的英語短文,刊登在校英文報People專欄,內容包括:
(1)他/她的主要事跡;(2)你的評價。
　
第一步　字斟句酌　優化表達
①我的父親是一名職業律師,你幾乎看不到他臉上的笑容。
(professional,lawyer,倒裝)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　
My father is a professional lawyer,and rarely can you see a smile on his face.
②有一段時間,我被取消了比賽資格。 (定語從句,disqualify)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
③我在我的父親面前發脾氣,這讓他老是嘆氣。(sigh)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
There was a time when I was disqualified from a competition.
I lost temper in front of my father, which made him sigh a lot.
④盡管我有不當的行為,他還是讓我冷靜下來,鼓勵我把它拋在腦后。 (despite, calm, leave...behind)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Despite my improper behaviour, he still calmed me down and encouraged me to leave it behind.
⑤后來我意識到我應該向父親道歉。(apologise)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Later I realized I should apologize/apologise to my father.
⑥令人驚訝的是,我注意到他臉上出現了罕見的微笑。 (observe)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
⑦我的父親,就像一顆閃亮的星,永遠是我最尊敬和敬佩的人。
(respect,admire)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Surprisingly, I observed a rare smile appearing on his face.
My father,like a shining star,is always the man I respect and admire most forever.
第二步　恰當過渡　完美成文(使用恰當的過渡銜接詞連句成篇)
My father is a professional lawyer,and rarely can you see a smile on his face.There was a time when I was disqualified from a competition.What’s worse, I lost temper in front of my father, which made him sigh a lot.Despite my improper behaviour, he still calmed me down and encouraged me to leave it behind.Later I realized I should apologize/apologise to my father.Surprisingly, I observed a rare smile appearing on his face.
All in all,my father,like a shining star,is always the man I respect and admire most forever.
Ⅱ.續寫微技能
1.續寫語料積累
單 詞 respect v.　　　 尊敬,敬重
ignore v. 忽視,不理
talent n. 天賦,才能
sigh n. 嘆氣,嘆息
responsible adj. (對事故、錯誤、罪行等)負有責任的,
應承擔責任的
observe v. 慶祝,過(節日、生日等)
apologise v. 道歉
單 詞 despite prep. 盡管,雖然
grab v. 抓住
swiftly adv. 迅速地
guilty adj. 感到慚愧的
competence n. 能力
詞 塊 turn to　　　　 求助于;轉向;變成
be proud of 為……自豪
calm down (使)平靜
end up 以……告終,以……結束
settle for 勉強接受,將就
focus on 集中于
靚 句 1.Eager to surprise her, I marched into the kitchen with enthusiasm.
為了給她一個驚喜,我滿懷熱情地走進廚房。
2.Ingredients were scattered haphazardly across the counter.The kitchen was a mess, and panic started to set in.　
配料雜亂無章地散落在柜臺上。廚房一片狼藉,恐慌開始蔓延。
3.Just as I was on the verge of giving up in despair, father appeared.
正當我在絕望中快要放棄的時候,父親出現了。
4.As we placed the perfectly prepared breakfast on the table, a wave of guilt washed over me.I realized I had been overly confident in my abilities.　當我們把精心準備的早餐擺上餐桌時,一陣內疚涌上心頭。我意識到自己對自己的能力過于自信了。
2.場景片段訓練(雙胞胎做早餐:失望→父親幫忙做早餐→感到內疚)
①　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　(as引導時間狀語從句), their father appeared.Their father seemed to understand exactly what had happened and what to do next.He ②______________
____________________________________________________________ (動作描寫). Then he ③_______________________________________ _________________________ (動作描寫), starting to cook it all over again.In between,he kept silent and focused on what he was doing.At
As the twins looked around them in disappointment
grabbed the handle
of the pan and slipped a bar of butter to melt before putting a slice of bread
swiftly removed the porridge away,and
poured another cup of rice
7 o’clock,everything was done and perfect. The twins took over the tray, ④_________________________________________________
　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　(動詞-ing形式作狀語).
feeling guilty about being over-confident about their
competence in performing the house chores
當雙胞胎失望地環顧四周時,他們的父親出現了。他們的父親似乎完全明白發生了什么,以及下一步該怎么做。他抓住鍋柄,先放了一塊黃油融化,然后放了一片面包。然后他迅速地把粥端開,又倒了一杯米,又開始煮了起來。在此期間,他一句話也不說,專注于他正在做的事情。7點鐘,一切都完成了,完美無缺。雙胞胎接過盤子,對自己做家務的能力過于自信感到內疚。

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