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(共39張PPT)
第一部分 復習講義
板塊三 寫作
第六講　生活趣事
專題六　讀后續寫
1．A wave of guilt and regret swept away her joy．Feeling she didn’t deserve the prize，she had a sleepless night for the first time in her life．
一陣愧疚和后悔將她的快樂一掃而光。由于覺得自己不配獲獎，她有生以來第一次失眠了。
2．Before she got sick，she didn’t think a lot about her bird．Now Dora realized she shouldn’t selfishly take away its freedom for her own enjoyment．
在她生病之前，她沒怎么想過她的鳥?，F在朵拉意識到她不應該為了自己的快樂而自私地剝奪它的自由。
3．Tina，blushing with embarrassment，started to stammer out the truth．
蒂娜尷尬得滿臉通紅，開始結結巴巴地說出真相。
4．I couldn’t contain my excitement and surprise as the bicycle came into view/sight．
當自行車映入眼簾時，我無法抑制自己的興奮和驚訝。
5．Their laughter was quite infectious and the waiting room was filled with happiness．
他們的笑聲很有感染力，等候室里充滿了幸福。
6．The boy presented a coin and asked if he could buy a flower for his mother．
那個男孩掏出一枚硬幣，詢問是否可以為媽媽買一朵花。
7．A smile lifted the corners of his mouth when it came to camping．Suddenly Mum shouted out in a strange voice．
一提到露營，他的嘴角就露出了微笑。突然，媽媽用一種奇怪的聲音喊了起來。
8．Dad’s calm smile reflected his motto “All’s well with us，never fear．”
爸爸平靜的微笑反映了他的座右銘：“一切都好，永遠不要害怕?！?br/>9．We usually take life for granted，but the story shows us that there is always beauty in our heart．
我們通常認為生活是理所當然的，但這個故事告訴我們，我們的心中永遠有美好。
10．The words brought warmth to my heart and tears to my eyes．I felt lucky to be a part of this mischievous yet loving family．
這些話讓我心中滿是溫暖，也讓我熱淚盈眶。我很幸運能成為這個淘氣而又充滿愛的家庭的一員。
(2024·新課標Ⅰ卷)
I met Gunter on a cold，wet and unforgettable evening in September．I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference．Due to a big storm，my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half．I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague．The moment I got off the plane，I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought．
That was when I met Gunter．I told him where I was going，but he said he hadn’t heard of the bus station．I thought my pronunciation was the problem，so I explained again more slowly，but he still looked confused．When I was about to give up，Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend．After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century，Gunter put his phone down and started the car．
Finally，with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station．Thankfully，there was a long queue (隊列) still waiting to board the bus．Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus，turned around，and looked at me with a big smile on his face．“We made it，” he said．
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet．I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard．He tried it several times，but the card machine just did not play along．A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out．
At this moment，Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station．There，at the entrance，was a cash machine．I jumped out of the car，made a mad run for the machine，and popped my card in，only to read the message：“Out of order．Sorry．”
注意：1．續寫詞數應為150個左右；
2．請按如下格式在相應位置作答。
　　I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news．______________
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Four days later，when I was back in Vienna，I called Gunter as promised．_________________________________________________
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【模板運用】
【構思續寫】
根據以上情景模板，由首段提示語 “I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news．”和第二段提示語“Four days later，when I was back in Vienna，I called Gunter as promised．”可推測出首段續寫內容可以寫作者留下Gunter的電話，承諾會還錢給對方，Gunter同意，最終作者及時登上了公共汽車。第二段續寫內容可以寫作者付費給Gunter，并向對方表示感激，兩人成為好朋友。
【參考范文】
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news．I explained to him the urgency of catching the bus，emphasising that otherwise I would be forced to stay overnight and buy a new ticket the next morning．Ultimately，I suggested，“I will return to Vienna in 4 days．If it’s OK with you，I can pay you then，with an additional 10 euros as a gesture of my gratitude．” Following an uncomfortable pause，he simply nodded，saying，“I agree to this arrangement and trust you．” I thanked him with the biggest smile you can imagine，and we exchanged contact information before I got on the bus．
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised．We arranged to meet at the airport，and upon our arrival，we hugged each other like long-lost friends．When I gave him the extra ?10 I had promised，he didn’t accept．“Buy me a beer next time you are in Vienna，” he said with a warm smile．Then we parted ways with a firm handshake and a promise to keep in touch．Gunter’s kindness had turned a potentially disastrous evening into a memorable story I would cherish for years to come．
針對性訓練35　寫作組合練(5)
Ⅰ．應用文寫作
(2024·山東省實驗中學二模)
假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Chris來郵件與你分享他參加了他們學校中文學習俱樂部開展的“中國成語(Chinese Idioms)”比賽，并獲得了冠軍的消息。請你給他寫一封回信。
要求如下：
1．表達祝賀；
2．肯定努力；
3．表達祝愿。
注意：1．寫作詞數應為80個左右；
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文流暢；
3．請按如下格式在相應位置作答。
Dear Chris，
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Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【導語】本篇寫作屬于應用文。要求考生給Chris寫一封回信，祝賀他比賽獲得冠軍。
【詳解】
1．詞匯激活：
高興的：glad→delighted
以……為驕傲：take pride in→be proud of
取得回報：get in return→pay off
2．句式拓展(合并簡單句)：
原句：This is a special and happy moment for you．I’m very proud of you．
拓展句：This is a special and happy moment for you，when I’m very proud of you．
【點睛】
[高分句型1] I’m so delighted to learn that you have been the champion of Chinese Idioms contest in your school．(運用了that引導的賓語從句)
[高分句型2] It is your diligence and perseverance that stand you out in the crowd．(運用了強調句)
【參考范文】
Dear Chris，
I’m so delighted to learn that you have been the champion of Chinese Idioms contest in your school．I’m very proud of you．
It is your diligence and perseverance that stand you out in the crowd．It is a real encouragement to see your efforts paid off and I do hope you can hold your passion for Chinese and further understand our splendid culture．
Wish you future success in Chinese study．I’m looking forward to meeting you in China one day．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
Ⅱ．讀后續寫
(2024·山東青島一模)
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
I begged my mom to let me make cookies by myself．Even though I had never attempted baking before，I was nine years old and my friend Emmie had been baking cupcakes by herself for a year．I was determined to prove that I could make it．
My brother，Caleb，laughed at the idea of me cooking alone，calling it a disaster．Having a big brother can be annoying．Despite his laughing，my mom agreed to let me try．She reminded me to take my time and be careful because I’d had some messy spills before I was nine．
I raced to the kitchen and went to work．I cracked eggs and put a cold stick of butter into the bowl．I turned on the mixer at medium speed—and whoa．Whoa．Whoa! What a disaster! I had to wipe butter off my face，then off the table and floor．
Caleb made fun of me again，calling me a mess．I chased him away with a spoon and turned back to the mixing bowl．I started again with softer butter．Referring to the recipe，I poured everything needed into the bowl and mixed it．After that，I put round batter (面糊) onto the cookie sheet and put it into the oven (烤箱)．Within a minute，a fantastic smell filled the kitchen—the smell of cookie success!
I was going to prove that I was responsible．No more eye-rolling from my brother．No more “You’re too young” from my parents．I was grown up and in control．
I stared into the oven，and my heart sank．The neat，little balls had melted (融化) and overflowed to the edges of the cookie sheet．I pulled the pan out just as Caleb wandered back into the kitchen．
“What in the world？” He started to laugh．“Cookie soup？”
“You just be quiet，” I whispered，trying not to cry．“Just leave me alone．”
“How’s it going in there？” Dad called from the living room．
Caleb raised his eyebrows and bit his lip．I responded that everything was fine，pouring the melted batter into the bowl quickly．
注意：1．續寫詞數應為150個左右；
2．請按如下格式在相應位置作答。
I picked up the directions，wondering what had gone wrong．
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　　 I brought a plate of cookies into the living room for my parents．
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【導語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者決心自己做餅干，盡管以前從未嘗試過烘焙，但想到朋友埃米已經自己烤了一年的紙杯蛋糕，所以作者決心要證明自己也能做到。一開始哥哥還嘲笑作者，作者也不順利，幸好作者慢慢摸索，最終做出了餅干，得到了家人的好評。
【詳解】
1．段落續寫：
①由第一段首句內容“我拿起指南，不知道哪里出了問題?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者發現問題，并按照說明成功做出蛋糕。
②由第二段首句內容“我帶了一盤餅干到客廳給我的父母。”可知，第二段可描寫作者把做好的餅干拿給家人品嘗，得到了家人的認可。
2．續寫線索：
餅干出錯——重新嘗試——制作成功——作者興奮開心——家人品嘗——得到贊美——作者感悟
3．詞匯激活：
行為類：①導致：cause/lead to ②溜進來：sneak in/slide in ③成就：accomplish/achieve
情緒類：①驚訝的：surprised/astonished ②高興的：delighted/glad
【點睛】
[高分句型1] This time，I watched carefully as they rose and browned in the oven．(運用了as引導的時間狀語從句)
[高分句型2] I couldn’t wait to show my family what I had accomplished．(運用了what引導的賓語從句)
【參考范文】
I picked up the directions, wondering what had gone wrong．It was then that I realized I had forgotten to add the flour! The batter had been too runny，causing the cookies to spread out．I quickly mixed in the flour and spooned the batter onto a new cookie sheet．This time，I watched carefully as they rose and browned in the oven．The sweet aroma filled the kitchen，and my heart beat with excitement．I couldn’t wait to show my family what I had accomplished．Caleb sneaked in and raised his eyebrows，but this time，I just smiled confidently．
I brought a plate of cookies into the living room for my parents．They looked surprised and delighted．“These are...yours？” Mom asked，taking a cautious bite．“They’re...amazing！” She smiled，and Dad nodded in agreement．Caleb sat on the couch，a cookie in his hand，and his face betrayed a hint of pride．“I told you she could do it，” he said with a grin．I beamed，feeling a sense of accomplishment wash over me．I had proved myself，not just to my family but to myself．From that day on，no one doubted my baking skills again．
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