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(共39張PPT)
第一部分 復習講義
板塊三 寫作
第四講　人與動物
專題六　讀后續寫
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(二)
1．人與可愛型動物
①It was a baby monkey caught between branches，who was crying for its mother．Therefore，we quickened our steps，approached the baby monkey cautiously，and attempted to rescue it．
那是一只夾在樹枝間的小猴子，它正哭著喊它媽媽。因此，我們加快腳步，小心翼翼地接近小猴子，試圖營救它。
②The puppy turned his head，looked into my eyes，and licked my face with his wet，warm tongue．
小狗轉過頭來，看著我的眼睛，用它濕潤溫暖的舌頭舔我的臉。
③This magical kitten was changing our lives and this was just the beginning．
這只神奇的小貓正在改變我們的生活，而這僅僅是開始。
④Appearing to be feeling better，the deer slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Lucy’s hand as if to express thanks．What a warm scene!
鹿似乎感覺好些了，它慢慢抬起頭，輕輕地吻了吻露西的手，好像在致謝。多么溫暖的一幕啊！
2．人與兇猛型動物
①When a tiger was approaching me，I froze with terror，too scared to move an inch．
當一只老虎向我靠近時，我嚇呆了，一動也不敢動。
②When I saw the wolf，I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak．
當我看到狼時，我感到非常害怕，我的喉嚨發緊，膝蓋發軟。
③Noticing my approaching，the wolves gathered．I was seized by a strong sense of horror，my palms sweating．
注意到我的靠近，狼群聚集了起來。一種強烈的恐懼感攫住了我的心，我的手心在冒汗。
④With the bear chasing behind，we waved our hands wildly screaming “Help”．We were running and were trapped to a narrow corner，where I could almost hear the gasps of it．
熊在后面追，我們瘋狂地揮舞著雙手， 尖叫著“救命”。我們跑著跑著被困在一個狹窄的角落里，在那里我幾乎可以聽到它的喘息聲。
(2024·山東德州一模)
Last year，28-year-old Jane Bell moved to a suburb of Philadelphia for her newly found job and rented a house with a big yard in a village．
Jane had the habit of rising early for exercise．One cold morning，she was jogging through the nearby park when she spotted a weak husky lying by the path，seeming to have been deserted．She approached and checked it，only to find one of the dog’s legs severely broken．The
pitiful dog looked at her with its sad blue eyes as if asking her for help．Blaming the dog’s previous owner for the selfish and irresponsible action，Jane，without hesitation，bent down and carried the dog home．Then she drove the dog to an animal clinic for a check-up and treatment，where a doctor told Jane it would take about 3 months before the dog got well．
Jane returned home with the dog，which she called Kobe．She made a comfortable den(窩) in the front yard and took great trouble to look after it．With time going on，Kobe gradually recovered and was able to get around with her．Every morning，Jane would take Kobe for a run．Every evening Jane came home from work，Kobe would welcome her，excitedly wagging (搖) its tail at her．Kobe kept Jane company and became her inseparable and loyal friend．
Jane’s furry companion was usually gentle and quiet．But one dawn Jane was woken up by Kobe’s loud barking and the constant noise of its pawing(用爪子抓) at the door．The moment she opened the door，Kobe pulled on her clothes with its mouth，attempting to lead her away from the yard．Initially dismissing it as typical dog behavior，Jane patted Kobe on the head to quiet it，saying firmly，“No，Kobe! Good boy，calm down！” However，the dog didn’t stop behaving strangely．It arched its back，its nose moving against a piece of ground in the yard anxiously．Jane was surprised and confused．
注意：1．續寫詞數應為150個左右；
2．請按如下格式在相應位置作答。
　　Then Kobe began to dig the ground with its paws．_____________
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【模板運用】
【構思續寫】
根據以上情景模板，由首段提示語 “Then Kobe began to dig the ground with its paws．”和第二段提示語“Soon gas workers came．”可推測出首段續寫內容可以寫Kobe挖出了破舊的煤氣管道；Jane突然意識到了危險，緊張害怕中立即聯系了當地的燃氣管理部門。第二段續寫內容可以寫救援工人讓村民暫時撤離，及時施工，規避了危險。正是Kobe的提醒挽救了整個村子，也是Jane的善意之舉的最好回報。
【參考范文】
Then Kobe began to dig the ground with its paws．Before long，it dug a sizable hole in the yard．As the hole expanded，an old gas pipe appeared at the bottom，which concerned her．Given Kobe’s normally well-behaved nature，Jane suddenly realized that its unusual actions might mean a warning of danger．“Something must have gone wrong with the pipe，” Jane thought to herself，nervous and scared．The next minute，she raced into the house and immediately contacted the local gas management department．
Soon gas workers came．Without delay，they got down to detection．Sure enough，there was gas leaking from the aging pipe．It was so dangerous that all the villagers were urged to leave right away．The workers worked tirelessly for hours to replace the broken pipe．When everything returned to normal，the villagers couldn’t thank Kobe enough．But for its timely warning，an explosion could have easily happened and left the whole village in ruins．As the saying goes，one good turn deserves another．Jane’s kindness brought safety to herself and even the whole neighborhood．
針對性訓練34　寫作組合練(4)
Ⅰ．應用文寫作
(2024·江西鷹潭一模)
你校英文報將以 “志愿同行， 點亮青春” 為主題，舉辦英語征文比賽，請你寫一篇短文投稿，介紹自己曾參加過的一項志愿活動。內容包括：
1．志愿活動簡介；
2．意義和啟示。
注意：1．詞數80個左右；
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
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【導語】本篇寫作屬于記敘文。要求考生以“志愿同行， 點亮青春”為主題，寫一篇短文投稿參加英語征文比賽，介紹自己曾參加過的一項志愿活動。
【詳解】
1．詞匯激活：
假期：holiday→vacation
不同的：different→various
幫助：help→assist
影響：influence→impact
2．句式拓展(同義句替換)：
原句：When I told the stories for each exhibit，I paid special attention to cultural differences to foster a better understanding for visitors from various countries．
拓展句：When telling the stories for each exhibit，I paid special attention to cultural differences to foster a better understanding for visitors from various countries．
【點睛】
[高分句型1]When telling the stories for each exhibit，I paid special attention to cultural differences to foster a better understanding for visitors from various countries．(運用了狀語從句中的省略)
[高分句型2]This tour guide role not only enriched my knowledge of national history，but also helped shape my passions and values．(運用了not only...but also...連接謂語)
【參考范文】
During my winter vacation，I worked as a volunteer tour guide at a history museum．My main responsibility was to introduce the history of each exhibit．When telling the stories for each exhibit，I paid special attention to cultural differences to foster a better understanding for visitors from various countries．
This tour guide role not only enriched my knowledge of national history，but also helped shape my passions and values．In addition to personal growth，volunteering shows that even small efforts can have a significant impact on many people．
Ⅱ．讀后續寫
(2024·浙江杭州第二中學一模)
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
During this past year I’ve had three instances of car trouble．Each time，when these things happened，I was disgusted with the way people didn’t bother to help．The people at the gas stations where I asked for a gas can told me they couldn’t lend it out “for safety reasons”， but that I could buy a can for $15．
But you know who came to my rescue all three times Immigrants．
Mexican immigrants．None of them could speak English．
One of those guys stopped to help me with the blowout even though he had his whole family of four．I was on the side of the road for three hours with my big Jeep．I put signs in the windows，big signs that said，“NEED A JACK (千斤頂)”， and offered money．Nothing．
Right as I was about to give up，a truck pulled over，and the guy jumped off．
He understood the situation and called for his daughter，who spoke English．He conveyed through her that he had a jack．Then we were in business．
I started taking the wheel off，and，if you can believe it，I broke his tire iron．No worries：he ran to the truck and handed it to his wife，and she was gone in a flash to buy a new one．She was back in 15 minutes．We finished the job with a little sweat，and I was a very happy man．
The two of us were filthy and sweaty．His wife produced a water jug for us to wash our hands．I tried to put a $20 in the man’s hand，but he wouldn’t take it，so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could．I asked the little girl where they lived，thinking maybe I’d send them a gift for being so awesome．She said they lived in Mexico．They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could pick cherries for the next few weeks．Then they were going to pick peaches，then go back home．After I said my goodbyes and started walking back to the Jeep，the girl called out and asked if I’d had lunch．
注意：1．續寫詞數應為150個左右；
2．請按如下格式在相應位置作答。
When I told her no，she ran up and handed me a tamale(墨西哥粽)．
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He saw the $20 in my hand and just started shaking his head．
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【導語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了去年作者的汽車出現了三次故障，大多數人都懶得幫忙，作者對此感到很厭煩。有一次，他的汽車又出故障了。他在路邊求助了接近3個小時，但是沒有人停下來幫忙。就在打算放棄的時候，一個路過的墨西哥家庭停下來，提供了幫助。之后，這家人還邀請作者吃午飯，結束后，作者想要給報酬，但是被拒絕了，這件事讓作者有了新的感悟。
【詳解】
1．段落續寫：
①由第一段首句內容“當我告訴她沒有的時候，她跑過來遞給了我一個墨西哥粽。”可知，第一段可描寫小女孩代表一家人邀請作者吃午飯，作者想要給報酬。
②由第二段首句內容“他看到我手里的20美元，就開始搖著頭。”可知，第二段可描寫女孩爸爸拒絕作者的報酬，甚至給了作者一些水果，作者有了新的感悟。
2．續寫線索：
女孩給作者墨西哥粽——女孩邀請作者共進午餐——作者給報酬——拒絕報酬——相贈水果——作者的感悟
3．詞匯激活：
行為類：①解釋：explain/make it clear ②想要：want/would like
情緒類：①急切地：eagerly/desperately ②感動：touched/moved
【點睛】
[高分句型1] She explained to me that it was typical Mexican food and eagerly asked me to have a try．(運用了that引導的賓語從句)
[高分句型2] It was the experience that gave me new faith in people’s good virtue．(運用了強調句型)
【參考范文】
When I told her no, she ran up and handed me a tamale(墨西哥粽)．She explained to me that it was typical Mexican food and eagerly asked me to have a try．Meanwhile，she invited me to where they were going to have lunch together，for their truck happened to have some food and some things for a picnic．Therefore we ate together in a vacant lot by the side of the road．We shared interesting stories while enjoying the tasty food．After lunch，I was about to say goodbye when I again pulled out $20 intended for the favor．
He saw the $20 in my hand and just started shaking his head．He insisted on not accepting my money because he didn’t want to convert good intentions into numbers．Also，they stuffed a paper bag full of fresh fruits into my hand and then left．I swung back to my Jeep，deeply touched and lost in thought．There was indifference as well as warmth and kindness among strangers．It was the experience that gave me new faith in people’s good virtue．And I decided to pay forward the kindness．
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