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第一部分 復(fù)習(xí)講義
板塊三 寫(xiě)作
第三講　歷險(xiǎn)脫困
專(zhuān)題六　讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)
1．It was completely dark except the faint light given out by a few stars in the sky．We had no idea where we were．
除了幾顆星星發(fā)出微弱的光之外，天完全黑了。我們不知道我們?cè)谀睦铩?br/>2．Tom was shocked to find that the water kept rising．He was trapped in his house and his heart suddenly jumped into his throat．
湯姆震驚地發(fā)現(xiàn)水一直上漲。他被困在他的房子里，他的心一下子提到了嗓子眼。
3．Frozen with fear，he stood rooted to the spot，various terrible thoughts flooding in．
他嚇得僵住了，站在那里一動(dòng)不動(dòng)，各種可怕的想法向他涌來(lái)。
4．With desperate tears，she suddenly spotted a boat with a figure walking on it．She waved and cried for help with all her strength．
眼含著絕望的淚水，她突然看到一條船，上面有一個(gè)人在走動(dòng)。她揮揮手，用盡全身力氣喊救命。
5．After what seemed a century，I felt very exhausted while swimming hard to keep myself afloat．
似乎過(guò)了一個(gè)世紀(jì)之后，我感到筋疲力盡，同時(shí)，我努力游著以使自己浮在水面上。
6．The big wind roared through our ears，and we were pushed away from the shore farther and farther．
大風(fēng)呼嘯著穿過(guò)我們的耳朵，我們被推得離海岸越來(lái)越遠(yuǎn)。
7．Time ticked away slowly．Just as he was feeling himself fading away，the rescue team arrived．
時(shí)間慢慢流逝。就在他感覺(jué)要死了的時(shí)候，救援隊(duì)趕到了。
8．Having suffered so much，Tom couldn’t contain his emotions and tears of gratitude trickled down his cheeks，like a broken line of beads．
遭受了這么多，湯姆再也不能抑制自己的情緒，感激的淚水像斷了線的珠子一樣滾下他的臉頰。
(2024·山東濟(jì)南一模)
6-year-old Quinn Hill became her family’s hero when she took immediate action during an emergency that saved her mother’s life with the help of her neighbor，Mrs．Smith．
Jennifer，a 39-year-old single mother，began the day by sending her child，Hill，to school．Having no idea what would happen，Jennifer was filled with anxiety．After all，it was the first day of a new school year for Hill，a fresh start! On the way to school，she repeatedly reminded Hill to solve problems positively and fit in．Though worried，Jennifer had to wave goodbye to her daughter，watching her towards the school gate．
The whole day was packed with housework．Jennifer tidied the house，washed clothes，and prepared for the evening meal．As the school bell rang，signaling the end of the day，Jennifer picked Hill up from school．On seeing Jennifer，Hill couldn’t wait to hug her，sharing the school experiences．Chatting and laughing accompanied them all the way．Hill’s innocent laughter was like Jennifer’s ray of sunshine．
Approaching home，they encountered Mrs．Smith，a most kind and thoughtful housewife living in their neighborhood for many years．Mrs．Smith often invited Jennifer and Hill to her home and shared her homemade desserts and cookies．The two families developed a close relationship and Hill liked to stay with Mrs．Smith，who always brightened her days with willingness and timely help．After exchanging greetings，they went back to their own homes．
On arriving home，Jennifer set out to prepare dinner．As the sun began to set，the house was full of a pleasant smell of cooking food．Jennifer and Hill sat at the kitchen table when Jennifer suddenly began to seize．She was sitting in a chair，looking up at the ceiling and experiencing abnormal breathing．She then fell out of the chair onto her left side，her hands balled into fists，and her body was shaking violently．Her eyes were open，and Hill kept calling “Mommy，Mommy”， but she could not respond．
注意：1．續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；
2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。
　　Realizing the severe situation，Hill ran out for help．__________
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Jennifer finally came to herself in the hospital．_______________
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【模板運(yùn)用】
【構(gòu)思續(xù)寫(xiě)】
根據(jù)以上情景模板，由首段提示語(yǔ) “Realizing the severe situation，Hill ran out for help．”和第二段提示語(yǔ)“Jennifer finally came to herself in the hospital．”可推測(cè)出首段續(xù)寫(xiě)內(nèi)容可以寫(xiě)情急之中的Hill想到了向鄰居Mrs．Smith求助；Mrs．Smith熱心幫忙，冷靜處理緊急情況，進(jìn)行急救，同時(shí)指示Hill撥打了911。第二段續(xù)寫(xiě)內(nèi)容可以寫(xiě)Jennifer蘇醒過(guò)來(lái)，知道她思維敏捷的女兒和可靠的鄰居救了她的命，心中很是感激與自豪，決定把善意之舉傳遞下去。
【參考范文】
Realizing the severe situation, Hill ran out for help．She dashed to Mrs．Smith’s house，her small heart racing．“Mrs．Smith，come quick! Mommy’s not moving！” she cried，her voice trembling with fear．Mrs．Smith，ever the composed neighbor，followed Hill without delay，immediately recognizing the urgency of the situation．Upon entering Jennifer’s home，Mrs．Smith found her on the floor，seizing．“Call 911，Hill，and stay on the line，” she instructed，her voice steady as she began first aid．Hill，though scared，managed to relay the emergency to the operator，her mother’s lifeline．
Jennifer finally came to herself in the hospital．The sterile environment formed a stark contrast to the warmth of her kitchen．As she regained consciousness，she saw Hill’s tearful face and Mrs．Smith’s comforting presence．The relief was palpable; she knew her quick-thinking daughter and reliable neighbor had saved her life，reinforcing the bond of their little family and the community that supported them．The mother proud of her daughter was so grateful for Mrs．Smith’s kindness that she swore to pay it forward．
THANK YOU

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