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Unit 3 War and peace
Writing
介紹英雄人物
對英雄人物的介紹屬于記敘文的范疇，它以寫人記事為主要內容，以敘述和描寫為主要表達方式。一篇好的人物描寫一般分為三大部分，即生平介紹、事跡敘述和簡短評論。時態的選擇可視情況而定。
寫作探究
探究點1 教材范例提煉
課文范例
素材積累
Ⅰ. 常用詞匯
1. at the age of four 4歲時
2. a boy of sixteen 一個16歲的男孩
3. make friends with her 和她交朋友
4. be ready to help others 樂于助人
5. a lively and smart girl 一個活潑聰明的女孩
6. be warm-hearted and good-looking 熱心腸而且漂亮/俊朗
7. learn from each other and help each other 相互學習和相互幫助
8. be highly praised by the teachers 得到老師的高度稱贊
9. participate in the Eighth Route Army 參加八路軍
10. be born in a poor peasant family 出生于一個貧苦的農民家庭
Ⅱ. 話題句式
He has fair hair and blue eyes.
他有金色的頭發和藍色的眼睛。
2. Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809.
亞伯拉罕·林肯，一個貧苦家庭的兒子，1809年2月12日出生于肯塔基州。
3. She is an ordinary girl, but her kindness and consideration impress me most.
她是一個普普通通的女孩，但她的善良和體貼使我印象深刻。
4. He is a good-looking, kind-hearted man.
他是一個俊朗且好心腸的人。
5. He went to college, during which he showed great interest in folk music.
他上了大學，在這期間他對民間音樂表現出極大的興趣。
6. When he was still a boy, he showed great interest in literature.
當他還是個孩子的時候，他對文學表現出極大的興趣。
7. We regard him as our model.
我們把他視為榜樣。
8. The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.
人們把他作為一個鼓舞人心的領袖而開始愛戴他。
9. Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.
雷鋒因他的共產主義精神而受到稱贊。
探究點2 寫作應用體驗
寫作典例
請用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文簡要介紹雷鋒。主要內容如下：
雷鋒，1940年12月18日生于湖南省望城縣，7歲成了孤兒，1962年8月15日逝世。雖然生命只有短暫的22年，但他作為一名解放軍戰士，努力工作，樂于助人，一生做好事無數，一直被視為每個公民的英雄和楷模。
分步推進
Step 1 審題謀篇
Step 2 要點翻譯
1. 翻譯詞匯
（1）___________ 出生于
（2）_______ v. 使成為孤兒
（3）_______________________ 人民解放軍
（4）____________ 做好準備
（5）______________ 做好事
be born in
orphan
People’s Liberation Army
be ready to
do good deeds
（1）雷鋒1940年12月18日出生于湖南望城縣，1962年8月15日逝世。
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
（2）作為一名人民解放軍，他工作努力，并且總是樂于助人。
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
2. 翻譯句子
Lei Feng was born in Wangcheng County, Hunan Province, on December 18, 1940 and passed away on August 15, 1962.
He worked hard and was always ready to help others as a soldier in the People’s Liberation Army.
（3）他的生命很短，只有22年。
______________________________________________________________
（4）他在短短的一生中做了無數好事，一直被視為每個公民的英雄和楷模。
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
He lived a short life of only 22 years.
He did countless good deeds in his short life and has been regarded all the time as a hero and model for every citizen.
用although連接上題中的句（2）和句（3）
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
Step 3 句式升級
Although he lived a short life of only 22 years, as a soldier in the People’s Liberation Army, he worked hard and was always ready to help others.
Step 4 連句成篇
利用以上幾個句子，加上恰當的連接詞和過渡句，必要時可以改變句式，使之成為一篇連貫的文章。
參考范文
Lei Feng was born in Wangcheng County, Hunan Province, on December 18, 1940 and passed away on August 15, 1962. He was orphaned at 7 years old. Although he lived a short life of only 22 years, as a soldier in the People’s Liberation Army, he worked hard and was always ready to help others. He did countless good deeds in his short life and has been regarded all the time as a hero and model for every citizen.
In a word, Lei Feng was an example of the soldiers of the People’s Liberation Army in China.
假定你是李華，請你以“My hero”為題，寫一篇介紹你心目中的英雄——周恩來的英語短文。內容要點如下：
1. 周恩來是新中國的第一位總理；
2. 他參加了抗日戰爭和解放戰爭；
3. ……
主題寫作
注意：
1. 詞數80左右；
2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3. 標題已給出，不計入總詞數。
參考范文
My hero
My hero is Zhou Enlai, who was the first premier of the People’s Republic of China.
He was a great revolutionist who had devoted all his life to the cause of the liberation of China. He took part in the War of Resistance Against Japanese Aggression and the War of Liberation. He fought bravely against the enemies in order to save the people from great suffering. He was such a man who cared more about the people than himself. He put all the people in his heart except himself.
I admire him so much, though he has been away from us for a long time. I like him best and believe that he will always be alive in the minds of Chinese people.
THANKS

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