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高三下試卷作文
編號(hào)：02
Topic: 科技創(chuàng)新活動(dòng)介紹信
假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友 David 對(duì)學(xué)校社團(tuán)活動(dòng)很感興趣。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封信，介紹此次學(xué)校科技創(chuàng)意俱樂(lè)部舉辦的活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 活動(dòng)過(guò)程；
2. 感受和收獲。
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活動(dòng)過(guò)程敘述 “時(shí)間軸法”
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階段 常用表達(dá) 示例內(nèi)容
分組階段 be divided into groups; team up with We were split into 5 groups of 4, each assigned a tech theme.
創(chuàng)作階段 brainstorm; solve problems collaboratively For days, we debated designs and tested prototypes together.
展示階段 present; demonstrate; win applause Each group showcased their project with slides and live demos.
頒獎(jiǎng)階段 announce the results; award prizes The top group won a 3D printer for their class.
Dear Alex,
Our school’s Tech Innovation Club held a cool activity. I’m writing to share it with you.
First, we were divided into several groups to create a tech project within a week. We argued, solved problems together, and celebrated every great idea. When it was time to share, each group introduced their creations with shining eyes and confident smiles. Everyone cheered as the judges announced the top three groups, who won prizes and gold medals.
This activity left a deep impression on me. Only then did I realize that creativity grows through challenges. If you want to know more details, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
親愛(ài)的Alex ：
我們學(xué)校的科技創(chuàng)新俱樂(lè)部舉辦了一場(chǎng)很酷的活動(dòng)。我寫(xiě)這封信是為了和你分享這個(gè)活動(dòng)。
首先，我們被分成幾個(gè)小組，在一周內(nèi)創(chuàng)建一個(gè)技術(shù)項(xiàng)目。我們爭(zhēng)論，一起解決問(wèn)題，并慶祝每一個(gè)偉大的想法。當(dāng)分享時(shí)間到來(lái)時(shí)，每個(gè)小組都帶著閃亮的眼睛和自信的微笑介紹自己的創(chuàng)意。當(dāng)評(píng)委宣布前三名小組時(shí)，所有人都?xì)g呼雀躍，他們贏得了獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)和金牌。
這個(gè)活動(dòng)給我留下了深刻的印象。直到那時(shí)我才意識(shí)到，創(chuàng)造力是通過(guò)挑戰(zhàn)而成長(zhǎng)的。如果你想了解更多細(xì)節(jié)，請(qǐng)隨時(shí)與我聯(lián)系。
祝好，
李華
語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)積累（科技活動(dòng)主題）
高頻動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)
collaborate on tech projects（合作開(kāi)發(fā)科技項(xiàng)目）
troubleshoot problems（解決問(wèn)題）
pitch creative ideas（展示創(chuàng)意）
foster innovation（培養(yǎng)創(chuàng)新）
高級(jí)句型
倒裝句：Only through teamwork did we overcome the technical challenges.
強(qiáng)調(diào)句：It was the process of debating and iterating that taught me the value of persistence.
非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)：Holding our prototype in hand, we felt a sense of pride like never before.
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實(shí)戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練（高考真題改編）
你校機(jī)器人社團(tuán)舉辦 “AI 創(chuàng)意大賽”，要求兩人一組設(shè)計(jì)智能裝置。你和搭檔發(fā)明了 “智能分類垃圾桶”，通過(guò)傳感器識(shí)別垃圾類型并自動(dòng)開(kāi)蓋。決賽中你們的作品獲 “最佳創(chuàng)新獎(jiǎng)”，你從中體會(huì)到 “合作與創(chuàng)新的力量”。
要求：
按書(shū)信格式寫(xiě)給筆友 Tom；
包含比賽流程（分組、設(shè)計(jì)、展示）和個(gè)人收獲；
使用至少 1 個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句（如 “It was...that...”）。
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讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)續(xù)寫(xiě)任務(wù)
開(kāi)頭句：
"When I saw the 'PASSED' message, Adria’s words suddenly made sense——every drop of sweat had been worth it."
要求：
描寫(xiě)頒獎(jiǎng)現(xiàn)場(chǎng)的場(chǎng)景（運(yùn)用聽(tīng)覺(jué) + 視覺(jué)描寫(xiě)）；
加入一個(gè)象征堅(jiān)持的道具（如磨損的運(yùn)動(dòng)鞋 / 記錄訓(xùn)練的筆記本）；
以 “傳承導(dǎo)師精神” 結(jié)尾。
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讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)翻譯練習(xí)
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成為健身教練 翻譯練習(xí)
盡管成為健身教練的旅程充滿了挑戰(zhàn)和淚水，但她的話語(yǔ)成為了我進(jìn)步progress的指引之光guiding light 。
每天早晨，我強(qiáng)迫自己起床，在空蕩蕩empty的街道上慢跑jog ，呼出的氣息breath在寒冷的空氣中形成白霧clouds 。
晚上，我努力翻閱堆積如山的書(shū)籍和浩瀚的知識(shí)海洋。
六個(gè)月后，我驚訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)自己已經(jīng)忘記了壓力，變得更加強(qiáng)壯和自信。
最終，帶著一絲焦慮和興奮，我報(bào)名參加了教練考試trainer exam 。
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情節(jié)銜接 “3 關(guān)鍵”
情感延續(xù)：
前文：訓(xùn)練艱辛 → 后文：通過(guò)考試后的感恩（如擁抱導(dǎo)師 Adria）
道具呼應(yīng)：
前文：導(dǎo)師的話語(yǔ) → 后文：用導(dǎo)師的鼓勵(lì)激勵(lì)自己的學(xué)員
主題深化：
個(gè)人成長(zhǎng) → 傳遞正能量（如 “Now, I pour my patience into my trainees...”）
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描寫(xiě)層次 “感官 + 比喻”
層次 示例內(nèi)容 效果
基礎(chǔ)描寫(xiě) I jogged every morning. 平淡敘述
感官升級(jí) My breath formed clouds in the cold air. 視覺(jué)具象化，增強(qiáng)畫(huà)面感
比喻修辭 Mountains of books and an ocean of knowledge. 夸張比喻，突出學(xué)習(xí)量之大
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成為健身教練 Paragraph 1
Her words echoed in my mind. Though the journey to becoming a fitness trainer was full of challenges and tears, her words became the guiding light for my progress. Each morning, I forced myself out of bed to jog through empty streets, my breath forming clouds in the cold air. At night, I struggled through mountains of books and an ocean of knowledge. Six months later, I was surprised to find that I had forgotten about stress, growing stronger and more confident. Finally, with a bit of anxiety and excitement, I signed up for the trainer exam.
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成為健身教練 Paragraph 2
When a huge “YOU PASSED” popped up on the screen, I couldn’t wait to find Adria. Tears welled as I hugged her, whispering, “ I made it! ”Then, I handed a bunch of flowers to expressed my sincere gratitude. It was her encouragement that gave me courage and confidence. Without her help, I couldn’t have gotten through the tough time in my life. I could hardly believe that I fell in love of sports and even became a trainer. Now, I pour my patience and encouragement into my trainees, just as Adria did for me. I tell them: "Where there is a will, there is a way."
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