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(共16張PPT)
讀后續(xù)寫
寫作技巧指導
句型多樣
長短結(jié)合，簡繁交錯
What an adorable pony（可愛的小馬）! Its slender（苗條的） body, its silky mane（鬃毛）, its leisurely pace（悠閑的步伐）, and its shiny saddle（閃亮的鞍）, all kept me so spellbound that I couldn’t avert my gaze（轉(zhuǎn)移我的視線） from it. (From A CHRISTMAS PONY)
After what seemed like a century, the longing for boots finally gave way to the desire to buy a turkey. (From CHRISTMAS BOOTS OR DECORATIONS)
Scene after scene, where Mum worked day in and day out and the whole family struggled to make ends meet（量入為出）, came flooding in my mind. (From CHRISTMAS BOOTS OR DECORATIONS)
Out of the dark forest came a man in uniform. It was the forester（護林人）! (From FISHING ADVENTURE)
Slowly, she turned around, and, mustering（聚集） all her remaining strength, staggered（蹣跚，搖晃） towards the darkness, her back hunched（聳） and body slightly trembling. (From MY ONE-EYED MOTHER)
感嘆句；名詞短語；so… that句型
定語從句
倒裝句
獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)
名詞性從句
Sensing a note of sincerity in my voice（感受到真誠的語氣）, he, after a momentary hesitation, nodded and walked to his favorite cake. “May I have this one ” he enquired sheepishly（害羞）. (From THE SAMPLER)
With his head drooping（垂頭）, John reluctantly turned around, and slowly inched his way to his room. (From CHRISTMAS WITHOUT AN ORANGE)
Through tearful（含淚的） eyes, I visualized（想象） my feeble（虛弱的） mother writing the last letter for me with her quivering hand in the dim light. (From MY ONE-EYED MOTHER)
Eyes lingering（停留，盯著） on the figurine（小雕像）, the man’s face softened, and, much to the boy’s astonishment, it creased（皺紋） into a faint smile. (From THE DOG FIGURINE)
When led out of the forest, Steve and I repeatedly stammered（結(jié)結(jié)巴巴） our heartfelt thanks to him.
非謂語動詞
With復合結(jié)構(gòu)
狀語從句中的省略
介詞短語
動作描寫
心中有“畫” ，筆下有“話”
動作描寫：①給動作“化功大法”
He thanked the man, took over the reins（繩子） and led the pony in my direction. (From THE CHRISTMAS PONY)
Seeing this, Mr. Rowe came up to him, crouched down（蹲下） and asked in a tone of tender concern（關(guān)心）, “What’s up ” (From MR. ROWE)
With a pang of nervousness seizing his heart tightly, he stood in front of the door, wondering about the old man’s reaction to being disturbed a second time. Ultimately, he summoned up(召喚） all his courage and knocked at the door. (From THE DOG FIGURINE)
寫一寫
情景1：碰到難題，苦思冥想。
What a complicated and difficult math problem! One second, Little John rested his chin（用手托下巴） in his hand and fiddled（虛度光陰）） with the pencil. The next, he fidgeted（煩躁） in his seat and scratched（撓） his head over and over again, not having the faintest idea how to work it out.
寫一寫
情景2：成功爬上山頂。
The magnificent（壯麗的） landscape unfolding in front of me, a sense of refreshment spread through me. Involuntarily（無心，不自覺）, I stretched out my arms, tilted my head（傾斜） and exclaimed（呼喊，大聲說） in delight at the top of my voice, feeling the crisp breeze（微風） on my face.
動作描寫：②給動作“涂脂抹粉”
With his head drooping, John reluctantly turned around, and slowly inched his way to his room. (From CHRISTMAS WITHOUT AN ORANGE)
In a sobbing voice, he admitted and regretted having cheated in the test. (From CHEATING IN A TEST)
Without a momentary（片刻的） hesitation, I elbowed （肘，推擠）my way through the crowd in the direction of Lego section and all the way kept calling my brother’s name, a note of uneasiness in my voice. (From LEGO TOYS)
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情景3：發(fā)現(xiàn)一只受傷的小鳥。
On the grass ahead lay a swallow with an outstretched wing that was obviously broken. Seeing this, Little Betty walked swiftly beside the poor little creature, stooped/bent down（彎腰）, and lifted it in her cupped hands gently and carefully as if holding a precious and fragile treasure(寶貴的，易碎的）.
He cupped his hands around his mouth and called out for his friends at the top of his voice.
動作描寫：③給動作“配上聲音”
④給動作“加上表情”
Taking a deep breath, he summoned up all his remaining courage and gently knocked at the door. With a flicker （閃過）of anger in his eyes, the old man opened the door and snapped（斷裂） in a cold voice, “Why come again !” Timidly, the boy stretched out his hands and stuffed his dog figurine into the old man’s palm. “For me ” asked the man, confusion registering on his face. The boy nodded, “I hope you’ll like it.” Eyes lingering on the figurine, the man’s face softened, and, much to the boy’s astonishment, it creased into a faint smile. “Thank you,” uttered the old man, his eyes red-rimmed（眼眶紅了） with tears. (From THE DOG FIGURINE)
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情景4：久別之后回到家。
The familiar sight came into view. Involuntarily, he clutched the handle（緊握手把） of the luggage more firmly and quickened his pace towards his home, his mind drifting to the surprised and delighted expression on his mother’s face. Reaching the doorstep, he paused to compose himself, pushed open the door and exclaimed in delight, “Mum, I’m home,” with his eyes sparkling with anticipation（期待）.
動作描寫：⑤給動作“融入心理”
But I, consumed with intense anger at her sudden appearance in my doorway, just cast her an indifferent glance, ignored her pleading look and uttered no word. (From MY ONE-EYED MOTHER)
Torn between the overwhelming yearning （渴望，向往）for the delicate boots and the melancholy （令人悲傷的）for our depressing Christmas, I came to a halt halfway to the shoe store. (From CHRISTMAS BOOTS OR DECORATIONS)
寫一寫
情景5：憧憬假期。
With his chin in his cupped hand, he sat there motionlessly
（靜止）, all his mind on where to spend the long-anticipated holiday. Actually, all these days he had been racking his brains（磨煉腦袋） to figure out a plan. Then all of a sudden, he had an idea — how about going to the beach for relaxation “Yes, that’s it!” he whispered to himself, his lips curving into a beaming smile.
動作描寫：⑥給動作“添上環(huán)境”
Anxiously straining（緊張） my eyes, I scanned the toy store, but he was nowhere to be found. Outside, thunder and lightning continued; inside, chaotic （混亂的）noise rang in my ears. Deep anxiety dominating me, I was on the verge of tears and stood rooted in blackness, hopeless and helpless. (From LEGO TOYS)
Worse still, when the fire died down, the whole wilderness was enveloped in darkness, with no one in sight. What kept us company was the chill wind that ruthlessly 無情地whipped（鞭） my face, gradually devouring the last bit of the remaining hope in my heart. (From FISHING ADVENTURE)
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情景6：得知被心儀的大學錄取。
The Admission Letter clutched （抓）tightly in my hand, I jumped up and down with undisguised（不偽裝的，真心的） excitement. Tired, I lay down on the grass and hummed my little tune（哼著曲） along with the birds’ twittering. The breeze, though a bit cool, blew into my heart, dispelling the anxiety（驅(qū)散焦慮） that had haunted（縈繞心頭） me for a long time.

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