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高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)
音樂老師鼓勵身體殘疾的學(xué)生重返舞臺
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句子仿寫
1. 我從來不認(rèn)為自己在音樂方面很有天賦，但我父母想讓我在六歲的時候?qū)W彈鋼琴。
譯：I never thought I was very talented at anything to do with music, but my parents wanted me to learn to play the piano at the age of six.
仿：Mary說她一直都認(rèn)為Jane在音樂方面很有天賦，并且全班同學(xué)都很期待Jane去參加這次比賽。
Mary always thought Jane was very talented at something to do with music, and all of the classmates expected her to take part in the singing contest.
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2.盡管我對它一點也不感興趣，但是為了做一個好女兒，我同意去學(xué)。
譯：To be a good daughter, I agreed to learn, even though I wasn't interested in it at all.
仿：盡管她對它一點信心也沒有，但是為了追尋夢想，Jane同意去參加比賽，
To follow her dream, Jane agreed to take part in, even though she wasn't confident at all.
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3.我的鋼琴老師很善于揣摩學(xué)生的心思，幾節(jié)課后她就能看出我的心思不在這上面。
譯：Experienced in reading her student's minds, my piano teacher could tell after a couple of lessons that my heart was not in it.
仿：Mary很善于揣摩學(xué)生的心思，她馬上就看出了Jane的猶豫。
Experienced in reading her student's minds, Mary could tell immediately that Jane’s hesitation.
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4.然而，學(xué)了大概六個月后，我被要求在老師安排的年終音樂會上表演。
譯：However, after learning for about six months, I was asked to perform something at the year-end concert arranged by my teacher.
仿：她鼓勵著Jane，同時也要求她每天都練習(xí)唱歌。大概一個月后，比賽開始了。
She encouraged Jane and asked her to practice singing every day. After learning for about a month, the competition started.
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2. 驚訝和恐懼的同時，我只能同意。譯：Surprised and terrified at the same time, I could only agree. 仿：站在舞臺上，焦慮和恐懼的同時，Jane嘗試著鎮(zhèn)靜下來。 Standing on the stage, anxious and terrified at the same time, Jane tried to calm herself down.
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2. 鑒于我沒有經(jīng)驗，我選擇了相對簡單的一首曲子。譯：Given my inexperience, I chose a fairly simple composition. 仿：鑒于她沒有經(jīng)驗，Jane選擇了相對熟悉的一首歌曲。
Given her inexperience, she chose a fairly familiar song.
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7.為了良好表現(xiàn)，在接下來的兩個月里，我每天都練習(xí)同一首曲子一小時。譯：In order to perform well, I practiced the same composition for an hour a day for the next two months. 仿：為了良好表現(xiàn)，在接下來的一個月里，Jane每天都堅持練習(xí)一個小時。In order to perform well, she practiced the same song for an hour a day for the next months.
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8.比賽那天，我很緊張，一覺醒來心里七上八下的。譯：On the day of the concert, I was so nervous that I woke up with butterflies in my stomach. 仿：比賽那天，Jane很緊張，一覺醒來心里七上八下的。 On the day of the contest, Jane was so nervous that she woke up with butterflies in her stomach.
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9.事實證明，并不需要緊張，因為我所有的努力都得到了回報，我彈得很完美。譯：As it turned out, there was no need to be nervous because all my hard work paid off and I played perfectly. 仿：事實證明，并不需要緊張，因為她的所有努力都得到了回報，Jane唱得很完美。 As it turned out, there was no need to be nervous because all her hard work paid off and Jane sang perfectly.
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10.在第一次演出和觀眾的積極反應(yīng)的鼓舞下，我繼續(xù)彈鋼琴，每天都更加享受它。譯：Encouraged by this first performance and the positive reaction of the audience, I have continued to play the piano and enjoy it more every day.
仿：在這一次演出和觀眾的積極反應(yīng)的鼓舞下，Jane繼續(xù)唱歌，每天都更加享受它。Encouraged by this first performance and the positive reaction of the audience, Jane have continued to sing and enjoy it more every day.
續(xù)寫原文
As a single mother, I’ve never doubted my daughter Jane’s dream to be a singer on the stage. At an early age, she was crazy about singing. Whenever she had a chance, she would sing to her heart’s content. Her sweet and charming voice tended to get people around attracted to her songs.
Living in a small city, I took several odd jobs, determined to do everything in my power to support her. Soon after Jane attended school, her music teacher Mary noticed her talent by chance and volunteered to give her some guidance on how to sing. Jane practiced so hard that before long she made great progress in singing.
Unfortunately, one noon a year later, Jane was crossing the street when a careless driver knocked her down. She was rushed to hospital. When I hurried there, the doctor told me that my daughter would probably not stand on her own feet. I froze with shock, feeling as if I had been thrown into a dark world. Weak and dizzy, I was about to fall to the ground when someone took hold of me.
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譯文
作為一個單身母親，我從來沒有懷疑過我的女兒簡想成為一名舞臺上的歌手的夢想。很小的時候，她就對唱歌著了迷。只要一有機會，她就會盡情地唱歌。她甜美迷人的聲音往往讓周圍的人被她的歌曲所吸引。
生活在一個小城市里，我打了幾份零工，決心盡一切力量養(yǎng)活她。簡上學(xué)后不久，她的音樂老師瑪麗偶然發(fā)現(xiàn)了她的天賦，并主動給她一些關(guān)于如何唱歌的指導(dǎo)。簡練習(xí)得非常刻苦，不久她在歌唱方面取得了很大進(jìn)步。
不幸的是，一年后的一個中午，簡在過馬路時，被一個粗心的司機撞倒了。她被緊急送往醫(yī)院。當(dāng)我趕到那里時，醫(yī)生告訴我，我女兒可能不會自立了。我震驚得呆住了，感覺自己仿佛被扔進(jìn)了一個黑暗的世界。我渾身無力，頭暈?zāi)垦＃煲乖诘厣系臅r候，有人一把抓住了我。
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續(xù)寫原文
It was Mary, who got the news and raced here. She comforted me, saying firmly, “Grace, Jane needs you. You must stay calm and strong.” I nodded. Having calmed down, I entered the ward with Mary.
That night, Jane recovered her consciousness (知覺) and opened her eyes. Holding her hand, I said, “My dear, everything would be fine.” Mary comforted her gently, “I know you are a strong girl, Jane. Don’t worry. We’ll be standing by you.” I was heartbroken to see tears streaming down Jane’s cheeks.
After two months, we returned home from hospital. Her teachers and friends frequently visited her. Jane eventually accepted the fact that she would have to get around in a wheelchair. Never did she refer to the subject of singing again. I knew she was a nice and understanding girl, who was afraid that talking about her original dream would upset the two of us.
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譯文
是瑪麗，她得到消息后就趕來了。她安慰我，堅定地說，“格瑞絲簡需要你。你必須保持冷靜和堅強。”我點點頭。平靜下來后，我和瑪麗一起走進(jìn)了病房。
那天晚上，簡恢復(fù)了知覺，睜開了眼睛。握著她的手，我說，“親愛的，一切都會好的。瑪麗溫柔地安慰她：“簡，我知道你是個堅強的女孩。別擔(dān)心。我們會支持你的。”看到眼淚從簡的臉頰上流下來，我很傷心。
兩個月后，我們出院回家。她的老師和朋友經(jīng)常來看望她。簡最終接受了她必須坐輪椅的事實。她再也沒有提過唱歌的事。我知道她是一個很好很善解人意的女孩，她害怕談?wù)撟约鹤畛醯膲粝霑屛覀儍蓚€人難過。
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續(xù)寫思路分析
Para 1：One day, however, Mary came with good news.　　　
由第一段首句內(nèi)容“然而，有一天，瑪麗帶來了好消息。”可知，第一段可描寫瑪麗告訴簡希望她代表班級唱歌，簡在瑪麗的幫助下繼續(xù)練習(xí)，終于可以展示自己了。
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續(xù)寫思路分析
Para 2：When the host announced it was Jane’s turn, she was wheeled onto the stage.
由第二段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)主持人宣布輪到簡時，她被推上了舞臺。”可知，第二段可描寫簡的歌聲得到了老師和同學(xué)們的贊揚，簡重新找回了最初追求夢想的信心。
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續(xù)寫原文分析
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本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者的女兒簡夢想成為歌手，在她的音樂老師瑪麗的幫助下，簡為了她的夢想努力取得進(jìn)步。突然有一天，簡遭遇了車禍，以后都不能自己站起來了，必須坐輪椅四處走動，簡再也沒有提過唱歌的話題。
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續(xù)寫思路分析
續(xù)寫線索
好消息——簡懷疑自己——練習(xí)唱歌——開始表演——得到贊揚——找到信心
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范文呈現(xiàn)
One day, however, Mary came with good news. She told Jane the school music festival was to be held the next month and that her classmates all expected her to sing on behalf of her class. Jane’s eyes sparkled but responded doubtfully, “Can I... ”/ 2.“Really ” Jane exclaimed /shouted (大聲說) with excitement but immediately with her head hanging down, she murmured, “I’m afraid I’m not capable of it.”（1. Mary and I immediately assured her that she could make it. 2. Perceiving/Sensing(覺察) her hesitation and lack of confidence, Mary and I said some encouraging words and persuaded her to sign up for it. ）In the following month, 1. with the help of Mary, Jane kept on practicing singing. Beautiful songs echoed in our house again and smiles began to appear on her face. 2. Under Mary’s guidance, she made rapid progress. Days ticking by(日子一天天過去), finally the big day came when Jane would give her singing performance on the stage. / Finally the big day came when she could present herself.
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范文呈現(xiàn)
When the host announced it was Jane’s turn, she was wheeled onto the stage. Jane was greeted with warm applause. As she began to sing, the audience got absorbed in her beautiful voice. Seconds after her performance, all the audience rose with thunderous cheers. When wheeled off stage, Jane received praise and bunches of flowers from her teachers and classmates. Jane was moved to tears. The kindness and encouragement from her teachers and classmates stimulated Jane’s enthusiasm for life, making her regain confidence in pursuing her original dream（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）, which I will support wholeheartedly（全心全意地）.
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When the host announced it was Jane’s turn, she was wheeled onto the stage. Nervous as she was, she tried to collect herself（鎮(zhèn)定下來） and stay focused. As she began to sing, the audience got enchanted with（被…迷住） her charming voice. Seconds after her performance, all the audience rose with thunderous applause and cheers. No sooner had Jane been wheeled off stage than she was surrounded by her excited classmates and teachers with bunches of flowers in their hands. She was so moved that she said in a trembling voice, “Without your support and encouragement, I wouldn’t have made it today.” With watery eyes, she threw her arms tightly around Mary, words failing her at that very moment. It was Jane’s persistent efforts and strong faith that paved the way for（為…鋪平道路） realizing her dream.（升華）
范文譯文
然而，有一天，瑪麗帶來了好消息。她告訴簡，學(xué)校的音樂節(jié)將在下個月舉行，她的同學(xué)們都希望她能代表她的班級唱歌。簡的眼睛閃閃發(fā)光，但懷疑地回答：“我能……嗎？”瑪麗和我立即向她保證她能成功。在接下來的一個月里，在瑪麗的幫助下，簡繼續(xù)練習(xí)唱歌。美麗的歌聲再次在我們家回蕩，她的臉上開始露出笑容。終于有一個重要的日子到來了，她可以展現(xiàn)自己了。
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范文譯文
當(dāng)主持人宣布輪到簡時，她被推上了舞臺。簡受到熱烈的掌聲歡迎。當(dāng)她開始唱歌時，觀眾被她優(yōu)美的嗓音所吸引。在她表演幾秒鐘后，所有的觀眾都?xì)g呼起來。當(dāng)簡被推下舞臺時，她受到了老師和同學(xué)的贊揚和一束束鮮花。簡感動得哭了。來自老師和同學(xué)的善意和鼓勵激發(fā)了Jane對生活的熱情，使她重拾了追求最初夢想的信心，我將全心全意地支持她。
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