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(共8張PPT)
Topic：A travel experience
He who travels far knows more.
遠(yuǎn)行者見識廣。
Writing
【學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)】
能初步了解寫作過程——“審與列、擴(kuò)與連、查與抄”
初中生活即將結(jié)束，很多同學(xué)想在考試后去旅游。請你以 “An unforgettable trip ”為題，用英語寫一篇短文與同學(xué)們分享一次旅行經(jīng)歷，幫助同學(xué)們更好地選擇旅游地。
內(nèi)容包括：1. 你對旅游地的總體印象；
2. 旅游中的活動；
3. 你的感受與評價；
4. …… （可寫你對他人的建議）
要求：1. 短文必須涵蓋以上內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)拓展；
2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息；
3. 詞數(shù)100詞左右。
審
Writing
topic（話題）：
person（人稱）：
tense(時態(tài))：
key points(要點(diǎn)):
An unforgettable trip
first person
simple past tense (一般過去時)
genaral impression
activities
feelings and advice
列
Make an
Outline（提綱）
key points
Your outline can be like this.
General impression（總體印象）:
1. place ______, time ______, people ________, ...
2. impression: _____________
Activities（活動）:
1. ________________________________
2. ________________________________
3. ________________________________ 4. …
Feelings and advice（感受與建議）:
_____________________________________________
An outline can help you cover all the points(涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)).
采分點(diǎn)1: 內(nèi)容充實(shí)，覆蓋要點(diǎn)（7分）
Hainan
2024
family
fantastic
visit Tianyahaijiao
watch the sunrise
collect shells on the beach
unforgettable, pay a visit to…
An unforgettable trip
Beginning
Body
Ending
Let’s go for it!
General impression（總體印象）:
1. place ______, time ______, people ________, ...
2. impression: _____________
Make your outline an article!
Hainan
2024
family
fantastic
Let’s go for it!
Hainan is a magic land of flowers, coconut trees and the sea world. I went there with my family in 2013. It was so fantastic that I will never forget it.
擴(kuò)
采分點(diǎn)2: 用詞貼切，語法正確，句型多樣（7分）
連
采分點(diǎn)3: 結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，意思連貫（4分）
Beginning
An unforgettable trip
I enjoyed watching the sunrise on the seaside.
I had fun collecting shells along the soft beaches.
I also visited Tianyahaijiao.
I had fun collecting shells along the soft beaches, which made me happy and relaxed.
I had a lot of unforgettable memories there.
For example,
Besides,
What’s more,
It was the most beautiful sight that I have ever seen.
No visit to Hainan is complete without a trip to Tianyahaijiao.
An unforgettable trip
Activities（活動）:
1. ________________________________
2. ________________________________
3. ________________________________
4. …
watch the sunrise
collect shells on the beach
Body
擴(kuò)與連
visit Tianyahaijiao
I had a lot of unforgettable memories there. For example,we enjoyed watching the sunrise on the seaside. It was the most beautiful sight that I have ever seen. Besides, we had fun collecting shells along the soft beaches, which made me relaxed and happy. What’s more, we also visited Tianyahaijiao. It is thought that no visit to Hainan is complete without a trip to Tianyahaijiao.
An unforgettable trip
Activities（活動）:
1. ________________________________
2. ________________________________
3. ________________________________
4. …
watch the sunrise
collect shells on the beach
Body
擴(kuò)與連
visit Tianyahaijiao
topic sentence（主題句）
1+1策略:feelings, details, others…
Different sentence patterns句型多樣
采分點(diǎn)2: 用詞貼切，語法正確，句型多樣（7分）
采分點(diǎn)3: 結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，意思連貫（4分）
linking words
feelings
What a/an trip I had!
What do you think of my trip？
unforgettable
wonderful
fantastic
interesting
…
If you hope to travel somewhere famous, why not pay a visit to Hainan
Ending
What an unforgettable trip I had! If you hope to travel somewhere famous, why not pay a visit to Hainan
Finish your composition.
Homework
審
列
擴(kuò)
連
查
抄

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