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Period 4 Writing
主題引領(lǐng) 情境寫作
根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容，寫一篇有關(guān)瀕危動(dòng)物——金絲猴（golden monkey）的說(shuō)明文。內(nèi)容包括：
1.外貌：金黃色或者灰色；尾巴幾乎和身體一樣長(zhǎng)；
2.棲息地：主要在中國(guó)海拔1 500~3 300米的森林中；
3.生活習(xí)性：群居;吃樹葉、果子；
4.呼吁大家保護(hù)金絲猴。
注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右。
&1& 審題謀篇
&2& 遣詞造句
巧妙對(duì)接單元詞匯
1._____ v. 尋找，尋求
2.___________________________ 采取措施（做某事）
3.________ n. 解決，解決方法
4.______ v. 暴跌
seek
take measures （to do sth.）
solution
crash
5.________ v. 破壞，毀掉
6.________ n. 生物，動(dòng)物
7.______ v. 創(chuàng)立，創(chuàng)建
8.________ v. （從糟糕經(jīng)歷中）恢復(fù)
destroy
creature
found
recover
巧用單元句式、語(yǔ)法
［第一段］ 總體概述
1.金絲猴是一種可愛的動(dòng)物，它們的毛發(fā)是金黃色或灰色的。
Golden monkeys are _______________________ and their fur is golden or gray.
a kind of lovely creature
2.它們的尾巴幾乎和它們的身體一樣長(zhǎng)。
Their tails are almost ______________________.
3.金絲猴主要生活在中國(guó)。
Golden monkeys ____________________.
as long as their bodies
mainly live in China
［第二段］ 介紹棲息地和生活習(xí)性
4.它們居住在森林里。
They _________________.
5.海拔高度約1 500~3 300米。
The altitude ______________________________.
live in the forests
is about 1,500-3,300 metres high
6.此外，他們喜歡群居，并且吃水果、樹葉等。
Besides, they like to _________________________________________
_____.
live in groups and eat fruit, tree leaves, and so on
［第三段］ 描述現(xiàn)狀并呼吁人們保護(hù)動(dòng)物
7.正是因?yàn)槲覀內(nèi)祟悮埧岬仄茐牧怂鼈兊臈⒌兀鸾z猴的數(shù)量正在銳減。（強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）
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It is because we humans cruelly destroy their habitats that the number of golden monkeys is crashing.
8.當(dāng)?shù)卣巡扇∮行Т胧┦蛊鋽?shù)量恢復(fù)，例如建立自然保護(hù)區(qū)。
The local government ________________________________________
________________， such as _______________________.
has taken effective measures to make its population recover
founding nature reserves
9.為了保護(hù)它們免遭滅絕，我們應(yīng)該尋找更多有效的解決方法。
In order to protect them from dying out，we should ___________________________.
seek more effective solutions
10.只有這樣，金絲猴的數(shù)量才能增加。
_______________ the number of golden monkeys increase.
Only if so can
靚化表達(dá)促提升
11.用whose引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句改寫句1
______________________________________________________________________
Golden monkeys are a kind of lovely creature， whose fur is golden or gray.
12.用where引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句合并句4和句5
________________________________________________________________________
They live in the forests， where the altitude is about 1,500-3,300 metres high.
&3& 銜接成篇
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One possible version：
Golden monkeys are a kind of lovely creature， whose fur is golden or gray. Their tails are almost as long as their bodies.
Golden monkeys mainly live in China. They live in the forests，where the altitude is about 1,500-3,300 metres high. Besides， they like to live in groups and eat fruit，tree leaves， and so on.
However， nowadays， it is because we humans cruelly destroy their habitats that the number of golden monkeys is crashing. Fortunately， the local government has taken effective measures to make its population recover， such as founding nature reserves.
What's more， in order to protect them from dying out， we should seek more effective solutions. Only if so can the number of golden monkeys increase.
假定你是李華,你校英文報(bào)正在向同學(xué)們征集介紹野生動(dòng)物的稿件,請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫一篇介紹老虎的短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括:
1.老虎的外形和生活習(xí)性;
2.老虎的生存現(xiàn)狀;
3.呼吁大家保護(hù)老虎。
注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫。
參考詞匯:條紋（stripe），貓科動(dòng)物（cat）
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One possible version:
Tigers are a kind of big cat living in thick forests. They are very fierce and mainly eat small animals. With yellow and black stripes all over the body, they look very beautiful. They also have long and strong tails.
During the past years, many forests have been destroyed and therefore the habitats of tigers are becoming smaller and smaller. As a result, there are fewer tigers living in the world now.
Tigers are endangered animals, so we must do our best to protect their habitats and improve their living conditions.
第一段總體概述 1.Unique to China, the giant panda mainly lives in the mountains of Sichuan, Shaanxi and Gansu provinces.
大熊貓是中國(guó)特有的動(dòng)物，主要生活在四川、陜西和甘肅的山區(qū)。
2.Golden monkeys are one of the rare animals on Earth. 金絲猴是地球上稀有的動(dòng)物之一。
第二段具體介紹動(dòng)物的外貌特征、生活習(xí)性等 1.The giant panda is a rare animal whose natural habitat is the bamboo forest.大熊貓是一種珍稀動(dòng)物，其自然棲息地是竹林。
2.The bird has beautiful wings with some black spots on its feathers.這只鳥有漂亮的翅膀，羽毛上有一些黑點(diǎn)。
3.They usually live in valleys where there is enough grass or leaves.它們通常生活在有足夠的草或樹葉的山谷里。
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第二段具體介紹動(dòng)物的外貌特征、生活習(xí)性等 4.They feed/live mainly on bamboo. 它們主要以竹子為食。
5.The elephant migrates at the beginning of the dry season to make it closer to rivers and water sources. 大象在旱季開始時(shí)遷徙，以便離河流和水源更近。
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第三段描述動(dòng)物的現(xiàn)狀，并呼吁大家保護(hù)動(dòng)物 1.Unfortunately, the number of the species is becoming smaller and smaller.不幸的是，該物種的數(shù)量正變得越來(lái)越少。
2.Many animals are in danger of being extinct, which mostly results from human activity.許多動(dòng)物正面臨滅絕的危險(xiǎn)，這主要是人類活動(dòng)造成的。
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第三段描述動(dòng)物的現(xiàn)狀，并呼吁大家保護(hù)動(dòng)物 3.We should let people know/make people aware of the importance of protecting endangered animals. 我們應(yīng)該讓人們意識(shí)到保護(hù)瀕危動(dòng)物的重要性。
4.Last but not least, everybody is supposed to raise the awareness of protecting animals. 最后但同樣重要的是，每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該提高保護(hù)動(dòng)物的意識(shí)。
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第三段描述動(dòng)物的現(xiàn)狀，并呼吁大家保護(hù)動(dòng)物 5.The good news is that the government has taken action to protect their habitats from being destroyed. 好消息是政府已經(jīng)采取行動(dòng)保護(hù)它們的棲息地不被破壞。
6.A small effort can make a big difference. 小小的努力可以產(chǎn)生很大的影響。
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詞匯積累 ［情感描寫］ amazing, shock, breathtaking, freeze→frozen
［動(dòng)作描寫］ seek, measure, determine, survive, encounter, concentrate, stare
［環(huán)境描寫］ rain cats and dogs, the elements, path
佳句積累 ［環(huán)境描寫］ When I finally stepped out of the trees， the view was breathtaking.
［動(dòng)作描寫］ 1.While I was concentrating on photographing this amazing scene， I suddenly had a feeling that I was being watched. Slowly， and with the camera still held to my eye， I turned...and froze.
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佳句積累 2.My legs started shaking. Somehow, I forced my finger to press the button. A second later, the bear turned and ran back into the forest. When I recovered from the shock， I looked at my camera.
［夸張］ Time stood still as the bear and I both waited to see who would move first.
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［場(chǎng)景呈現(xiàn)］ 熊離我們?cè)浇覀兙驮胶ε隆Ｋ⒅覀儯覀儺?dāng)場(chǎng)嚇得呆住了。然后，我決定把面包扔到灌木叢里，希望引開熊。一聞到面包的味道，熊的注意力就集中在面包上，并沿著小路追過(guò)去。就在那時(shí)，我拍了一張令人驚嘆的熊的照片。終于，直升機(jī)來(lái)了，我們得救了。
1.________________________________________________（the+比較級(jí)...，the+比較級(jí)...）. It 2.____________， and we 3._______________________.Then I 4._____________________________________， hoping that the bear could be attracted. On smelling the bread， the bear 5.___________________________________ and tracked it along the path. 6.____________________________________________________（強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）.Eventually， the helicopter arrived， and we were rescued.
The nearer the bear was, the more frightened we got
stared at us
were frozen on the spot
determined to cast the bread to the bush
concentrated its attention on the bread
It was then that I took a breathtaking picture of the bear
短語(yǔ)必記 1.be full of fear 充滿恐懼
2.in （a） panic恐慌
3.run away逃跑；失控
4.one's knees feel weak（嚇得）膝蓋發(fā)軟
5.in a cold sweat（因害怕等）一身冷汗
必背金句 1.She froze, her mouth hanging open. 她張著嘴，呆住了。
2.His throat tightened with fear when he saw the snake. 他看見蛇，嚇得喉嚨發(fā)緊。
3.That horror movie made my hair stand on end.
那部恐怖電影讓我毛骨悚然。
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必背金句 4.They got into a panic, waving and shouting crazily towards the shore.
他們驚慌失措，瘋狂地朝岸邊揮手大叫。
5.I could feel my heart pounding wildly and my palms sweating.
我能感覺到我的心怦怦亂跳，手心直冒汗。
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