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Period 4 Writing
主題引領 情境寫作
假定你是李華，你校英語報正在開展“感恩父母”的征文活動，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，內容包括：
1.父親或母親令你印象最深刻的一件事；
2.自己的感想和從中得到的啟示。
注意:寫作詞數應為80個左右。
&1& 審題謀篇
&2& 遣詞造句
巧妙對接單元詞匯
1._________ v. 走近；靠近
2.________ 求助于
3.____________________ 跟某人聊天
4._______ v. 尊敬，敬重
5._________________________ 保持積極自信
approach
turn to
have a chat with sb.
respect
keep positive and confident
巧用單元句式、語法
［第一段］ 表達對母親的尊敬和感激
1.我最尊敬和感激的人是我的母親，因為她對我無盡的關愛。
______________________________________ is my mother because of her endless love for me.
The person I respect and appreciate most
［第二段］ 詳細介紹事情的經過
2.我仍然記得我在中學的一次考試中不及格那一天。
I still remember the day ______________________________________
______.
when I failed in an exam in middle school
3.因為我沒有人可以求助，我非常難過。
______________________________________， I was so sad.
Because I had no one to turn to for help
4.她下班后注意到我很沮喪，走到我跟前，和我溫柔地聊了聊。
After work, she noticed my being upset，_______________________
___________________.
approached me and had a gentle chat with me
5.她告訴我失敗是成功之母，并鼓勵我保持積極和自信。（that引導賓語從句）
She told me _________________________________ and encouraged me ____________________________.
that failure is the mother of success
to keep positive and confident
［第三段］ 表達自己的感受
6.我永遠不會忘記母親為我做的一切。
I'll never forget all the things _________________________________.
7.做她的孩子是我最大的幸福。［動詞-ing（短語）作主語］
_______________ is my greatest happiness.
（that） my mum has done for me
Being her child
靚化表達促提升
8.用with復合結構改寫句3
____________________________________________
With no one to turn to for help， I was so sad.
&3& 銜接成篇
___________________________________________________________
One possible version:
The person I respect and appreciate most is my mother because of her endless love for me.
I still remember the day when I failed in an exam in middle school. With no one to turn to for help， I was so sad. After work， she noticed my being upset， approached me and had a gentle chat with me. She told me that failure is the mother of success and encouraged me to keep positive and confident.
I'll never forget all the things （that） my mum has done for me. Being her child is my greatest happiness.
假定你是李華，昨天你無意中在一本書刊中發現了一張與父親一起跑步的舊照片，這讓你回想起與父親一起跑步的日子。請你根據以下要點寫一篇英語短文。
1.父親習慣早起慢跑；
2.自己一開始不喜歡和他跑步，并說明原因；
3.跑步最終讓自己和父親的關系得到改善。
注意：寫作詞數應為80個左右。
_____________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:
I was tidying my room yesterday when I found an old photo in a book, where I was going jogging with my father. The photo reminded me of the past.
My dad got used to going jogging at dawn. Two years ago, he asked me to go jogging with him, which I hated because I was unwilling to get up early and didn't know what to say with him. However, as time went by, we began to talk more while going jogging. Later, he even began to tell me jokes!
Now, I am glad that he made me go jogging with him because our relationship has greatly improved.
第一段
引出話題，寫明引起回憶的原因/事物 1.Every time I see it, I can't help thinking of that unforgettable thing in my life.
每當我看到它，我就會不由自主地想起我生命中那件難忘的事。
2.The lovely memory came flooding back.
美好的回憶如潮水般涌上心頭。
3.I came across a diary in my drawer yesterday, which reminded me of something in the past. 昨天我在抽屜里偶然發現一本日記，它使我想起了過去的一件事。
第二段
具體講述回憶中事件的經過 1.My father kept encouraging me so that I could cycle around the garden shortly after my first try.
我父親不斷地鼓勵我，使我在第一次嘗試后不久就能繞著花園騎自行車了。
2.I suddenly had a high fever, and my father was out on a business trip. In a hurry, my mother took me to see a doctor.
我突然發高燒，而我父親出差了，慌忙之下，母親帶我去看醫生。
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第二段
具體講述回憶中事件的經過 3.My mother was strict with my brother and me in study all the time.
我媽媽對我和哥哥在學習上一直很嚴格。
4.With my special care, my mother recovered quickly.
在我的悉心照料下，媽媽很快就康復了。
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第三段
升華主題，總結說明這件事引發的思考與感悟 1.It is still one of my most precious things, for it was not only my first bike, but a symbol of my father's love as well as my courage.
它仍然是我最珍貴的東西之一，因為它不僅是我的第一輛自行車，而且是我父親的愛和我的勇氣的象征。
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第三段
升華主題，總結說明這件事引發的思考與感悟 2.From this experience， I have learned that if we don't understand our parents' decisions, we should have a heart-to-heart conversation with them and try to put ourselves in their shoes.
從這次經歷中，我明白了如果我們不理解父母的決定，我們應該和他們坦誠地交流，并試著設身處地為他們著想。
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詞匯積累 ［動作描寫］ approach，chat，ignore，sigh，observe，apologise，admire，judge，settle，contain
［人物描寫］ professional，talent，responsible→responsibility，jaw，beard，skin，slim，cheek
佳句積累 ［外貌描寫］1.In his thirties， he was quite thin and pale， and he had red， bushy hair. Nowadays，he's well-built and tanned. He's always had a square jaw， but now he's grown a beard. Strangely，his beard is still red even though his hair is turning grey！
2.She still has smooth skin and straight black hair， and jogging has kept her slim and fit.
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佳句積累 3.I still have light skin and black hair，of course. But I usually wear my hair in ponytail these days as it has got a lot longer. Mum says I had cute rosy cheeks，but now I have freckles.
［動作描寫］1.Alistair ran towards Jonny，caught him and started pulling him towards the finish line.
2.I woke up really early and tip-toed to the kitchen.
［主旨升華］ I guess love is indeed a magical ingredient.
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［場景呈現］為了慶祝母親節，雙胞胎決定為母親做一頓早餐。但是由于這是他們第一次做早餐，他們搞得一團糟。看到一片狼藉，爸爸目瞪口呆。詹娜低下頭，臉上流著淚水，為此向爸爸道歉。聽到詹娜的解釋，爸爸松了一口氣。然后他說：“我們一起做吧！”爸爸幫助他們成功地做了早餐。手里端著早餐，雙胞胎走近媽媽的房間時有點緊張。當媽媽睜開眼睛的那一刻，她無法抑制自己的情緒。她哽咽著說，“謝謝你們，親愛的！”
1. _______________________，the twins decided to cook a breakfast for Mom. But it was the first time that they had cooked a breakfast so they made it a mess. Seeing the mess，2._______________________. Jenna lowered her head， and 3._________________________，with tears on her cheeks. Hearing Jenna's explanation，Dad 4._______________. Then he said，“Let's do it together！”
To observe Mother's Day
Dad's jaw dropped open
apologised to Dad for this
sighed in relief
Dad helped them and made the breakfast successfully. 5._________________________（with復合結構），the twins were a little nervous when 6._______________________. The moment Mom opened her eyes， she couldn't 7.___________________. “Thank you，my darling！”she choked.
With the breakfast in hand
approaching Mom's room
contain her emotion
短語必記 1.with anxiety 焦急地
2.with one's heart in one's mouth 提心吊膽
3.hide one's nervousness/anxiety 某人隱藏緊張/焦慮
4.sb.'s heart is in/flies into one's mouth心提到嗓子眼兒
5.have/with butterflies in one's stomach/one's stomach is full of butterflies心里發慌
必背金句 1.He was pacing nervously up and down in the room.
他在房間里緊張地踱來踱去。
2.Full of anxiety, he reached for his cellphone, only to find it out of power.
他滿懷焦慮地伸手去拿手機,卻發現它沒電了。
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必背金句 3.When I took the stage, nervousness dried up my words.
當我登臺表演時,我緊張得說不出話來。
4.She looked at the clock with growing uneasiness—he was already two hours late.
她看著鐘表,心里越來越不安——他已經遲到兩個小時了。
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