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I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn’t heard of the bus station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was along queue(隊(duì)列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around, and looked at me with a big smile on his face. “We made it,” he said.
（2024新高考Ⅰ卷）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out. At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance, was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my card in, only to read the message: “Out of order. Sorry.”
注意： 1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右; 2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
Four days later,when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.
1. 梳理原文 體裁： 記敘文 人稱： 第一人稱 時(shí)態(tài)： 一般過去時(shí)
讀五要素 （1） Who I, Gunter
（2） When a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September
（3） Where in Vienna Airport
（4） How I (anxious→relief→helpless, sorry→______)
Gunter (frustrated→confused→______)
（5） What (main idea) 我匆忙搭乘出租車前往車站趕最后一班去布拉格的公交車，到達(dá)后卻發(fā)現(xiàn)自己沒帶現(xiàn)金，葡萄牙銀行卡和取款機(jī)都用不了。
續(xù)寫策略與線索 （6） Writing Clues 第一段：我向Gunter解釋無法付款的消息→Gunter的反應(yīng)→我提出解決辦法（應(yīng)兼顧第二段首句的“聯(lián)系”一說）→雙方約定，Gunter表示理解并信任我→我最后趕上公交車，參加了會(huì)議
第二段：電話內(nèi)容(對(duì)話描寫或提及見面或確定如何支付車費(fèi))→見面情形，我對(duì)Gunter的感謝之情→ Gunter的回應(yīng)→我們成為好朋友
2. 梳理原文情節(jié)情感雙線
beginning/background（Para 1 ）
情節(jié)：With only 30 minutes left to catch the last bus to Prague, I rushed into a taxi.
情感：anxious, desperate
rising action（Para 2-3）
情節(jié)：Although I had difficulty pronouncing the bus station accurately, Gunter, the taxi driver, patiently asked his friend for help and ended up sending me there in time.
情感：frustrated,relief
2. 梳理原文情節(jié)情感雙線
climax（Para 4 ）
情節(jié)：With all methods tried, I still failed to pay for my taxi fare to Gunter.
情感：helpless, sorry,confused
falling action（續(xù)寫Para1）
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
ending/solution（續(xù)寫Para2）
Four days later,when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.
3. 梳理續(xù)寫段首句
falling action（續(xù)寫Para1）
How did Gunter respond
What did he say and do next
How did I feel and what did I say
…
ending/solution（續(xù)寫Para2）
(1)What was the content of the phone call
(2)What did I say and do
(3)What did Gunter say and do
(4)What was my feeling
…
4. 續(xù)寫故事
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. His face showed a hint of concern, but he quickly nodded in understanding. “Don’t worry,” he said calmly. “You can pay me back later.” I was surprised by his kindness and insisted on getting his contact information. Gunter wrote down his number and handed it to me.“Promise you’ll call me when you’re back.” he said with a smile. I thanked him and hurried out. As I boarded the bus just in time, I waved goodbye to Gunter, who was standing by his taxi, feeling a mix of relief and gratitude.
Four days later,when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He answered the phone cheerfully. We arranged to meet at a café near the Vienna airport. When we met, I handed him the cash I owed along with a small token of appreciation—a local delicacy from Prague. “This is to thank you for your help,” I said, smiling. Gunter accepted the gift with a warm grin, and we spent the next hour talking about our lives and travels. Through this encounter, I not only attended my conference but also gained a new friend. Gunter’s kindness left a lasting impact, reminding me of goodness in unexpected places.
(2017年11月浙江卷)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
A vacation with my mother
I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother—loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we’d ever see them again Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids ” “What ! Oh, Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren’t about to take any chances.
On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections. If a strange family showed upon her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意： 1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右; 2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.
1. 梳理原文 體裁： 人稱： 時(shí)態(tài)：______________
讀五要素 （1） Who
（2） When
（3） Where
（4） How
（5） What (main idea)
續(xù)寫策略與線索 （6） Writing Clues
記敘文
第一人稱
一般過去時(shí)
On the trip to Colorado and North Dakota
我們一家人去祖父母所在的州自駕旅游，因?yàn)槲覌寢尳⊥稚屏嫉男愿瘢沟梦覀兊穆猛倔@險(xiǎn)又有趣。
Mom, Dad, David and I
When I was eleven, during my family vacation
Mom (loving, sweet, absent-minded and forgetful→ responsible→_____); I (fearful→nervous→relieved→_____)
第一段：想起了我們新買的帳篷→我提議去露營(yíng)→我們搭起帳篷→開啟露營(yíng)的美好時(shí)光
第二段：我們一路欣賞美景，心情愉悅→順利抵達(dá)祖父母家→感受到了媽媽的愛和家庭的溫暖
2. 梳理原文情節(jié)情感雙線
beginning/background（Para 1 ）
情節(jié)：My mother’s forgetfulness filled our life with much surprise and amusement.
情感：joyful/delighted
rising action（Para 2-3）
情節(jié)：My mom was so forgetful that she always forget something important, so we all worried about our trip.
情感：fearful, unwilling
2. 梳理原文情節(jié)情感雙線
climax（Para 4 ）
情節(jié)：Mom suggested setting up the tent at someone’s backyard. We all disagreed. Finally we found a hotel.
情感：nervous, relieved
falling action（續(xù)寫 Para1）
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.
ending/solution（續(xù)寫 Para2）
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.
3. 梳理續(xù)寫段首句
falling action（續(xù)寫Para1）
ending/solution（續(xù)寫Para2）
(1)Did we use the tent
(2)What did we do with the tent
(3)Where did we put up the tent？
(4)How did we feel about the camping
...
(1) What sights did we see
(2) What else did we experience along the trip apart from the great sights
(3) Did we successfully make it to our grandparents’ place
(4) How did we feel at the end of our trip
...
4. 續(xù)寫故事
The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Mom insisted that we should make full use of the unused tent. David and I looked at Dad, hoping he could stop her crazy idea. But Mom was determined to use it at least once during our trip. We finally stopped at the front doorstep of a house with a big backyard. Sitting around the campfire, we talked and laughed. It was the first time that I had thought Mom could be wise as I was admiring our tent. That night, we slept soundly and had a sweet dream even with the chilly wind blowing outside.
We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.The bright blue sky, the endless green grass, the setting sun and the countless stars of night kept me spellbound. We laughed and chatted all the way. To our relief, we arrived at our grandparents’ home safely. As we settled into the familiar embrace of my grandparents’ home, we knew that this journey would forever hold a special place in our hearts. That night, I was lost in thought when we shared our trip with my grandparents. “Where is our tent, David ” Oh, my God. Mom forgot to put it in the trunk.

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