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科技類應用文寫作策略和方法
（賀州期末聯考）
假定你是李華，上周你校組織學生參觀了市科技館，你沉浸式地體驗了一場現代科技的奇妙之旅。請你給你的外國朋友 Alex 寫一封郵件，內容包括：
1.活動的時間、地點和目的；
2. 你在科技館的所見所聞；
3.你的感受。
注意：
1.寫作詞數應80個左右；
2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
審題和構思
1. 框架
采用"格式+內容+語言"三維度
2.所見所聞模板
按"空間移動順序"創設描寫路徑
3.感受
避免空洞形容詞，關聯"認知提升
+情感體驗+未來行動"三層內涵
第一段：
活動時間、地點和目的
活動目的常用表達：
① fuel our passion for doing sth 點燃我們對做某事的熱情
② inspire our interest in doing sth 激發我們做某事的興趣
③ enhance our understanding of sth 增進我們對某事的理解
④ develop our ability to do sth 培養我們做某事的能力
⑤ raise students’ awareness of doing sth 提升學生們…的意識
⑥ promote our interaction and friendship with sb 促進我們與某人的交流和友誼
⑦ enrich our spare time and broaden our horizons 豐富業余生活，開闊眼界
Aiming to…（活動目的)
e.g. Aiming to…（活動目的), our school organized+活動名稱 themed “活動主題”+時間+地點.
第二段
總起→細節爆發→感官聚焦
1.先用句式總括
2.再選取兩個典型展品進行動態描寫
3.最后用實驗互動展示知識收獲
e.g."what impressed me most was..."
如機器人舞蹈的擬人化動作+VR體驗
如火山實驗的化學原理說明
科技類高頻詞匯
AI（Artificial Intelligence）：人工智能
robotics：機器人技術
VR（Virtual Reality）：虛擬現實
AR（Augmented Reality）：增強現實
3D printer：3D 打印機
solar panel：太陽能板
Mars rover：火星探測器
DNA sequencing：DNA 測序
robot dancer：機器人舞者
1.科技成果與設備
科技類高頻詞匯
simulate：模擬
respond to：響應
demonstrate：演示
hands-on experience：動手體驗
gravity loss：失重
natural language processing：
自然語言處理
cutting-edge technology：尖端技術
visualize：可視化
interact with：與……互動
2.互動體驗與技術術語
科技類高頻詞匯
genes：基因
traits：性狀
solar energy storage：太陽能儲存
chemical reaction：化學反應
space exploration：太空探索
scientific curiosity：科學好奇心
3.科學原理與概念
展區分類詞匯
Aerospace Zone（航天區）：VR 太空船、行星穹頂
Robotics Zone（機器人區）：AI 詩人、機器人舞蹈
Biology Lab（生物實驗室）：DNA 實驗
Energy Exhibition（能源展區）：太陽能板原理
1.科技成果
靜態描寫→ 動態刻畫
模板句型：
"What caught my eye was... which could [動作描寫]"
What caught my eye was an AI robot performing a traditional Chinese dance.
動詞升級包：
simulate（模擬）respond to（響應）demonstrate（演示）
2.互動體驗
個人參與感
模板句型：
"I was thrilled to [體驗動作], experiencing firsthand how..."
I was thrilled to control a Mars rover, experiencing firsthand how scientists explore space.
感官描寫:
visually stunning（視覺震撼）
hands-on（動手操作）
3.場館設計
空間邏輯
模板句型：
"The [展區名] zone, with its... [布局特征], made me feel..."
The aerospace zone, with its planetarium-style dome, made me feel in space.
4. 知識傳遞
模板句型：
"Thanks to the informative guide, I now understand [原理]"
Thanks to the informative guide, I now understand how solar panels store energy.
講解服務
第三段
1.要有具體認知變化，體現科技館的教育價值
結尾：感受
2.要有文化回應意識：邀請外國朋友時強調"展示中國科技成就"，暗合"講好中國故事"的課標要求
Not only did I learn about modern technology, but I was also amazed by China’s rapid progress in science.
These innovations not only opened my eyes to scientific wonders but also made me proud of China’s role in global tech development.
具體認知變化”和“文化回應意識”過渡句模板
Dear Alex,
I'm writing to share our school trip to the City Science Museum last Friday. （時間）
The visit aimed to inspire scientific curiosity through cutting-edge technologies.（目的+高級詞匯）What amazed me most was the robotics area. （所見總起）An AI poet composed Tang Dynasty poems before my eyes, demonstrating natural language processing.（科技細節 + 學術術語）Even more thrilling was when I operated a VR spaceship, which simulated gravity loss.（互動體驗 + 定語從句）Through a DNA experiment （實驗項目）, I finally grasped how genes determine traits — a staff member explained it vividly.（知識傳遞）This hands-on experience transformed science from textbooks into living wonder.（感受升華）
I hope you can witness China's tech wonders with me someday! （呼應文化傳播）

Yours,
Li Hua

A possible version
Dear Alex,
How are you doing I'm writing to share with you a trip to Science Museum in our city, which was organized by our school last Friday, aiming to broaden our horizons and excite our curiosity about scientific advancements.
I was fascinated by the advanced exhibits. I learned about Al, tried virtual reality glasses, operated a robot, and even witnessed a 3D-printing show. The most impressive part was that a piece of equipment made me feel like I was walking on the moon!
The experience was both fun and educational, not only deepening my appreciation for science but also making me excited about future innovations. I'd love to visit again with you someday!
Yours,
Li Hua
Thank you

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