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讀后續(xù)寫
做題思路與步驟
1.讀原文 劃要素 填表格
勾畫：
人物 : ○
·關鍵動詞：雙橫線
關鍵句子:單橫線
·主人公形容詞()
·時間、地點、副詞〖〗）
2.讀兩段提示語和最后一段 ，定主題和故事走向
情節(jié)大致走向，會發(fā)生什么事情？
②：文章的主題是什么？
3.細讀續(xù)寫段1和續(xù)寫段2提示句， 構思情節(jié)發(fā)展
①：人物的情感線？
②：根據情節(jié)發(fā)展，人物可能會做的事，動作有那些？
③：人物間的對話可能會有哪些，互動會有哪些？
④：可以通過哪些環(huán)境描寫來襯托人物的心情，渲染氛圍？
①：
4.5句定框架：3銜句，1結尾句，1升華句
Para1:首句銜接句（銜1），
結尾銜接句（銜2）
Para2:首句銜接句（銜3），
正向結尾句（1句）
文尾升華句（1升華）
讀后續(xù)寫擴句思路
讀后續(xù)寫可通過：一系列動作鏈的連接和環(huán)境描寫，情緒描寫，心理描寫的合作來擴充寫作內容
讀后續(xù)寫兩段套用句
第一個續(xù)寫段：I（he,she) was entirely overwhelmed with tremendous happiness/regret/sadness/shock when knowing what happened. .......just stand in place with not a single word slipped out of my/his/her throat. And all the things around seemed to wait for an answere, silently but hopefully. After a while, sb collected sb’s emotion, then sb said with a .......tone：“.......................................”
讀后續(xù)寫兩段套用句
第二個續(xù)寫段：
what happened was really a shock/surprise to sb. words spread in the air to create a mixture of happiness/sadness and joy/gloom. All the things seemed to be animated, they danced, singed to add a spark of enjoyment/misery to the place. .......picked onself up,and cleared one’s throat and said:“..................”. In the end, we laughed goodbye to each other. For us.......
讀后續(xù)寫主旨升華句
一.成長主題升華
第一類：追逐夢想
1.It's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dream.
追夢永遠不晚。只要你抓住機會，充分利用機會，你就有機會實現夢想。
第二類：克服困難促＂改變（堅持）
The journey to success is not smooth. It's full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don'tgive up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties we will surely achieve our goal eventually.通往成功的路不會是一帆風順的，充滿挑戰(zhàn)和艱辛。我們要要敢面對。只要不放棄希望并竭盡全力克服所有困難，我們最終會賓現我們的目標。
二.親情（友情）主題升華
1.Love and care for the one you love every single day of your life.You may think what you did is just a small deed but it may mean a lot. Some relations are made to last longer but they still need to benurtured with love and care.愛和關心你生命中每一天所愛的人。你可能認為你所做的只是一件小事，但它可能意味著很多。有些關系會持續(xù)更長時間，但它們仍然需要用愛和關懷來培育。
三.積極態(tài)度主題升華
1.The more you feed your mind with positive thoughts,the more you can attract great things into your life
你越用積極的的思想充實你的頭腦，你就越能吸引積極的事物進入你的生活
四。逆境，改變，希望 主題升華
Success is to be measured not so much the position that one has reached in life as by the obstacles which he has overcomed
成功與其說是由一個人在生活中所達到的地位來衡量，不如說由他所克服的困難來衡量
五.助人為樂（善良）
with a small gesture,we can changed a person’s life,for better for worse. No act of kindness,however small,will go waste.
通過一個小小的善舉我們可以改變一個人的生活，無論好壞，無論多么微小的善舉都不會被浪費。
六.脫困
We will meet various challenges in life, but we should never give up easily。Just as the famous saying goes,sunshine always comes after the rain.
人生總會遇到各種挑戰(zhàn)，但是不要輕易放棄.正如名言所說，風雨后總能見陽光。
七.人與自然（動物，自然環(huán)境，植物等）
There is no doubt that human activities has an extensive effect on the planet,however people can certainly live in harmany with nature as long as we keep a kind heart
毫無疑問人類活動對地球有著廣泛的影響，然而人類一定能和自然和諧共存的，只要我們持有一顆善良的心。
感恩
Learn to cherish the things and person that once have inspired you when you are in trouble .With each step forward， the support from others brings us overwhelming courage to sparkle in the dark time
當你身處困境時，要學會珍惜那些曾經激勵過你的人和事。每向前一步，他人的支持都會給我們帶來無盡的勇氣，在黑暗時刻閃耀光芒。
冒險
The adventure had come to en end,however the memories would last a lifetime.They had explored the unknown and discovered not just the new lands but new parts of themselves.
冒險已經結束，但記憶將終生難忘。他們探索了未知領域，不僅發(fā)現了新大陸，還發(fā)現了自己的新方面
承擔責任
1.Responsibility is not just a burden, but a privilege that shapes our character and defines our actions."
責任不僅僅是負擔，它是一種塑造我們性格、定義我們行為的特權。
2.True maturity is not reached until one learns to shoulder the burdens of responsibility without complaint."
真正的成熟是在學會毫無怨言地承擔起責任的重擔時才達到的。
消除誤會
This conversation cleared the air,leaving no room for doubt. They had learned the value of open communication and the importance of understanding each other’s perspectives.
這次對話消除了誤會，沒有留下任何懷疑的空間。他們學會了開放溝通的價值和理解彼此觀點的重要性。

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