資源簡介

(共17張PPT)
UNIT 1
People of Achievement
單元寫作
By the end of this period, you will be able to:
1.Review the organization and structure of the reading text;
2.Write an introduction about someone you admire.
Learning Objectives
The organization of a biography.
Review
contribution accomplishment
birth
education
early career
Appearance
personalityAnecdotes
Death and comment
brief introduction
early life & background
achievements
struggles & challenges
personal characteristics
impact & legacy
major events
milestones
Difficult period
注意：
運用正確的時態。描寫人物的外貌、性格、興趣等常用一般現在時，而描寫人物的出生地、教育背景、經歷、事跡時常用一般過去時
3.常用描寫人物的形容詞:
determined (有毅力的)/ warm-hearted(熱心腸的)
easy-going(溫和寬容的)/ energetic(精力充沛)
generous(慷慨的)/ intelligent( 聰明的)
ambitious(有雄心的) /humorous(幽默的)
diligent (勤奮的)/attractive (有吸引力的)
patient (耐心的) /strict (嚴格的)
considerate(考慮周到的) /outstanding (杰出的) optimistic(樂觀的) / enthusiastic(熱情的)
bad-tempered (脾氣不好的)/ reliable(可 信賴的)/confident(自信的) / respectable(值得尊重的)
dedicated(專注的；獻身的)
skinny, good-looking, plain, elegant, neatly dressed, graceful, curly/wavy hair
1.介紹人物的愛好特長:
be good at /do well in/ be expert in/ have a talent for/have a gift for /be qualified for the job / be fit for the job/ have a good knowledge ( command) of/ with a great passion for
2.對人物的評價:
set a good example to us/ a model teacher /worker/is respected by all /think highly of ... /be honored as
Word Bank
寫作積累
（1）引出人物介紹的開頭句式
1. When talking about......, I can't help but think of......, a famous .......
2. The person I admire most is...,
3. Of all the outstanding people, I admire… the most.
4. There are many respectable people around us. The one who I admire most is...
（2）簡單介紹人物背景 (出生日期/出生地+職業/興趣)
1. 出生于 be born in /on
2. 對……有強烈的興趣 have/show strong interest in
3. 在……方面有天賦 have a gift/talent for
寫作積累
（3）講述該人物的主要經歷和重要成就。
1. After graduating from…., he / she spent most of the time doing...
從……畢業后，他/她大部分時間都花在做……
2. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in.
憑借堅強的意志和堅定的決心，他在……方面取得了巨大的成功.
3. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them.
盡管有許多困難，他/她還是成功克服了
4. She poured his/her heart and soul into…and made great contributions to…
她全心全意投入…, 并為…做出了巨大貢獻…
寫作積累
（4）人物評價及對作者的影響。
1. As a great..., he/she will be remembered by us forever.
作為一位偉大的……，他 / 她將永遠被我們銘記。
2. It is his determination that inspires me to go on when I have difficulty in learning.
正是他的決心激勵著我在學習遇到困難時繼續前行。
3. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
他為我們樹立了一個很好的榜樣，是位完全值得我們欽佩和尊敬的優秀人物。
Writing
Writing
（2020年全國1卷）你校正在組織英語作文比賽。請以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題, 寫一篇短文參賽, 內容包括：1. 人物簡介；2. 尊敬和愛戴的原因。
注意：1. 詞數100左右；
2. 短文題目和首句已為你寫好。
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us.
思維導圖引路
事例說明
how he/she inspires you
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Albert Einstein, who is perhaps the greatest scientists, is often considered + adj.
(be) acknowledged as
make numerous contributions to
out of one’s passion/responsibility for…,
The person I admire most is my mother. While she is not famous, she did something quite extraordinary.
She is a doctor in Beijing, and on 7 February 2020,she went with a group of doctors and nurses to Wuhan to help in the fight against COVID-19. I was nervous about her going, but she told me not to worry because she was doing what was required of her job to save lives. While she was in Wuhan, she had to work very long hours, with little sleep or rest in between. At one time, a colleague of hers collapsed from exhaustion. My mom was near the end of her own shift, but she chose to continue and take over the work from her colleague. My mom was helping some of the sickest patients, but this didn't stop her from carrying out her responsibilities. She's back home now, but I'm certain that she saved many lives from her hard work and dedication during those few weeks.
She is a hero and an inspiration to me, because she put herself in harm’s way in order to save many people. Thanks to her, I will strive to think of others more than myself and work hard to help people.
Write an introduction about someone you admire.
Writing
Writing
Sample
Reading for writing
姓名： 袁隆平
出生： 1930年，北京
畢業院校： 西南農學院
職業： 科學家
工作經歷： 大學畢業后，他從事農業教學何研究工作
在1975年，他成功培育出了雜交水稻，
成就： 提高了水稻產量，有助于消除世界饑餓
被譽為“雜交水稻之父”
西南農學院：
Southwest Agricultural College
他從事農業教學和研究工作
agricultural teaching
research
培育出了雜交水稻
breed hybrid rice
雜交水稻之父
the father of hybrid rice
提高了水稻產量，
有助于消除世界饑餓
improve the rice production and help rid the world of hunger
參考詞匯
開頭：
The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地點/時間）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(職業）, showed a passion for___________(方面）
The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. Born in Beijing in 1930 , Yuan Longping，who is one of the greatest scientist, showed a passion for researching rice.
After graduating from __________(學校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）.
中間：
After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College, he spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research. Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in breeding hybrid rice, which improved the rice production and helped rid the world of hunger. So he is known as the father of hybrid rice.
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. Born in Beijing in 1930 , Yuan Longping , who is one of the greatest scientist, showed a passion for researching rice.
After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College, he spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research. Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in breeding hybrid rice, which improved the rice production and helped rid the world of hunger. So he is known as the father of hybrid rice.
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
結尾：
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The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地點/時間）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(職業）, showed a passion for___________(方面）
After graduating from __________(學校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）.
Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.
我最崇拜的人是_______(人）. 出生于_______(地點/時間）, _______（人），是最偉大_______(職業）的人之一, 表現出對___________(方面）的熱情。
在__________(學校）畢業后, 他/她大部分時間都花在做___________上。盡管有許多困難，他/她還是設法克服了。憑借堅強的意志和堅定的決心，他在_________取得了巨大的成功，這使他_____________(成就）.
為我們樹立了一個偉大的榜樣，他是一個非常優秀的人，值得我們欽佩和尊重。
寫英雄/偉人/敬佩的人的模板
Writing
Exchange your draft with a partner.
1. Use the checklist to help you review your partner's draft.
Does the writer describe the person's appearance and personality
Does the writer tell an impressive story of the person's life
Does the writer say why the person is great
Does the writer sum up how he/she feels about this person
2. Take your draft back and revise it.
Share your introduction with the rest of the class.
Writing
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