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2025年新課標I卷
讀后續寫
《兄弟倆和一只狗》
Brainstorm:
Q：Have you ever had conflicts with your family
What’s the problem
How do you solve the problem
Lead-in
misunderstanding
inconsideration（不體諒）
generation gap
Indifference(冷漠）
miscommunication
ego(自我，固執己見）
expectation（期望過高）
jealousy(嫉妒)
disagreement
試題分析
寫作思路
微技能-情緒&動作
范文賞析
目錄
CONTENTS
01
02
03
04
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試題分析
高考英語讀后續寫真題分析
01
安排順利，但突如其來的降雨迫使所有人進屋
My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer. She had prepared lots of snacks, while my job was to have the backyard in order.
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play. There was just one thing I hadn’t counted on: My brother chose to bring his dog Toby, a 50-pound ball of fire. Though friendly, he could easily knock over my niece’s small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter. So, when my brother showed up, I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
My plan was working out just fine. Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room. Unexpectedly, after supper, the weather changed. It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
who
when
where
what
"我"和妻子舉辦家庭聚會，妻子準備食物，"我"負責后院安排。 哥哥帶著愛犬Toby前來，由于擔心活潑的Toby會傷到小孩，"我"要求哥哥把狗留在室外。
How？
It was an awkward moment. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house, and my brother wasn’t happy with driving home with a wet dog. Eventually, my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
A few days passed, and I hadn’t heard anything from my brother. I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again. His reply came as a surprise — a shock, actually: “Not a chance.” Clearly, he was unhappy over the way we had parted. After all, I had left him little choice. Well, he’ll get over it, I reasoned.
Two months passed. My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother, but I resisted, thinking he should call first. However, my conscience (良心) kept bothering me. I tried to put myself in my brother’s shoes. He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier. Toby was his constant companion, the one who kept him going.
我不讓狗進屋，導致哥哥生氣地帶著淋濕的狗提前離開。
之后兩個月哥哥拒絕聯系，"我"經過內心掙扎，最終理解 哥哥的處境并主動登門道歉和解。
Read for basic information Who
when
where
what Gathering with family and friends, my brother came with his dog Toby. I didn’t want Toby to be running around in the house despite raining and my brother wasn’t happy and left. my conscience kept bothering me. I tried to__________________________________ (設身處地為哥哥著想). I reflected, wanting to______________(道歉).
I, my brother, my wife, Toby(a dog)
in the early summer.
our new home, brother’s home
put myself in my brother’s shoes
apologize
文章風格
人稱：______________________; 時態：_________________
寫作主題: ______________________________________________;
第一人稱
過去式
親情與關愛．
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寫作思路
高考英語讀后續寫真題分析
02
I realized it was me who was at fault._______________________
本段要詳細描寫“我”是如何認識到自己錯誤的，最終內心的愧疚感必須轉化為“必須去道歉”的具體行動決心。
① what was my fault
② how did I do
③what did I decide to do and what did we prepare
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door.______
本段描寫和解場面：抵達時的緊張、真誠的道歉、哥哥漸進的反應，并可以利用Toby的動作作為“催化劑”來打破僵局，最終以一個象征和解的開放式動作（如開門邀請）結尾。
① who answered the door What were their reaction
② what did I say and do What was my brother’s response
③what did we do together
④ what was the theme
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微技能
高考英語讀后續寫真題分析
03
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 1 ：
I realized it was me who was at fault._______________________
I let them leave in the rain without being understood.
I headed to my brother’s home.
I felt guilty (內疚的）.
詞匯：guilty； ashamed；embarrassed； awkward.
How to show guilt in different ways
情緒描寫
表情描寫（五官）
動作描寫（肢體語言）
語言描寫
The Micro-skills training 表達微技能：情緒描寫——內疚
詞塊和句的積累
scene 1:
Discovering the truth, the old man realized his misjudgment,
he was deeply ashamed of his behavior
A wave of ______ washed over him,
making it hard for him to breathe.
tip1 ：具體描寫使文章內容更生動，更
有表現力。
shame
The next few days _________ his conscience being tortured deeply, feeling like sitting in pins and needles.(如坐針氈）
witnessed
scene 2:
The old man failed to keep his promise and didn’t know what to do next.
he was ashamed.
He _______his face with his hands in shame for what he had done.
covered
scene 3:
The old man misunderstood his son.
tip2 ：動作描寫使表達多樣化。
1.這只狗對他來說不僅僅是寵物，這是他的家人。
句子潤色
The dog wasn’t just a pet for him; it was his family.
2.我的不體諒迫使他和托比冒雨離開，無人理解。
force sb to do sth
My inconsideration forced him and Toby to leave
in the rain without being understood.
3.一想到這，我就感到內疚和羞愧，呼吸困難。
句子潤色
At the thought of this, a feeling of guilt and shame
washed over me, making it hard for me to breathe.
4.一個內心的聲音一直在我的腦海中回蕩，我不能再拖延這個道歉了。
keep echoing in my mind
An inner voice kept echoing in my mind that I
couldn’t delay this apology any longer.
delay
5.當我告訴妻子我的計劃時，她表示支持并建議烤一些哥哥最喜歡吃的餅干。
句子潤色
When I told my wife my plan, she was supportive and
suggested baking some of my brother’s favorite biscuits
6.我抓起鑰匙，跳進車里，毫不猶豫地往哥哥家去。
without hesitation/ without a second thought.
I grabbed my keys, jumped into the car and headed to
my brother’s home without a second thought.
bake
I realized it was me who was at fault. The dog wasn‘t just a pet for him; it was his family. My inconsideration forced him and Toby to leave in the rain without being understood. At the thought of this, a feeling of guilt and shame washed over me, making it hard for me to breathe. An inner voice kept echoing in my mind that I couldn’t delay this apology any longer. when I told my wife my plan, she was supportive and suggested baking some of my brother's favorite biscuits. I grabbed my keys, jumped into the car and headed to my brother's home without a second thought.
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 2 ：
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door.______
My brother opened the door.
I apologize to my brother.
Toby wagged his tail.
We sat together in the living room.
tips: every creature has a soul/spirit (萬物有靈）
道歉___________________ 打破僵局____________________
敲門___________________ 消失_____________________
開門___________________ 治愈傷口____________________
搖尾巴_________________
接餅干____________________
示意某人做某事______________________
深呼吸__________________________
心跳加快_______________________________________
The Micro-skills training 表達微技能2：動作
詞塊和句的積累
take a deep breath
apologize
Heart beat faster/heart pound
knock at the door
open the door
wag the tail
take the biscuits
signal sb to do sth
break the ice
disappear/fad
heal the wound
1.我的心因緊張砰砰直跳。我深吸一口氣，敲了門。
句子潤色
My heart pounded with nervousness. Taking a deep
breath, I knocked at the door.
2.托比沖了出來，瘋狂地搖尾巴。
rush out
Toby rushed out, wagging his tail wildly.
3. 我看到了一個驚訝的表情，夾雜著哥哥的冷漠和惱怒。
句子潤色
I saw a look/expression of surprise, mixed with
indifference and annoyance from my brother.
4. 我來真誠地道歉，非常抱歉給你造成的痛苦。
sincerely
I came to apologize sincerely. I’m so sorry for the
Pain I caused you.
Indifference and annoyance
5. 他接過餅干，示意我進去。
句子潤色
He took the biscuits and signaled me to enter.
6. 當我們坐在舒適的客廳時，尷尬慢慢消失了，取而代之的是故事，笑聲和淚水。
awkwardness
As we sat in the living room, the awkwardness
slowly faded, replaced by stories, laughter and tears.
7. 通過坦誠的對話，我們逐漸治愈了傷口，打破了我們之間的僵局。
句子潤色
Through open-hearted conversations, we gradually
Healed the wound and broke the icy wall between us.
gradually
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. My heart pounded with nervousness. Taking a deep breath, I knocked at the door. The door creaked open and out rushed Toby, with his tail wagging wildly. Then I saw a look of surprise, mixed with indifference and annoyance from my brother. I took a deep breath and began, "Brother, I came to apologize sincerely. I’m so sorry for the pain I caused you. Toby is as much a part of your family as any human member, and I should have shown greater empathy." Almost instantly, his eyes wet with tears as he took the biscuits and signaled me to enter. As we sat in the cozy living room, the awkwardness slowly faded, replaced by stories, laughter and tears. Through open - hearted conversations, we gradually healed the wound and broke the icy wall between us, (proving that empathy, forgiveness and communication are the true bridges to mend broken bonds.)
Write
字跡工整
篇幅充實：____________________________;
語言豐富：___________________________________________;
內容得體：____________________________________________;
空白橫線至多剩余一；
無基本語法錯誤；銜接得當；有形容詞和副詞；有從句和非謂語
情節向前發展；
符合原文邏輯；
體現作者寫作目的
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范文賞析
高考英語讀后續寫真題分析
04
I realized it was me who was at fault. The dog wasn‘t just a pet for him; it was his family. My inconsideration forced him and Toby to leave in the rain without being understood. At the thought of this, a feeling of guilt and shame washed over me, making it hard for me to breathe. An inner voice kept echoing in my mind that I couldn’t delay this apology any longer. when I told my wife my plan, she was supportive and suggested baking some of my brother's favorite biscuits. I grabbed my keys, jumped into the car and headed to my brother's home without a second thought.
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother's door. My heart pounded with nervousness. Taking a deep breath, I knocked at the door. The door creaked open and out rushed Toby, with his tail wagging wildly. Then I saw a look of surprise, mixed with indifference and annoyance from my brother. I took a deep breath and began, "Brother, I’m so sorry for the pain I caused you. Toby is as much a part of your family as any human member, and I should have shown greater empathy." Almost instantly, his eyes wet with tears as he took the biscuits and signaled me to enter. As we sat in the cozy living room, the awkwardness slowly faded, replaced by stories, laughter and tears. Through open - hearted conversations, we gradually healed the wound and broke the icy wall between us.
親情友情主題升華
As the saying goes, “Honesty is the best policy. /No pains, no gains. /A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
俗話說：“誠實是上策。/不勞無獲。/患難見真情。”
2. It was at that moment that I had a full understanding of the significance of family.
就是在那一刻，我完全明白了家庭的重要性。
3. Their friendship grew stronger as they embraced each other's imperfections and stood by each other's side.
隨著彼此接納對方的不完美并始終相互支持，他們的友誼變得更加牢固。
4. There is no shame in admitting our mistakes or forgiving each other because we are a family.
承認錯誤或原諒彼此并不可恥，因為我們是一家人。

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