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To make the puzzled student unpuzzled
20 April 2022
Dear Worried Friend，
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
All the best,
Susan Luo
A sample from Susan Luo, an adviser
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1. Whom the letter is writing to
2.What is Worried Friend's problem
3.What suggestions does Susan give
4.Besides suggestions, what else does Susan say
1. Whom the letter is writing to
Greeting
20 April 2022
Dear Worried Friend，
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
2.What is Worried Friend's problem
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online. （Para 1）
2.What is Worried Friend's problem
He is worried that his friend, Chen Lei, plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
3.What suggestions does Susan give
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend. （Para 2）
3.What suggestions does Susan give
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend. （Para 2）
4. Besides suggestions, what else does Susan say
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend Chen Lei....I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible..... You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world..... But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I.... the I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together
...I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
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4. Besides suggestions, what else does Susan say
→ She understands Worried Friend's problem and feeling.
→ She also talks about the negative effects of computer addiction.
→She thinks her advice will help.
19 April 2022
Dear Worried Friend，
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
All the best,
Susan Luo
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C.This is my advice and reason(s).
D.I think my advice will help.
19 April 2022
Dear Worried Friend，
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life. I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
All the best,
Susan Luo
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C.This is my advice and reason(s).
D.I think my advice will help.
A, B and D are necessary, because they show the author's understanding, which will make the reader feel the warmth and sincerity, and make the communication more efficient to better solve the problem.
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Suggestions Reasons
1.Ask your teacher for help. Your teacher may be glad to support you and understand you and help to persuade your parents.
2.Invite your parents out for something to eat. This will give you chance to speak to them without distractions.
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