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Writing a persuasive letter
（如何寫倡議書）
（人教版高中英語2019）高三年級
Lead-in
Lead-in
Pre-writing
1. Write in a fixed layout(布局).
2. Use appropriate language.
Essentials of Practical Writing
應用文寫作要點
Write in a fixed layout
Pre-writing
Q1: Who wrote the letter
Q2: Who is the letter intended for
Q3: What is the function of the first two sentences in the
passage
Q4: What is the function of the next sentence
Q5: What are the proposals from class 8
Q6: What is the function of the ending part in
a persuasive letter
Pre-writing
signature
Who wrote the letter
1
Pre-writing
salutation
2
Who is the letter intended for
Pre-writing
purpose
and
problem
3
What is the function(功能) of the first two sentences in the passage
Pre-writing
4
What is the function of the next sentence
causes
Pre-writing
5
What are the proposals from class 8
Pre-writing
6
What is the function of the ending part in a persuasive letter
Appeal to someone to do something.
solutions
salutation
purpose and problem
causes
signature
appeal
What is a fixed layout
Pre-writing
Now, read the writing task, and decide which sentence is better.
Let’s be judges!
Pre-writing
Which beginning is better Why
A: Aimed at responding to serious water crisis, the
water-saving program has been held recently in our
school. As for us students, it’s essential and vital to
take part in it.
B: Knowing that we are facing serious water crisis, we
students should make our own effort.
Put forward the purpose and problems clearly and directly.
Tips
purpose
Pre-writing
A: As for us students, it’s essential and vital to save water.
B: One of the reason for this is that water resource is limited, so
it’s essential and vital to save water.
C: Although water resource is limited, there are many
phenomena of water wasting in our daily life. For example,
many students don’t turn off the tap immediately after
washing hands. As for us students, it’s essential and vital to
save water.
Use factual and convincing sentences to describe causes.
Which one is the most suitable expression Why (Group work)
causes
Tips
Pre-writing
A: We would like to suggest that we students should pay
attention to protecting water resource.
B: In order to improve the situation, we should take a
bath instead of taking a shower, and turn off the tap
immediately after washing hands.
The solutions should be specific.
Tips
Make comparison.
solutions
Pre-writing
A: We hope that you will consider my advice helpful.
B: My dear friends, let’s work hand in hand to challenge
the difficulties and start with ourselves.
The appeal should be reasonable and infectious.
Tips
Which one is a successful ending part of a persuasive letter
appeal
Aspect Content Tips
Layout Purpose and Problem clearly, directly
Causes factual, convincing
Solutions specific
Appeal reasonable, infectious
Summary
Write in a fixed layout
Use appropriate language
Trial run
Dear schoolmates,
Aimed at responding to serious water crisis, the water-saving program has been held recently in our school. As for us students, it’s essential and vital to take part in it.
Actually, there are many phenomena of water wasting in our daily life, _________, many students spend too much time having a shower and don’t turn off the tap immediately after washing hands, both of which lead to water wasting. _________, effective measures should be taken to raise everyone’s awareness of saving water. _________, take a bath instead of taking a shower. ________, turn off the tap immediately after washing hands. _________, reusing water is also a good way to save water.
My dear friends, let’s work hand in hand to challenge the difficulties and start with ourselves.
The Students’ Union
Linking words
therefore, firstly, besides, finally, for example
for example
Therefore
Firstly
Besides
Finally
Linking
words
1. initially, first and foremost;
besides, in addition, additionally;
finally, eventually...
2. at the beginning/end of, afterwards,
since then, meanwhile, immediately
3. however, while, otherwise, on the
contrary, despite, in spite of...
4. such as, for example/instance, that
is to say, as follows...
5. because (of), now that, thanks to ...
due to ..., therefore/thus, since...
Tips
Language formal，linking words added
Summary
真題再現（2022年全國甲卷）
你校將以六月八日世界海洋日為主題，舉辦英語征文比賽，請你寫一篇短文投稿。
內容包括：
1. 海洋的重要性；
2. 保護海洋的倡議。
注意：
1. 詞數100左右；
2. 短文的題目和首句已為你寫好。
Brainstorming and Writing
1.Discussion: Work in small groups to discuss the importance
of the ocean.
Group work
2. Writing : Each group write a persuasive letter, and then
choose one student to show it.
Drafting and Revising
1. Put forward the purpose and
problems clearly and directly.
2. Use factual and convincing
sentences to describe causes.
3. The ending part should appeal
to someone to do something.
4. Use formal language.
Tips
Referance Materials
Drafting and Revising
Show Time
Checklist
After reading the first paragraph, I know
what the problem is Yes./No.
After reading the ending, I find it
infectious Yes./No.
After reading the second paragraph, I know
what we should do Yes./No.
After reading the advice, I find it
specific Yes./No.
convincing Yes./No.
relevant Yes./No.
Total: ____個
Our Oceans，Our Responsibility
Today is June 8, World Oceans Day, whose theme of 2022 is "Protecting the harmonious coexistence between man and nature in the Marine Ecosystem".
The world is developing too fast to care for its health. It is our pity to sacrifice the harmony of ocean to achieve economic development：the polluted oceans, the dying marine creatures, the destroyed undersea resources, etc, are all crying for our help. It is high time that we strengthen the study of Marine knowledge and enhance the awareness of Marine protection. Deepen the understanding and understanding of Marine mothers, effectively enhance the awareness and responsibility of protecting the blue land, and strive to be a small expert in protecting the Marine ecological environment.
Let’s return the mermaid to a clean ocean, and make their life more happy!
purpose and problem
causes
solutions
appeal
Our Oceans，Our Responsibility
Today is June 8, World Oceans Day, whose theme of 2022 is "Protecting the harmonious coexistence between man and nature in the Marine Ecosystem".
The world is developing too fast to care for its health. It is our pity to sacrifice the harmony of ocean to achieve economic development：the polluted oceans, the dying marine creatures, the destroyed undersea resources, etc, are all crying for our help. It is high time that we strengthen the study of Marine knowledge and enhance the awareness of Marine protection. Deepen the understanding and understanding of Marine mothers, effectively enhance the awareness and responsibility of protecting the blue land, and strive to be a small expert in protecting the Marine ecological environment.
Let’s return the mermaid to a clean ocean, and make their life more happy!
Follow-up Activity
1. Polish your writing after class.
2. Contribute to 21st Century, and call on
everyone to protect the environment and live in
harmony with nature.
Thanks
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