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第5講　建議信
　　你的英國朋友Jim所在的學校要組織學生來中國旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：“長江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim來信希望你能給些建議。請你給他回信，內容包括：
1. 你建議的線路；
2. 你的理由；
3. 你的祝愿。
注意：1. 寫作詞數應為80左右；
2. 請按如下格式作答。
Dear Jim，
＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
Yours，
Li Hua
[佳作欣賞]
Dear Jim，　　I'm cheerful to receive your letter and know you're coming to China. 　　Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai，both are highly recommended. Personally，I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River，the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization，from which you can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover，the scenery along the river is amazing. That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice. 　　Hope you'll have a good time in China. Yours，Li Hua 開頭：稱呼語第一段：表明寫信的原因。第二段：這是建議信的主體部分，主要圍繞要點1“你建議的線路”和要點2“你的理由”進行詳細而又具體的描述，此處可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。第三段：表達你的祝愿。結尾：署名
1. I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
我正寫信給你一些建議。
2. You have asked for my advice about ... and I will try to offer some useful suggestions here.
關于……你向我征求意見，在此我盡力提供一些有用的建議。
3. As far as I am concerned/In my opinion，it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看來，采取以下行動是明智的。
4. I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...
我認為如果你能……會更有益處。
5. I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我希望你會認真考慮我的建議。
　　假定你是李華，你校交換生Mike準備參加“美麗中國(Amazing China)”短視頻大賽，特發郵件向你征詢視頻創意。請給他回一封電子郵件，內容包括：
1. 提出建議；
2. 闡明理由；
3. 表達祝愿。
注意：1. 寫作詞數應為80左右；
2. 請按如下格式作答。
＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
[參考范文]
Dear Mike，
　　Learning you're going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I'm writing to share my ideas with you.
　　If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China's smart agriculture. Nowadays, you can see modern farmers using cutting-edge technologies and devices for agricultural production, monitoring and management. Thanks to this, the efficiency is greatly improved and the country's grain security is guaranteed. Therefore, I'm convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers.
　　May your entry stand out in the competition!
Yours,
Li Hua
21世紀教育網(www.21cnjy.com)(共10張PPT)
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第5講　建議信
　　你的英國朋友Jim所在的學校要組織學生來中國旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：“長江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim來信希望你能給些建議。請你給他回信，內容包括：
1. 你建議的線路；
2. 你的理由；
3. 你的祝愿。
注意：1. 寫作詞數應為80左右；
2. 請按如下格式作答。
Dear Jim，
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
[佳作欣賞]
Dear Jim，
　　I'm cheerful to receive your letter and know you're coming to China.
　　Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai，both are highly recommended. Personally，I prefer the tour along the Yangtze River，the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization，from which you can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover，the scenery along the river is amazing. That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.
　　Hope you'll have a good time in China.
Yours，
Li Hua
開頭：稱呼語
第一段：表明寫信的原因。
第二段：這是建議信的主體部分，主要圍繞要點1“你建議的線路”和要點2“你的理由”進行詳細而又具體的描述，此處可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
第三段：表達你的祝愿。
結尾：署名
1. I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
我正寫信給你一些建議。
2. You have asked for my advice about ... and I will try to offer some useful suggestions here.
關于……你向我征求意見，在此我盡力提供一些有用的建議。
3. As far as I am concerned/In my opinion，it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看來，采取以下行動是明智的。
4. I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...
我認為如果你能……會更有益處。
5. I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.
我希望你會認真考慮我的建議。
　　假定你是李華，你校交換生Mike準備參加“美麗中國(Amazing China)”短視頻大賽，特發郵件向你征詢視頻創意。請給他回一封電子郵件，內容包括：
1. 提出建議；
2. 闡明理由；
3. 表達祝愿。
注意：1. 寫作詞數應為80左右；
2. 請按如下格式作答。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
[參考范文]
Dear Mike，
　　Learning you're going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I'm writing to share my ideas with you.
　　If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China's smart agriculture. Nowadays, you can see modern farmers using cutting-edge technologies and devices for agricultural production, monitoring and management. Thanks to this, the efficiency is greatly improved and the country's grain security is guaranteed. Therefore, I'm convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the viewers.
　　May your entry stand out in the competition!
Yours,
Li Hua

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