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第7講　續寫熱門話題　團隊合作
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
An A for Mrs B
　　I was sitting next to Missy in my ninth-grade world history class when Mrs Bartlett announced a new project. In groups, we were to create a newspaper on the culture we were studying.
　　On a piece of paper, we wrote the names of three friends we wanted in our group. After collecting all the requests, Mrs B informed us that she would take into consideration the names we chose and would let us know the results the next day. I had no doubt I would get the group of my choice. Only a few people behaved normally in the class, and Missy was one of them. I knew we had chosen each other.
　　The next day, I anxiously waited for the class. After the bell rang, Missy and I stopped talking as Mrs B called for our attention. She started to call out names. When she reached the third group, Missy's name was called. So, I'm in group three, I thought. The second, third and fourth members of the group were called. My name was not included. There had to be some mistake!
　　Then I heard it. The last group: “Mauro, Juliette, Rachel，Karina.” I could feel the tears well in my eyes. How could I face being in that group—the boy who rarely spoke English, one girl who was always covered by skirts that went down to her ankles, and the other girl who wore weird clothes. Oh, how badly I wanted to be with my friends.
　　I fought back tears as I walked up to Mrs B. She looked at me and knew what I was there for. I was determined to convince her I should be in the “good” group. “Why ... ？” I started.
　　She gently placed a hand on my shoulder. “I know what you want，Karina, ” she said, “but your group needs you. I need you to help them get a passing grade on this assignment. Only you can help them.”
　　I was stunned(說不出話). I was confused. I was amazed. She had seen something in me I hadn't seen.
　　“Will you help them？” she asked.
　　I stood straighter. “Yes, ” I replied. I couldn't believe it came out of my mouth, but it did. I had committed.
注意：1. 續寫詞數應為150左右；
2. 請按如下格式作答。
　　I bravely walked to where the others in my group sat. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
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　　In the end, Mrs B gave us an A on that assignment. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
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寫作指導：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文細節，理清篇章結構。
Ⅱ. 依據首句提示，構思后續情節。
第一段：由續寫第一段及續寫第二段的提示語可知，第一段可寫我們通力合作，最終任務順利完成。
第二段：由續寫第二段的提示語和材料標題可知，第二段可寫我的團隊獲獎后的心情和表現，以及我的感悟，最后要回扣標題“An A for Mrs B”，把成就歸功于Mrs Bartlett。
范文佳作：
　　I bravely walked to where the others in my group sat. Encouraged by their big smiles, I sat down and assigned each of us different tasks according to our personal interests and advantages. After that, we plunged right into work. Halfway through it, I felt myself enjoying their company. I learned that Mauro had few friends because he was struggling with the English language; Juliette wore a long skirt every day because of the custom; Rachel had a burning desire to be a fashion designer. Finally, teaming up with one another, we completed our assignment successfully.
　　In the end, Mrs B gave us an A on that assignment. She explained to the whole class that our newspaper was well-laid-out with rich cultural knowledge. It was thrilling to see our painstaking efforts finally paid off. We hugged tightly, our joy and happiness beyond description. At the moment, I suddenly realized that it was Mrs B's insight that brought out the potential in four of her students, a deep sense of gratitude rising inside me. And thanks to her, I've learned to discover others' strengths. She is the one who truly deserves the grade A.
話題佳句：
1. From then on , we began to work as a fine team and finally finished our project on time.
從那時起，我們開始作為一個優秀團隊進行工作，最終按時完成了這個項目。
2. Uncontrollably, a wave of guilt washed over me as I heard the bad news.
當我聽到這個壞消息時，我感到一陣無法控制的悔恨。
3. At the same time, all of them laughed with excitement, and the laughter echoed in the room.
與此同時，他們都興奮地笑了起來，笑聲回蕩在房間里。
4. The miracle is this: the more we share, the more we have.
這就是奇跡：我們與他人分享的越多，我們擁有的就越多。
5. That day, Mike learned the biggest lesson of his life: it is always better to work as a team than to work alone.
那天，Mike學到了人生中最重要的一課：團隊合作總比單干好。
6. I trusted my doctors to heal my body, but I depended on the group to heal my spirit and provide me with a unique fellowship.
我相信我的醫生能治愈我的身體，但我依靠這個團隊來治愈我的精神，并為我提供一種獨特的友誼。
7. But for their common efforts, they couldn't have received so much in their project.
沒有他們的共同努力，他們就不可能在這個項目上取得如此大的成就。
8. The whole experience reminded me that teamwork was key to our success in the assigned project.
這整個經歷提示我，團隊合作是我們成功地完成這項任務的關鍵。
9. As it turns out, there is always a way out of any difficult situation with our joint efforts.
事實證明，只要我們通力合作，就總有辦法擺脫任何困境。
10. A year later, with their joint and continuous effort, the beach regained its beauty and Maria and Peter regained their long-awaited pleasure.
一年后，在他們共同的不斷努力下，海灘恢復了它的美麗，Maria和Peter獲得了等待已久的快樂。
11. What impressed me most is his inspiration, my persistence and our solidarity, on which the fruitful reward depended.
令我印象最深的是他的靈感，我的堅持，以及我們的團結，這些都是成功的關鍵。
12. Just as the saying goes, “One person can go far, but a group of people can travel farther.”
俗話說，一個人可以走得很遠，但一群人可以走得更遠。
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第7講　續寫熱門話題　團隊合作
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
An A for Mrs B
　　I was sitting next to Missy in my ninth-grade world history class when Mrs Bartlett announced a new project. In groups, we were to create a newspaper on the culture we were studying.
　　On a piece of paper, we wrote the names of three friends we wanted in our group. After collecting all the requests, Mrs B informed us that she would take into consideration the names we chose and would let us know the results the next day. I had no doubt I would get the group of my choice. Only a few people behaved normally in the class, and Missy was one of them. I knew we had chosen each other.
　　The next day, I anxiously waited for the class. After the bell rang, Missy and I stopped talking as Mrs B called for our attention. She started to call out names. When she reached the third group, Missy's name was called. So, I'm in group three, I thought. The second, third and fourth members of the group were called. My name was not included. There had to be some mistake!
　　Then I heard it. The last group: “Mauro, Juliette, Rachel，Karina.” I could feel the tears well in my eyes. How could I face being in that group—the boy who rarely spoke English, one girl who was always covered by skirts that went down to her ankles, and the other girl who wore weird clothes. Oh, how badly I wanted to be with my friends.
　　I fought back tears as I walked up to Mrs B. She looked at me and knew what I was there for. I was determined to convince her I should be in the “good” group. “Why ... ？” I started.
　　She gently placed a hand on my shoulder. “I know what you want，Karina, ” she said, “but your group needs you. I need you to help them get a passing grade on this assignment. Only you can help them.”
　　I was stunned(說不出話). I was confused. I was amazed. She had seen something in me I hadn't seen.
　　“Will you help them？” she asked.
　　I stood straighter. “Yes, ” I replied. I couldn't believe it came out of my mouth, but it did. I had committed.
注意：1. 續寫詞數應為150左右；
2. 請按如下格式作答。
　　I bravely walked to where the others in my group sat. ___________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
　　In the end, Mrs B gave us an A on that assignment. _____________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
寫作指導：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文細節，理清篇章結構。
Ⅱ. 依據首句提示，構思后續情節。
第一段：由續寫第一段及續寫第二段的提示語可知，第一段可寫我們通力合作，最終任務順利完成。
第二段：由續寫第二段的提示語和材料標題可知，第二段可寫我的團隊獲獎后的心情和表現，以及我的感悟，最后要回扣標題“An A for Mrs B”，把成就歸功于Mrs Bartlett。
范文佳作：
　　I bravely walked to where the others in my group sat. Encouraged by their big smiles, I sat down and assigned each of us different tasks according to our personal interests and advantages. After that, we plunged right into work. Halfway through it, I felt myself enjoying their company. I learned that Mauro had few friends because he was struggling with the English language; Juliette wore a long skirt every day because of the custom; Rachel had a burning desire to be a fashion designer. Finally, teaming up with one another, we completed our assignment successfully.
　　In the end, Mrs B gave us an A on that assignment. She explained to the whole class that our newspaper was well-laid-out with rich cultural knowledge. It was thrilling to see our painstaking efforts finally paid off. We hugged tightly, our joy and happiness beyond description. At the moment, I suddenly realized that it was Mrs B's insight that brought out the potential in four of her students, a deep sense of gratitude rising inside me. And thanks to her, I've learned to discover others' strengths. She is the one who truly deserves the grade A.
話題佳句：
1. From then on , we began to work as a fine team and finally finished our project on time.
從那時起，我們開始作為一個優秀團隊進行工作，最終按時完成了這個項目。
2. Uncontrollably, a wave of guilt washed over me as I heard the bad news.
當我聽到這個壞消息時，我感到一陣無法控制的悔恨。
3. At the same time, all of them laughed with excitement, and the laughter echoed in the room.
與此同時，他們都興奮地笑了起來，笑聲回蕩在房間里。
4. The miracle is this: the more we share, the more we have.
這就是奇跡：我們與他人分享的越多，我們擁有的就越多。
5. That day, Mike learned the biggest lesson of his life: it is always better to work as a team than to work alone.
那天，Mike學到了人生中最重要的一課：團隊合作總比單干好。
6. I trusted my doctors to heal my body, but I depended on the group to heal my spirit and provide me with a unique fellowship.
我相信我的醫生能治愈我的身體，但我依靠這個團隊來治愈我的精神，并為我提供一種獨特的友誼。
7. But for their common efforts, they couldn't have received so much in their project.
沒有他們的共同努力，他們就不可能在這個項目上取得如此大的成就。
8. The whole experience reminded me that teamwork was key to our success in the assigned project.
這整個經歷提示我，團隊合作是我們成功地完成這項任務的關鍵。
9. As it turns out, there is always a way out of any difficult situation with our joint efforts.
事實證明，只要我們通力合作，就總有辦法擺脫任何困境。
10. A year later, with their joint and continuous effort, the beach regained its beauty and Maria and Peter regained their long-awaited pleasure.
一年后，在他們共同的不斷努力下，海灘恢復了它的美麗，Maria和Peter獲得了等待已久的快樂。
11. What impressed me most is his inspiration, my persistence and our solidarity, on which the fruitful reward depended.
令我印象最深的是他的靈感，我的堅持，以及我們的團結，這些都是成功的關鍵。
12. Just as the saying goes, “One person can go far, but a group of people can travel farther.”
俗話說，一個人可以走得很遠，但一群人可以走得更遠。

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