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第6講　續寫熱門話題　生活趣事
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
　　Pumpkin (南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage—I carried an 85-pounder back last year.
　　This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I'm unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
　　With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork(軟木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
　　My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I'm going to set it down, now, ” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight，I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can't get it out！” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
注意：1. 續寫詞數應為150左右；
2. 請按如下格式作答。
　　I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
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　　The video was posted the day before Halloween.＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
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寫作指導：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文細節，理清篇章結構。
Ⅱ. 依據首句提示，構思后續情節。
第一段：由續寫第一段及續寫第二段的提示語可知，該段應該描述我的頭被拔出來的整個過程。
第二段：由續寫第二段的提示語可知，該段應該描述這段視頻被上傳到網上走紅，我也成了網絡紅人。
范文佳作：
　　I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. My head spun dizzily as if the world swirled. I felt a stab of fear. Jason suggested using a knife to cut the pumpkin open. I waved my hands wildly in protest at the plan. “Then you need to find a way of pulling yourself out, ” My dad said in a calm, cool voice. His voice settled my nerves. I was conscious that my nose was acting as an impediment to my escape. With stretching out my face and biting into the pumpkin, I managed to pull my head out. A ripple of excitement ran through us but the first thing I saw was the camera.
　　The video was posted the day before Halloween. My big red nose and my sore chin became netizens' favorite topic. By the end of that day, it had over 1,000 views. People asked Mom to put it on YouTube, and we even got calls from TV breakfast shows. Meanwhile, the video started racking up hundreds of thousands of views. When I went out, I was recognized by people I had never met. The pumpkin also became a minor celebrity. Passers-by and trick-or-treaters would knock and ask for selfies with it. What an unforgettable Halloween!
話題佳句：
1. Amused by his silly mistake, we laughed our head off.
我們被他愚蠢的錯誤逗樂了，狂笑不已。
2. With crowds of the audience around, so embarrassed was she that she stood there awkwardly, feeling the blood rush to her face.
周圍有大批觀眾，她感到很難堪，尷尬地站在那里，感覺血液涌上了自己的臉。
3. The cookies cooled on the table, filling the kitchen with their sweet smell, making her mouth water.
小甜餅在桌上變涼了，廚房里充滿了甜甜的味道，饞得她直流口水。
4. Seeing no other people notice us, I rose and slipped out of the house silently.
見沒有其他人注意到我們，我便站起來，悄悄地溜出了房子。
5. He slid to the window of the hut, raised himself on tiptoe, and stole a glance.
他溜到小屋的窗口，踮起腳尖，偷偷看了一眼。
6. I spent the rest of the day in a state of excitement, the extremely good mood I had ever experienced.
那天剩下的時間我都在興奮中度過，這是我經歷過的最愉快的心情。
7. I slowly pulled my picture out of my drawer and held it up. The entire class suddenly exploded with laughter!
我把我的畫慢慢地從抽屜里拿出來，舉了起來，全班同學突然哄堂大笑！
8. When recognizing who the visitor was, John opened his mouth with his eyes widening.
當認出來訪者是誰時，約翰張大了嘴巴，眼睛睜得大大的。
9. She dropped her eyes and stared at her feet, hoping no one would notice how embarrassed she was.
她垂下眼睛，盯著自己的腳，希望沒有人會注意到她有多尷尬。
10. She pulled off her shoes and dashed into her bedroom, barefoot and fast.
她脫下鞋子，光著腳飛快地跑到自己臥室中。
11. They laughed loudly, except for me, who could do nothing but force a bitter smile.
他們大笑，當然我沒笑，我只能若無其事地擠出一個苦澀的笑。
12. Dad put the egg under an old hen, and every day Chris and I would check to see if it had hatched yet. Twenty-five days seemed like forever.
爸爸把雞蛋放到老母雞的身下，每天克里斯和我會查看是否已經孵出了小雞。二十五天好像總也過不完。
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第6講　續寫熱門話題　生活趣事
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
　　Pumpkin (南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage—I carried an 85-pounder back last year.
　　This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I'm unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.
　　With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork(軟木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
　　My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I'm going to set it down, now, ” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight，I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can't get it out！” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
注意：1. 續寫詞數應為150左右；
2. 請按如下格式作答。
　　I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. _____
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
　　The video was posted the day before Halloween. _______________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
寫作指導：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文細節，理清篇章結構。
Ⅱ. 依據首句提示，構思后續情節。
第一段：由續寫第一段及續寫第二段的提示語可知，該段應該描述我的頭被拔出來的整個過程。
第二段：由續寫第二段的提示語可知，該段應該描述這段視頻被上傳到網上走紅，我也成了網絡紅人。
范文佳作：
　　I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. My head spun dizzily as if the world swirled. I felt a stab of fear. Jason suggested using a knife to cut the pumpkin open. I waved my hands wildly in protest at the plan. “Then you need to find a way of pulling yourself out, ” My dad said in a calm, cool voice. His voice settled my nerves. I was conscious that my nose was acting as an impediment to my escape. With stretching out my face and biting into the pumpkin, I managed to pull my head out. A ripple of excitement ran through us but the first thing I saw was the camera.
　　The video was posted the day before Halloween. My big red nose and my sore chin became netizens' favorite topic. By the end of that day, it had over 1,000 views. People asked Mom to put it on YouTube, and we even got calls from TV breakfast shows. Meanwhile, the video started racking up hundreds of thousands of views. When I went out, I was recognized by people I had never met. The pumpkin also became a minor celebrity. Passers-by and trick-or-treaters would knock and ask for selfies with it. What an unforgettable Halloween!
話題佳句：
1. Amused by his silly mistake, we laughed our head off.
我們被他愚蠢的錯誤逗樂了，狂笑不已。
2. With crowds of the audience around, so embarrassed was she that she stood there awkwardly, feeling the blood rush to her face.
周圍有大批觀眾，她感到很難堪，尷尬地站在那里，感覺血液涌上了自己的臉。
3. The cookies cooled on the table, filling the kitchen with their sweet smell, making her mouth water.
小甜餅在桌上變涼了，廚房里充滿了甜甜的味道，饞得她直流口水。
4. Seeing no other people notice us, I rose and slipped out of the house silently.
見沒有其他人注意到我們，我便站起來，悄悄地溜出了房子。
5. He slid to the window of the hut, raised himself on tiptoe, and stole a glance.
他溜到小屋的窗口，踮起腳尖，偷偷看了一眼。
6. I spent the rest of the day in a state of excitement, the extremely good mood I had ever experienced.
那天剩下的時間我都在興奮中度過，這是我經歷過的最愉快的心情。
7. I slowly pulled my picture out of my drawer and held it up. The entire class suddenly exploded with laughter!
我把我的畫慢慢地從抽屜里拿出來，舉了起來，全班同學突然哄堂大笑！
8. When recognizing who the visitor was, John opened his mouth with his eyes widening.
當認出來訪者是誰時，約翰張大了嘴巴，眼睛睜得大大的。
9. She dropped her eyes and stared at her feet, hoping no one would notice how embarrassed she was.
她垂下眼睛，盯著自己的腳，希望沒有人會注意到她有多尷尬。
10. She pulled off her shoes and dashed into her bedroom, barefoot and fast.
她脫下鞋子，光著腳飛快地跑到自己臥室中。
11. They laughed loudly, except for me, who could do nothing but force a bitter smile.
他們大笑，當然我沒笑，我只能若無其事地擠出一個苦澀的笑。
12. Dad put the egg under an old hen, and every day Chris and I would check to see if it had hatched yet. Twenty-five days seemed like forever.
爸爸把雞蛋放到老母雞的身下，每天克里斯和我會查看是否已經孵出了小雞。二十五天好像總也過不完。

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