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專題二　讀后續寫
第1講　續寫熱門話題　個人成長
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
　　(2023·新課標Ⅰ卷)When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did.
　　So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail His reply：“Because I love your stories. If you're willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try.
　　I chose Paul Revere's horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (銀匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse's mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny；and unlikely to be anyone else's choice.
　　What did the horse think, as he sped through the night Did he get tired Have doubts Did he want to quit I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere's horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them.
　　When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again.” I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn't win, I wouldn't care.
注意：1. 續寫詞數應為150左右；
2. 請按如下格式作答。
　　A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. 　
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　　I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿
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寫作指導：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文細節，理清篇章結構。
Ⅱ. 依據首句提示，構思后續情節。
第一段：由續寫第一段及續寫第二段的提示語可知，第一段可寫我得知獲獎后的激動心情，家人(尤其是我姐姐)也為我感到高興，并回顧參賽的心路歷程。
第二段：由續寫第二段的提示語可知，第二段可寫我表達對老師的感謝，老師會再次給予認可和鼓勵。最后，可適當進行升華，不要輕易說不可能。
范文佳作：
　　A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I still remember it was a Monday morning in spring, when my teacher called me to his office, telling me that I had taken first place in the writing contest, and that I was the only winner whose native language wasn't English. Dominated by an overwhelming sense of excitement and pride at his words, I simply stood there dumbfounded, and my feet, as if rooted to the ground, couldn't move a bit. The next day, I was presented with my award and a certificate at the ceremony.
　　I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. Giggling instantly with a broad smile spreading on his face, he told me that he was proud of my wonderful performance. It was at that moment that a warm surge of streams washed through my body, and the image of the horse emerged in my mind, encouraging me to continue writing. Indeed, I got a taste of victory and learned to pursue my dream with perseverance, whatever difficulties might arise.
話題佳句：
1. Hard though it is, there is nothing more valuable than the sense of achievement you get from challenging yourself.
雖然很困難，但沒有什么比挑戰自己獲得的成就感更有價值的了。
2. Taking a deep breath to collect myself, I decided to rise from where I fell.
深吸一口氣讓自己鎮定下來，我決定從我跌倒的地方站起來。
3. A great weight off his mind, Tony had never felt so relieved.
卸下了沉重的負擔，托尼從沒有像現在這樣如釋重負。
4. Life is full of smiles and tears. Only by accepting them both can we enjoy our life.
生活充滿了微笑和淚水。只有接受它們兩者，我們才能享受我們的生活。
5. At the moment, I learned what my dad meant and became willing to contribute more to the household. I didn't feel confused anymore about why I should hand in my earnings, as it was indeed my responsibility to support the whole family.
那一刻，我明白了父親的意思，并愿意為家庭做更多的貢獻。我不再對為什么我應該上交我的收入感到困惑，因為養活整個家庭確實是我的責任。
6. This made me moved, and I would try my best to help more people in the future and bring warmth to more people.
這讓我很感動，以后我會盡我最大的努力去幫助更多的人，給更多的人帶來溫暖。
7. This experience made me realize that the persons who you are grateful to are always there and don't ignore them!
這次經歷使我意識到，你所要感激的人一直都在那里，不要忽視他們。
8. Through the accident, I came to realize the value of life and the importance of obeying traffic rules. After all, nothing is more precious than life.
通過這次事故，我開始認識到生命的價值和遵守交通規則的重要性。畢竟，沒有什么比生命更珍貴。
9. At thirteen, I realized that I'd always become the winner if I wanted something badly and worked for it. I can be the master of my own destiny.
十三歲的時候，我意識到如果我非常想要某樣東西并為之努力，我總是會成為勝利者。我可以是自己命運的主宰。
10. I never forgot the feeling of powerlessness when faced with the injured in the accident. It was that accident that changed me, giving me an entirely new life.
我永遠不會忘記在那次事故中面對傷者時的那種無力感。正是那次事故改變了我，給了我全新的生活。
11. Since then I have often been reminded of the fish that I did not catch and the wisdom of my uncle: Never brag of your fish before you catch him.
從那以后我經常想起我沒有釣到的魚和我叔叔的智慧：魚未抓到，莫夸其好。
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專題二　讀后續寫
第1講　續寫熱門話題　個人成長
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
　　(2023·新課標Ⅰ卷)When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did.
　　So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail His reply：“Because I love your stories. If you're willing to apply yourself, I think you have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try.
　　I chose Paul Revere's horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (銀匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come straight from the horse's mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny；and unlikely to be anyone else's choice.
　　What did the horse think, as he sped through the night Did he get tired Have doubts Did he want to quit I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Revere's horse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half-dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them.
　　When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it again.” I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didn't win, I wouldn't care.
注意：1. 續寫詞數應為150左右；
2. 請按如下格式作答。
　　A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. _____________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
　　I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. ＿＿＿____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
寫作指導：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文細節，理清篇章結構。
Ⅱ. 依據首句提示，構思后續情節。
第一段：由續寫第一段及續寫第二段的提示語可知，第一段可寫我得知獲獎后的激動心情，家人(尤其是我姐姐)也為我感到高興，并回顧參賽的心路歷程。
第二段：由續寫第二段的提示語可知，第二段可寫我表達對老師的感謝，老師會再次給予認可和鼓勵。最后，可適當進行升華，不要輕易說不可能。
范文佳作：
　　A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. I still remember it was a Monday morning in spring, when my teacher called me to his office, telling me that I had taken first place in the writing contest, and that I was the only winner whose native language wasn't English. Dominated by an overwhelming sense of excitement and pride at his words, I simply stood there dumbfounded, and my feet, as if rooted to the ground, couldn't move a bit. The next day, I was presented with my award and a certificate at the ceremony.
　　I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation. Giggling instantly with a broad smile spreading on his face, he told me that he was proud of my wonderful performance. It was at that moment that a warm surge of streams washed through my body, and the image of the horse emerged in my mind, encouraging me to continue writing. Indeed, I got a taste of victory and learned to pursue my dream with perseverance, whatever difficulties might arise.
話題佳句：
1. Hard though it is, there is nothing more valuable than the sense of achievement you get from challenging yourself.
雖然很困難，但沒有什么比挑戰自己獲得的成就感更有價值的了。
2. Taking a deep breath to collect myself, I decided to rise from where I fell.
深吸一口氣讓自己鎮定下來，我決定從我跌倒的地方站起來。
3. A great weight off his mind, Tony had never felt so relieved.
卸下了沉重的負擔，托尼從沒有像現在這樣如釋重負。
4. Life is full of smiles and tears. Only by accepting them both can we enjoy our life.
生活充滿了微笑和淚水。只有接受它們兩者，我們才能享受我們的生活。
5. At the moment, I learned what my dad meant and became willing to contribute more to the household. I didn't feel confused anymore about why I should hand in my earnings, as it was indeed my responsibility to support the whole family.
那一刻，我明白了父親的意思，并愿意為家庭做更多的貢獻。我不再對為什么我應該上交我的收入感到困惑，因為養活整個家庭確實是我的責任。
6. This made me moved, and I would try my best to help more people in the future and bring warmth to more people.
這讓我很感動，以后我會盡我最大的努力去幫助更多的人，給更多的人帶來溫暖。
7. This experience made me realize that the persons who you are grateful to are always there and don't ignore them!
這次經歷使我意識到，你所要感激的人一直都在那里，不要忽視他們。
8. Through the accident, I came to realize the value of life and the importance of obeying traffic rules. After all, nothing is more precious than life.
通過這次事故，我開始認識到生命的價值和遵守交通規則的重要性。畢竟，沒有什么比生命更珍貴。
9. At thirteen, I realized that I'd always become the winner if I wanted something badly and worked for it. I can be the master of my own destiny.
十三歲的時候，我意識到如果我非常想要某樣東西并為之努力，我總是會成為勝利者。我可以是自己命運的主宰。
10. I never forgot the feeling of powerlessness when faced with the injured in the accident. It was that accident that changed me, giving me an entirely new life.
我永遠不會忘記在那次事故中面對傷者時的那種無力感。正是那次事故改變了我，給了我全新的生活。
11. Since then I have often been reminded of the fish that I did not catch and the wisdom of my uncle: Never brag of your fish before you catch him.
從那以后我經常想起我沒有釣到的魚和我叔叔的智慧：魚未抓到，莫夸其好。

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