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第3講　續寫熱門話題　歷險脫困
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　　Ezri and Oliver were so keen to climb the mountain that they begged to join their dad Brandon for another hike. Just after 8 a. m. on a beautiful Sunday morning, they set off. Brandon's backpack held his phone, Clif bars(能量棒), packets of apple sauce, apples, water bottles and fishing gear.
　　Brandon had planned a varied route up the mountain. The winding upward slope was fun and uneventful. Near the top, thick snow blanketed the path. Excitedly, the kids raced across the hard surface. They shared the second-last Clif bar and rested for an hour. Brandon looked around. His phone showed 1：30 p. m. and no signals.
　　When the kids started down the far side of the slope, Brandon said, “You guys really want to find those fishing lakes, don't you？”
　　“Oh, yes！” Ezri said. So they took an unfamiliar route down the other side of the mountain.
　　By the time Brandon realized the path had become an animal trail alongside a stream, it made sense to keep following it. The stream sang to them, and they kept following it down. Mid afternoon, when the sun disappeared behind heavy gray clouds, they suddenly felt lost, cold and hungry. For half an hour they cautiously moved downward until they reached a steep cliff(懸崖) edge. The stream became a noisy, six-metre waterfall. Mist enveloped them as the water raced over a huge rock.
　　Brandon cursed(咒罵) himself for taking an unknown route down. They held hands and inched down until Oliver slid on a loose rock and all three went flying.
　　Brandon wiped blood from his forehead and gathered his senses. Was anyone hurt Oliver, crying and shivering, seemed okay. Ezri was weeping, but she too appeared uninjured. Brandon himself didn't feel anything worse than the wound on his forehead. The backpack was stuck in the rocks six metres away. He saw no use trying to find it back. The air was cold and getting colder. They were wet and tired.
注意：1. 續寫詞數應為150左右；
2. 請按如下格式作答。
　　To save the kids, Brandon realized he had to look for a way out alone. ＿＿＿
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　　A helicopter with the father and many volunteers set off immediately. ＿＿＿＿
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寫作指導：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文細節，理清篇章結構。
Ⅱ. 依據首句提示，構思后續情節。
第一段：由續寫第一段及續寫第二段的提示語可知，第一段可描寫Brandon獨自離開去尋找出路，最終聯系上911。
第二段：由續寫第二段的提示語可知，第二段可寫Brandon和志愿者成功找到孩子們，Brandon非常感動。
范文佳作：
　　To save the kids, Brandon realized he had to look for a way out alone. After he made the decision, he wrapped his coat around them and kissed each of them on the forehead. “Stay here, no matter what. I'll go for help, ” he repeated several times in a trembling voice. In the following hours, Brandon walked through the bush and even suffered another bad fall on the way. Exhausted and bloodied, he emerged from the forest and bumped into a family of hikers, who called 911.
　　A helicopter with the father and many volunteers set off immediately. On the return trip, Brandon anxiously described the general location of the children to the rescuers. Finally, after a long search, they successfully located the poor children. Upon the helicopter's arrival, Brandon jumped off and ran to embrace his children, moved to see so many strangers in bright red jackets. Every time he thinks of bright red jackets, he would feel he was not alone. There's always someone out there who is willing to help.
話題佳句：
1. When we reached deep into the forest, suddenly the smog spread everywhere and we were not able to see each other clearly and lost our way.
當我們到達森林深處時，煙霧突然彌漫，我們無法看清楚彼此并且迷了路。
2. They both spent a minute catching their breath and calmed themselves down.
他們兩人都花了一分鐘時間喘了口氣，讓自己冷靜下來。
3. The icy water pierced my skin like needles. I was anxious to climb out by myself, but countless previous failures stopped me from struggling again.
冰冷的水像針一樣刺痛我的皮膚。我渴望自己爬出去，但之前無數次的失敗阻止了我再次掙扎。
4. He began to shake off the snow, moved snow away with bare hands, and managed to pull himself out.
他開始抖落積雪，徒手把雪移開，并設法把自己拉了出來。
5. Tom was shocked to find that the water kept rising. He was trapped in his house and his heart suddenly jumped into his throat.
湯姆震驚地發現水一直上漲。他被困在他的房子里，他的心一下子提到了嗓子眼。
6. Gathering all his strength, carefully, bit by bit, Simpson climbed out of the snow hole.
辛普森用盡全身力氣，一點一點地，小心翼翼地從雪洞里爬了出來。
7. The front door was only a feet away, but the wind was so strong that Jessica had to fight her way out of the car and struggled into the house.
離前門只有一英尺遠，但風太大了，杰西卡不得不奮力從車里出來，艱難地進了房子。
8. He felt weak but otherwise fine. He was glad to be out of danger and reunited with his family.
他感到虛弱，但其他方面還好。他很高興脫離了危險，與家人團聚了。
9. Mom reminded me of how fortunate I was from the jaws of the alligator. It was a narrow escape.
媽媽提醒我，我能從短吻鱷的口中逃脫是多么幸運。這是一次死里逃生。
10. Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.
最后，我們走出了困住我們的森林。多么難忘的經歷啊！事實證明，只要我們保持冷靜，就總有辦法擺脫困境。
11. Our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life.
我們的迷路給我的冒險假期增添了一份特別的滋味，我將終生難忘。
12. Whether it's hiking through the mountains or surfing on the beach, every adventure brings its own unique challenges and rewards.
無論是在山上徒步旅行還是在海灘上沖浪，每一次冒險都會帶來自己獨特的挑戰和回報。
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第3講　續寫熱門話題　歷險脫困
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
　　Ezri and Oliver were so keen to climb the mountain that they begged to join their dad Brandon for another hike. Just after 8 a. m. on a beautiful Sunday morning, they set off. Brandon's backpack held his phone, Clif bars(能量棒), packets of apple sauce, apples, water bottles and fishing gear.
　　Brandon had planned a varied route up the mountain. The winding upward slope was fun and uneventful. Near the top, thick snow blanketed the path. Excitedly, the kids raced across the hard surface. They shared the second-last Clif bar and rested for an hour. Brandon looked around. His phone showed 1：30 p. m. and no signals.
　　When the kids started down the far side of the slope, Brandon said, “You guys really want to find those fishing lakes, don't you？”
　　“Oh, yes！” Ezri said. So they took an unfamiliar route down the other side of the mountain.
　　By the time Brandon realized the path had become an animal trail alongside a stream, it made sense to keep following it. The stream sang to them, and they kept following it down. Mid afternoon, when the sun disappeared behind heavy gray clouds, they suddenly felt lost, cold and hungry. For half an hour they cautiously moved downward until they reached a steep cliff(懸崖) edge. The stream became a noisy, six-metre waterfall. Mist enveloped them as the water raced over a huge rock.
　　Brandon cursed(咒罵) himself for taking an unknown route down. They held hands and inched down until Oliver slid on a loose rock and all three went flying.
　　Brandon wiped blood from his forehead and gathered his senses. Was anyone hurt Oliver, crying and shivering, seemed okay. Ezri was weeping, but she too appeared uninjured. Brandon himself didn't feel anything worse than the wound on his forehead. The backpack was stuck in the rocks six metres away. He saw no use trying to find it back. The air was cold and getting colder. They were wet and tired.
注意：1. 續寫詞數應為150左右；
2. 請按如下格式作答。
　　To save the kids, Brandon realized he had to look for a way out alone. _____________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
　　A helicopter with the father and many volunteers set off immediately. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
寫作指導：
Ⅰ. 梳理原文細節，理清篇章結構。
Ⅱ. 依據首句提示，構思后續情節。
第一段：由續寫第一段及續寫第二段的提示語可知，第一段可描寫Brandon獨自離開去尋找出路，最終聯系上911。
第二段：由續寫第二段的提示語可知，第二段可寫Brandon和志愿者成功找到孩子們，Brandon非常感動。
范文佳作：
　　To save the kids, Brandon realized he had to look for a way out alone. After he made the decision, he wrapped his coat around them and kissed each of them on the forehead. “Stay here, no matter what. I'll go for help, ” he repeated several times in a trembling voice. In the following hours, Brandon walked through the bush and even suffered another bad fall on the way. Exhausted and bloodied, he emerged from the forest and bumped into a family of hikers, who called 911.
　　A helicopter with the father and many volunteers set off immediately. On the return trip, Brandon anxiously described the general location of the children to the rescuers. Finally, after a long search, they successfully located the poor children. Upon the helicopter's arrival, Brandon jumped off and ran to embrace his children, moved to see so many strangers in bright red jackets. Every time he thinks of bright red jackets, he would feel he was not alone. There's always someone out there who is willing to help.
話題佳句：
1. When we reached deep into the forest, suddenly the smog spread everywhere and we were not able to see each other clearly and lost our way.
當我們到達森林深處時，煙霧突然彌漫，我們無法看清楚彼此并且迷了路。
2. They both spent a minute catching their breath and calmed themselves down.
他們兩人都花了一分鐘時間喘了口氣，讓自己冷靜下來。
3. The icy water pierced my skin like needles. I was anxious to climb out by myself, but countless previous failures stopped me from struggling again.
冰冷的水像針一樣刺痛我的皮膚。我渴望自己爬出去，但之前無數次的失敗阻止了我再次掙扎。
4. He began to shake off the snow, moved snow away with bare hands, and managed to pull himself out.
他開始抖落積雪，徒手把雪移開，并設法把自己拉了出來。
5. Tom was shocked to find that the water kept rising. He was trapped in his house and his heart suddenly jumped into his throat.
湯姆震驚地發現水一直上漲。他被困在他的房子里，他的心一下子提到了嗓子眼。
6. Gathering all his strength, carefully, bit by bit, Simpson climbed out of the snow hole.
辛普森用盡全身力氣，一點一點地，小心翼翼地從雪洞里爬了出來。
7. The front door was only a feet away, but the wind was so strong that Jessica had to fight her way out of the car and struggled into the house.
離前門只有一英尺遠，但風太大了，杰西卡不得不奮力從車里出來，艱難地進了房子。
8. He felt weak but otherwise fine. He was glad to be out of danger and reunited with his family.
他感到虛弱，但其他方面還好。他很高興脫離了危險，與家人團聚了。
9. Mom reminded me of how fortunate I was from the jaws of the alligator. It was a narrow escape.
媽媽提醒我，我能從短吻鱷的口中逃脫是多么幸運。這是一次死里逃生。
10. Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there's always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.
最后，我們走出了困住我們的森林。多么難忘的經歷啊！事實證明，只要我們保持冷靜，就總有辦法擺脫困境。
11. Our being lost added a special taste to my adventurous vacation which I would remember all my life.
我們的迷路給我的冒險假期增添了一份特別的滋味，我將終生難忘。
12. Whether it's hiking through the mountains or surfing on the beach, every adventure brings its own unique challenges and rewards.
無論是在山上徒步旅行還是在海灘上沖浪，每一次冒險都會帶來自己獨特的挑戰和回報。

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