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寫作進(jìn)階　
第一部分　應(yīng)用文寫作
第二講　應(yīng)用文寫作實戰(zhàn)操作
應(yīng)用文寫作屬于半開放式文體，考查內(nèi)容種類繁多，自由靈活性強(qiáng)。現(xiàn)根據(jù)近年來考查頻率，進(jìn)行分類突破，量體裁衣。
文體解讀
建議信是作者就有關(guān)問題進(jìn)行分析針對這些問題提出自己的看法和建議，以便讓對方接受自己的想法、主張并解決有關(guān)問題。建議信可以寫給個人、某個組織或機(jī)構(gòu)，就其遇到的某個問題提出自己的看法、觀點(diǎn)或忠告。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：
一、應(yīng)用文寫作命題透視
典例導(dǎo)學(xué)
(2023·新課標(biāo)Ⅰ卷)假定你是李華，外教Ryan準(zhǔn)備將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課后練習(xí)口語，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問題。請你給外教寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．說明問題；
2．提出建議。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2．請按如下格式作答。
Dear Ryan，
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
寫作指導(dǎo)
本篇作文要求學(xué)生寫一封建議信。
1．文章應(yīng)包含題中所列要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容分為三部分：開頭(介紹自己并表明寫信目的)、主體(表達(dá)意見和建議)和結(jié)尾(希望被采納)。
2．學(xué)生需認(rèn)真審題，就本題而言，題干所示的問題可能是被隨機(jī)分組的兩個意愿和基礎(chǔ)程度不一致、口語水平不均衡，解決方案可以是按照個人意愿和口語水平進(jìn)行分組。
3．提建議時要有理有據(jù)、態(tài)度誠懇、用語禮貌且委婉。
佳作賞析
Dear Ryan，
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.I'm writing to express my concerns about the upcoming oral practice after class.
I understand that you plan to pair all the students randomly for oral practice.However, not all students have the same level of proficiency in English, resulting in some pairs being too challenging for one student while being too easy for the other, which can lead to frustration or a lack of progress.Therefore, I think it is better to assign students to practice in pairs
based on their language proficiency and interests, rather than pair them randomly.Only in this way can each pair have a good match and effectively communicate with each other.Moreover, not only will it improve our English communication skills, but it will also build our confidence.
Therefore, I hope that you will consider my suggestions.Thank you for your attention.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
佳作點(diǎn)評
1．本篇范文要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，角色代入感強(qiáng)，體現(xiàn)了語言的交際性原則。在結(jié)構(gòu)上，學(xué)生按照三段式結(jié)構(gòu)進(jìn)行布局謀篇，使得文章條理清楚、層次分明。
2．在遣詞造句方面，詞匯和句型的選擇靈活多樣，尤其是句型高級多變，如that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，動詞-ing短語作狀語，which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，it作形式主語，過去分詞短語作狀語，only置于句首引起的部分倒裝以及not only開頭的部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)。
3．對連接和過渡成分(However, Therefore, Moreover)的使用，讓學(xué)生扎實的英語語言功底和較強(qiáng)的語言表達(dá)能力得到了體現(xiàn)。
素材積累
第一部分(首段)：表達(dá)寫信目的
1．I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
我寫信給你一些建議/忠告。
2．You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese, and I will try to make some suggestions here.
你詢問我關(guān)于如何學(xué)習(xí)漢語的建議，那么我就在此給出一些建議。
第二部分(主體段)：針對問題，提出建議
1．You'd better……/It's best to...
你最好……/最好是……
2．As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following measures.
在我看來，采取如下措施是明智的。
3．I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我認(rèn)為如果你能……會更有益。
4．If you want a deep experience in the city, shared bikes would be the best choice.
如果你想對這個城市有深度的體驗，共享自行車將是最好的選擇。
第三部分(結(jié)尾段)：希望采納建議，并表示謝意
1．I hope these suggestions above will be of some help to you.
我希望以上建議將對你有所幫助。
2．I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.
我希望這些建議會對你有用。
3．I hope that my suggestions will be helpful to you anyway.
無論如何，我希望我的建議對你有所幫助。
演練提能
(2024·福建省漳州市第二次質(zhì)量檢測)
假定你是學(xué)校英語俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)人李華。你的英國外教Andrew詢問你在接下來的課程中是否需要介紹一些有關(guān)英國的歷史知識。請你寫一封郵件回復(fù)他。內(nèi)容如下：
(1)你的態(tài)度；
(2)你的理由；
(3)你的建議。
注意：
(1)詞數(shù)80左右；
(2)可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】
Dear Andrew，
Thank you for your asking me about whether to introduce some knowledge of British history in our upcoming lessons. However, I believe that it isn't necessary.
Our focus should be on improving students' English language skills. While learning about British culture is interesting, it may not be directly relevant to their language development. Therefore, I suggest we continue with our current lesson plan.
However, if there is a specific aspect of British history that relates to the language or culture, we can certainly incorporate it into our lessons. But overall, our primary objective should be to improve students' language proficiency.
Best regards.
Yours，
Li Hua
二、邀請信——熱情相邀，以誠待人
文體解讀
邀請信是邀請收信人參加某項活動，一定要注意態(tài)度誠懇且措詞委婉有禮貌。邀請信的末尾都要表達(dá)希望對方參加或出席的愿望。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：
典例導(dǎo)學(xué)
(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是校廣播站英語節(jié)目“Talk and Talk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請她做一次訪談。內(nèi)容包括：
1．節(jié)目介紹；
2．訪談的時間和話題。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2．請按如下格式作答。
Dear Caroline，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
寫作指導(dǎo)
本篇作文要求學(xué)生寫一封邀請信。內(nèi)容可分為三部分：(1)寫信者的身份以及寫信的目的；(2)節(jié)目的相關(guān)信息以及訪談的時間和話題；(3)最后一段收尾表示期待。
1．首先列出提綱要點(diǎn)，以防遺漏主要內(nèi)容。
2．人稱以第一、二人稱為主，注意采用角色代入的方式來體現(xiàn)語言的交際性。
3．訪談尚未發(fā)生，涉及訪談的內(nèi)容應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主。
Dear Caroline，
I am Li Hua from our school's radio station, writing to invite you to be the guest of the English program“Talk and Talk”．
The program invites guests to talk on certain topics, aimed at broadening students' horizons.If it is convenient for you, please come to the studio at 19：00 on Thursday.You are expected to talk about independence of the youth in the West.A 20-minute talk followed by 10 minutes' question answering would be appreciated.
I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
佳作點(diǎn)評
1．文章開頭作了自我介紹，并表明寫信目的：邀請外教參加訪談節(jié)目，言簡意賅。
2．范文中使用了大量亮點(diǎn)詞匯，如 aimed at, broadening students' horizons, convenient, appreciated等。在句式方面，既有動詞-ing 短語 writing to invite you to be the guest of the English program“Talk and Talk”作狀語，又有過去分詞短語 aimed at broadening students' horizons 和 followed by 10 minutes' question answering 作定語等，展示了較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。
3．文章結(jié)尾使用了邀請信的套語：I would appreciate it if you...表達(dá)了希望對方接受邀請的愿望。
素材積累
第一部分(首段)：介紹自己，簡要說明活動，并邀請對方。
1．It's my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to participate in/attend/join us in...
我非常高興/榮幸地邀請您參加……/和我們一起……
2．To broaden our horizons, our school will hold...I'm delighted to invite you to participate in it.
為了開闊我們的視野，我們學(xué)校將舉行……，我很高興邀請您參加。
3．A music festival will be held in our school hall at 2：00 p．m. on 5 June.And I'm greatly honoured to invite you to attend it.
音樂節(jié)將于6月5日下午2點(diǎn)在我們學(xué)校禮堂舉行。我很榮幸邀請您參加。
第二部分(主體段)：介紹活動具體內(nèi)容，并說明受邀人參加的理由。
1．The following are some details about.../Here are some details about.../Some details about...are as follows.
……的細(xì)節(jié)如下。
2．To begin with, we will...Besides, there will be a number of/various activities such as..., which will...
首先，我們將……；此外，將會有許多/各種各樣的活動，例如……，這將……
3．We will start at 7：00 a．m. and arrive there at about 10：00.
我們將在上午7點(diǎn)出發(fā)，10點(diǎn)左右到達(dá)那里。
4．By the way, you may take Bus No.322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club.
順便說一下，你可以乘坐你公寓前的322路公交車，它會直接把你帶到俱樂部。
第三部分(結(jié)尾段)：期待對方接受邀請并盡快回復(fù)。
1．We will feel much honoured if you could come.
如果您能來，我們會非常榮幸。
2．I do hope you will accept our/my invitation if it is convenient for you.
我真心希望，如果您方便的話能接受我們/我的邀請。
3．Would you please let me know as early as possible if you could accept my invitation
如果您能接受我的邀請，能否盡早讓我知道？
演練提能
(2024·廣西高中畢業(yè)班摸底檢測)
假定你是李華，你的同學(xué)Chris作為交換生來中國已經(jīng)一年了，他對中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日很感興趣。恰逢今年春節(jié)2月10日他在中國，請你給他寫一封邀請函，邀請他去你家歡度春節(jié)。內(nèi)容包括：
1．表達(dá)你誠摯的邀請；
2．節(jié)日簡介(慶祝時間、主要活動安排)。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Chris，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Chris，
Knowing that you have a keen interest in Chinese traditional festivals, I'm writing to extend a sincere invitation to you to come over to my house to celebrate the upcoming Spring Festival.
This year, the festival falls on February 10th. Apart from enjoying a feast, we will spend the day visiting relatives and friends, setting off fireworks, or watching the Spring Festival Gala on TV. Generally, children will get lucky money.
We are expecting your arrival. Your presence would add to the warmth and happiness of our family gathering. If you are available, please let me know at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
三、感謝信——真誠道謝，學(xué)會感恩
文體解讀
感謝信是向幫助、關(guān)心和支持過自己的集體或個人表達(dá)感謝的信件。感恩是一種美德，因此，感謝信在我們的生活中非常重要，也非常普遍。感謝信的寫作對象可以是同學(xué)、朋友、老師、機(jī)構(gòu)等。寫感謝信時一定要態(tài)度誠懇，言詞熱切，讓對方感受到你發(fā)自內(nèi)心的感激之情。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：
典例導(dǎo)學(xué)
假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國家。請你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．表示感謝；
2．回顧Alex對你的幫助；
3．臨別祝愿。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2．請按如下格式作答。
Dear Alex，
Yours，
Li Hua
寫作指導(dǎo)
本篇作文要求學(xué)生寫一封感謝信。內(nèi)容可分為三部分：(1)表達(dá)謝意；(2)回顧往事；(3)再次感謝。
1．人稱以第一、二人稱為主。
2．回顧 Alex 對你的幫助應(yīng)用一般過去時和虛擬語氣等。
佳作賞析
Dear Alex，
I'm sorry to hear that you are going to return to your country very soon and I'm writing this email to express my gratitude for your help.
First of all, thank you for helping me learn English.Without your help, I would not have made such great progress in English learning.Besides, what you told me about your country broadened my horizons and aroused my interest in foreign culture.
I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey.
Yours，
Li Hua
佳作點(diǎn)評
1．文章開頭簡明扼要地說明了寫信目的，使用了感謝信的套語：I'm writing this email to express my gratitude for your help。
2．書信的主體部分陳述了道謝的原因，使用了過渡性詞語： First of all, Besides；高級詞匯： make great progress, broaden, arouse；感謝信的套語：...thank you for..., Without your help，I would...；還使用了what引導(dǎo)的主語從句。
3．信的結(jié)尾使用感謝信的套語表達(dá)了祝愿。
素材積累
第一部分(首段)：表達(dá)真摯謝意
1．Thank you so much for your generous/timely help.
非常感謝您慷慨的/及時的幫助。
2．I want to send/express my sincere gratitude for your kind help with my English learning.
我想真誠地感謝您對我英語學(xué)習(xí)的幫助。
3．On behalf of my whole family，I would like to extend my sincere gratitude for your help.
我謹(jǐn)代表我全家對您的幫助表示真誠的感激。
第二部分(主體段)：解釋感謝的原因
1．Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in my English.
多虧了您的幫助，我的英語有了飛速的進(jìn)步。
2．Without your help, I would not have been a top student in English.
沒有您的幫助，我就不會成為英語尖子生。
3．But for your help ( If it were not for your help)，I would not have made so much progress in my oral English.
要是沒有您的幫助，我的英語口語不會取得如此大的進(jìn)步。
第三部分(結(jié)尾段)：再次感謝
1．I deeply/greatly appreciate your entertainment.
我非常感激你們的盛情款待。
2．I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.
如果您能接受我誠摯的感謝，我將不勝感激。
3．Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, and we will remember them forever.
沒什么能抹掉我們美好的記憶，我們會永遠(yuǎn)牢記在心。
演練提能
(2024·江蘇省南通市第一次調(diào)研測試)
假定你是李華，春節(jié)期間你和朋友Mike一起出游，你剛收到他發(fā)給你的照片。請你給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．收到照片表示感謝；
2．回顧一起度過的時光；
3．邀請他周末來家作客。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2．請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。
Dear Mike，
Yours，
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Mike，
How are you Thank you for sending me the photos that bring back those wonderful memories.
The time we spent together during the Spring Festival was just incredible. We woke up early to see the sunrise over the sea. On the way back, we tasted the fine local food, which was impressive indeed. And what was truly unforgettable was the hospitality I had as a guest at your home. I really had a great time.
I'd like to invite you over this weekend. It will be a chance for you to meet my family. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours，
Li Hua
四、申請信——毛遂自薦，心誠則成
文體解讀
申請信是指求職、加入某組織或活動的申請等。寫申請信讓對方了解自己的經(jīng)驗、能力、成就、愿望等，申請信盡可能向?qū)Ψ秸f明個人的長處，以便留下好印象，獲得面談的機(jī)會。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：
典例導(dǎo)學(xué)
假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展覽。請你寫一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：
1．寫信目的；
2．個人優(yōu)勢；
3．能做的事情。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 80左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭結(jié)尾已為你寫好。
Dear sir，
Yours，
Li Hua
寫作指導(dǎo)
這是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求學(xué)生寫一封信，申請成為當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館的志愿者。
1．首先說明寫信目的；
2．主體段陳述個人優(yōu)勢以及能做的事情；
3．結(jié)尾段表達(dá)個人期待；
4．人稱以第一人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主。
佳作賞析
Dear Sir，
I am Li Hua, a student from China, who is studying in London during the summer holiday.Knowing an exhibition of Chinese paintings will be held at the gallery next month, I am writing to apply to become a volunteer.
I have the following advantages.First of all，I speak English fluently, which allows me to communicate with visitors without difficulty. What's more, as a Chinese painting lover，I know a lot about this art form.If accepted, I can introduce Chinese painting skills to visitors, helping them know more about Chinese culture.
I think I am qualified to be a volunteer.I would be grateful if you could give me a chance.
Yours，
Li Hua
佳作點(diǎn)評
1．信的開頭簡明扼要地做了自我介紹，使用了who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，同時使用了申請信的套語I am writing to apply to...發(fā)出申請。
2．信的主體部分介紹了自身的優(yōu)勢，使用了過渡性詞語： First of all, What's more；還使用了非限制性定語從句、條件狀語從句的省略結(jié)構(gòu)以及動詞-ing短語作狀語。
3．信的結(jié)尾使用了申請信的套語：I would be grateful if...表達(dá)了感謝和希望。
素材積累
第一部分(首段)：說明寫信目的
1．Knowing some volunteers are wanted, I am writing to win the chance.
得知(你們)需要一些志愿者，我寫信爭取這個機(jī)會。
2．I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of secretary.
我認(rèn)為我是秘書工作的合格人選，所以我寫信推薦自己。
第二部分(主體段)：表達(dá)個人優(yōu)勢
1．I'm an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students.
我是一名優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生，在我班50 名學(xué)生中名列前五名。
2．I have the following advantages.Firstly, I love to communicate with other people.Secondly, what I study at university is marketing.
我有以下優(yōu)點(diǎn)。首先，我喜歡和別人交流。其次，我在大學(xué)里學(xué)的是市場營銷。
3．Upon graduation, I first worked as a salesman, then a shop assistant, and now I am working in a supermarket.
畢業(yè)后，我先是當(dāng)了一名銷售員，然后當(dāng)了一名店員，現(xiàn)在我在一家超市工作。
4．I feel I am able to meet the requirements you have listed.
我覺得我能滿足你們所列的要求。
第三部分(結(jié)尾段)：懇請招聘單位考慮自己的申請，期望回復(fù)
1．I think I am qualified to be a manager.Please give me a chance.
我想我有資格成為一名經(jīng)理。請給我一次機(jī)會。
2．I hope I may be granted an interview, when I can show my qualifications more fully.
我希望獲得面試機(jī)會，屆時我可以更詳細(xì)地展示我的技能。
演練提能
假定你是李華，你校將成立一個校園網(wǎng)站，需要幾名英語小記者。請你給網(wǎng)站負(fù)責(zé)人Henry寫一封申請信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．提出申請；
2．說明自己的優(yōu)勢。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2．請按如下格式作答。
Dear Henry，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Henry，
I'm glad to hear that a school website will be set up in our school.I'm writing to apply to be an English reporter.
Not only do I have a good command of English, but I also do well in Chinese, especially in writing.Actually, I have won some prizes in both English and Chinese writing contests.More importantly, I have been interested in, and familiar with journalism, especially the new media, such as Weibo, WeChat, and Douyin.
I do believe I'm well qualified for the position.Given the chance, I'm sure I will do a great job and won't let you down.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
五、道歉信——真誠致歉，前嫌盡釋
文體解讀
道歉信通常是因為自己的過失或疏忽給別人帶來了麻煩或損失的情況下，為了向?qū)Ψ奖硎厩敢舛鴮懙男偶?。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：
典例導(dǎo)學(xué)
假定你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你和英國好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴約。請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．表達(dá)歉意并說明原因；
2．提出建議并給出理由。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2．請按如下格式作答。
Dear Jim，
Yours，
Li Hua
寫作指導(dǎo)
本篇作文較為簡單，但要注意言之有理，豐富內(nèi)容。
1．首先為失約道歉，并說明原因(比如生病、學(xué)校補(bǔ)課等)，原因應(yīng)符合常理。接著為Jim提供下次游玩的建議，比如一起逛本市著名的公園、參觀博物館、品嘗特色美食等，可自由發(fā)揮。
2．解釋不能赴約的原因時以過去時為主，建議再約時以現(xiàn)在時或?qū)頃r為主。人稱以第一人稱為主。
3．面對這種審題難度不高但是自由度較大的寫作題目時，要注意多用高級詞匯與復(fù)雜句式，以提高寫作分?jǐn)?shù)。
佳作賞析
Dear Jim，
I'm sorry that I won't be able to hang out with you this weekend as scheduled.
I began to cough yesterday morning, so I went to see a doctor.She told me it was a bad cold and that I would have to stay at home for a few days.
I'd really like to spend some time with you.Is it fine with you if we take a trip to Zhangjiakou next Saturday It's one of the host cities for the 2022 Winter Olympics.Please let me know what you think.
Again, I'm sorry about the inconvenience.Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours，
Li Hua
佳作點(diǎn)評
本篇范文行文流暢，要點(diǎn)齊全，內(nèi)容完整，體現(xiàn)了作者扎實的語言功底。
1．文章充分體現(xiàn)了語言的交際功能，在向朋友表達(dá)歉意時情感真摯，展現(xiàn)了作者良好的溝通能力。如開篇使用I'm sorry that...以及文中 I'd really like to...等。
2．文章與時俱進(jìn)，融入冬奧元素，有利于培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的家國情懷，堅定文化自信。
3．文章語言多樣，作者在文中運(yùn)用了一些高級句式，如并列復(fù)合句 She told me it was a bad cold and that I would have to stay at home for a few days.，條件狀語從句if we take a trip to Zhangjiakou next Saturday等。
素材積累
第一部分(首段)：開頭常用句式和套話
1．I'm writing to express my sincere apologies for my mistakes in my work.
我寫信是為了對我工作中的失誤表示真誠的道歉。
2．I'm sorry to say that I can't go to the bookshop with you on Sunday morning as we planned last week.
很抱歉，我不能像我們上周計劃的那樣，在周日早上和你一起去書店了。
3．I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to attend your birthday party next Thursday evening.
我很抱歉地告訴你，下周四晚上我不能參加你的生日聚會了。
第二部分(主體段)：陳述理由＋補(bǔ)救措施
1．I want you to know how bad we feel about it and I assure you that it won't happen again.
我想讓你知道我們有多難過，我向你保證這不會再發(fā)生了。
2．How about going to the cinema this Saturday afternoon If it's convenient for you, let's meet at 3 o'clock on Wanda Plaza.
這個星期六下午去看電影怎樣？如果你方便的話，我們3點(diǎn)在萬達(dá)廣場見面吧。
3．Would you mind if I change the appointment time
你會介意我改變約會的時間嗎？
第三部分(結(jié)尾段)：常用句式和套話
1．Once again，I am sorry for the mistakes I have made.
我對于自己所犯的錯誤再次道歉。
2．I sincerely hope that you will be able to accept my apologies and give me another chance.
我真誠地希望你能夠接受我的道歉，再給我一次機(jī)會。
演練提能
(2024·山東省煙臺市第一學(xué)期期末)
假定你是李華，留學(xué)生朋友Peter借給你一本英文名著《飄》(Gone with the Wind)，可是你不小心損壞了。請你給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1．表示道歉；
2．解釋損壞原因；
3．提出補(bǔ)救辦法。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2．請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。
Dear Peter，
Yours，
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Peter，
I'm writing to express my sincere apology for the accidental damage to the English classic Gone with the Wind you kindly lent me.
Yesterday evening I was absorbed in the book when I carelessly knocked down the cup, the hot water pouring over the book. I was upset that the whole book was in bad shape. Knowing how precious the book is to you, I'm terribly sorry for any inconvenience caused.
I expect to make it up to you by replacing the book with a new copy. I've purchased one online, which will be sent to you in 3 days. I hope this unfortunate incident won't affect our friendship. Please accept my heartfelt apology.
Yours，
Li Hua
六、求助信——闡述困境，委婉請求
文體解讀
生活中難免遇到問題需要向他人求助。寫求助信時態(tài)度一定要誠懇，語言要委婉禮貌。如實反映自己的問題，真誠求助，這樣更有可能獲得別人的幫助。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：
典例導(dǎo)學(xué)
假定你是李華。你校計劃舉辦介紹中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會，并在英文網(wǎng)站展示。請你寫一封郵件給外國朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國友人。郵件內(nèi)容包括：
1．闡明寫信事由；
2．征求建議；
3．表示感謝。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Chris，
Yours，
Li Hua
寫作指導(dǎo)
本篇是一封中國學(xué)生寫給外國朋友尋求幫助的電子郵件，屬于“求助信”。
1．確定關(guān)系：寫信人和收信人之間是朋友關(guān)系，所以征求建議時，要保證語言得體。
2．確定時態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主。
3．確定人稱：以第一人稱和第二人稱為主。
4．確定要點(diǎn)：①你校計劃舉辦介紹中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會；②哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化能吸引外國友人(可列舉民樂、武術(shù)、剪紙、中國結(jié)等)；③對友人幫助的認(rèn)可和對其所提建議的期待。
佳作賞析
Dear Chris，
How is everything going To spread traditional Chinese culture, our school will hold a theme class meeting, which will be exhibited on the English website.I am writing to ask for your valuable advice on the aspects of traditional Chinese culture which are extremely appealing to foreign friends.
As far as I know, traditional Chinese culture, like paper-cutting, guzheng and so on, has its unique characteristics.For example, Chinese knots are a symbol of good luck and best wishes.Eventually，I am strongly eager to know which aspects of traditional Chinese culture arouse your curiosity most.
With your assistance, I will make full preparations for the meeting.Thanks again for your help.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
佳作點(diǎn)評
1．要點(diǎn)齊全。題目要求中所列的三個要點(diǎn)(闡明寫信事由、征求建議和表示感謝)都在文章中得以體現(xiàn)。
2．結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。第一段開門見山地提出寫作的背景和目的；第二段列舉中國傳統(tǒng)文化的若干方面并征求對方的建議；最后一段表達(dá)感謝和期待。
3．語言連貫。作者在文章中合理地運(yùn)用了as far as I know, for example, eventually 等詞或短語，讓文章過渡自然。
4．表達(dá)多樣。作者在文章中運(yùn)用了非謂語動詞、定語從句、介詞短語等。
素材積累
第一部分(首段)：請求幫助
1．I'm Li Hua, a student from your English writing class.I'm writing to ask you for help.
我是李華，是您英語寫作課的一名學(xué)生。我寫信是為了請求您幫忙。
2．I can't concentrate on my lessons these days, and I failed in the last exam, which worries me a lot.
這些日子我不能專心學(xué)習(xí)，上次考試我沒有及格，這使我很著急。
3．I have some difficulties in doing ...so I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
我在做……方面有困難，因此我別無選擇只能向您求助。
第二部分(主體段)：描述具體困難
1．I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.
我想請你給我介紹一些學(xué)習(xí)語法的好方法。
2．But unfortunately, I encounter some difficulties in preparing for the English competition.
但不幸的是，我在準(zhǔn)備英語競賽的時候遇到了一些困難。
3．I wonder how to deal with the problem.
我想知道如何解決這個問題。
4．Faced with/Facing so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for help.
面對如此多的困難，我不得不向您求助。
第三部分(結(jié)尾段)：希望得到幫助
1．I would appreciate it very much if you could offer me some timely help.
如果您能給我一些及時的幫助，我會非常感激。
2．I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
我相信您的寶貴而及時的建議會使我受益匪淺。
演練提能
(2024·山東聊城三模)
假定你是李華，你報名參加了你校即將舉辦的關(guān)于大自然的英文詩歌朗誦大賽(poetry recitation contest)。請你給外教 Mr Black 寫一封郵件，請他指導(dǎo)你選材和朗誦練習(xí)。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2．請按如下格式作答。
Dear Mr Black，
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Mr Black，
How are you doing？I've signed up for the English poetry recitation contest to be held by our school, and I'm writing to see whether you could provide me with some help.
The contest requires that each participant should recite a poem about nature, and I've found three poems.Could you be kind enough to help me choose the most suitable one Besides, I hope you could also give me some advice on how to recite it.
I would be very grateful if you could offer me some help.Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
七、演講稿——激情洋溢，暢所欲言
文體解讀
演講稿包括發(fā)言稿、致辭、競選稿等，此類文體一般包括簡短介紹、陳述主題、概括總結(jié)三部分。演講稿的語言通常要富有感染力，立場要明確，觀點(diǎn)要鮮明。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：
典例導(dǎo)學(xué)
你校將舉辦英語演講比賽。請你以Be smart online learners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽，內(nèi)容包括：
1．分析優(yōu)勢與不足；
2．提出學(xué)習(xí)建議。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2．請按如下格式作答。
Be smart online learners
Good morning, everyone，
It's a great honour for me to stand here and give a speech titled “Be smart online learners”．
寫作指導(dǎo)
發(fā)言稿也屬于演講稿的一種常見形式，它是參加會議、比賽等活動的人為了表達(dá)自己的意見、看法而事先準(zhǔn)備好的文稿。
1．本篇作文要求寫一篇發(fā)言稿，主題為 Be smart online learners。
2．學(xué)生在寫作時，時態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。
3．寫作時需注意合適的開場語和結(jié)束語。寫作內(nèi)容包括分析在線學(xué)習(xí)的優(yōu)勢與不足，即進(jìn)行對比。學(xué)生可結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷來寫，使文稿內(nèi)容更加貼近生活。
佳作賞析
Be smart online learners
Good morning, everyone，
It's a great honour for me to stand here and give a speech titled“Be smart online learners”．
The advantages of online learning are obvious.It allows us to learn anytime and anywhere.Besides, we can absorb all kinds of resources to learn more efficiently.However, its disadvantages cannot be ignored.Staring at the screen for long hours is harmful to our eyes. Worse still, we don't have many opportunities to interact with our teachers and classmates.
Then what should we do to be smart online learners First, we should be brave to discuss our problems with others.Second, it is wise to take a short break after learning for 30 minutes.
In conclusion, only by being smart online learners can we truly enjoy the benefits of modern technology.
佳作點(diǎn)評
1．文章開篇引入話題，然后闡述演講的具體內(nèi)容，最后總結(jié)。
2．范文中使用了大量亮點(diǎn)句式：動詞-ing短語作主語 Staring at the screen...; it 作形式主語 it is wise to take...; 倒裝結(jié)構(gòu) only by being smart online learners can we...; 還使用了一些過渡詞語： besides, however, worse still, first, second, in conclusion等。
素材積累
第一部分(首段)：引入話題
1．Today I am honoured to have the opportunity to make this speech.
今天我很榮幸能有機(jī)會做這個演講。
2．Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, distinguished guests, and honorable judges.Thank you all for being here today, as we gather to discuss an important issue that affects us all.
女士們，先生們，尊敬的來賓們，尊敬的評委們，大家下午好！ 感謝大家今天來到這里，我們聚在一起討論一個影響我們所有人的重要問題。
3．It is my great honour to share with you my opinions on how to memorize English words.
我很榮幸能與大家分享我對如何背英語單詞的看法。
第二部分(主體段)：具體內(nèi)容
1．The topic of my speech is healthy living habits.
我演講的主題是健康的生活習(xí)慣。
2．I'll divide this topic into five main aspects.
我將從五個主要方面談?wù)撨@個主題。
3．As is known to us all, failure is the mother of success.
我們都知道失敗是成功之母。
4．As students, we'd better walk or take public means of transportation.
作為學(xué)生，我們最好步行或乘坐公共交通工具。
第三部分(結(jié)尾段)：總結(jié)、期待
1．Thanks for your listening( to my speech)．
感謝大家傾聽(我的演講)。
2．Thank you for your time and attention today.As I conclude my remarks, I challenge each and every one of you to take action and make a difference in the world around you.
謝謝您今天的時間和關(guān)注。在我結(jié)束講話時，我要求你們每一個人都采取行動，改變你周圍的世界。
3．I wish you the best of luck in everything you do!
祝你們一切順利！
演練提能
(2024·黑龍江哈爾濱市六校上學(xué)期六校聯(lián)考)
你校下月將舉辦以“A Respectable Teacher”為主題的英語演講比賽。請你寫一篇演講稿參賽，內(nèi)容包括：
1．簡要介紹該老師；
2．你的體會與感想。
注意：
1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2．請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。
Good morning, everyone，
【參考范文】
Good morning, everyone，
Many teachers have taught me in my life but I think Miss Green is the most respectable one.
Miss Green teaches us English, who I think is smart and pretty. You can always see a smile on her face. She goes to school early and goes back home late. She is helpful and patient. She is always ready to help students in need.
She teaches English well. She tries her best to make her lessons interesting. With her help we have made great progress in English. She is not only a good teacher but also our close friend, playing with us after class and sharing little secrets with us.
Miss Green loves us and is loved by us. We will respect her forever.
八、倡議書——發(fā)現(xiàn)問題，呼吁行動
文體解讀
倡議書屬于應(yīng)用文的一種，是為發(fā)起一項呼吁或活動而寫的具有號召性的短文。倡議書一般由標(biāo)題、稱呼、正文、結(jié)尾、落款五部分組成。寫作時，要做到主題突出，內(nèi)容清楚。同時，注意倡議書的語言要具有號召性和感染力。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：
典例導(dǎo)學(xué)
你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則主題為 Live A Low-carbon Life的倡議書，內(nèi)容包括：
1．低碳生活的意義；
2．我們具體該怎么做；
3．呼吁同學(xué)們行動起來。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
寫作指導(dǎo)
1．本篇作文為倡議書，要注意題目要求為三部分，建議分三段寫作。
2．短文的主體時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第一人稱為主。
3．作為倡議書，必須先指出問題，再分析現(xiàn)狀并提出措施，最后呼吁行動。
佳作賞析
Live A Low-carbon Life
As is known to all, global warming is becoming increasingly serious and it has done great harm to our environment.To improve the situation, we must live a low-carbon life to reduce greenhouse gas emissions.
Actually, there are many things for us to do.First of all, we must save energy in our daily lives, such as water, electricity, and gas.Secondly, we should avoid using single-use products, especially disposable plastic products.Thirdly, form a habit of reusing and recycling whatever you can.
My dear students, we have only one planet.It's everyone's duty to protect it.Let's work together to make our world a better place to live.
The Students' Union
佳作點(diǎn)評
1．本文分三段寫作，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，思路清晰。第一段引出主題——倡導(dǎo)低碳生活；第二段說明我們需要具體采取的措施；第三段發(fā)出倡議，呼吁行動。
2．本文運(yùn)用的高級詞塊有become increasingly serious, do great harm to, live a low-carbon life, reduce greenhouse gas emissions, avoid using single-use products等。
3．本文運(yùn)用的高級句式有As is known to all，動詞不定式短語作狀語 To improve the situation，賓語從句whatever you can以及It's everyone's duty to...等。
素材積累
第一部分(首段)：倡議背景
1．A regulation has been issued recently that all citizens shall wear a helmet while riding an electric bicycle.
最近頒布了一項規(guī)定，所有公民騎電動自行車時都必須戴頭盔。
2．It is well known that the drinking water in many places is getting worse and worse.
眾所周知，許多地方的飲用水正變得越來越糟糕。
3．The Internet can be a double-edged sword.If you use it correctly, it can do you a world of good.However, if you use it unwisely, it may destroy your life.
互聯(lián)網(wǎng)是一把雙刃劍。如果你正確地使用它，它會給你帶來很多好處；然而，如果你不明智地使用它，它可能會毀了你的生活。
第二部分(主體段)：提出建議
1．As for the possible reasons, the lack of safety awareness is a major one.
至于可能的原因，缺乏安全意識是一個主要原因。
2．When you lend a helping hand to others, you will make their days better and warm their hearts; when you do something for the environment, you yourself will benefit from it.
當(dāng)你向別人伸出援助之手時，你會使他們的日子更美好并溫暖他們的內(nèi)心；當(dāng)你為環(huán)境做一些事情時，你自己也會從中受益。
3．It is everyone's responsibility to protect the environment.If we can change our way of life, we can make a big difference to the Earth.
保護(hù)環(huán)境是每個人的責(zé)任。如果我們能改變我們的生活方式，我們就能使地球大為改觀。
4．Dear students, history has repeatedly told us that if we don't respect nature, nature will punish us in return.Let's take action to protect wild animals!
親愛的同學(xué)們，歷史反復(fù)告訴我們，如果我們不尊重自然，自然會懲罰我們作為回報。讓我們行動起來保護(hù)野生動物吧！
第三部分(結(jié)尾段)：發(fā)出號召
1．Now we are appealing to you to go to school by bike or on foot.
現(xiàn)在我們呼吁大家騎車或步行去上學(xué)。
2．Let's make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment.
讓我們共同努力，創(chuàng)造一個綠色和諧的環(huán)境。
3．So let's take action right now! I'm sure our efforts will eventually pay off!
所以現(xiàn)在就讓我們采取行動吧！ 我相信我們的努力最終會得到回報！
演練提能
如今“低頭族(phubber)”隨處可見，這種現(xiàn)象已嚴(yán)重影響到人們的生活甚至安全。你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則倡議書，反對這種現(xiàn)象，標(biāo)題為 Say No to Phubbing，內(nèi)容包括：
1．“低頭族”現(xiàn)象的普遍存在；
2．這種現(xiàn)象的危害；
3．呼吁同學(xué)們抬起頭來。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
【參考范文】
Say No to Phubbing
With the wide use of the mobile phone, phubbers can be seen everywhere—at home, in the office, on the bus, and on the street.
Those so-called phubbers usually lower their heads looking at their smartphones and ignore whatever happens around them.Needless to say, it's bad manners to neglect your friends or family members around you.What's worse, phubbing can be dangerous.For example, if you stare at your phone while crossing the street, chances are that accidents may happen.
My fellow students, it's time to raise your head and pay attention to people around you.Look at them, talk to them, and care about them.After all, you should live in real life instead of virtual life.
The Students' Union
九、投稿——抓住時機(jī)，直抒胸臆
文體解讀
征文投稿類文章屬于活動介紹類中敘事的一種，一般是就某個特定主題進(jìn)行論述和描寫，以記敘文和議論文居多。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：
典例導(dǎo)學(xué)
你校英文報Youth正在慶祝創(chuàng)刊十周年。請你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：
1．讀報的經(jīng)歷；2.喜愛的欄目；3.期望和祝福。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 80 左右；
2．請按如下格式作答。
Youth and Me
寫作指導(dǎo)
1．本篇作文要求學(xué)生寫一篇征文。文章應(yīng)包含題目所列要點(diǎn)，并且應(yīng)交代寫作背景——學(xué)校英文報Youth創(chuàng)刊十周年。
2．文章可分為三段，分別講述讀報經(jīng)歷、喜愛的欄目及理由，最后一段談期望與祝福。
3．寫作時要根據(jù)主要內(nèi)容的順序來寫，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并且選用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、語言流暢。
佳作賞析
Youth and Me
For the 10th Anniversary of Youth, as a fan of Youth, I want to share my reading experience.Youth has accompanied me throughout my high school years.It covers a wide variety of topics to attract senior students, opening a new window to the outside world for us.
As a regular reader of Youth, I am fascinated by columns on teenagers where I get touched by inspiring stories and gain happiness from exciting news.
I sincerely hope that Youth will make new progress and that more readers will share their own stories.
佳作點(diǎn)評
1．本篇作文完整地表達(dá)了寫作要點(diǎn)。文章的內(nèi)容及行文風(fēng)格符合征文的要求，表達(dá)流暢，情感真摯。
2．作者不僅運(yùn)用了 accompany, cover, attract, be fascinated by, gain ...from, sincerely, make progress等高級詞匯，還使用了動詞不定式、動詞-ing短語和介詞短語作狀語。
3．本文還運(yùn)用了It covers a wide variety of topics to attract senior students, opening a new window to the outside world for us.和As a regular reader of Youth，I am fascinated by columns on teenagers where I get touched by inspiring stories and gain happiness from exciting news.等較為復(fù)雜的句式。這些高級詞匯和復(fù)雜句式的使用提升了文章的檔次。
素材積累
第一部分(首段)：陳述一個問題或一種現(xiàn)象
1．There is no doubt that food waste has been a very serious social problem.
不可否認(rèn)，食物浪費(fèi)已經(jīng)是一個非常嚴(yán)重的社會問題。
2．It is common knowledge that plastic pollution has been doing great harm to our environment.
眾所周知，塑料污染正在嚴(yán)重破壞我們的環(huán)境。
3．According to a report, millions of tons of garbage is produced every day worldwide.If we let the situation go on, our cities will be surrounded by the garbage in the near future.
據(jù)報道，全球每天要產(chǎn)生數(shù)百萬噸垃圾。如果我們讓這種形勢發(fā)展下去，在不久的將來，我們的城市將被垃圾包圍。
第二部分(主體段)：闡述具體情況及解決方案
1．Every day thousands of tons of plastic waste is dumped into nature without being reused or recycled.
每天數(shù)千噸的塑料垃圾未經(jīng)重新利用和循環(huán)使用就倒進(jìn)了大自然。
2．By sorting the garbage, not only can we turn“waste” into wealth, but we can also save energy and reduce environmental pollution.
通過垃圾分類，我們不僅能夠變廢為寶，而且可以節(jié)約能源和減少環(huán)境污染。
3．In the restaurants, people usually order more than they can eat; at home, people dump the leftovers every day.
在飯館里，人們通常要多點(diǎn)菜；在家里，人們每天倒掉剩飯。
第三段：呼吁人們行動起來
1．It's high time we took measures to stop food waste.
我們現(xiàn)在必須采取措施反對食物浪費(fèi)。
2．So, please sort your garbage from today on.It's everyone's duty to protect the environment.
因此，從今天開始實施垃圾分類。保護(hù)環(huán)境，人人有責(zé)。
3．We have only one planet after all.Let's take action to protect it, for you, for me, and for our future generations!
畢竟我們只有一個地球。讓我們行動起來保護(hù)它，為了你，為了我，也為了我們的后代！
演練提能
(2025·山西省晉城市第一次模擬)
你校將舉辦英語征文比賽。請你以“The impact of technology on our lives”為題寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：
1．分析利弊；
2．你的看法。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2．請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。
The impact of technology on our lives
【參考范文】
The impact of technology on our lives
The impact of technology on our lives is profound, with both benefits and drawbacks. Technology has greatly improved our efficiency, allowed for global communication, and enhanced our entertainment options. It has revolutionized the way we communicate, learn, work, and entertain ourselves. However, it has also led to issues such as eye strain, addiction, and privacy concerns. Balanced use is crucial to maximize its benefits as well as minimize its negative impacts. We must prioritize real-world interactions, protect our privacy, and ensure that technology does not overshadow our daily lives.
十、報道——所見所聞，客觀陳述
文體解讀
報道屬于活動介紹類文章的一種。其特點(diǎn)是以事實為依據(jù)，所以首先要交代事件或活動的時間、地點(diǎn)、目的和參與者，然后敘述活動的過程，最后對活動進(jìn)行評價。報道的應(yīng)用較為廣泛，實用性強(qiáng)。寫作過程中要保持事件的真實性，語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡練。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：
典例導(dǎo)學(xué)
假定你是李華，上周日你校舉辦了5公里越野賽跑活動。請你為校英文報寫一篇報道，內(nèi)容包括：
1．參加人員；
2．跑步路線：從校門口到南山腳下；
3．活動反響。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2．請按如下格式作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
寫作指導(dǎo)
1．本篇作文要求寫一篇報道。寫作時學(xué)生應(yīng)該先開門見山地概述事件的主要內(nèi)容，文章中應(yīng)包含新聞報道的五要素(5W：何時 when，何地 where，何人 who，何因 why，何事 what)。
2．在報道中應(yīng)多從第三視角進(jìn)行客觀描述；由于活動已經(jīng)結(jié)束，因此應(yīng)用一般過去時。
3．學(xué)生要緊扣主題，展開想象，從參加人員、跑步路線、活動反響等方面進(jìn)行寫作，明確體現(xiàn)每一個要點(diǎn)。
佳作賞析
A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday, over 200 students participated in the 5km cross-country running race held by our school to build up their body.
The competitors, excited and energetic, set off at the school gate at 7：00 a．m. and ran all the way to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.Teachers and parents were cheering for them, some of whom even ran together to the finish line.Despite the challenging cross-country conditions, all competitors hugely enjoyed running and tried their best to finish.
It was an unforgettable experience.They have realised that building up their body is of great importance, and they have also learned more about“persistence leads to success”．
佳作點(diǎn)評
1．本篇作文完整地表達(dá)了寫作要點(diǎn)。文章的內(nèi)容及行文風(fēng)格符合新聞報道的文體特征，表達(dá)流暢，邏輯嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。
2．作者不僅運(yùn)用了participate in, build up one's body, try one's best, energetic, challenging, unforgettable等高級表達(dá)，還使用了過去分詞短語作后置定語 held by our school，形容詞短語作定語 excited and energetic，非限制性定語從句 some of whom even ran together to the finish line, that 引導(dǎo)的賓語從句等較為復(fù)雜的句型，這些彰顯了作者扎實的英語語言功底。
3．文章結(jié)尾引用了諺語persistence leads to success。
素材積累
第一部分(首段)：簡要概括事件
1．In order to enrich our campus lives, we held...last week.
為了豐富我們的校園生活，我們上周舉辦了……
2．Nowadays more and more people begin to realize/notice the importance of ...
現(xiàn)在越來越多的人開始意識到/注意到……的重要性。
第二部分(主體段)：描述活動過程
1．The opening ceremony started at 9：00 a．m., and the schoolmaster delivered a speech about...
開幕式上午9點(diǎn)開始，校長發(fā)表了關(guān)于……的演講。
2．The exhibition is scheduled for this weekend, from 8：30 a．m. to 5：30 p．m. It covers a wide range of contents.
展覽會安排在本周末，從上午8：30 到下午5：30。展覽內(nèi)容包羅萬象。
3．All the students and staff in Senior 3 will gather on the playground at 6：30 a．m., attending a brief opening ceremony.
所有高三的學(xué)生和職工將于上午6：30在操場上集合，參加一個簡短的開幕式。
4．As scheduled, we are expected to assemble/gather at 8：00 a．m. in the main hall before we head for the destination by bus.
按計劃，我們早上8點(diǎn)在大廳集合，然后坐公共汽車到目的地。
第三部分(結(jié)尾段)：對活動的評價及感受
1．By participating in the activity, we not only mastered some basic and practical skills, but also raised our awareness of safety.
通過參加這次活動，我們不僅掌握了一些基本的實用技能，而且增強(qiáng)了我們的安全意識。
2．It's such a meaningful activity that students are all looking forward to the next...
這是一次很有意義的活動，學(xué)生們都很期待下一次的……
演練提能
(2024·江蘇省南通市高三第一次調(diào)測)
假定你是李華，2025年元旦你校舉行了登高迎新年活動。請你為校英文報寫一篇報道，內(nèi)容包括：
1．活動過程；
2．活動感想。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2．請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。
A climbing event to celebrate the New Year
【參考范文】
A climbing event to celebrate the New Year
To welcome the new year, our school hosted a climbing activity on New Year's Day.
The climb began at 10 a．m. and lasted for an hour and a half. We took part in a launching ceremony at the Happy Valley gate to warm up before the climb began. We wrote our New Year's wishes on red ribbons and tied them to trees along the way.Reaching the top, we got a bird's-eye view of the entire resort.
As“climbing high”symbolizes growth and new accomplishments in Chinese culture, the event helped demonstrate the spirit of “striving upward” and express our wishes for a happy and prosperous 2025.
十一、通知——提前告知，周全準(zhǔn)備
文體解讀
通知一般用于公布即將發(fā)生的事情，如宣布舉行比賽，舉辦講座、畫展、晚會，召開研討會等。通知分為書面通知和口頭通知。寫通知的關(guān)鍵是明確地告知讀者活動的必要信息，如時間、地點(diǎn)、活動內(nèi)容、報名方式及其他細(xì)節(jié)等。具體寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：
典例導(dǎo)學(xué)
你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則通知，請大家觀看一部英文短片Growing Together，內(nèi)容包括：
1．短片內(nèi)容：學(xué)校的發(fā)展；
2．放映時間、地點(diǎn)；
3．歡迎對短片提出意見。
注意：
1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
2．請按如下格式作答。
NOTICE
The Students' Union
寫作指導(dǎo)
1．通知的內(nèi)容要齊全，一定要明確主題、緣由、時間、地點(diǎn)等。
2．通知通常是告知未來要做的事情，因此時態(tài)一般用將來時。
3．通知要語言簡明、條理清晰。
佳作賞析
NOTICE
Attention, please!
An English short film, called Growing Together, will be shown in the school hall at 7：30 p．m. this Friday.Everyone is welcome to watch the film.It tells about the development of our school.
It is believed that the film is instructive and full of emotion.It tells the story of a school growing up, from small to large, from weak to strong.After the film, each class is supposed to have a discussion and all the students are welcome to make comments and express their views about the film.
Looking forward to your participation.We will witness the glory of our school, and we are growing together.
The Students' Union
佳作點(diǎn)評
1．本文開篇點(diǎn)明主題An English short film, called Growing Together, will be shown...
2．告知信息明確清楚，不僅使用了be welcome to, instructive, tell the story of, make comments, witness the glory of等高級詞匯及詞塊，還使用高分句型It is believed that...以及be supposed to...等。
素材積累
第一部分(首段)：提醒和引入話題
1．May I have your attention, please I have an announcement to make.
請大家注意，我要宣布一則通知。
2．Attention, please! I have something important to tell you.
請注意，我有重要的事要宣布。
3．An English essay contest titled Me and My Motherland will be held in our school in an effort to develop our spirit of patriotism.
為了培養(yǎng)我們的愛國主義精神，我們學(xué)校將舉行一場題為“我和我的祖國”的英語作文比賽。
第二部分(主體段)：通知具體事項部分
1．As scheduled, the lecture is supposed to be given on Sunday afternoon, from 3 p．m. to 5 p．m., through which you can learn about more background knowledge of Chinese customs.
按照計劃，講座將于周日下午3點(diǎn)至5點(diǎn)進(jìn)行，您可以通過它了解更多中國習(xí)俗的背景知識。
2．Those who are interested in the contest are welcome.
歡迎所有對競賽感興趣的人參加。
3．Those who want to take part in/join in the activity please sign up at the Students' Union.
想?yún)⒓踊顒拥娜苏堅趯W(xué)生會報名。
4．There are varieties of out-of-class activities in our school, which we can take part in after class.
在我們學(xué)校有各種各樣我們課后可以參加的課外活動。
第三部分(結(jié)尾段)：常用語
1．Please attend it on time and don't be late.
請按時到場，不要遲到。
2．Look forward to your participation.
期待你的參與。
3．I believe you can benefit a lot from it.
我相信你能受益很多。
演練提能
(2024·九省聯(lián)考)
你校英文報計劃舉辦主題為“攜手行動，節(jié)約糧食”的作文比賽。請你寫一則活動通知，內(nèi)容包括：
(1)介紹活動目的；
(2)說明參賽要求。
注意：
(1)寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；
(2)請按如下格式作答。
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
【參考范文】
Welcome to Join the English Writing Competition
To raise students' awareness of saving food, our school English newspaper is scheduled to hold a writing competition, whose theme is “Hand in Hand, Save the Food”．
Anyone in our school interested in the competition is welcome to participate.Entries should consist of an original piece of writing with 400 words or fewer.They should be related to the theme and show how we can contribute to saving food.Please mail your entry to our email address englishpaper@ by January 31 and the result will be published on May 1, 2024.
Looking forward to your active participation and creative writings.

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