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2025中考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)之看圖作文專項(xiàng)復(fù)習(xí)講義
寫(xiě)作思路
題型 考查頻次 命題解析
書(shū)面表達(dá)之看圖作文 10年10考 看圖作文是從直觀入手，通過(guò)觀察、分析、理解，運(yùn)用聯(lián)想，將圖畫(huà)語(yǔ)言轉(zhuǎn)換成書(shū)面文字的寫(xiě)作過(guò)程。答題的思路和方法如下：首先，觀察圖畫(huà)，弄清故事梗概。仔細(xì)觀察每幅圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容，抓住圖中的主要情節(jié)，把握關(guān)鍵的信息與聯(lián)系，諸如人物、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、動(dòng)作等。其次，明確信息，編擬提綱。經(jīng)過(guò)認(rèn)真的觀察和分析，我們掌握了每幅圖的主要信息。為了在表達(dá)中不漏要點(diǎn)，可為每幅圖配上一個(gè)提綱性的句子，即用一句話表達(dá)這幅畫(huà)的大意，這幾句話實(shí)際上就是短文的寫(xiě)作提綱。有了提綱，我們?cè)趯?xiě)作過(guò)程中就能做到重點(diǎn)突出，有條理，不會(huì)離題。再次，依據(jù)圖示、提綱，連句擴(kuò)寫(xiě)成篇。連句成文時(shí)，要按照一定的順序和圖畫(huà)間的關(guān)系，中間加上一些符合邏輯關(guān)系的過(guò)渡詞、句，從而使所寫(xiě)短文層次分明，內(nèi)容連貫，渾然一體。同時(shí)注意盡可能運(yùn)用簡(jiǎn)單易懂、自己熟悉的有把握的句型結(jié)構(gòu)。最后，結(jié)合要求與圖示，復(fù)查所寫(xiě)短文。
思維導(dǎo)圖
方法探究
解題探究
1.細(xì)致審圖，提煉要點(diǎn)
看圖作文，最為關(guān)鍵的一環(huán)，就是要看懂圖片內(nèi)容，準(zhǔn)確理解圖片表達(dá)的含義，找出題意所在。這就要求同學(xué)們要細(xì)致地觀察每一幅圖片，并根據(jù)每幅圖之間的關(guān)系，提煉圖片所要傳達(dá)的有效信息，進(jìn)而用一、兩個(gè)單詞或短語(yǔ)羅列出每幅圖片的要點(diǎn)，明確寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容和中心。在審圖過(guò)程中，同學(xué)們不可孤立地看圖，要留意圖片細(xì)節(jié)，結(jié)合時(shí)間背景、文字提示等信息，去分析、理解、揣摩，從而把握?qǐng)D意。
2.抓住要點(diǎn)，連詞成文
在提煉要點(diǎn)后，接下來(lái)就是按照題意要求去連詞成文。在連詞成文的過(guò)程中，同學(xué)們要注意如下幾點(diǎn)：一是根據(jù)圖片呈現(xiàn)的內(nèi)容，確定體裁格式、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)以及語(yǔ)態(tài)等，并分清主次，突出重點(diǎn)，避免寫(xiě)一些與主題無(wú)關(guān)的細(xì)枝末節(jié)；二是在將所列的要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展成英語(yǔ)句子時(shí)，要注意使用自己熟悉的、有把握的詞匯、短語(yǔ)以及句式，避免出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤等；三是要注意緊扣要點(diǎn)，合理發(fā)揮想象，適當(dāng)?shù)貙?duì)畫(huà)面情節(jié)進(jìn)行擴(kuò)充，從而使圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容更加豐富，過(guò)程更加生動(dòng)，人物更加鮮明；四是要注意圖片間場(chǎng)景、人物和時(shí)間的轉(zhuǎn)換與銜接，適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾右恍┺D(zhuǎn)折、因果、遞進(jìn)等過(guò)渡性詞匯，只有這樣才能使過(guò)渡更加自然，句子更加連貫，行文更加流暢；五是在文章結(jié)尾時(shí)，可以恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍┍硎厩楦械木涫剑源嗽黾游恼碌谋憩F(xiàn)力和感染力。
3.檢查修正，提高質(zhì)量
檢查修正，這是做英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)題最易被忽視的環(huán)節(jié)。在寫(xiě)看圖作文時(shí)，同學(xué)們?cè)谶B詞成文后，還要注意對(duì)文章進(jìn)行檢查，先通讀一遍，再細(xì)心地去檢查錯(cuò)漏，并及時(shí)修正，從而提高寫(xiě)作質(zhì)量。檢查時(shí)，要注意如下幾點(diǎn)：一是語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性。即用詞是否得當(dāng)，時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)是否錯(cuò)用，人稱是否一致和主謂是否一致；單詞拼寫(xiě)、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是否有誤等；二是內(nèi)容的完整性。即表達(dá)的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)是否全部包括在內(nèi)，有沒(méi)有出現(xiàn)遺漏，有沒(méi)有離題發(fā)揮等；三是邏輯的嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)性。即脈絡(luò)是否清晰，敘述是否連貫，過(guò)渡是否自然，邏輯是否合理等。
典型練習(xí)
1．（2024·河南洛陽(yáng)·二模）假如你是李華，是校報(bào)的一名記者。以下是上周你對(duì)全校學(xué)生最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)的調(diào)查結(jié)果。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇短文給校英文報(bào)投稿。
寫(xiě)作要求：
1)簡(jiǎn)述調(diào)查結(jié)果：
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2．（2024·山東菏澤·三模）如今邊走路邊玩手機(jī)的“低頭族”隨處可見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列圖片的先后順序，為校刊“英語(yǔ)園地”寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勈褂檬謾C(jī)的利弊及你的建議。
要求：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2.必須包括上述圖片信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
4.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生本人的姓名、校名等。
參考詞匯：看新聞 read news；交通事故 traffic accidents；影響學(xué)習(xí) affect study；對(duì)眼睛/脖子有害 be bad for neck/eyes
Nowadays, mobile phones are very popular. They are playing an important role in our life.
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3．（2024·四川成都·三模）每年的4月22號(hào)是世界地球日（Earth Day）。請(qǐng)以此為主題，根據(jù)下圖寫(xiě)一篇短文向?qū)W校英語(yǔ)專刊投稿。題目自擬。
要求：1.請(qǐng)補(bǔ)充圖示空格所缺信息；
2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3.詞數(shù) 100 左右。
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4．（2024·黑龍江·三模）根據(jù)所給圖片，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
提示詞：stadium體育場(chǎng)
要求：
(1) 詞數(shù)在80～100之間。
(2) 字跡工整，語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
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5．（2024·江蘇南京·二模）你在學(xué)校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到 “Life in 2045” 的征稿啟事。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容，選擇至少2個(gè)方面來(lái)寫(xiě)，暢想未來(lái)生活，并用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。
注意：
1. 內(nèi)容涵蓋要點(diǎn)，全文連貫通順。
2. 不少于80詞 (已給出的文章開(kāi)頭，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
3. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Life in 2045
Life in 2045 will be quite different.
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6．（2024·黑龍江雞西·二模）習(xí)總書(shū)記在二十大報(bào)告中指出“青年強(qiáng)，則國(guó)家強(qiáng)”。作為中學(xué)生的我們，更要努力發(fā)展自身，做拼搏上進(jìn)的中國(guó)少年！請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下圖片，聯(lián)系自身實(shí)際，從德智體美勞等方面談?wù)勛约簩⑷绾闻ψ龊细竦闹袊?guó)少年。
要求：1．話題作文和圖示作文任選其一。
2．詞數(shù)：80~100之間，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3．字跡工整，語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
A nation will prosper only when its young people thrive, said President Xi Jinping. So how to be a better teenager
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7．（2024·浙江杭州·二模）文明社會(huì)，從我做起，請(qǐng)就下圖的不文明行為和所產(chǎn)生的后果用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一短文，向校刊English Garden投稿，倡導(dǎo)做文明人。
注意：
(1) 短文必須包括所給圖片的信息，合理想象并補(bǔ)全第3幅圖片的內(nèi)容。 (以第三人稱描述圖片故事)
(2) 必須談?wù)勀銓?duì)此事的看法，并說(shuō)明原因。
(3) 文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息。
(4) 字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右。短文首句已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：果皮 skin；踩在……上摔倒 slip on sth (slipped, slipped)；救護(hù)車 ambulance；一些不文明行為 some uncivilized behaviour
To Be a Civilized Person
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin.
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8．（2024·江蘇泰州·二模）寓言故事給我們帶來(lái)很多啟迪，其中《龜兔賽跑》的故事耐人尋味。請(qǐng)以“The rabbit and the tortoise”為題，根據(jù)下面的圖片和要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
要點(diǎn)提示：
1. Describe the story of “The rabbit and the tortoise”.
2. Explain the influences that the story has on you.
寫(xiě)作要求：
1. 內(nèi)容必須包括所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)拓展；
2. 詞數(shù)100左右。要求表達(dá)清晰，過(guò)渡合理，銜接自然；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等信息。
The rabbit and the tortoise
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9．（2024·河北邯鄲·二模）李華是一名中學(xué)生，他在學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了困難，在老師的幫助下，最終取得了進(jìn)步。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面四幅圖片及文字提示寫(xiě)一篇短文。
1. 2. 3. 4.
fail the exam cheer him up help him with his study get a good score
注意：（1）短文須包括每幅圖片的主要信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，提示詞語(yǔ)供參考；
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名；
（3）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。
Li Hua is a middle school student. He had difficulty in learning math and he
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【答案】One possible version:
Li Hua is a middle school student. He had difficulty in learning math and he failed the math exam. He cried sadly. Just then, his teacher came and tried to cheer him up. He told Li Hua that the only way to succeed is through hard work. Hearing the words, Li Hua decided to try his best to make progress. His teacher always helped him patiently when he met any difficult math problems.
Where there is a will, there is a way. With his hard work and the teacher’s help, he finally got a good score in the next exam. His teacher clapped for his great progress. He thanked his teacher and determined to keep working hard to achieve more success.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇看圖作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”為主；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，寫(xiě)作意圖開(kāi)頭已給出，寫(xiě)作時(shí)可直接描寫(xiě)在學(xué)習(xí)上遇到的困難。
第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，主要圍繞“考試不及格”、“讓他振作起來(lái)、幫助他學(xué)習(xí)”以及“取得好成績(jī)”的過(guò)程展開(kāi)，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，豐富細(xì)節(jié)。
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，表達(dá)對(duì)老師的感激之情。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①have difficulty in doing sth.在做某事上有困難
②fail未能，失敗
③try to do sth.嘗試做某事
④cheer sb. up使某人開(kāi)心起來(lái)
⑤decide to do sth.決定做某事
⑥make one’s best to do sth.盡某人最大的努力做某事
⑦make progress取得進(jìn)步
⑧clap for sb.為某人鼓掌
⑨determine to do sth.決定做某事
⑩keep doing sth.繼續(xù)做某事
[高分句型]
①He told Li Hua that the only way to succeed is through hard work. (that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)
②His teacher always helped him patiently when he met any difficult math problems. (when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)
10．（2024·黑龍江雙鴨山·二模）仔細(xì)觀察圖片，展開(kāi)合理想象，然后寫(xiě)一篇短文。
要求：
（1）詞數(shù)在80～100之間。
（2）字跡工整，語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
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典型練習(xí)
1．（2024·河南洛陽(yáng)·二模）假如你是李華，是校報(bào)的一名記者。以下是上周你對(duì)全校學(xué)生最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)的調(diào)查結(jié)果。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇短文給校英文報(bào)投稿。
寫(xiě)作要求：
1)簡(jiǎn)述調(diào)查結(jié)果：
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【答案】One possible version:
Last week I did a survey on students’ favorite sports. The result shows that basketball is the most popular among students. Besides, 28% of students like running best. There are 21% of students whose favorite sport is table tennis and only 17% of students enjoy playing football.
As we know, sports play an important role in keeping us healthy. What’s more, they can bring us a lot of fun in daily life. Last but not least, playing sports with classmates can help us develop team spirit.
Therefore, I call on every student to do sports regularly. Only in this way can we keep fit and enjoy a happy life.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇看圖作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：根據(jù)所給圖片完成寫(xiě)作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，簡(jiǎn)述調(diào)查結(jié)果；
第二步，介紹運(yùn)動(dòng)的好處；
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，號(hào)召學(xué)生們做運(yùn)動(dòng)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①do a survey on…對(duì)……進(jìn)行調(diào)查
②play an important role發(fā)揮重要作用
③daily life日常生活
④last but not least最后但同樣重要的是
⑤team spirit團(tuán)隊(duì)精神
⑥keep fit保持健康
[高分句型]
Only in this way can we keep fit and enjoy a happy life.(倒裝句)
2．（2024·山東菏澤·三模）如今邊走路邊玩手機(jī)的“低頭族”隨處可見(jiàn)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列圖片的先后順序，為校刊“英語(yǔ)園地”寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)勈褂檬謾C(jī)的利弊及你的建議。
要求：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2.必須包括上述圖片信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
4.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生本人的姓名、校名等。
參考詞匯：看新聞 read news；交通事故 traffic accidents；影響學(xué)習(xí) affect study；對(duì)眼睛/脖子有害 be bad for neck/eyes
Nowadays, mobile phones are very popular. They are playing an important role in our life.
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【答案】例文
Nowadays, mobile phones are very popular. They are playing an important role in our life. We can use mobile phones to do many things such like reading news, listening music, watching video. But if we don’t use it in a proper way, we will get truly hurt. Nowadays, many people play mobile phones while walking so that they don’t pay attention to traffic condition. It will cause heavy traffic accidents. And if you spend a lot of time playing your mobile phones, your study will get affected. Besides, it’s bad for your necks and eyes by playing mobile phones for a long time. I think mobile phone will be a good tool as long as we make good use of it.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇看圖作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，考生應(yīng)該注意所給提示的圖片，不要遺漏重要信息，注意大小寫(xiě) 和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
①表明寫(xiě)作意圖。手機(jī)可以拿來(lái)做很多事并引出下文；
②具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。通過(guò)介紹過(guò)度使用手機(jī)的壞處來(lái)表達(dá)作者觀點(diǎn)；
③書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。只要我們好好利用手機(jī)，它會(huì)是一個(gè)很好的工具。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①pay attention to 集中注意力于某物
②make good use of 好好利用
[高分句型]
And if you spend a lot of time playing your mobile phones, your study will get affected. (條件狀語(yǔ)從句)
3．（2024·四川成都·三模）每年的4月22號(hào)是世界地球日（Earth Day）。請(qǐng)以此為主題，根據(jù)下圖寫(xiě)一篇短文向?qū)W校英語(yǔ)專刊投稿。題目自擬。
要求：1.請(qǐng)補(bǔ)充圖示空格所缺信息；
2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3.詞數(shù) 100 左右。
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【答案】例文
Save Planet
As we all know, April 22nd is World Earth Day every year. Both people and the government should take action to protect the earth.
Firstly, we should turn off the lights when we leave the room. Secondly, we should plant more trees in spring. Because many trees are cut down every year. Many wild animals have lost their homes because of this. Thirdly, the government should enact some laws to prevent people from doing things that are bad for the environment. Last but not least, the government should organize the planting of trees to ensure the forest cover.
As long as each of us starts taking action, I believe our earth will be more and more beautiful.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇看圖作文；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③ 提示：根據(jù)圖片提示完成寫(xiě)作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，介紹主題，要保護(hù)地球；
第二步，介紹保護(hù)地球的具體措施；
第三步，最后總結(jié)文章，呼吁人們行動(dòng)起來(lái)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① turn off關(guān)掉
② in spring在春天
③ because of因?yàn)?br/>[高分句型]
① Firstly, we should turn off the lights when we leave the room.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）
② Thirdly, the government should enact some laws to prevent people from doing things that are bad for the environment.（that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）
③ As long as each of us starts taking action, I believe our earth will be more and more beautiful.（as long as引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）
4．（2024·黑龍江·三模）根據(jù)所給圖片，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
提示詞：stadium體育場(chǎng)
要求：
(1) 詞數(shù)在80～100之間。
(2) 字跡工整，語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
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【答案】例文
Three boys were playing football on the street when a fast-coming truck came near. The driver stopped his truck before them and warned them of the danger, but the three boys didn’t stop as if the whole street belonged to them only. Just at that moment, Xiao Gang, a middle school student, was passing by and shocked to see that. “How dangerous!” he thought to himself. He knew he must do something to stop them. He remembered there was a stadium nearby. So he went up, caught the ball and kicked it towards the stadium. Seeing a stranger kicking their ball, the boys got angry. They shouted and ran after him in order to get the ball back. Xiao Gang kept running after the ball until he came to the football field. Soon the boys arrived, too. “How about playing football here ” Xiao Gang asked, and then kicked the ball back to the boys. Getting their ball back, the three boys felt excited and played football again.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇看圖作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：本文應(yīng)使用“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”為主；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)應(yīng)對(duì)題干圖片進(jìn)行描述并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，描述事件的背景，人物等信息；
第二步，根據(jù)題干圖片，詳細(xì)描述事件過(guò)程；
第三步，描述事件結(jié)果。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①belong to屬于
②pass by經(jīng)過(guò)
[高分句型]
①He knew he must do something to stop them.（賓語(yǔ)從句）
②Getting their ball back, the three boys felt excited and played football again.（and連接并列句）
5．（2024·江蘇南京·二模）你在學(xué)校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到 “Life in 2045” 的征稿啟事。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容，選擇至少2個(gè)方面來(lái)寫(xiě)，暢想未來(lái)生活，并用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿。
注意：
1. 內(nèi)容涵蓋要點(diǎn)，全文連貫通順。
2. 不少于80詞 (已給出的文章開(kāi)頭，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
3. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Life in 2045
Life in 2045 will be quite different.
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【答案】例文：
Life in 2045
Life in 2045 will be quite different from today.
First of all, my house will become very amazing. Imagine waking up in the morning and my smart kitchen has already prepared a tasty breakfast for me. The future house will know what I want and satisfy my needs.
Secondly, getting around will be easier and faster because of future transport. The future cars will take us anywhere we want to go. Flying cars might even become a reality, making long-distance travel much quicker. These are just some of the exciting changes I can expect in 2045. I can’t wait to see what will happen in the future!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇圖示作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為 “一般將來(lái)時(shí)”；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，點(diǎn)題，說(shuō)明2045年的生活有何不同；
第二步，具體闡述2045年的生活，從“房子、購(gòu)物、交通”等方面介紹；
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，總結(jié)全文。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①satisfy one’s need 滿足某人的需求
②can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事
[高分句型]
The future house will know what I want and satisfy my needs.（what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）
6．（2024·黑龍江雞西·二模）習(xí)總書(shū)記在二十大報(bào)告中指出“青年強(qiáng)，則國(guó)家強(qiáng)”。作為中學(xué)生的我們，更要努力發(fā)展自身，做拼搏上進(jìn)的中國(guó)少年！請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下圖片，聯(lián)系自身實(shí)際，從德智體美勞等方面談?wù)勛约簩⑷绾闻ψ龊细竦闹袊?guó)少年。
要求：1．話題作文和圖示作文任選其一。
2．詞數(shù)：80~100之間，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3．字跡工整，語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
A nation will prosper only when its young people thrive, said President Xi Jinping. So how to be a better teenager
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【答案】例文：
A nation will prosper only when its young people thrive, said President Xi Jinping. So how to be a better teenager
Firstly, helping others will make us feel happy. For example, we should help others who have fallen down. After we see their smiles on their faces, we must be happier too. Secondly, we should study hard. In our free time, we are willing to read more books to broaden our eyes. Thirdly, healthy bodies can bring us happiness. Health is important to everyone. Only when we keep healthy can we work and study happily. So we should keep on doing more exercise. Fourthly, developing good interests is also important, which can make our life colorful and interesting. So we should develop a good habit to learn more and more skills when we are in our free time. Finally, we can do more social work. For example, we can plant more trees to protect the environment. We can also work as volunteers and clean up the parks.
From doing these, I must be a better teenager.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇看圖作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來(lái)時(shí)”為主；
③提示：根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容以及提示單詞，聯(lián)系自身實(shí)際介紹自己將如何做合格的中國(guó)少年。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，突出主題：如何成為一名好少年？
第二步，結(jié)合圖片內(nèi)容，分別從幫助他人、努力學(xué)習(xí)、體育鍛煉、發(fā)展興趣及參與社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)等五個(gè)方面具體闡述如何做一名合格的中國(guó)少年。
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)自己做一名好少年的決心。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①fall down落后
②broaden our eyes開(kāi)闊我們的眼界
③develop a good habit培養(yǎng)好的習(xí)慣
④be willing to do sth.愿意做某事
[高分句型]
①For example, we should help others who have fallen down. (who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)
②In our free time, we are willing to read more books to broaden our eyes. (動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ))
③Fourthly, developing good interests is also important, which can make our life colorful and interesting. (which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)
④Only when we keep healthy can we work and study happily. (倒裝結(jié)構(gòu))
7．（2024·浙江杭州·二模）文明社會(huì)，從我做起，請(qǐng)就下圖的不文明行為和所產(chǎn)生的后果用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一短文，向校刊English Garden投稿，倡導(dǎo)做文明人。
注意：
(1) 短文必須包括所給圖片的信息，合理想象并補(bǔ)全第3幅圖片的內(nèi)容。 (以第三人稱描述圖片故事)
(2) 必須談?wù)勀銓?duì)此事的看法，并說(shuō)明原因。
(3) 文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息。
(4) 字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右。短文首句已給，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：果皮 skin；踩在……上摔倒 slip on sth (slipped, slipped)；救護(hù)車 ambulance；一些不文明行為 some uncivilized behaviour
To Be a Civilized Person
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin.
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【答案】例文
To Be a Civilized Person
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin. Everything was nice until I saw a man was eating a banana. When he finished it, looking around, then he dropped the skin to the ground. We were surprised at that moment, and my cousin wanted to pick it up right away. However, a girl ran so fast that she slipped on the skin by accident. At that time, we not only picked up the skin, but also helped the girl.
From this experience. I sincerely realized the importance of environmental protection and behaving politely. If the man took the skin to into the bin, the accident wouldn’t happen. It’s good for you and others.
In conclusion, to be a civilized person can not only lead to self-improvement, but also give the convenience to people around. Action from now on!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇看圖作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：本文應(yīng)使用“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”為主；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)應(yīng)對(duì)題干圖片進(jìn)行描述并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，描述事件的背景，包括事件，地點(diǎn)，人物等信息；
第二步，結(jié)合題干圖片，描述事件的經(jīng)過(guò)并合理想象，補(bǔ)全第3幅圖片的內(nèi)容；
第三步，談?wù)剬?duì)此事的看法，并說(shuō)明原因。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①so…that如此……以至于
②lead to導(dǎo)致
[高分句型]
①When he finished it, looking around, then he dropped the skin to the ground.（when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）
②In conclusion, to be a civilized person can not only lead to self-improvement, but also give the convenience to people around.（not only…but also）
8．（2024·江蘇泰州·二模）寓言故事給我們帶來(lái)很多啟迪，其中《龜兔賽跑》的故事耐人尋味。請(qǐng)以“The rabbit and the tortoise”為題，根據(jù)下面的圖片和要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
要點(diǎn)提示：
1. Describe the story of “The rabbit and the tortoise”.
2. Explain the influences that the story has on you.
寫(xiě)作要求：
1. 內(nèi)容必須包括所給要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)拓展；
2. 詞數(shù)100左右。要求表達(dá)清晰，過(guò)渡合理，銜接自然；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等信息。
The rabbit and the tortoise
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【答案】例文
The rabbit and the tortoise
One day, a rabbit and a tortoise decided to have a race to see who was faster than the other. They agreed that the one who first got to the big tree in the distance was the winner. So they started at the same time. The rabbit thought he was sure to be the winner. But the tortoise was never discouraged and kept on moving forward as fast as he could. As the rabbit turned round a corner, he found the tortoise far behind him. He decided to have a rest. Unluckily, he fell asleep and the tortoise went beyond him.
After reading this story, I have learnt a lot from the tortoise. I am not good at my studies. But I will never give up. Besides, the story also tells me I shouldn’t look down on anyone else.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇寓言故事，為看圖作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，介紹寓言故事《龜兔賽跑》；
第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，逐一描述圖片內(nèi)容；
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)自己從這個(gè)故事中所獲。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①at the same time同時(shí)
②kept on moving forward繼續(xù)前行
[高分句型]
①One day, a rabbit and a tortoise decided to have a race to see who was faster than the other. （who引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）
②They agreed that the one who first got to the big tree in the distance was the winner. （that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）
9．（2024·河北邯鄲·二模）李華是一名中學(xué)生，他在學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了困難，在老師的幫助下，最終取得了進(jìn)步。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面四幅圖片及文字提示寫(xiě)一篇短文。
1. 2. 3. 4.
fail the exam cheer him up help him with his study get a good score
注意：（1）短文須包括每幅圖片的主要信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，提示詞語(yǔ)供參考；
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名；
（3）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。
Li Hua is a middle school student. He had difficulty in learning math and he
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【答案】One possible version:
Li Hua is a middle school student. He had difficulty in learning math and he failed the math exam. He cried sadly. Just then, his teacher came and tried to cheer him up. He told Li Hua that the only way to succeed is through hard work. Hearing the words, Li Hua decided to try his best to make progress. His teacher always helped him patiently when he met any difficult math problems.
Where there is a will, there is a way. With his hard work and the teacher’s help, he finally got a good score in the next exam. His teacher clapped for his great progress. He thanked his teacher and determined to keep working hard to achieve more success.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇看圖作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”為主；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，寫(xiě)作意圖開(kāi)頭已給出，寫(xiě)作時(shí)可直接描寫(xiě)在學(xué)習(xí)上遇到的困難。
第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，主要圍繞“考試不及格”、“讓他振作起來(lái)、幫助他學(xué)習(xí)”以及“取得好成績(jī)”的過(guò)程展開(kāi)，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，豐富細(xì)節(jié)。
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，表達(dá)對(duì)老師的感激之情。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①have difficulty in doing sth.在做某事上有困難
②fail未能，失敗
③try to do sth.嘗試做某事
④cheer sb. up使某人開(kāi)心起來(lái)
⑤decide to do sth.決定做某事
⑥make one’s best to do sth.盡某人最大的努力做某事
⑦make progress取得進(jìn)步
⑧clap for sb.為某人鼓掌
⑨determine to do sth.決定做某事
⑩keep doing sth.繼續(xù)做某事
[高分句型]
①He told Li Hua that the only way to succeed is through hard work. (that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)
②His teacher always helped him patiently when he met any difficult math problems. (when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)
10．（2024·黑龍江雙鴨山·二模）仔細(xì)觀察圖片，展開(kāi)合理想象，然后寫(xiě)一篇短文。
要求：
（1）詞數(shù)在80～100之間。
（2）字跡工整，語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫，合乎邏輯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
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【答案】例文
Wang Lin and Han Mei are good friends, and they are good deskmates as well. They often play together and have a good time.
Once in a math test, the paper wasn’t easy, and Wang Lin was able to work out only a few of the problems. Being afraid of failing the test, he wanted to see Han Mei’s answers. But she refused. “Are we good friends ” Wang Lin thought to himself with anger.
That evening, it was raining heavily. Wang Lin was doing his homework when the door opened and Han Mei came in with an umbrella in her hand. She came to help Wang Lin with the math problems that he couldn’t work out in the exam.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇看圖作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；
③提示：要求根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，介紹二人的關(guān)系；
第二步，具體描述發(fā)生了什么。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①have a good time 玩得開(kāi)心
②be afraid of 害怕
③work out 算出
[高分句型]
①Once in a math test, the paper wasn’t easy, and Wang Lin was able to work out only a few of the problems.（并列句）
②She came to help Wang Lin with the math problems that he couldn’t work out in the exam.（定語(yǔ)從句）

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