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專題12 書面表達15篇（中考真題 中考模擬）-沖刺2025年中考英語演練（全國通用）
1．（2024·山東淄博·中考真題）某英語雜志社開展“我們的節日”主題征文活動，請你寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文投稿，介紹一個有特色的中國節日。
要點提示：
1.節日簡介；
2.節日活動；
3.過節的感受；
4.……
注意：
1.書寫規范，表達連貫，可根據內容適當發揮；
2.文中不得出現真實的區縣、學校及姓名。
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2．（2024·四川綿陽·中考真題）假定你是李華，請閱讀你的外國網友 Mike的郵件，并用英語回復，給他至少3條建議并說明理由。詞數100左右，首尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
To: Li Hua From: Mike
Dear Li Hua, Is everything going well with you I have spent much time on my mobile phone these days. I often watch videos or play online games. I know it’s a waste of time and bad for my eyes, but I just can’t stop it. What should I do Would you please give me some advice All the best, Mike
To: Mike
From: Li Hua
Dear Mike,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
3．（2024·青海西寧·中考真題）假如你是Dr. Know，請根據表格中的要點，給她寫一封80詞左右的英文回信，幫她解決困擾。可適當發揮，首句已給出，不計入總詞數，文中不得出現真實校名和姓名。
建議 原因
幫助他人 使人快樂受到歡迎
結交朋友 互訴煩惱變得開朗
參與活動 展示自我自信滿滿
…… ……
Dear Jenny,
I’m very sorry to hear your problems. Here are my suggestions for you.
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Dr. Know
4．（2024·青海西寧·中考真題）用下列五個詞或其適當形式確立主題，自擬題目，寫一篇主題鮮明、立意新穎、文意完整、至少五句話的短文，并用下劃線標記所使用的五個詞。
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5．（2024·山東聊城·中考真題）假如你校校報英語專欄正在以“Take care of yourself”為題舉辦征文活動，請根據以下內容要點和要求寫一篇100詞左右的短文投稿。
內容要點：1. 我們應從哪些方面做起，比如：身體健康（飲食、鍛煉等）、生活技能（洗衣，做飯等）、心理健康（心態，抗挫等）……
2. 具體應該怎么做；
3. 這樣做的好處是什么。
要求：
1. 至少從兩個方面給出自己的看法；
2. 文中不得出現考生姓名、學校及其他相關信息；
3. 照抄試卷內容不得分。
Word bank
physical health身體健康；life skills生活技能；mental health 心理健康
Take care of yourself
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6．（2024·山東德州·中考真題）紙袋在生活中被廣泛使用。學校英語社團要開展主題調研成果展示活動，請你根據提示寫一篇主題為“advantages and disadvantages of paper bags”的演講稿，從不同角度辯證陳述其優缺點并說明原因，除提示內容外，須各補充一條，并簡要概括。
Points Sides & Reasons Conclusion (結論)
environment protecting 1. friendly to the environment; recycled easily; 2. ... 1. a waste of wood; cut trees; 2. ...
experience of using l. convenient to carry; light and thin; 2. ... 1. not strong enough to hold heavy things; easy to break; 2. ...
要求：
1. 語言通順，要點齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規范；
2. 文中不得出現真實的姓名和學校名稱；
3. 80～100詞，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.
We’ve done a survey on “advantages and disadvantages of paper bags” and collected different ideas. On the point of environment protecting, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（2024·浙江·中考真題）假如你是李華，你的英國好友Candy暑期將來中國游學。請根據以下相關信息，寫一封郵件，向她推薦一所合適的學校。
I like sports, and I’m interested in traditional Chinese art. Chinese food is great.
My cousin’s school ◆in the city center ◆a good ping-pong team ◆hand-made food classes My school ◆in the countryside ◆a new sports center ◆local art clubs
注意：
（1）郵件需包含所選學校至少兩點相關信息，可適當發揮；
（2）文中不得出現真實姓名、學校等信息；
（3）詞數80左右：郵件的首尾和第一句已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon.
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2025·湖北武漢·模擬預測）假如你是李華，你校英文報正在開展以“Less Stress, Better Life”為題的征文活動。請你根據以下內容提示，寫一篇英語短文進行投稿。
內容提示：
Why are middle school students under much pressure
What causes your stress
How can students deal with their stress
Something more about your ideas.
注 意：文中不得透露個人真實信息；詞數100詞左右；標題和首尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
Less Stress, Better Life
As middle school students, we’re sometimes under a lot of pressure in our daily lives.
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By reducing stress, you can improve your physical and mental health to enjoy a better life.
9．（2025·河南鄭州·二模）在這個飛速發展的數字時代，人工智能，即AI，已經悄然滲入我們生活的方方面面。河南省實驗中學是一所“科技+學術”型重點中學。在校科技節上，將舉辦題為 “AI in Our Life” 的中英雙語演講比賽。請根據以下提示寫一篇英文演講稿。
內容要點：
1. AI的好處。
2. AI在生活中對你的幫助。
3. 對AI過度依賴帶來的影響。
寫作要求：
1. 參考思維導圖，選取部分內容，也可自已發揮。
2. 不得出現真實的姓名和班級。
3. 詞數100詞左右。
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10．（2025·河南南陽·一模）假如你是學校英語社團成員，下周學校將舉辦中國傳統漢服展示活動，校園廣播站準備通知全體學生觀看。請你根據下圖用英語寫一篇通知。
寫作要求：1.文中須包含上圖所有信息，可適當發揮；
2.文中不得出現學生真實姓名和學校名稱；
3.詞數100左右（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）。
Good morning, everyone!
May I have your attention, please This is your friendly reminder from the school radio station.
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Thanks for your attention!
11．（2025·遼寧·一模）三年的初中生活即將結束，在這段美好的時光里，許多人給予了你幫助，比如老師、父母、同學、朋友或兄弟姐妹。假如你是李華，請選擇其中一位你最想感謝的人，寫一封感謝信，表達你的感激之情。
內容要點：
（1）你想感謝的人是誰；
（2）他/她在哪些方面給予了你幫助；
（3）在他的/她的幫助下，你取得的進步或成長。
注意事項：
（1）詞數80-100詞（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）；
（2）語句通順，條理清晰，可適當增加細節，使行文連貫；
（3）文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱。
A Thank-you Letter
Dear
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
12．（2025·河南駐馬店·模擬預測）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
Dad’s Old Guitar
Tom was a teenager who loved exploring the old and dusty corners of his house. One day, while digging through the attic, he found something that caught his eye. It was a guitar, which was old, with signs of wear. However, it seemed to tell a story.
Tom rushed downstairs with the guitar in hand. “Dad, look what I’ve found!” he exclaimed, showing the guitar to his father. Dad’s eyes widened, and a smile slowly spread across his face. “ Ah, my old guitar,” he said, taking it gently from Tom.
“You played the guitar ” Tom asked, surprised.
Dad chuckled, “Yes, a long time ago. I was in a band with some of my best friends when I was about your age.”
Tom’s eyes lit up with excitement. “You were in a band That’s so cool! Tell me more!” Dad settled into a chair, the old guitar resting on his lap. “We called ourselves ‘The Sunset Strummers’. We played at small events, parties, and even some local cafes. Those were some of the best days of my life. Music, friendship, and endless fun.”
Days went by, and Tom couldn’t stop thinking about his dad’s musical past. He spoke to his mother and learned more. Old photos were brought out, showing a young dad with long hair, rocking out with his band. Tom felt proud and interested. He wanted to do something special for his dad to let him relive those days, even if just for a moment. With the help of his mom and younger sister, Lucy, Tom came up with a plan. They would organize a surprise concert in their backyard and invite some of Dad’s old band members and friends. Lucy was good with tech, so she took charge of sending out digital invites and setting up the stage. Tom practiced on the old guitar, hoping to play alongside his dad.
注意：
(1)續寫詞數應為150個左右；
(2)請按如下格式在相應位置作答。
The day of the surprise concert arrived.
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As the evening grew dark and the music came to an end, Dad hugged Tom tightly.
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13．（23-24九年級下·江西贛州·期中）近年來，越來越多的中國傳統服裝融入年輕群體的時尚服飾中并成為潮流所趨。本卷閱讀理解D篇文章介紹了國風服飾獨特的文化魅力和發展趨勢。目前某英語報社正在以“Chinese Traditional Clothes”為題，舉辦中學生征文活動。請根據表格內容，寫一篇英語短文，向報社投稿。請先介紹你最喜歡的中國傳統服裝，再闡述其受歡迎的原因，最后就如何向全世界推廣它提出合理的建議。
寫作要點 寫作提示
1. Introduction of your favorite Chinese traditional clothes. (Hanfu, Tang suit, Qipao, Zhongshan suit...) ·Style: color... ·Material: silk... ·Cultural Meaning: honoring ancestors... ...
2. Reasons for its popularity. beauty…
3. Your advice on how to promote (推廣) it to the world. (至少寫兩點)
寫作要求：
1. 短文應包括表格中所有的寫作要點，條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當發揮；
2. 短文中不能出現真實的人名和地名：
3. 詞數80—120，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
In recent years, Chinese traditional clothes have become more and more popular among young people. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14．（2025·上海黃浦·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根據以下情境寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）
假設你是李華，收到英國筆友Tom的求助郵件。他因借助AI完成作業與爸爸產生矛盾。Tom想緩和關系卻不知如何表達。請以李華的身份給Tom回復郵件，提出建議，助其改善與爸爸的關系。郵件需包含對使用AI完成作業的看法及解決矛盾的建議。
注意：
1. 短文中不得出現考生的姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。
2. 照抄閱讀語篇不得分。
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15．（2025·云南玉溪·一模）隨著中國的發展，越來越多的外國人想了解中國，因此學好英語講好中國故事對我們來說意義重大。加之今年春晚以非物質文化遺產為主旋律，講述了一個個傳奇的中國故事，更是迫切地要求我們要弘揚中華文化。現你校英語專欄正在舉辦一場題為“Learn English, Tell China’s Stories”的征文活動，請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿，介紹用英語講好中國故事的意義或談談學好英語的好處。
要求：1.根據所給題目，寫一篇短文，詞數不少于 80；
2.語言流暢、書寫規范、卷面整潔；
3.文中不得使用真實姓名、校名，否則以零分計。
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《專題12 書面表達15篇（中考真題 中考模擬）-沖刺2025年中考英語演練（全國通用）》參考答案
1．例文
Double Ninth Festival is a traditional Chinese festival for the elderly, falling on September 9 of the lunar calendar. On the festival people often go to climb hills and do something for the elderly.
On the special day this year, our school organized us students to visit the Nursing Home nearby, where we visited the elderly, presenting them with flowers and self-made cards to show our respect and love. Also, we gave them some performances like singing, dancing, and so on.
The elderly, I think, is the wealth of the society. Had it not been for their labor, we wouldn’t enjoy our happy life and a harmonious society. Thus, respecting, loving and supporting the elderly is the right thing to do.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：按照題干中所給的要點提示介紹一個有特色的中國節日，注意要點齊全，語法正確，語句通順。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開門見山，直入主題，介紹重陽節的時間和習俗；
第二步，介紹自己是怎么度過這個節日的；
第三步，表達自己的感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①a traditional Chinese festival中國傳統的節日
②go to climb hills去爬山
③a harmonious society和諧社會
[高分句型]
①On the special day this year, our school organized us students to visit the Nursing Home nearby, where we visited the elderly, presenting them with flowers and self-made cards to show our respect and love. (定語從句，不定式表目的)
②Had it not been for their labor, we wouldn’t enjoy our happy life and a harmonious society. (虛擬語氣)
2．例文：
To: Mike
From: Li Hua
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you, though I’m sorry to learn about your situation. Here are some suggestions to help you reduce phone usage.
First, try setting specific time limits for using your phone each day. This will help control the amount of time you spend on it. Second, engage in alternative activities such as reading or exercising, which are both more beneficial for your mind and body. Lastly, consider using apps that monitor and restrict phone usage. They can remind you not to exceed your limit.
Hope these suggestions are helpful.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：這是一封電子郵件；
②時態：以“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：根據Mike的郵件中提到的問題，給出合理建議，注意語句通順，條理清晰，句中無單詞和語法錯誤。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表示收到信件并了解到問題。
第二步，針對問題給出三條建議：設定時間限制、參與其他活動、使用限制應用。
第三步，表示希望建議有幫助。
[亮點詞匯]
①learn about了解
②set limits 設定限制
③engage in 參與
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to hear from you, though I’m sorry to learn about your situation. (though引導的讓步狀語從句)
②Second, engage in alternative activities such as reading or exercising, which are both more beneficial for your mind and body. (which引導的非限制性定語從句)
③Lastly, consider using apps that monitor and restrict phone usage. (that引導的限制性定語從句)
3．A possible version:
Dear Jenny,
I’m very sorry to hear your problems. Here are my suggestions for you.
To begin with, you need to help others because helping others is helping yourself. You can get much joy and will be popular. Secondly, you’d better try your best to make friends and learn to share. It can double your happiness and half your problems. The most important thing is to be a good listener. Then you will not feel lonely and become outgoing. Thirdly, join some clubs actively. If you show yourself bravely in the clubs, it can deal with your shyness. You can have more chances to practise speaking in public and believe yourself more. Last but not least, try new things and share them with friends. They are thirsty for new things.
In a word, you don’t have to care too much about what others think of you, just improve yourself. I believe you can do it well. Hope what I said can help you be better soon.
Dr. Know
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇書信作文；
② 時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③ 提示：根據表格中的要點提示完成寫作，注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，直入主題，引出下文；
第二步，從“幫助他人、結交朋友、參與活動”等方面給出建議；
第三步，總結全文。
[亮點詞匯]
①to begin with首先
②try one’s best to盡力去做某事
③make friends交朋友
④care too much about過于在意
⑤think of考慮到
[高分句型]
①To begin with, you need to help others because helping others is helping yourself.（because引導的原因狀語從句）
②If you show yourself bravely in the clubs, it can deal with your shyness.（if引導的條件狀語從句）
4．Possible version one:
The Importance of English
English plays an important role in communicating in the world. People from different countries usually have difficulty in understanding each other when they speak different languages. English will help to solve this problem easily. It’s the official language and most widely used by people all over the world. So please keep learning English. It will not only offer you another way to understand the world but also make the people much closer.
Possible version two:
A Good App for Exercise
Nowadays, plenty of people gradually begin to exercise by using a popular App named KEEP. The English word “keep” here means sticking to exercise. First and foremost, we’re able to do exercise whenever or wherever we like. What’s more, it’s convenient to follow the coaches in the short videos when we exercise and choose the suitable lessons according to our training levels. Let’s keep exercising with this helpful App.
Possible version three:
Travelling Abroad
Travelling abroad helps us meet different people and enjoy beautiful scenery. It’s a good choice to relax and improve yourself when you are on the way. While travelling, you can gain a deeper understanding of different kinds of cultures by experiencing and observing other people’s life. If you learn English well, you will have no difficulty in communicating during the trips. In order to keep our life colorful and meaningful, let’s travel and learn!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇小作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節完整表述內容。
[寫作步驟]（以第一個為例）
第一步，整體介紹英語很重要；
第二步，具體描述有關英語的情況。
[亮點詞匯]
①play an important role起重要作用
②have difficulty in doing sth做某事有困難
③keep doing sth保持做某事
[高分句型]
People from different countries usually have difficulty in understanding each other when they speak different languages. （時間狀語從句）
5．范文：
Take care of yourself
As we all know, health is very important in our life. So you should take care of yourself.
It is important to have physical health. So you should try to have a healthy diet. Also, you should keep doing exercise. Having enough sleep is necessary as well. They are good for your health and have a strong body. What’s more, learning some life skills is of great importance. You can learn how to wash clothes, cook and so on. They help you be independent. At the same time, you should do your best to keep your mental health. You should have an active attitude when you have failures and problems. In this way, you will have more courage to face the challenges ahead.
Take care of yourself and you will have a better future!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：要求以“Take care of yourself”為題，根據提示內容進行寫作，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖；
第二步，具體介紹應該怎么做以及這樣做的好處；
第三步，書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①have a healthy diet 飲食健康
②What’s more 此外
③At the same time 同時
④face the challenges ahead 面對未來的挑戰
[高分句型]
①You should have an active attitude when you have failures and problems.（when引導的時間狀語從句）
②Take care of yourself and you will have a better future!（祈使句）
6．例文
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.
We’ve done a survey on “advantages and disadvantages of paper bags” and collected different ideas.
On the point of environment protecting, they are friendly to the environment and they are recycled easily. They can also be recycled. But they also have disadvantages. To make more paper bags, we need to cut down more forests. They also waste more wood. They are also relatively expensive. In my life, I often carry things in paper bags. They are more convenient to carry. They are also lighter and thinner. When we use them to carry things, it will be more dignified. But sometimes they’re not strong enough to hold heavy things. They are also very easy to break. Of course, if they encounter a lot of water, they can’t hold anything.
In conclusion, protecting the environment is the most important.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇演講稿；
② 時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③ 提示：根據所給提示完成寫作，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹紙袋在環境保護方面的優缺點；
第二步，介紹紙袋在使用體驗上的優缺點；
第三步，最后書寫小結。
[亮點詞匯]
① be friendly to對……友好
② use sth to do sth使用某物做某事
③ in conclusion總之
[高分句型]
①When we use them to carry things, it will be more dignified. （when引導的時間狀語從句）
② Of course, if they encounter a lot of water, they can’t hold anything.（if引導的條件狀語從句）
7．例文①
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I know you love traditional Chinese art and food. I think my school is perfect for you.
It is in the beautiful countryside. The local food here is really fresh and delicious. I believe you’ll enjoy it. Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! Also, our school has traditional art classes, and you can learn paper cutting, Chinese painting and so on. I’m sure you’ll love my school.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
例文②
Dear Candy,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to China soon. As you love sports and Chinese food, I think my cousin’s school is a good choice.
It is in the city center with many restaurants nearby. You’ll find it easy to try different local foods there. In her school, there are some special hand-made food classes. You can learn to make food by yourself. I’m sure you’ll be interested in them. What’s more, the ping-pong team in her school is great. As a ping-pong lover, you can’t miss it!
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析] （以例文①為例）
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時態：時態為一般現在時；
③提示：根據提示內容給她推薦一所合適的學校，適當增加細節。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，向她推薦一個學校；
第二步，根據提示內容詳細介紹推薦學校的信息；
第三步，書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①play basketball打籃球
②and so on等等
[高分句型]
Last year, we built a new sports center, so we can play basketball together there! (so連接的并列句)
8．例文
Less Stress, Better Life
As middle school students, we’re sometimes under a lot of pressure in our daily lives.
Some students study very hard but they still can’t do well. They often worry so much about their exams that they can’t sleep well. Others think they have too much homework to do every day.
I feel stressed from time to time too. I’m good at every subject, but it’s hard for me to get on well with my classmates. I also have problems communicating with my parents.
It is important to find ways to reduce stress in order to lead a healthier and happier life. I think a conversation with parents or teachers is helpful. Also, taking exercise can make us relaxed when we’re stressed. Getting enough sleep helps a lot too.
By reducing stress, you can improve your physical and mental health to enjoy a better life.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態主要為“一般現在時”；
③提示：文章應該包括4個方面的要點提示，要適當補充，使文章內容充實；行文時多用第一、三人稱，盡量多使用短語和句型；寫作中適當使用連接詞，使行文連貫、順暢。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開門見山，直接點明文章主題：作為中學生，壓力很大；
第二步，具體描述了部分學生面臨的壓力狀況；
第三步，從自身角度出發，講述自己也時常感到壓力；
第四步，聚焦于緩解壓力的方法；
第五步，總結全文，再次強調減壓的重要意義。
[亮點詞匯]
①get on well with sb. 與某人相處融洽
②in order to do sth. 為了做某事
[高分句型]
①They often worry so much about their exams that they can’t sleep well. (so … that引導結果狀語從句)
②I think a conversation with parents or teachers is helpful. (賓語從句)
9．例文
AI in Our Life
Dear teachers and fellow students,
Nowadays, AI has found its way into many aspects of our lives, bringing us great convenience.
In education, intelligent learning apps offer personalized study plans to students. In the medical field, it helps doctors make accurate diagnoses. What’s more, smart voice assistants enable us to operate home appliances with simple voice commands. The future of AI seems extremely promising. Self-driving cars will become more common, reducing traffic accidents. House hold robots will free us from tiring housework. However, with AI technology being widely used, many workers lost their jobs. Also, some students rely on AI too much so that they lose their ability to do things by themselves.
All in all, just as every coin has its two sides, AI products have both advantages and shortcomings. I believe that if we use AI correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future.
That’s all. Thank you!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：“一般現在時”和“一般將來時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏提示的要點，可適當增加細節，使表述內容更完整。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，點明AI在生活中的普及；
第二步，舉例說明AI在生活中的應用；
第三步，舉例說明人類對AI過度依賴帶來的影響；
第四步，書寫結語，表達自己的看法。
[亮點詞匯]
①offer sth to sb 給某人提供某物
②make accurate diagnoses 準確診斷
③enable sb to do 確保某人做某事
④free sb from doing 把某人從……中解脫出來
⑤rely on 依賴
⑥ability to do 做某事的能力
[高分句型]
①Also, some students rely on AI too much so that they lose their ability to do things by themselves. (so that引導結果狀語從句)
②I believe that if we use AI correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future. (that引導賓語從句，if引導條件狀語從句)
10．例文
Good morning, everyone!
May I have your attention, please This is your friendly reminder from the school radio station. Next Sunday, April 21st, our school will host a Traditional Hanfu Show on the school playground, starting at 3:30 p.m. You can come to enjoy and have fun.
First, you can watch a hanfu show. Hanfu lovers will show you different styles and colors of hanfu, which will be very beautiful. After that, there is a hanfu exhibition. You can not only learn about the history and culture of hanfu, but also its development. Then you can also try on hanfu and take some photos. In this way, you can understand it better. This activity can help you learn about traditional Chinese culture. It will be e and join us.
Thanks for your attention!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一則通知；
②時態：“一般現在時和一般將來時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏提示，并適當添加細節，突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，邀請全體學生參加漢服表演活動，并介紹活動時間和地點；
第二步，介紹活動內容；
第三步，歡迎大家參與并表示感謝。
[亮點詞匯]
①host主辦，舉辦
②have fun玩得高興
③try on試穿
④learn about了解
[高分句型]
①Hanfu lovers will show you different styles and colors of hanfu, which will be very beautiful. (定語從句)
②You can not only learn about the history and culture of hanfu, but also its development. (not only...but also連接的并列句)
11．例文
A Thank-you Letter
Dear Ms. Wang,
How time flies! My junior high life is ending, and I want to express my deepest gratitude to you.
You have been my English teacher for three years. Whenever I struggled with grammar, you patiently explained it with vivid examples. You also encouraged me to join the school speech contest, which boosted my confidence. Thanks to your guidance, my English scores improved from average to top 10 in class. More importantly, you taught me that learning is a joyful journey, not just about grades.
You are not only a teacher but also a lifelong mentor. I will always remember your kindness.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文一篇感謝信。
②時態：主要運用一般現在時。
③提示：寫作時需完整涵蓋這些要點，可適當增添具體事例使內容更豐富、生動。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開篇點題，直接點明寫信背景是初中生活即將結束，以及寫信目的是向對方表達最深的感激之情，引出下文對老師的感謝內容，讓讀者迅速明確信件主旨。
第二步，具體闡述幫助內容，并說明進步與成長，體現了在老師幫助下自己在知識學習和觀念層面的雙重成長。
第三步， 結尾升華老師的角色，再次強調對老師的感激和銘記，使信件情感真摯且富有感染力。
[亮點詞匯]
①struggle with與……作斗爭
②boost my confidence增強我的信心
③lifelong mentor終身導師
[高分句型]
①Whenever I struggled with grammar, you patiently explained it with vivid examples.（時間狀語從句）
②You also encouraged me to join the school speech contest, which boosted my confidence.（非限制性定語從句）
12．參考例文
The day of the surprise concert arrived. Friends and family members gathered in the backyard, holding their breath in anticipation. Tom led his dad outside, blindfolded. When the blindfold was removed, dad’s face lit up. The old band members were there, instruments in hand. Tom handed the guitar to his dad. Without hesitation, dad took the guitar, and the band started playing. The music was filled with nostalgia and love. Tom joined in with a song he had learned, and together, father and son played in harmony. The crowd cheered, danced, and sang along.
As the evening grew dark and the music came to an end, dad hugged Tom tightly. “Thank you,” he whispered, tears in his eyes. “This was the best gift ever.” Lucy captured the moments with her camera, ensuring the memories would last forever. The old guitar had not only revealed a piece of dad’s past but also created a new and beautiful memory for everyone present. And in a simple backyard, with string lights and heartwarming tunes, the family and friends came together, celebrating love, memories and the timeless magic of music.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：以一般過去時為主；
③提示：續寫需圍繞“驚喜音樂會”展開，銜接前文情節，突出父子情感和音樂主題，注意動作描寫和情感表達。
[寫作步驟]
第一步：閱讀并理解前文情節，明確續寫方向（音樂會準備完成，等待揭曉）；
第二步：第一段描寫音樂會當天的場景（布置、氛圍、父親的反應）；
第三步：第二段聚焦音樂會結束后的情感升華（父親的感動、家庭溫情）。
[亮點詞匯]
①hold their breath屏住呼吸
②without hesitation毫不猶豫
③join in加入
④capture the moments with her camera用相機捕捉這些瞬間
⑤not only...but also...不僅……而且……
[高分句型]
①When the blindfold was removed, dad’s face lit up.（when引導的時間狀語從句）
②And in a simple backyard, with string lights and heartwarming tunes, the family and friends came together, celebrating love, memories and the timeless magic of music.（現在分詞作狀語）
13． 例文
In recent years, Chinese traditional clothes have become more and more popular among young people.
My favorite Chinese traditional clothes is Hanfu. This traditional attire, characterized by its flowing lines and vibrant colors, exudes a sense of grace. The use of silk and a symbol of luxury add to its allure. Besides, Hanfu holds a profound cultural meaning, representing a reverence for our ancestors and a connection to our history. Its unique beauty and cultural significance have made it a fashion statement, embodying a blend of tradition and modernity.
To promote Hanfu to the world, we can celebrate its uniqueness and encourage people to learn about its history. Additionally, we can showcase Hanfu in international events and fashion shows,introducing it to a wider global audience.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 時態：主要時態為“一般現在時”；
③ 提示：寫作要點明確，需按要求介紹最喜歡的中國傳統服裝、闡述受歡迎原因及提出推廣建議，考生應涵蓋所有要點，可適當發揮。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，承接開頭表明最喜歡的中國傳統服裝是漢服，并介紹其風格（線條流暢、色彩鮮艷）、材質（絲綢）及文化意義（尊崇祖先、連接歷史）；
第二步，闡述漢服受歡迎原因，即獨特的美和文化意義使其成為時尚象征，體現傳統與現代融合；
第三步，提出推廣漢服的建議，包括宣傳其獨特性鼓勵人們了解歷史，以及在國際活動和時裝秀中展示以擴大受眾群體。
[亮點詞匯]
① characterized by 以……為特征
② vibrant colors 鮮艷的色彩
③ add to 增添，增加
④ hold a profound cultural meaning 承載深厚的文化意義
⑤ a fashion statement 一種時尚宣言
[高分句型]
① This traditional attire, characterized by its flowing lines and vibrant colors, exudes a sense of grace.（過去分詞短語作后置定語）
② Its unique beauty and cultural significance have made it a fashion statement, embodying a blend of tradition and modernity.（現在分詞短語作伴隨狀語）
14．例文：
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you had a conflict with your dad because of using AI to do homework. I understand your situation, but relying on AI for homework isn’t a good idea. Homework helps us learn and practice, and AI can’t replace our efforts. It deprives us of the chance to think independently and solve problems on our own, which are essential skills for learning.
To improve your relationship with your dad, first, have an honest talk with him. Apologize for using AI and explain you now understand why it’s wrong. Promise him you won’t do it again and will work hard on your own. Besides, you can make a study plan together to show your determination. I believe if you take these steps, the relationship between you and your dad will surely take a turn for the better.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；
②時態：“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖，表達對朋友的關心；
第二步，具體闡述使用AI完成作業的看法及解決矛盾的建議；
第三步，最后書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①have a conflict with與……產生矛盾
②rely on依賴
③apologize for為……道歉
[高分句型]
①It deprives us of the chance to think independently and solve problems on our own, which are essential skills for learning. (定語從句)
②I believe if you take these steps, the relationship between you and your dad will surely take a turn for the better. (賓語從句)
15．范文：
Learn English, Tell China’s Stories
With the rapid development of China, more and more foreigners are interested in learning about China. Therefore, it is of great significance for us to learn English well and tell Chinese stories.
First of all, learning English well can help us communicate with foreigners better. By learning English, we can introduce Chinese culture, history, and society to the world, which can enhance mutual understanding and friendship between China and other countries. In addition, learning English well can also help us gain more knowledge and information from abroad. We can read English books, watch English movies, and listen to English songs, so as to broaden our horizons and improve our language skills.
Moreover, telling Chinese stories can let the world know more about China. China has a long history and rich culture, and there are many touching and inspiring stories in China. By telling these stories, we can not only promote Chinese culture, but also make the world understand China better.
In a word, learning English well and telling Chinese stories are important for us. We should make good use of English to tell Chinese stories and let the world know a real, beautiful, and charming China.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；
②時態：一般現在時；
③提示：圍繞“用英語講好中國故事的意義”展開論述，需包含學習英語的好處和文化傳播的重要性。
[寫作步驟]
第一步：點明背景和主題，強調學習英語與傳播中國故事的重要性；
第二步：分點論述學習英語的好處和講中國故事的意義；
第三步：總結全文，呼吁行動，強化主題。
[亮點詞匯]
①of great significance 具有重要意義
②enhance mutual understanding 增進相互理解
③broaden one’s horizons 開闊視野
[高分句型]
①By learning English, we can introduce Chinese culture, history, and society to the world, which can enhance mutual understanding and friendship between China and other countries. (非限制性定語從句)
②China has a long history and rich culture, and there are many touching and inspiring stories in China. (并列句)
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