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專題07 書面表達15篇【2025高頻考點】-沖刺2025年中考英語演練（上海專用）
1．（2025·上海徐匯·二模）After four years of junior high school study, you must have grown up a lot. Let’s get to know you again from new perspectives, for example, your strengths, your pursuits, your attitudes and viewpoints towards things, the ways you handle matters, and so on. Please write a self-introduction in no less than 60 words.
經過了四年的初中學習生活，你一定成長了不少吧。讓我們從新的視角重新認識一下你， 比如你的優勢、你的追求、你對事物的態度和觀點或是你處理事情的方式等等。請完成一份自我介紹，不少于60個詞。(注意：短文中不得出現考生的姓名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。標點符號不占格)
Hi, I am ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2025·上海虹口·二模）Write an email of at least 60 words according to the given situation (根據以下情境寫一封不少于60個詞的郵件，標點符號不占格)。
學校校報收到了一封來自學生Paul的郵件，他建議校報增設“文化角” (Culture corner) 和 “旅游角”(Travel corner) 兩個板塊。假如你是校報主編 Joyce，請給Paul回復一封郵件， 說明你的決定并闡述理由。
注意：
1.文中不得出現任何真實的人名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。
2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。
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3．（2025·上海松江·二模）Write at least 60 words on the given topic.(根據以下提示寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文， 標點符號不占格。)
作為未成年人，我們往往和父母、祖父母住在一起。生活中，你與長輩是如何相處的
請以 “How to get along with elders” 為題，分享你與長輩的相處之道，并用一個事例來說明 。
(注意：
1.文中不得出現姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。
2. 照抄閱讀語篇不得分。)
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4．（2025·上海普陀·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.
【根據以下情境寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標點符號不占格。】
假設你是李華，將于今年7月4日—7月10日去英國倫敦旅行。你在瀏覽Trusted Housesitters 網站時，發現以下兩個家庭在尋找此時間段能幫助他們照看房子和寵物的人(house sitter)。請任選一個家庭，撰寫一封申請郵件，說明你的情況、申請目的和理由，并簡要談談你的照看計劃。
Cat sitting for a cute cat, in a lovely house, Mr. and Mrs. Colins Experienced sitter needed for our dog, Mr. and Mrs. Walsh
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職責： ●照顧貓咪Mimi ●保持房子整潔 職責： ●照顧小狗Bell ●照顧花園里的植物
友情提示： ●Mimi很粘人，需要陪伴和玩耍 友情提示： ●Bell精力旺盛，但害怕淘氣的小孩子
注意：短文中不得出現考生的姓名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。
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5．（2025·上海楊浦·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根據以下情境寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格)
假設你是Tammy Luo，在新西蘭交流學習期間，你需要向同學們做一次關于上海文化(如建筑、食物、節日活動、生活方式等)的演講，請寫一篇演講稿，其中要體現你使用照片或明信片來輔助演講。
(注意：1. 短文中不得出現姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。2. 照抄閱讀語篇不得分。)
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6．（2025·上海寶山·模擬預測）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Good communication plays an important role in our life”.
良好的溝通在我們的生活中起著非常重要的作用，學校正在開展以“溝通”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，分享你的一段經歷，并談談你的想法和感受。The following questions are for reference:
1. What problem/trouble did you meet
2. How did you solve the problem through communication
3. What have you learn from the experience
The following words are just for reference:（以下單詞僅供參考）
misunderstand, communicate, realize, relationship, helpful
（注意：短文中不得出現真實姓名和校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分）
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7．（2024·上海·模擬預測）Write a passage in at least 60 words on the topic of “The progress I’ve made” 以“我所取得的進步”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。
請結合自己的經歷，選取一兩個方面來聊一聊你取得過哪些進步？如何取得進步 的？(注意文章中不得出現具體人名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。)
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8．（2025·上海·模擬預測）同學們因疫情（the epidemic）被迫居家學習已一個月了，中考又迫在眉睫，你的好朋友Luke對此感到很焦慮，另外無法外出缺少社交活動也讓Luke感到非常的郁悶無聊。請給她寫一封信，結合自己的做法和體會，從學習、生活和心理調適等方面給她一些建議和鼓勵。
（注意：短文中不得出現任何人名、校名及其它相關信息，否則不予評分。）
The following is for reference only （以下表達僅供參考）
manage anxiety
social activities
a sense of connection
keep a regular schedule
a chance to
Dear Luke,
I know that you are upset these days because of the lockdown of the whole city.
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9．（2025·上海徐匯·模擬預測）你的學校最近開展了一次學生午餐情況調研，從午餐種類(variety)、品質(quality)、用餐體驗(dining experience) 等方面進行了滿意度調研 (satisfaction survey)，相關調查結果見以下餅狀圖(pie chart)。
請你根據本次調查結果，寫一份調查報告。
內容包括：
1、調查情況介紹
2、相關數據分析
3、改進建議
You may begin like this:
Our school recently conducted a satisfaction survey on students’ lunches…
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10．（2025·上海黃浦·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. （根據以下情境寫一篇不少于 60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）
李華正帶領團隊參與學校舉辦的“用英語講好上海故事（Telling Shanghai Stories in English）”活動。團隊需要在外灘（The Bund）、豫園（Yu Garden）和人民廣場（People’s Square）中選擇一個作為講述的主題，但隊友們對選擇哪個主題有不同意見，大家爭論不休。
請以李華的身份給隊友們寫一封郵件，并提出一個解決爭論的辦法。
注意：
1. 短文中不得出現考生的姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。
2. 照抄閱讀語篇不得分。
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11．（2025·上海閔行·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根據以下情境寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格)
假設你是李楓，你們學校計劃寒假開展主題為“感受春節”(Feeling the atmosphere of the Spring Festival)的項目，現向學生征求一個小隊活動設想。請給負責人Miss Zhang寫一封郵件。郵件需包含以下內容：
(1)你對此項目的看法；
(2)小隊活動內容簡介及設計意圖。
以下活動內容供參考：
包餃子(making jiaozi) 貼窗花(sticking paper-cut)
寫春聯(writing Spring Festival couplets) 掃塵 (sweeping the dust)
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12．（2025·上海金山·一模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Activities on spreading the culture of Spring Festival”(以“傳播春節文化的活動”為題，寫一篇至少60個單詞的短文。標點符號不占格)
最近聯合國教科文組織 (the UNESCO) 宣布將中國的春節列入世界非物質文化遺產名錄 (the list of Intangible Cultural Heritage)。為了慶祝這一重要時刻， 你所在的社區向居民們征集在社區內傳播春節文化的活動方案，諸如，舉辦春節美食分享會、春節故事演講比賽、制作傳統手工藝品 (handicrafts）如窗花剪紙和紅燈籠、寫福字 (write the Chinese character Fu)、貼春聯 (paste the Spring Festival couplets)、表演舞龍 (dragon dances) 或舞獅等等。你作為一名社區志愿者，請設計至少二種活動，并結合自己的擅長和活動的意義說明理由。
說明：文中不得出現真實的地名和人名。
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13．（2025·上海青浦·一模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation. (根據以下情境，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)
假如你是吳磊，收到一封來自外國朋友 Mathew的電子郵件，他提到寒假會來上海參加一個為期一周的交流訪學活動，活動方提供了三種住宿方案，分別是住當地同學家 (stay with one of the local classmates) 、住學校宿舍 (live in the school dormitory) 或住賓館 (stay at a hotel) 。
Mathew希望你能給他出出主意，請你根據這一情況給他回一封郵件。
內容要點如下：
1. 表示歡迎；
2. 推薦其中一種住宿方案，并說明理由。
注意：
●文中不得出現姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。
●照抄試卷中內容不得分。
●郵件格式不計入總詞數。
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14．（2025·上海楊浦·一模）你是學校圖書館的志愿者李楓，負責每周一下午的圖書館整理工作。這周你因為某個原因而忘記了圖書館的任務。你需要寫一封道歉信給你的圖書館負責人Mr. Wang，表達你的歉意。
道歉信內容須包括：
·表達歉意；
·解釋缺席的原因；
·提出補救措施。
注意：
1. 短文中不得出現姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分；
2. 照抄閱讀語篇不得分。
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15．（2025·上海長寧·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (請根據以下情景寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)
假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Alex發郵件告訴你，最近他已經成功報名參加交換生項目 (exchange program)，下學期來你學校交流學習兩個月，想了解你校的特色課程 (feature course)，請你給Alex回信，表示歡迎并介紹你認為最有特色的學校課程，如：運動、藝術、編程 (programming)、茶藝 (tea art) 等等并說明理由。
Dear Alex,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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《專題07 書面表達15篇【2025高頻考點】-沖刺2025年中考英語演練（上海專用）》參考答案
1．例文：
Hi, I am Li Hua. After four years of junior high school life, I have grown up a lot. One of my biggest strengths is being kind and helpful. I always offer to help my classmates with their schoolwork.
I love reading books and playing basketball. My dream is to be a teacher in the future. I think education can change people’s lives. When I encounter difficulties or face challenging problems, I turn to my parents or teachers for guidance and support. I also try to solve problems on my own instead of giving up quickly. This makes me stronger and more confident.
I’m proud of who I’ve become!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏要點，可適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖，點明主題，要從新視角自我介紹；
第二步，具體介紹自己的優勢、追求、處事態度等；
第三步，書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①grow up長大
②offer to do sth主動提出做某事
③on one’s own獨自
④be proud of為……感到驕傲
[高分句型]
①I think education can change people’s lives. (賓語從句)
②When I encounter difficulties or face challenging problems, I turn to my parents or teachers for guidance and support. (when引導的時間狀語從句)
2．例文
Dear Paul,
Thank you for your suggestions about adding “Culture Corner” and “Travel Corner” to our school newspaper. After careful discussion, we’ve decided to adopt both ideas. The Culture Corner will help students learn about different countries’ traditions, which promotes cross-cultural understanding. The Travel Corner can share interesting travel stories and tips to inspire exploration. Your creative thinking is exactly what we need! We’ll start preparing the first edition next month. Please let us know if you have more ideas.
Best regards,
Joyce
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是郵件；
②時態：主要時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏提示內容中“提示信息”，適當發揮。
[寫作步驟]
第一步：表明寫作意圖。感謝對方提出的建議。
第二步：具體闡述寫作內容，闡述自己的決定、分述理由。
第三步：書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①learn about學習有關
②decide to do sth.決定做某事
③help sb. do sth.幫助做某事
[高分句型]
①Please let us know if you have more ideas. (If引導的條件狀語從句）
②The Culture Corner will help students learn about different countries’ traditions, which promotes cross-cultural understanding. (定語從句)
3．例文
How to get along with elders
In life, we often live with our parents and grandparents. Living with elders teaches me patience and respect. I always listen carefully to their stories and share my school life with them. For example, my grandmother loves traditional crafts, so I learned paper-cutting from her last weekend. Though my first attempt was messy, she praised my effort warmly. This experience made us closer.
I believe showing genuine interest in their wisdom and spending quality time together are keys to harmonious relationships.
【詳解】①題材：本文是一篇話題作文。
②時態：時態主要為“一般現在時”。
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏要點，包括：注意行文連貫、邏輯清晰、無拼寫和語法錯誤。
[寫作步驟]
第一步：點明主題；
第二步：用具體事例體現與長輩的相處之道；
第三步：總結升華，強調“真誠關注”和“陪伴”的重要性。
[亮點詞匯]
①harmonious 和諧的
②genuine interest 真正的興趣
[高分句型]
①For example, my grandmother loves traditional crafts, so I learned paper-cutting from her last weekend.(so引導結果狀語從句)
②Though my first attempt was messy, she praised my effort warmly.（though引導讓步狀語從句）
4．例文
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Colins,
I am writing to apply for the house sitting position from July 4th to July 10th. I will be visiting London during this period and would love to take care of your cat, Mimi.
I have experience with cats and understand their needs. I will ensure Mimi is fed, played with, and given plenty of attention. Additionally, I will keep your house clean and tidy.
I look forward to the opportunity to help you and spend time with Mimi.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件。
②時態：時態主要為“一般現在時”和“一般將來時”。
③提示：注意郵件格式。注意行文連貫，邏輯清晰，無拼寫和語法錯誤。
[寫作步驟]
第一步：點明自己想申請照看房屋的工作，介紹自己的情況；
第二步：介紹自己類似的經驗及工作計劃；
第三步：希望能得到這次和貓咪一起度過時光的機會。
[亮點詞匯]
①apply for申請
②take care of照顧
③keep your house clean and tidy保持你的房子干凈整潔
[高分句型]
①I will be visiting London during this period and would love to take care of your cat, Mimi. (將來進行時)
5．例文：
Hello everyone:
My name is Tammy Luo. Now let me introduce Shanghai to you. If you go to visit Shanghai, you can’t miss the Oriental Pearl TV Tower. Look at this picture. It has a height of 468 meters and it is the highest TV tower in Asia. If you have a chance, try the maglev train. It’s very fast and exciting to take.You can also enjoy food in Yu Garden. You can find a lot of local snacks there. Besides, I think Shanghai Disneyland is a good place to have fun. It’s the first disneyland in mainland China. It’s very interesting. I hope you will enjoy your trip in Shanghai.
Thank you for listening.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；
②時態：主要為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作提示已給出，可適當增加細節，不要遺漏，注意上下文的邏輯關系。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，自我介紹并引出主題；
第二步，介紹上海的特色；
第三步，書寫結尾表達祝愿。
[亮點詞匯]
①introduce sth. to sb.向某人介紹某物
②have a chance有機會
③have fun玩得開心
[高分句型]
If you have a chance, try the maglev train.(if引導條件狀語從句)
6．例文
Good communication plays an important role in our life.
Last month, I had a misunderstanding with my best friend over a small issue. We stopped talking to each other, and our relationship became tense. Feeling upset, I decided to communicate openly with her. I explained my feelings and listened to her side of the story. Through this conversation, we both realized that the problem was caused by a lack of communication. After clearing the misunderstanding, our friendship became even stronger.
This experience taught me that communication is essential to solving problems and maintaining healthy relationships. It helps us understand each other better and avoid unnecessary conflicts. I now believe that good communication is the key to building trust and harmony in life.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：一般現在時與一般過去時；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點，并適當添加細節，突出重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹你的一段經歷；
第二步，分享你的想法和感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①each other彼此
②communicate…with與……交流
③a lack of缺乏
[高分句型]
①Through this conversation, we both realized that the problem was caused by a lack of communication.（賓語從句）
②It helps us understand each other better and avoid unnecessary conflicts.（并列結構）
7．One possible version:
The progress I’ve made
I used to depend on my parents to do everything for me. But now, I become more independent and learn to do something by myself.
In the past, I never did any housework at home. However, during the period of Covid-19, my mom was seriously sick and was too weak to take care of me. Since we could not go out, I had to learn how to cook in order not to get hungry. Although the food I cooked was not as delicious as I thought, my mother was very pleased with me.
Now I can not only make full use of the time to study, but also help my family to do some housework, such as washing clothes and cleaning the floor. I really learn a lot from the progress I have made.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；
②時態：本文以“一般現在時”和“一般過去時”為主；
③提示：題目要求結合自己的經歷，選取一兩個方面談談自己取得的進步，以及如何取得進步的。寫作時注意適當增加細節，不要遺漏要點。
[寫作步聚]
第一步，總體介紹自己的進步；
第二步，通過描述疫情期間自己不得不學習廚技照顧母親，談自己取得的進步；
第三步，最后談自己的感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①too...to...太……而不能……
②take care of照顧
③in order to為了
[高分句型]
①Since we could not go out, I had to learn how to cook in order not to get hungry.（疑問詞+動詞不定式作賓語）
②Although the food I cooked was not as delicious as I thought, my mother was very pleased with me.（although引導的讓步狀語從句）
8．例文
Dear Luke,
I know that you are upset these days because of the lockdown of the whole city. But remember, you’re not alone. I’m here to share some ideas that have helped me stay calm and motivated.
First, I kept a regular schedule by waking up early, attending classes and setting study goals. It helped me feel in control. Next, I stayed connected. I joined online book clubs and virtual study groups with friends, which gave me a sense of connection even when we were apart. Finally, when stress hit, I kept a journal or tried baking. These habits helped me manage anxiety. I thought of that time at home as a chance to explore new interests.
I hope my suggestions can help you.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；
②時態：以“一般過去時”和“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，要注意不要遺漏題干中給出的提示信息，并適當增加細節，突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖，表達自己對于Luke所遇到問題的理解心情；
第二步，從學習、生活和心理調適等方面具體闡述寫作內容；
第三步，希望所提出的建議和方法能夠有所幫助。
[亮點詞匯]
①in control處于掌控之中
②virtual study groups虛擬學習小組
③keep a journal寫日記
[高分句型]
①I joined online book clubs and virtual study groups with friends, which gave me a sense of connection even when we were apart. (定語從句)
②Finally, when stress hit, I kept a journal or tried baking. (when引導的時間狀語從句)
9．范文
Our school recently conducted a satisfaction survey on students’ lunches. The survey focused on three main areas: variety, quality, and dining experience.
The results of the survey showed that the majority of students were satisfied with the variety of lunch options available. However, there was still a significant portion of students who felt that there was not enough choice. In terms of quality, the survey revealed that many students believed the food was tasty and fresh, but some complained about the portion sizes being too small.
Regarding the dining experience, the survey found that most students were happy with the cleanliness and organization of the lunchroom. However, some students expressed concerns about the noise levels and the lack of seating during peak times.
Based on these findings, we recommend that the school increase the variety of lunch options to better cater to students’ preferences. Additionally, the school should consider increasing portion sizes to ensure that all students are satisfied with their meals. Finally, we suggest that the school take measures to reduce noise levels and provide more seating during lunchtimes to improve the overall dining experience.
【詳解】[總體介紹]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，屬于材料作文；
②時態：采用“一般過去時”和“一般現在時”；
③提示：要求包含所有要點提示，內容完整，句子銜接自然，注意標點符號的使用。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹具體的調查結果；
第二步，具體分析相關數據；
第三步，提出合適的建議。
[亮點詞匯]
①the majority of大多數
②in terms of就……而言
③the lack of缺少
[高分句型]
①Based on these findings, we recommend that the school increase the variety of lunch options to better cater to students’ preferences.（賓語從句）
②Finally, we suggest that the school take measures to reduce noise levels and provide more seating during lunchtimes to improve the overall dining experience.（賓語從句）
10．例文
Dear teammates.
I understand that we have different opinions on choosing the theme between The Bund, Yu Garden and People’s Square for the “Telling Shanghai Stories in English” activity. Everyone has their own reasons for preferring a certain place, and that’s great because it shows our enthusiasm for this project.
However, the continuous argument won’t lead us to a conclusion. I think we can do this: First, we each write down the unique features and stories we can tell about our preferred place. Then, we share these with each other. After that, we can vote on which place has the most interesting and representative stories to tell. In this way, we cannot only make a fair decision but also learn more about these wonderful places in Shanghai.
Let’s work together to make our presentation a great success!
Best regards.
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：本文應該主要用第一人稱來寫；對比決策時，要寫得具體；寫作中適當使用連接詞，使行文連貫、順暢。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開頭要表明寫作內容和意圖。說明求同存異；
第二步，說明要從哪幾個方面權衡進行決策；
第三步，提出倡議，表明大家齊心協力達成任務。
[亮點詞匯]
①write down寫下
②share...with...和某人分享某事
③make a decision下決定
[高分句型]
①I understand that we have different opinions on choosing the theme between The Bund, Yu Garden and People’s Square for the “Telling Shanghai Stories in English” activity.（that引導的賓語從句）
②Everyone has their own reasons for preferring a certain place, and that’s great because it shows our enthusiasm for this project.（because引導的原因狀語從句）
11．例文
Dear Miss Zhang,
I am Li Feng. I am writing to express my ideas about the project of “Feeling the atmosphere of the Spring Festival”. I believe this project is a wonderful opportunity for us to know more about Chinese traditional customs.
For our team’s activity, we plan to make jiaozi, stick paper-cuts on the windows and write Spring Festival couplets. These activities will let us experience the joy of preparing for the Spring Festival and understand its meaning. We hope to spread the festival atmosphere and traditional customs to our classmates.
Thank you for considering our ideas.
Yours,
Li Feng
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；
②時態：時態以“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點，并適當添加細節，突出重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹對此項目的看法；
第二步，介紹活動內容并說明設計意圖；
第三步，對老師表示感謝。
[亮點詞匯]
①know more about更好了解
②prepare for為……做準備
③festival atmosphere節日氛圍
[高分句型]
I believe this project is a wonderful opportunity for us to know more about Chinese traditional customs.（賓語從句）
12．例文
As a community volunteer, I am excited to propose two activities to celebrate the inclusion of Chinese New Year in the UNESCO list of Intangible Cultural Heritage. These activities will help spread the rich traditions of Chinese New Year within our community.
One of the best ways to experience a culture is through its food. I propose organizing a Chinese New Year Food Sharing Event where community members can bring their favorite traditional dishes, such as dumplings, rice cakes, and spring rolls. Another activity is a workshop for making traditional Chinese handicrafts, such as paper-cutting. This workshop can include both elderly residents, who can share their knowledge and skills, and children.
In the end, by participating in these events, residents can gain a deeper understanding of the traditions and values associated with this important festival. Let’s come together to celebrate our rich cultural heritage!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：主要用一般現在時；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意至少設計兩種活動，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，引出話題；
第二步，介紹兩個傳播春節文化的活動方案；
第三步，說明該活動的意義。
[亮點詞匯]
① one of the best ways 最好的方法之一
② propose doing 提議做某事
③ associated with 與……相關
[高分句型]
① I propose organizing a Chinese New Year Food Sharing Event where community members can bring their favorite traditional dishes, such as dumplings, rice cakes, and spring rolls. (where引導的定語從句)
② This workshop can include both elderly residents, who can share their knowledge and skills, and children. (who引導的定語從句)
13．例文：
Dear Mathew,
I am very pleased to learn that you will come to Shanghai for exchange and study activities during the winter vacation, and I warmly welcome you! Shanghai is a city full of vitality and charm. I believe you will spend an unforgettable time here.
For accommodation options, I recommend that you choose to stay at a local classmate’s house. This not only allows for a deeper experience of Shanghai’s local culture, but also deepens our understanding and friendship with China through communication with classmates. Of course, the accommodation choice ultimately depends on your personal preferences, but I believe it would be a very good choice.
Looking forward to meeting you in Shanghai and sharing the beauty of this city with you.
Yours,
Wu Lei
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封郵件；
②時態：時態為一般現在時；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏提示中的要點，可適當添加細節，并突出寫作要點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，對外國朋友表示歡迎。
第二步，推薦其中一種住宿方案，并說明理由。
第三步，書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①be pleased to do高興做某事
②full of充滿
③not only...but also...不僅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I believe you will spend an unforgettable time here. (賓語從句)
14．例文
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Feng, the volunteer who assists at the library every Monday afternoon. I am extremely sorry for missing my shift for the library organization work this week.
The reason for my absence was a sudden and severe stomachache that prevented me from attending. I was in so much pain that I couldn’t make it to the library. I deeply regret the inconvenience this may have caused.
To make amends for my mistake, I would like to volunteer to work extra hours this Saturday. Furthermore, I will be more mindful of my schedule to ensure that this won’t happen again. I sincerely hope you can forgive me for my oversight.
Thank you for your understanding and patience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Feng
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為一封書信；
②時態：時態主要為“一般現在時”和“一般過去時”；
③提示：文章應該包括所有提示信息，要適當補充，使文章內容充實；行文時多用第一人稱，盡量多使用短語和句型；寫作中適當使用連接詞，使行文連貫、順暢。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹自己，表達寫信意圖；
第二步，陳述自己缺席的原因；
第三步，提出補救措施；
第四步，表達感謝。
[亮點詞匯]
①make amends for my mistake 補過
②prevent sb. from doing sth. 阻止某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I am Li Feng, the volunteer who assists at the library every Monday afternoon. (who引導限制性定語從句)
②I was in so much pain that I couldn’t make it to the library. (so … that引導結果狀語從句)
15．例文
Dear Alex,
I’m glad to hear about your upcoming exchange program at our school! Welcome! At our school, one of the most distinctive courses is Tea Art. It’s not just about learning how to brew tea, but also understanding Chinese culture and history. It’s a calming and enriching experience that offers insights into traditional cultures. I believe you’ll enjoy it greatly.
Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；
②時態：本文應使用“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：應注意題干給出的要點并適當補充，使文章內容充實。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表達歡迎的態度；
第二步，選擇茶藝課作為特色課程進行介紹，以其結合文化和歷史的特點為理由，說明其獨特性和吸引力；
第三步，期待對方的回復，并收尾。
[亮點詞匯]
①hear about聽到關于
②look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①It’s a calming and enriching experience that offers insights into traditional cultures.（定語從句）
②I believe you’ll enjoy it greatly.（賓語從句）
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