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學校:___________姓名：___________班級：___________考號：___________
Unit4 Weather and our lives
單元主題寫作滿分范文15篇（緊貼新教材）
說明：此專題分三個難度層次，基礎入門訓練<進階拓展訓練< 能力綜合實踐，老師根據學生實際情況進行針對性難度訓練。
基礎入門訓練5篇
1．寫一篇以“The Weather in My Hometown”為題的短文，介紹你家鄉的天氣。
注意：1.書寫工整，語句通順，連貫。2.字數80字左右。
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2．請根據我格中的提示，以The Four Seasons為題，寫一篇作文，可適當拓展。字數80字左右。
Spring 天氣溫暖潮濕，可以植樹種花。
Summer 天氣炎熱，可以去游泳和吃冰淇淋。
Autumn 天氣宜人，是旅游的好季節。
Winter 天氣寒冷，可以玩雪和滑冰。
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3．現在是晚上八點鐘，外面正在下雨。假如你是李梅，你正給你的朋友寫一張明信片，介紹下今天的天氣，你和你的家人正在做什么以及你的感受。
要求：語法規范，語句連貫，60個詞左右。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Mei
4．假設你和你的三個朋友John、Kate、Paul在四個不同城市，請你根據表格所提供的信息完成短文。詞數：60左右。
要求：必須包括表格內的所有信息。
Name Place Weather Clothes Activities
John London foggy a shirt and pants eat in the restaurant
Kate Sydney sunny，hot a T shirt and shorts play beach volleyball
Paul Moscow snowy a coat and a scarf make a snowman
I Shanghai windy，cold … …
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5．假設你是張麗，你的英國筆友Tom想與你交流以下問題，請你給他寫回信。
提示：
1. What's the weather like in different seasons in China
2. Which season do you like best
3. Why do you like this season
4. What do you often do in this season
要求：
1.文中不得出現真實的人名、校名。
2.短文條理清楚，行文連貫，內容可適當發揮；
3.詞數60詞左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總數。
Dear Tom,
My name is Zhang Li. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Li
進階拓展訓練5篇
6．假如你是李敏，你的美國筆友Danny告訴你，他很喜歡中國，想了解中國的四季情況以及人們在不同季節喜歡從事的活動。請根據以下提示，給Danny寫一封信，介紹有關情況。
提示：
1.季節和月份；
2.不同季節的天氣狀況；
3.人們在不同季節喜歡從事的活動。
要求：
1.參考提示內容，可適當發揮；
2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；
3.詞數：不少于60詞。
Dear Danny,
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Yours,
Li Min
7．Write at least 60 words on the topic “When the Wind Blows”.
Suggested questions:
1.What happens to flowers and leaves when the wind blows
2.What happens to clouds when the wind blows
3.What do you see when the wind blows
When the Wind Blows
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8．假如你是李明，是學校的播音員，你每天為學校播報天氣信息，下面表格列出了三天的天氣，請為大家播報。
星期 Friday Saturday Sunday
天氣
建議 多云，天氣涼爽， 適合課后進行室外活動（如打籃球） 雨天， 可以在家做家庭作業，幫父母做家務，和爺爺下象棋… 天氣晴朗， 適合和家人去參觀農場……
參考詞匯：do housework
要求：1．70詞以上（文章開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）；
2．必須包括表格內容，可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3．文中不得出現真實姓名、校名和地名。
Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Ming. Now I’d like to tell you the weather on Friday, Saturday and Sunday. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
9．在夏季，你的家鄉天氣怎么樣？人們在這樣的天氣里都在做什么？請寫一篇介紹你們家鄉天氣的短文。
注意事項：
(1)80詞左右。
(2)意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規范。
(3)請勿在文中使用真實的姓名。
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10．根據下面的提示，寫一篇作文。要求文章連貫、簡潔、通順，不少于70詞。
提示：①中國是一個很大的國家，各地的氣候不同；
②分別說明南方和北方的氣候特征及人們的相應活動；
③你個人認為天氣最好的地方是哪里？為什么？
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能力綜合實踐5篇
11．假如你是李華，你的筆友Tom 給你發郵件告訴你他想到你所在的城市游玩，但是不知道什么季節最適合，請你根據題目要點，寫一篇回信，介紹深圳四季的氣候特點，并建議他什么季節來深圳游玩及理由。
季節 天氣活動
春天 溫暖多雨，植物開始生長
夏天 炎熱，人們喜歡去海邊游泳
秋天 晴朗涼爽，人們常去野餐
冬天 有一點冷，但從不下雪
建議及理由 ……
要求:
1.60 詞以上，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數內；
2.必須包含所有提示內容點，可適當增加細節，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；
3.文中不得出現真實姓名和校名，否則不予評分；
4、標點正確，書面整潔。
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to hear that you would like to visit Shenzhen. Shenzhen is a wonderful city to visit southeast of China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
12．親愛的同學們，一年四季，氣候多變，寫一篇英語短文介紹你最喜歡的季節。
提示： 1. What’s your favourite season
2. What’s the weather like in the season
3. What can you do in the season
要求：1. 短文須包括所有提示內容，可適當發揮；
2. 文中不得出現真實的人名、校名和地名；
3. 詞數50個左右。
參考詞匯：take off脫下
My Favourite Season
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13．假如你是李華，請以“My favourite season”為題寫一份演講稿，參加《英語周報》舉辦的演講比賽。內容包括：
l. 你最喜歡的季節（spring summer autumn/fall winter四季任選其一）；
2. 天氣的狀況、景色的變化、人們常見的活動；
3. 你的行為和活動。
要求：
1. 字數50—60，作文的題目、開頭、結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；
2. 字跡工整，可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫，語言規范準確；
3. 作文中不要出現考生和相關學校的真實姓名和校名。
My favourite season
Dear friends,
I am Li Hua. I am happy to speak here today. My favourite season is _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
14．假如你是李明，Tim是你新交的澳大利亞網友，請寫信向他介紹一下中國的冬季及相關的節日。
提示：
1.中國冬季的天氣；
2.中國冬季有哪些節日；
3.你都喜歡干些什么在冬季及節日里。
要求：
1.短文須包括所有提示內容，可適當發揮。
2.短文不要涉及真實的人名和校名。
3.70詞左右(開頭已給出，不計入總詞匯)。
Dear Tim,
I’m so happy to get your e-mail. I know it’s summer in your country now. It’s winter in my country now.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________


Yours,
Li Ming
15．Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic “When the Wind Blows” (以“當風吹起時”為題寫一篇短文，詞數不少于50個)
Suggested questions:
1. What happens when the wind blows
2. What can you see when the wind blows
3. What do you think of the windy weather
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________學校:___________姓名：___________班級：___________考號：___________
Unit4 Weather and our lives
單元主題寫作滿分范文15篇（緊貼新教材）
說明：此專題分三個難度層次，基礎入門訓練<進階拓展訓練< 能力綜合實踐，老師根據學生實際情況進行針對性難度訓練。
基礎入門訓練5篇
1．寫一篇以“The Weather in My Hometown”為題的短文，介紹你家鄉的天氣。
注意：1.書寫工整，語句通順，連貫。2.字數80字左右。
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【答案】例文
The Weather in My Hometown
Hello, everyone! I’m from Nanchang. Do you know what the weather is like here Let me tell you!
In spring, the weather changes a lot. Sometimes it’s warm, and sometimes it’s cold. In summer, it’s hot. But I like hot weather because I like swimming. Autumn is very nice. It is not too hot or too cold. I usually go climbing in such weather. In winter, it’s cold and sometimes it is snowy. I often make snowmen with my friends when it snows.
【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇話題作文。要求以“The Weather in My Hometown”為題，介紹自己家鄉的天氣。注意要點齊全，可適當發揮。
2.寫作指導：寫作時要以第一和第三人稱來介紹，時態用一般現在時。作文可以從四季不同的天氣來描述，介紹四季的不同以及自己的偏愛并說明原因。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。
2．請根據我格中的提示，以The Four Seasons為題，寫一篇作文，可適當拓展。字數80字左右。
Spring 天氣溫暖潮濕，可以植樹種花。
Summer 天氣炎熱，可以去游泳和吃冰淇淋。
Autumn 天氣宜人，是旅游的好季節。
Winter 天氣寒冷，可以玩雪和滑冰。
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【答案】例文：
The Four Seasons
It is usually warm and wet in spring. Spring is the best time to plant trees and flowers.
It is very hot in summer. The most popular sport in summer is swimming. And it feels good to eat ice cream in hot weather.
Autumn is my favourite season. The weather is pleasant. I like flying kites and travel around in autumn.
Winter is cold and snowy. It is very exciting to play with snow and make snowmen. Skating is very popular in winter.
【詳解】1.題干解讀：根據表格提示寫一年四季的天氣特點和每個季節可以做的事情；注意要點要齊全，可適當發揮。
2.寫作指導：寫一年四季的天氣，用一般現在時態，注意主謂一致性，在某個季節用介詞in，季節前不用冠詞the。
3．現在是晚上八點鐘，外面正在下雨。假如你是李梅，你正給你的朋友寫一張明信片，介紹下今天的天氣，你和你的家人正在做什么以及你的感受。
要求：語法規范，語句連貫，60個詞左右。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Mei
【答案】例文
Dear Jim,
It’s 8:00 pm. And it is raining heavily outside. We all stay at home. My grandparents are watching TV. They are laughing happily. My father is reading newspaper in the living room. My mother is doing the dishes in the kitchen. What am I doing Of course, I am writing to you. We all happy and relaxed at this moment. What will you do on a rainy day
Yours,
Li Mei
【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。寫信給Jim告知家人的活動。
2.寫作指導：本文主要采用現在進行時。先介紹此時的天氣，緊接著描述家人的活動信息，最后表達自己的感受。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標點錯誤。
4．假設你和你的三個朋友John、Kate、Paul在四個不同城市，請你根據表格所提供的信息完成短文。詞數：60左右。
要求：必須包括表格內的所有信息。
Name Place Weather Clothes Activities
John London foggy a shirt and pants eat in the restaurant
Kate Sydney sunny，hot a T shirt and shorts play beach volleyball
Paul Moscow snowy a coat and a scarf make a snowman
I Shanghai windy，cold … …
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【答案】 I have three friends—they're John, Kate and Paul. John is in London. It's foggy today. John is wearing a shirt and pants and he is eating in the restaurant now. Kate is in Sydney and it's sunny and hot there. She is wearing a T- shirt and a pair of shorts. And she is playing beach volleyball with her friends now. Paul is in Moscow and it's snowing and cold there. Paul is wearing a coat and a scarf and he is making a snowman with his brother.
I'm in Shanghai and it's winter now. So it's really cold but it's not snowy. It's windy. I am wearing a coat and a pair of gloves. And I'm playing in the park with my family.
【詳解】題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文。要求根據表格信息完成作文。寫作時要注意語句通順，語意連貫，緊扣要點，注意句子之間的連接與過渡，要注意涵蓋所給提示。
例文點評：例文采用兩段式；時態綜合運用一般現在時和現在進行時；將題目要求的要點都很好地融入到文章當中。
高分亮點：
短語：play with；a pair of等。
句型：So it's really cold but it's not snowy. 使用了so引導的結果狀語從句以及but連接的并列句。
John is wearing a shirt and pants and he is eating in the restaurant now. 使用了and連接的并列句。
【點睛】首先認真審題，看清文章的要求和要點；其次，理順自己的行文思路；再次緊扣要點，注意句子之間的連接與過渡；最后要仔細檢查是否有單詞拼寫錯誤和標點的誤用等，還要注意是否出現語法錯誤，有無重復遺漏，大小寫是否正確，詞數是否符合要求等。
5．假設你是張麗，你的英國筆友Tom想與你交流以下問題，請你給他寫回信。
提示：
1. What's the weather like in different seasons in China
2. Which season do you like best
3. Why do you like this season
4. What do you often do in this season
要求：
1.文中不得出現真實的人名、校名。
2.短文條理清楚，行文連貫，內容可適當發揮；
3.詞數60詞左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總數。
Dear Tom,
My name is Zhang Li. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Li
【答案】例文：
Dear Tom,
My name is Zhang Li. There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. The weather is warm in spring and hot in summer. Autumn is cool and winter is cold and white. And I like summer best. In summer, the weather is sunny and hot. I can eat my favorite food — ice cream. I’m very happy. I can wear my beautiful skirts. I like swimming in the pool with my friends. In summer, the flowers are beautiful and the grass is green. I can have a picnic with my parents. And we can have lots of fun.
I like summer best. What about you
Yours,
Zhang Li
【詳解】1.題干解讀：文章屬于書信作文，主要是給朋友介紹不同的季節的天氣情況以及自己喜歡的季節，內容按照題目中給出的問題提示描寫，也可以適當的發揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當的詞匯和短語。
2.寫作指導：文章主要用一般現在時，人稱用第一人稱展開描述。主要是介紹不同季節的不同天氣以及自己喜歡的季節，包括喜歡這個季節的原因，在這個季節能做的事情等。寫作時語言要簡單易懂，文章結構要完整，多使用簡單詞語表達。
進階拓展訓練5篇
6．假如你是李敏，你的美國筆友Danny告訴你，他很喜歡中國，想了解中國的四季情況以及人們在不同季節喜歡從事的活動。請根據以下提示，給Danny寫一封信，介紹有關情況。
提示：
1.季節和月份；
2.不同季節的天氣狀況；
3.人們在不同季節喜歡從事的活動。
要求：
1.參考提示內容，可適當發揮；
2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；
3.詞數：不少于60詞。
Dear Danny,
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Yours,
Li Min
【答案】例文
Dear Danny,
There are four seasons in a year in China. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. March, April and May are spring months. It’s warm and windy. We can fly kites in spring. June, July and August are summer months. The weather is very hot. We like to swim in the river. September, October and November are autumn months. The weather is cool and cloudy. We like to pick apples on the farm. December, January and February are winter months. It’s cold and snowy. We like to play in the snow.
How is the weather in America What do you like to do Can you write to me soon
Yours,
Li Min
【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。要求向筆友Danny介紹中國的四季情況以及人們在不同季節喜歡從事的活動。注意要點齊全，可適當發揮。
2.寫作指導：寫作時要以第一和第三人稱來行文，時態用一般現在時。作文要分別介紹中國的四季和相應的月份，介紹不同季節的天氣狀況以及人們在不同季節喜歡從事的活動。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。
7．Write at least 60 words on the topic “When the Wind Blows”.
Suggested questions:
1.What happens to flowers and leaves when the wind blows
2.What happens to clouds when the wind blows
3.What do you see when the wind blows
When the Wind Blows
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【答案】例文
When the wind blows
When the wind blows, leaves fly from the trees. You can also see them flying across the sky. When the wind blows, the kites rise and dive high in the sky. Flags flap near and far. Sailing boats lean and speed over the sea. When the wind blows, water smiles and shows dimples on her big, round face. How wonderful the windy weather is!
【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。根據問題提示，寫一篇題目為“When the Wind Blows”的作文，結合你的所見情景談談當風吹起的時候，花、葉子、云會發生什么事。注意要點齊全。
2.寫作指導：本文時態采用一般現在時；人稱采用第三人稱。寫作時，要做到主謂一致，內容全面，語句通順，邏輯清晰，無單詞拼寫錯誤。
8．假如你是李明，是學校的播音員，你每天為學校播報天氣信息，下面表格列出了三天的天氣，請為大家播報。
星期 Friday Saturday Sunday
天氣
建議 多云，天氣涼爽， 適合課后進行室外活動（如打籃球） 雨天， 可以在家做家庭作業，幫父母做家務，和爺爺下象棋… 天氣晴朗， 適合和家人去參觀農場……
參考詞匯：do housework
要求：1．70詞以上（文章開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）；
2．必須包括表格內容，可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3．文中不得出現真實姓名、校名和地名。
Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Ming. Now I’d like to tell you the weather on Friday, Saturday and Sunday. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
【答案】例文
Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Ming. Now I’d like to tell you the weather on Friday, Saturday and Sunday.
It’s cloudy on Friday. So it’s cool. It’s a good time to play basketball after class. But on Saturday, it’s a rainy day. You can stay at home to do your homework. And you can help your parents to do housework. Then you can play chess with your grandfather. On Sunday, it’s a sunny day. You can go to the farm with your family.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為天氣信息播報；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：注意不要遺漏表格中給出的要點，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步：表明寫作意圖。表格中列出了三天的天氣，為同學們播報天氣信息。
第二步：具體闡述寫作內容。首先點出本次播報的主題是周五、周六和周日的天氣；其次具體介紹這三天的天氣情況及活動建議。
第三步：書寫結語。表示感謝收聽。
[亮點詞匯]
①stay at home呆在家里
②play chess下象棋
③go to the farm去農場
④do housework做家務
[高分句型]
①You can stay at home to do your homework.（情態動詞后跟動詞原形）
②It’s a good time to play basketball after class. （it為形式主語，動詞不定式為真正的主語）
9．在夏季，你的家鄉天氣怎么樣？人們在這樣的天氣里都在做什么？請寫一篇介紹你們家鄉天氣的短文。
注意事項：
(1)80詞左右。
(2)意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規范。
(3)請勿在文中使用真實的姓名。
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【答案】One possible version:
It’s summer now. The weather in my hometown is very hot and rainy. So it is very wet. People are wearing sunglasses and cool clothes. In the park, my classmates and I are having a good time. Some girls are singing and dancing. Some boys are playing soccer. I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tom is taking photos. A little boy is eating an ice cream.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中介紹家鄉的天氣，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“介紹家鄉天氣”來引出重點介紹的內容；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從“夏季家鄉天氣怎么樣和人們在這樣的天氣里都在做什么”兩個方面重點介紹。
[亮點詞匯]
①have a good time玩得開心
②take photos拍照
[高分句型]
I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tom is taking photos.（and連接并列句）
10．根據下面的提示，寫一篇作文。要求文章連貫、簡潔、通順，不少于70詞。
提示：①中國是一個很大的國家，各地的氣候不同；
②分別說明南方和北方的氣候特征及人們的相應活動；
③你個人認為天氣最好的地方是哪里？為什么？
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【答案】例文：
China is a large country, so the weather is different in different places. In the north, it is very cold in winter. People often like to skate. But in the south it is warm. It is very hot in summer both in the north and in the south. People often like to go swimming. I think the weather in Kunming is the best. It is not too hot or too cold, so it is a good place to take a vacation.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：材料已給出，寫作時注意表述清晰，做到無語法和單詞拼寫錯誤。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，進入話題；
第二步，將天氣及人物活動結合起來；
第三步，加以總結。
[亮點詞匯]
①go swimming游泳
②take a vacation度假
[高分句型]
①I think the weather in Kunming is the best.（賓語從句：由that引導賓語從句，其中that已省略）
②It is not too hot or too cold, so it is a good place to take a vacation.（狀語從句：由so引導結果狀語從句；不定式結構作后置定語）
能力綜合實踐5篇
11．假如你是李華，你的筆友Tom 給你發郵件告訴你他想到你所在的城市游玩，但是不知道什么季節最適合，請你根據題目要點，寫一篇回信，介紹深圳四季的氣候特點，并建議他什么季節來深圳游玩及理由。
季節 天氣活動
春天 溫暖多雨，植物開始生長
夏天 炎熱，人們喜歡去海邊游泳
秋天 晴朗涼爽，人們常去野餐
冬天 有一點冷，但從不下雪
建議及理由 ……
要求:
1.60 詞以上，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數內；
2.必須包含所有提示內容點，可適當增加細節，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；
3.文中不得出現真實姓名和校名，否則不予評分；
4、標點正確，書面整潔。
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to hear that you would like to visit Shenzhen. Shenzhen is a wonderful city to visit southeast of China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to hear that you would like to visit Shenzhen. Shenzhen is a wonderful city to visit southeast of China.
It’s usually warm and rainy in spring. Plants begin to grow in spring. The summer is long and the winter is short. The weather in Shenzhen is very hot in summer. Sometimes there are storms and strong winds. Many people like going swimming in this season. In fall, the weather is cool and sunny. It is a good season to go for a picnic. It’s not very cold in winter. You can’t make snowmen here because there is usually no snow. I suggest you can come here in winter because the weather is nice and you can celebrate the Spring Festival with us.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件。
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”。
③提示：文章為第三人稱，介紹深圳的天氣，并給出建議什么時候來深圳是最好的，表格內容描述完整，適當增加細節。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表達對筆友的到來感到高興，引出主題；
第二步，具體介紹深圳一年四季的天氣及建議什么時候來深圳的理由；
第三步，期待筆友的回信。
[亮點詞匯]
① begin to do開始做
② go for a picnic野餐
③ like doing喜歡做某事
④ go swimming去游泳
⑤ make snowman堆雪人
[高分句型]
①The summer is long and the winter is short.（并列句）
②You can’t make snowmen here because there is usually no snow.（原因狀語從句+there be句型）
③I suggest you can come here in winter because the weather is nice and you can celebrate the Spring Festival with us.（賓語從句+原因狀語從句+并列句）
④It is a good season to go for a picnic.（it固定句型）
12．親愛的同學們，一年四季，氣候多變，寫一篇英語短文介紹你最喜歡的季節。
提示： 1. What’s your favourite season
2. What’s the weather like in the season
3. What can you do in the season
要求：1. 短文須包括所有提示內容，可適當發揮；
2. 文中不得出現真實的人名、校名和地名；
3. 詞數50個左右。
參考詞匯：take off脫下
My Favourite Season
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【答案】One possible version:
My Favourite Season
There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, fall and winter. My favourite season is spring.
In spring, everything is new. The leaves turn green and the grass comes out. The weather is warm. We can take off our heavy clothes. Sometimes it is windy. We can fly kites with our friends in the park. We can go climbing, too. So I like spring best.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”。
③提示：文章為第一人稱，介紹自己最喜歡的季節，提示的問題回答完整，適當增加細節。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，一年有四季，引出最喜歡的季節；
第二步，具體介紹春天的天氣和可以做的活動；
第三步，再次表達對春天的喜愛。
[亮點詞匯]
① turn green變綠
② come out出來
③ take off脫下
④ fly kites放風箏
⑤ go climbing爬山
⑥ like…best最喜歡
[高分句型]
① There are four seasons in a year.（there be句型）
②The leaves turn green and the grass comes out.（并列句）
13．假如你是李華，請以“My favourite season”為題寫一份演講稿，參加《英語周報》舉辦的演講比賽。內容包括：
l. 你最喜歡的季節（spring summer autumn/fall winter四季任選其一）；
2. 天氣的狀況、景色的變化、人們常見的活動；
3. 你的行為和活動。
要求：
1. 字數50—60，作文的題目、開頭、結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；
2. 字跡工整，可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫，語言規范準確；
3. 作文中不要出現考生和相關學校的真實姓名和校名。
My favourite season
Dear friends,
I am Li Hua. I am happy to speak here today. My favourite season is _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【答案】例文
My favourite season
Dear friends,
I am Li Hua. I am happy to speak here today. My favourite season is spring, and let me tell you the reasons.
I think spring is the best season because it is a beautiful season. There are lots of beautiful flowers in spring, and the weather is not too hot or too cold. People start to do sports outside after a long winter, and some children fly kites. I also like flying kites because I think it is interesting and fun. In spring, I also go to the park to go for a walk. There are many cute and lively animals in the park in spring time.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③ 提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“提示信息”中“我最喜歡的季節，這個季節的情況介紹，我在這個季節所做的事情”，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“我是李華。我很高興今天在這里發言。”來引出重點介紹的內容；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從“我最喜歡春天，喜歡的原因，春天的氣候，景色以及在春天人們和我所做的事情”重點介紹春季的具體情況；
第三步，書寫結語。表達“僅此而已。謝謝你的聆聽。”
[亮點詞匯]
①lots of許多
②go for a walk散步
[高分句型]
①I think spring is the best season because it is a beautiful season.（省略that的賓語從句，because引導的原因狀語從句）
②There are lots of beautiful flowers in spring, and the weather is not too hot or too cold.（there be句型）
14．假如你是李明，Tim是你新交的澳大利亞網友，請寫信向他介紹一下中國的冬季及相關的節日。
提示：
1.中國冬季的天氣；
2.中國冬季有哪些節日；
3.你都喜歡干些什么在冬季及節日里。
要求：
1.短文須包括所有提示內容，可適當發揮。
2.短文不要涉及真實的人名和校名。
3.70詞左右(開頭已給出，不計入總詞匯)。
Dear Tim,
I’m so happy to get your e-mail. I know it’s summer in your country now. It’s winter in my country now.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________


Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Tim,
I’m so happy to get your e-mail. I know it’s summer in your country now. It’s winter in my country now.
In China, winter is very cold and the weather is very dry. Generally speaking, it snows every winter. When it snows, everything is white. I like to have snowball fights and make snowmen with my friends. In addition, there are three main festivals in winter, namely New Year’s Day, Spring Festival and Lantern Festival. I like the Spring Festival best, because it is not only the most important festival in China, but also my family will have dinner together. During Spring Festival, I like to go to my relatives’ home with my parents.
Yours,
Li Ming
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇應用文，為書信作文；
② 時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③ 提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中每一項內容，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，整體說明中國冬季的天氣；
第二步，介紹中國冬季有哪些節日；
第三步，最后表達你都喜歡在冬季及節日里干些什么。
[亮點詞匯]
①Generally speaking一般來說
②have snowball fights打雪仗
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①When it snows, everything is white.（when引導的時間狀語從句）
②I like the Spring Festival best, because it is not only the most important festival in China, but also my family will have dinner together.（because引導的原因狀語從句）
15．Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic “When the Wind Blows” (以“當風吹起時”為題寫一篇短文，詞數不少于50個)
Suggested questions:
1. What happens when the wind blows
2. What can you see when the wind blows
3. What do you think of the windy weather
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【答案】例文：
When the Wind Blows
When the wind blows, leaves fall from the trees. You can also see them flying across the sky. When the wind blows, people in the street hold their clothes tightly. Children fly kites happily in the park. When the wind blows, kites rise and dive high in the sky, flags flap near and far. Sailing boats lean and speed over the sea. Water smiles and shows dimples on her big, round face. How wonderful the windy weather is!
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③ 提示：寫作要點已經給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點；注意適當發揮，使得內容更豐富、邏輯更連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹當風吹起時，人和物會發生什么事情；
第二步，介紹當風吹起時，你看到了什么；
第三步，表達自己的看法。
[亮點詞匯]
① fall from 從……掉下
② fly kites 放風箏
[高分句型]
① You can also see them flying across the sky.（see sb./sth. doing sth. 看見某人/某物正在做某事）
② How wonderful the windy weather is!（how引導的感嘆句）

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