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【期中考點突破】專題10 書面表達15篇（含答案）--滬教牛津版 2024-2025學年八年級英語下學期專項復習訓練
1．10月4日是世界動物日，你校組織以“I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals”為題的英語演講比賽。假如李明將要參加比賽，請你以“李明”的名義寫一篇英語演講稿推薦自己。
內容如下：
1. 品質：善良，善待動物；
2. 愛好：…… (至少兩點)；
3. 感悟：動物是人類的朋友，保護動物就是保護我們自己；
4. 打算：…… (至少兩點)。
I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I’m glad to make a speech here.
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Thank you for listening!
2．“姑蘇城外寒山寺，夜半鐘聲到客船”。近些年，蘇州的環境發生了巨大的變化。請你根據以下要點寫一篇短文，簡要介紹你的家鄉的變化，并邀請人們來蘇州旅游。內容包括：
1.家鄉的變化
2.旅游安排（景點，交通工具……）
景點可參考詞匯：
Humble Administrators’ Garden 拙政園
The Gate of the Orient東方之門
Suzhou Museum 蘇州博物館
Jinji Lake 金雞湖
要求：
1.內容包括以上要點，語句通順，可適當發揮；
2.90詞左右。開頭已寫好，不計入字數。
Welcome to My Hometown Suzhou
With rich culture and convenient transport, my hometown Suzhou is always worth a visit.
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3．假設你是王濤，是北京某中學的一名學生會主席，學校準備這個周末游覽長城，請你以學生會的名義寫一份通知。
要點：
1.游覽長城的時間：本周六。
2.集合地點：本學校操場。
3.出發時間：上午7點，坐公交車前往。
4.在長城游覽3個小時左右，11點離開。
5.水、相機等個人物品隨身攜帶，切勿丟失，下車前關上車窗。
6.車在停車場處等候，記住車號，準時返回。
7.祝大家玩得愉快，注意安全。
注意：1.短文可適當發揮，寫出自己的真情實感；
2.文中不得出現真實的地名、校名和人名；
3.詞數80個左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）。
Notice
Fellow students,
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Thank you.
Student’s Union
4．卡通電影Finding Nemo深受學生的喜愛，請你根據以下寫作要點，以“My favorite cartoon”為題寫一篇短文，介紹一下這部電影。
寫作要點：
片名 Finding Nemo
地點 澳大利亞
主角 小丑魚父子
劇情 Nemo父子在海里過著快樂的生活。有一天，一艘漁船把兒子Nemo帶走了，父親Marlin決定去找他，并最終救了自己的兒子。
評論 有趣，Nemo很可愛，贏得了許多孩子的心……
要求：
(1)詞數：80—100個。
(2)開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
(3)要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發揮。
參考詞匯：主角 main character; 小丑魚 Clownfish；漁船 fishing boat
My Favorite Cartoon Film
Finding Nemo is my favorite cartoon film.
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5．假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Mike今年年底將作為交換生來中國學習，他將在中國度過第一個春節。為了更好的了解中國傳統文化和適應在中國的學習生活，他來信向你詢問春節的傳統習俗以及如何學好中文的方法。請你結合以上信息，給他寫一封回信。
內容包括：
(1)節日的名稱，時間，傳統習俗；
(2)至少兩種學習中文的方法。
要求：
(1)80—100詞 (開頭和結尾已給出, 不計入總詞數);
(2)可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
(3)信中不得出現真實人名和校名。
參考詞匯：團圓飯reunion dinner，春晚gala，對聯couplet，壓歲錢lucky money，紅包red packet，放煙花set off fireworks
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6．假如你是李華，五一假期即將來臨，你的筆友Tom發郵件說他打算來你的家鄉福州旅游。請你用英語給他回復一封郵件，幫他制定一份福州旅游計劃，內容包括：
要求：
1. 內容必須包括所給信息；
2. 詞數80左右；
3. 要適當增加細節，不得出現個人真實信息。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad that you’ll travel to Fuzhou during your May Day holiday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．一年一度的非遺文化周即將來臨，學校將通過各種活動向師生們展示非遺文化的魅力。請你以學校宣傳部組織者的身份，擬寫一篇80詞左右的發言稿介紹本次活動并向全校師生發出邀請。
要點提示：
1、活動目的：讓更多的人了解我國的非遺文化；
2、活動內容：
①胡堂山大師將在會議廳做一個關于民間藝術的講座；
②很多社團如剪紙社、戲劇社、服裝社向我們展示傳統文化的美；
③各班將在班會上開展非遺文化的競賽；
④…(自行補充一個)
3、發出邀請
參考詞匯：1. Master Hu Tangshan 胡堂山大師 2. the folk arts 民間藝術 3. intangible cultural heritage 非遺文化 4. the conference hall 會議廳
Dear teachers and students,
The annual intangible cultural heritage week is coming soon.
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Thank you!
8． 學校英語俱樂部正在組織一次主題為 “Your Body and Soul (心靈) on the Way” 的英語演講，作為俱樂部的一員，你也準備積極參賽，請根據下表中的要求完成該主題的演講稿。
Body on the Way Talk about an interesting place you have visited
Soul on the Way Talk about a good book you have read
What you have learnt from the trip and the book
注意：
1. 文中不得出現你的真實姓名和學校名稱：
2. 短文須包括所有內容要點，語言通順，條理清晰，書寫規范；
3. 詞數90左右，文章開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數。
We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and soul must be on the way.
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9．請以“My trip to________”為題，根據以下要求與提示，用英語寫一篇短文，記敘你的一次旅行。
注意事項：
1.請在題目空格處填入你旅行的地點。
2.必須包括所給的全部要點，可適當發揮；
3.意思清楚，表達通暢，行文連貫，書寫規范，字數80詞左右。
4.請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名等。
My trip to ________
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10．“等閑識得東風面，萬紫千紅總是春”，春天是個適合出游的季節。
旅行不僅會帶你見證書中的美景，而且會讓你遇見不同的人和事，開闊你的視野。5月19日是中國旅游日(National Tourism Day)，校報正在征集有關“Travel”的稿件。假如你是李華，準備給校報投稿，請結合流程圖談談你難忘的(unforgettable)旅行經歷和你對旅行的看法。
注意事項：
1.稿件須根據流程圖自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意：
2.詞數在80個左右，稿件的開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數；
3.稿件中不得出現真實的人名、校名等相關信息：
May 19th is National Tourism Day. We students should always improve ourselves. Besides reading, travelling is also a good way.
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11．假定你是李華，你的外國朋友Chris對中國文化很感興趣。請你給他寫一封信，介紹李子柒在2025年春晚展示非遺技藝的情況。
（1）介紹事件；
（2）談談你對傳播中國傳統文化的看法。
注意：
1. 詞數80詞左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。
非物質文化遺產：Intangible Cultural Heritage
Dear Chris,
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Li Hua
12．對于“碰到作業困難時是否向老師請教”，同學們持有不同的觀點。請你根據下表內容的提示，寫一篇文章，陳述同學們的觀點及理由，并談談你的觀點和理由。
觀 點 理 由
向老師請教 *老師講解得清楚，易于理解 *增加與老師交流的機會
不向老師請教 *性格內向，羞于開口 *怕被同學嘲笑
注意：作文要包含提示內容，寫出自己的觀點和理由（不要重復），詞數要求80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
參考詞匯：explain, clearly, communicate with, be laughed at...
The students of our class have different ideas about whether we ask teachers for help with homework problems. __________________________________________
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13．漳州是福建省的一個歷史文化名城，也是全國沿海經濟開放區，擁有豐富的自然資源和多樣的物產。請根據以下內容，用英語為Trip China Guide網站寫一篇短文，介紹一下我們的美麗城市。
作文要求：1. 詞數80個左右。作文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
2. 文章必須包含所有要點，可適當發揮，使短文連貫、通順；
3. 文中不能出現真實姓名、校名等信息。
Zhangzhou City
It’s time to get to know the famous land — Zhangzhou.
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14．昨天，我們班去平潭春游，在那里度過了快樂的時光。請根據以下表格的提示，寫一篇80詞左右的日記。
A Trip to Pingtan 出發時間 早上10點
出行方式 乘火車
活動 中午： 下午： 晚餐： 野餐 吃美食 在沙灘上放風箏、彈吉他、唱歌
晚飯后：在海邊散步，欣賞藍眼淚 (blue tears) 并拍了許多照片
感受 ……
要求：
1. 必須包含所有的提示信息，可適當發揮；
2. 意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規范；
3. 請勿在文中使用真實的姓名和校名。
Saturday, April 27th
Sunny
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15．假定你是李華，想邀請外教Peter一起參觀學校將要舉辦的中國剪紙藝術展（Art Exhibition）。請給他寫封郵件，內容包括：
展覽時間 4月29日。
展覽地點 一樓多功能廳（Multi-Function Hall）。
展覽內容 中國剪紙簡介、八年級學生優秀剪紙作品。
展覽目的 豐富校園生活，弘揚中華民族傳統文化。
要求：
1. 詞數80左右（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數內）；
2. 文中不得出現真實姓名及學校名稱；
3. 可以適當增加細節，以使語句通順、條理清晰、意義連貫；
4. 書寫規范，卷面整潔。
Dear Peter,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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《【期中考點突破】專題10 書面表達15篇（含答案）--滬教牛津版 2024-2025學年八年級英語下學期專項復習訓練》參考答案
1．例文
I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I’m glad to make a speech here.
I am kind to others. I am good with animals. I like to do extra things, too. I like playing football and the guitar. I have ever organized activities to raise money for Save China’s Tigers. And I keep some homeless little animals. Animals are our friends. We should love them. I am always thinking protecting animals is protecting ourselves.
If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals. I will call on more people to love animals like me. I must try my best to make the world more beautiful.
Thank you for listening!
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇演講稿；
② 時態：以“一般現在時”為主，闡述打算時用“一般將來時”；
③ 提示：寫作要點已給出，考生需按演講稿要求寫，涵蓋品質、愛好、感悟、打算等要點，可適當添加細節，突出自身優勢與決心。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開篇打招呼，介紹自己，并表明想要成為保護動物志愿者的意圖；
第二步，詳細描述自身品質和愛好，闡述對保護動物的感悟；
第三步，說明若成為志愿者的具體打算，最后書寫結語，表達感謝。
[亮點詞匯]
① be good with 和……相處得好
② organize activities 組織活動
③ call on 號召
④ try one’s best 盡某人最大努力
⑤ do meaningful things 做有意義的事
[高分句型]
① I am always thinking protecting animals is protecting ourselves. (含有賓語從句的復合句)
② If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals. (含有條件狀語從句的復合句)
2．例文
Welcome to My Hometown Suzhou
With rich culture and convenient transport, my hometown Suzhou is always worth a visit.
Great changes have taken place in Suzhou in recent years. The environment has improved a lot. There are more green trees and cleaner rivers. Also, many modern buildings have been built.
For a trip in Suzhou, you can start with the Humble Administrator’s Garden, a famous classical garden showing the beauty of traditional Chinese gardening art. Then, visit the Suzhou Museum, where you can enjoy lots of precious cultural relics. The Gate of the Orient is a must-see modern landmark. And don’t miss Jinji Lake. You can take a walk around it or go boating.
You can travel around Suzhou by subway, bus or taxi. Welcome to Suzhou and have a great time!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為一般現在時；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏提示中的要點，可適當添加細節，并突出寫作要點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，先寫家鄉的巨大變化。
第二步， 再進行一次旅游安排，包括景點和交通工具。
第三步，最后歡迎大家來家鄉游玩。
[亮點詞匯]
①modern buildings現代建筑
②have a great time 玩的開心
③take a walk散步
[高分句型]
①Then, visit the Suzhou Museum, where you can enjoy lots of precious cultural relics.（定語從句）
②There are more green trees and cleaner rivers.（and連接并列成分）
3．例文
Notice
Fellow students,
We are going to visit the Great Wall this Saturday. We will meet on the playground in our school at seven in the moming and we will go there by bus. We can stay there for about three hours and we’ll leave at 11 o’clock,Please take your water and camera with you and close the window before you get off the bus. We will wait for you at the parking lot. Please remember the number of the bus and return there on time. Take care of yourselves when you travel on the Great Wall. I hope you will have a good time.
Thank you.
Student’s Union
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為通知；
②時態：時態為“一般將來時”；
③提示：告知同學們本周六去參觀長城的相關安排。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開頭點明通知事項，即本周六要去參觀長城。
第二步，中間詳細說明集合時間、地點，交通方式，在長城的停留時長，離開時間，以及需要攜帶的物品和注意事項等。
第三步，結尾表達希望同學們玩得開心。
[亮點詞匯]
①visit參觀；游覽
②stay停留
③remember記住
④return返回
⑤take care of照顧；照料
[高分句型]
①We will meet on the playground in our school at seven in the morning and we will go there by bus.（使用并列句使表達更有條理）
②Please take your water and camera with you and close the window before you get off the bus.（運用“and”連接兩個并列的祈使句，同時使用“before”引導時間狀語從句，使句子表意豐富且邏輯清晰）
4．范文
My Favorite Cartoon Film
Finding Nemo is my favorite cartoon film. The story takes place in Australia, and the main characters are a pair of clownfish—Marlin and his son Nemo. They live happily in the ocean until one day, Nemo is caught by a fishing boat. Marlin bravely sets out to find him, facing many dangers along the way. With the help of friendly sea creatures like Dory, he finally rescues Nemo.
This cartoon is not only fun but also heartwarming. Little Nemo is adorable and wins the hearts of many children. It teaches us about courage, family love, and never giving up. I highly recommend it!
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 時態：以“一般現在時”為主；
③ 提示：寫作要點已給出，應注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中每一項內容，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹故事發生的地點和主角；
第二步，描述卡通電影的劇情；
第三步，對電影作出評論。
[亮點詞匯]
① take place發生
② set out出發
③ give up放棄
[高分句型]
They live happily in the ocean until one day, Nemo is caught by a fishing boat. （時間狀語從句）
5．例文
Dear Mike,
I am glad to hear that you are going to study in China as an exchange student at the end of this year.
There are many holidays and festivals in China. One of them is the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is a very important Chinese festival. It is also called Chinese New Year. It falls on the lunar January 1st. On the day before the Spring Festival, we will paste couplets. On the eve of the New Year, all the family people get together to have reunion dinner, watch the Spring Festival Gala. On the Spring Festival, children will get lucky money from their parents. People usually set off fireworks. People usually send red packets to each other to celebrate the New Year.
For learning Chinese, my advice is to watch more Chinese movies and listen to more Chinese songs.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封書信；
②時態：“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的要點，可適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖。
第二步，具體闡述寫作內容，從節日的名稱，時間，傳統習俗等方面來介紹中國的春節。
第三步，結尾。給出學習中文的建議，并結尾。
[亮點詞匯]
①one of……中之一
②get together to have reunion dinner聚在一起吃團圓飯
③watch the Spring Festival Gala觀看春節聯歡晚會
[高分句型]
①I am glad to hear that you are going to study in China as an exchange student at the end of this year.（賓語從句）
②There are many holidays and festivals in China.（there be句型）
6．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad that you’ll travel to Fuzhou during your May Day holiday.
Fuzhou, located in the east of Fujian, is a really nice place. On the first day, we can go to the museum. There, you can learn a lot about the history and culture of Fuzhou. The next day, we’ll head to Mount Gu. It’s very beautiful. We can climb the mountain and enjoy the fresh air and great views. The weather in May is usually warm, so bring some light clothes. And don’t miss Fuzhou’s delicious food like fish balls.
I’m sure you’ll have a great time here. I’m looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；
②時態：主要時態為“一般現在時”和“一般將來時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏要點，可適當添加細節，突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖；
第二步，具體介紹旅游計劃；
第三步，書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①learn about了解
②head to前往
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①The weather in May is usually warm, so bring some light clothes. (so引導的結果狀語從句)
②I’m sure you’ll have a great time here. (賓語從句)
7．例文
Dear teachers and students,
The annual intangible cultural heritage week is coming soon. The aim of this event is to let more people know about China’s intangible cultural heritage. There will be many wonderful activities. Master Hu Tangshan will give a lecture on the folk arts in the conference hall. Many clubs, like the paper-cutting club, drama club and clothing club will show us the beauty of traditional culture. Each class will hold a competition about intangible cultural heritage in the class meeting. Also, we’ll have a handicraft exhibition where students can see and touch various traditional handicrafts.
We sincerely invite all of you to take part in these activities and feel the charm of intangible cultural heritage.
Thank you!
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇應用文，為講稿；
② 時態：以“一般現在時”為主；
③ 提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中每一項內容，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹活動目的；
第二步，詳細敘述活動的內容；
第三步，最后發出熱情邀請。
[亮點詞匯]
① give a lecture做演講
② handicraft exhibition手工藝品展覽
③ the charm of intangible cultural heritage非物質文化遺產的魅力
[高分句型]
Also, we’ll have a handicraft exhibition where students can see and touch various traditional handicrafts.（定語從句）
8．例文：
We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and soul must be on the way.
Last summer I visited the Forbidden City. I was amazed by the wonderful palaces and those world-famous works of art. Of course, I have learnt a lot about our great history.
Reading is a lot of fun. When I read the books that I love most, I feel relaxed. Journey to the West is my favorite book. The Monkey King always tries his best to solve the difficulties that he faces and never gives up. He really encourages me a lot in some ways.
I think both travelling and reading can enrich our experience and help us better understand our life.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；
②時態：時態主要為“一般現在時”和“一般過去時”；
③提示：圍繞 “自己的一次旅行、讀過的一本好書以及旅行和書籍給自己帶來的收獲” 展開論述，不要遺漏信息，可適當增加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，點明主題。介紹旅行和閱讀對自己有好處；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。介紹自己的旅行經歷和自己讀過的一本好書；
第三步，書寫結語。介紹旅行和書籍給自己帶來的收獲。
[亮點詞匯]
①a lot of 很多
②try one’s best 盡某人全力
[高分句型]
①When I read the books that I love most, I feel relaxed.（when引導時間狀語從句）
②I think both travelling and reading can enrich our experience and help us better understand our life.（think后接省略引導詞that的賓語從句）
9．例文：
My trip to Nantong
Last May Day holiday, my parents and I went to Nantong. Nantong lies in the southeast of Jiangsu Province. We got there by train. We stayed there for two days. On the first day, we went sightseeing on the Wolf Hill. We enjoyed many kinds of flowers and took lots of photos. We felt so close to nature and had a lot of fun there. On the second day, we took a boat trip on the Haohe River. I enjoyed the beautiful views all the way. We had such an exciting trip that we would never forget it. We hope to visit it again one day.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態以“一般過去時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏提示，并適當添加細節，注意字母大小寫以及標點符號。
[寫作步驟]
第一步、補全標題，介紹旅行目的地、方位、時間以及交通方式；
第二步、介紹從事的活動以及環境；
第三步、介紹自己的感受并書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①by train乘火車
②go sightseeing去觀光
③many kinds of許多種
[高分句型]
①We had such an exciting trip that we would never forget it. (結果狀語從句)
10．例文：
May 19th is National Tourism Day. We students should always improve ourselves. Besides reading, travelling is also a good way. I like travelling very much.
So far, I have travelled to Beijing, Hong Kong, New York and many other places. But my favourite place is Hong Kong. It is an international modern city with many beautiful places of interest. We can enjoy delicious food there. Last summer we visited Hong Kong Disneyland. We watched a parade of Disney characters there and I couldn’t stop taking photos with them. I had a good time there. It is an unforgettable experience for me.
Travelling is really a good way to open our mind and learn more about the world.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：一般現在時和一般過去時；
③提示：寫作提示已給出，考生應注意結合具體語境使用正確的時態，適當發揮，使上下文連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，由于短文開頭已給出，故接下來具體談談你難忘的旅行經歷和你對旅行的看法；
第二步，說明是否喜歡旅行、去過什么地方旅行、最難忘的旅行經歷和原因；
第三步，闡述你對旅行的看法。
[亮點詞匯]
①so far迄今為止
②have a good time玩得開心
[高分句型]
Travelling is really a good way to open our mind and learn more about the world.（動名詞作主語）
11．例文
Dear Chris,
I know you are interested in Chinese culture, so I’m very excited to share a wonderful event with you.
On January 28th, 2025, Li Ziqi, a famous short-video maker, showed 13 intangible cultural heritage skills on the Spring Festival Gala. In the opening show, she wore a long beautiful dress. When she spread her hands, huge butterfly wings with special designs appeared, showing traditional handicrafts like paper-cutting and embroidery, which was a mix of modern technology and traditional beauty.
This event is really meaningful and I think it is important to spread traditional Chinese culture. It not only helps the world better understand China’s long history and rich values, but also keeps these ancient skills alive.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為書信作文；
②時態：時態為一般過去時態和一般現在時態；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏信息提示的內容，適當增加細節，并且突出寫作的要點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步：直接點明Chris對中國文化感興趣，進而引出寫信目的；
第二步：詳細介紹短視頻創造者李子柒在春晚展示了13項非遺技藝，體現現代技術與傳統美的融合；
第三步：書寫結語，闡述該事件的意義，強調傳播中國文化的重要性，升華主題。
[亮點詞匯]
①be interested in對……感興趣
②share with sb.與某人分享
③not only...but also...不僅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I know you are interested in Chinese culture, so I’m very excited to share a wonderful event with you.（賓語從句、目的狀語從句）
②When she spread her hands, huge butterfly wings with special designs appeared, showing traditional handicrafts like paper-cutting and embroidery, which was a mix of modern technology and traditional beauty.（時間狀語從句、定語從句）
12．例文：
The students of our class have different ideas about whether we ask teachers for help with homework problems. Those who prefer to ask teachers for help think that teachers can explain clearly, and it will be a good chance to communicate with teachers. However, some disagree. On one hand, they are too shy to ask teachers for help. On the other hand, they are afraid of be laughed at by others.
As for me, I would like to ask teachers for help. I can get more ways for my study. It is easier to solve the problems with their help, and I can save more time in homework. Teachers can help me a lot.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態主要為“一般現在時”；
③提示：根據情景的發展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，首先提出班級學生對于是否向老師請教作業問題存在不同觀點這一話題。
第二步，接著分別闡述傾向于向老師請教的學生的看法以及持不同意見學生的看法。
第三步，最后表明作者自己傾向于向老師請教并說明理由。
[亮點詞匯]
① prefer to更喜歡；寧愿
② on one hand... on the other hand...一方面……另一方面……
③ as for至于
[高分句型]
① Those who prefer to ask teachers for help think that teachers can explain clearly, and it will be a good chance to communicate with teachers.（who引導定語從句及that引導賓語從句）
②On one hand, they are too shy to ask teachers for help.（too... to... 結構，表示“太……而不能……”）
13．例文
Zhangzhou City
It’s time to get to know the famous land — Zhangzhou. Zhangzhou is in the southern part of Fujian Province, surrounded by many mountains. With a history of about 2,000 years, it is known for its deep and rich culture. Visitors can explore the Ancient City to feel the old charm, and enjoy the natural beauty in Jiulong Park. Zhangzhou is also famous for its delicious local food, especially fresh seafood and tasty noodles. Don’t miss the chance to experience the friendly people and colorful festivals when you visit Zhangzhou.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：一般現在時；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點，并適當添加細節，突出重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹漳州的地理位置、歷史文化、地標名勝以及特色美食；
第二步，歡迎大家前往參觀。
[亮點詞匯]
①is known for因……而出名
②local food本地食物
[高分句型]
Don’t miss the chance to experience the friendly people and colorful festivals when you visit Zhangzhou.（時間狀語從句）
14．范文：
Saturday, April 27th
Sunny
Today, our class went on a spring trip to Pingtan. We left at 10:00 in the morning by train. The weather was perfect, and we were all excited.
At noon, we had a picnic and enjoyed some delicious food. In the afternoon, we went to the beach where we flew kites, played the guitar, and sang songs. After dinner, we took a walk by the sea and saw the beautiful blue tears. We took lots of photos to remember this special day.
I had a wonderful time and will never forget this trip.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇日記，敘述了去平潭的春游活動。
② 時態：主要使用“一般過去時”來講述昨天發生的事情。
③ 提示：根據表格內容，具體描述每個活動的細節，突出活動內容與感受。
[寫作步驟]
第一步：寫出日期和天氣情況，為日記開頭提供背景。
第二步：按照時間順序寫出活動安排，從出發、乘車到平潭、進行野餐和玩耍。
第三步：具體描述在沙灘上放風箏、唱歌、看藍眼淚等活動，突出當時的感受。
第四步：總結當天的愉快經歷，并表達對這次旅行的喜愛。
[亮點詞匯]
① in the morning 上午
② by train 乘火車
③ at noon 在中午
④ lots of 許多
⑤ take a walk 散步
[高分句型]
we went to the beach where we flew kites, played the guitar, and sang songs. (定語從句)
15．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to invite you to visit our school’s Chinese Paper-cutting Art Exhibition. It will be held on April 29th in the Multi-Function Hall on the first floor. The exhibition includes an introduction to Chinese paper-cutting and excellent works created by eighth-grade students. Its purpose is to enrich campus life and promote traditional Chinese culture. I believe you’ll find it both interesting and meaningful. Would you like to join me Please let me know your availability.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文為一篇應用文，為電子郵件；
② 時態：時態為“一般將來時”；
③ 提示：內容要點已給出，注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節，完善表述內容。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，邀請對方參加學校舉辦的中國剪紙藝術展，并說明展覽的時間和地點；
第二步，具體介紹展覽的內容；
第三步，介紹此次展覽的目的。
[亮點詞匯]
① an introduction to對……的介紹
② enrich campus life豐富校園生活
[高分句型]
It will be held on April 29th in the Multi-Function Hall on the first floor.（一般將來時的被動語態）
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